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The Archbishop had even established a new order in Bremen: holy knights, sworn to the Cross and to their brothers. They wore the badge of his illustrious predecessor, Saint Ansgar the Apostle of the North, and pledged themselves to purge the devil from the northern lands. He had heard of young men in Chełmno who slipped away from their homes one night to seek out the order. The notion was romantic, but horribly short-sighted: a war would harm the Christians of Suomi as much as anybody.
The times they are a-changing. No more peace, only suspicion and war.

Have any Crusades happened in-game yet?
“Aye. I thought you might.” He gave her a soft, sad smile. “Did you know that your mother had three miscarriages between Käpy and Mieletty?
Satajalka's concern for his family is admirable. But he's missing the bigger picture.
“Your mother was right about you,” he said at last, and then strode out of the room.
He doesn't mean that. Not really.

He needs to apologize before it's too late, before he does something he'll regret.

Which is more important to the King, hatred of Christians or love of kin?
Tell him–his mission will not outlive him.”
If Otto is truly pious, he'll know, and take solace, in the fact that's not true. The flesh is temporary, Heaven is eternal.
“Pihla,” the king said in a horrified whisper. Had he filled his daughter’s head with lies? Had he turned her against him? Ukko’s might, he has my grandson.
Again, his first thoughts are concerned for his family. But they've been twisted by his own anger, fear, and paranoia.

I bet Risto has slipped more than a few of these thoughts into the King's head himself. Satajalka already had a base zealotry, Risto's just taken advantage of that.
 
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Thank you for the new chapter and Happy New Year!

Happy holidays and a good new year to everybody! Tonight is night six of a later-than-usual Hanukkah, and seeing all the candles burning in the menorah cheers me up during the darkest days of the year. Hoping that you folks are enjoying light and community as well.
Hoping you had are enjoying a great holiday season. Too bad our holiday celebration in the bAAR seems to have gone mostly silent, otherwise I would have invited you to partake there virtually too. Another time... although you are always welcome to visit, I hope you know.

Thanks! Zygmunt actually didn't do much of anything in the game itself except get captured; everything else is made up for the story.
You have quite the imagination to spin this tale from one captured royal. So you didn't give him a county to rule nor marry him into the royal family, only thought about it?

More good storytelling but not sure how this doesn't end in some tragedy, large or small. Risto has definitely been instigating his own brand of justice even as a child.
 
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Have any Crusades happened in-game yet?

I suspect so, yes, but it wasn't affecting me much at this time. Finland is a long way from any Catholic Holy Sites, though, so we didn't have to worry about capital-C Crusades for a long time. If I get to it, I may include the one crusade that we did face in the narrative, but that's hundreds of years from now.

Also, I want to say that I love your commentary on Satajalka, and I think it's very sharp.

You have quite the imagination to spin this tale from one captured royal. So you didn't give him a county to rule nor marry him into the royal family, only thought about it?

He was always the duke of Masuria, in my game; reformed Ukonusko has the pluralist trait, which means that when we did a holy war against Poland he was retained as a vassal. Rather than revoke him (which I don't do a lot of as a CK3 player), I had him convert. Then I noticed that he died in a battle when he was 23.

The fact that he had been raised a Christian and forced to 'convert' at least in public was always key to Zygmunt's story. But when I was finishing up Ermengarda's narrative, I realized that I didn't want him to have the same ambivalence towards Christianity that she had because it would feel like more of the same. It would create much more tension between Satajalka and Zygmunt, which I thought would be dramatically interesting. (I can talk more about this once the section is complete; there is a thing that I don't want to spoil yet.)

In any case, my next viewpoint character is going to be actually Finnish, if you imagine that; and hopefully she will have an intriguing story of her own to tell.
 
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All caught up, and hopefully I can keep on top of it to the conclusion. Risto is quite the snake, even for a spymaster. His veiled accusations could cause a lot of grief.
 
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After a few binge-reads, I'm finally caught up with what may be the best AAR I have read yet. Your writing is truly inspirational, you managed to make me invested in basically everyone, even that snake Risto, though I do have a pretty easy personal favorite (As a neurodivergent–possibly autistic, but not properly tested yet–Pihla is incredibly relatable and I find her relationship with Zygmunt pretty sweet).

On the matter of the pilu, he sure knows how to take advantage of the old king's paranoia. It's sad to see the reasonable Satajalka fall from grace, what would Otso I think of all this bloodshed?

I'm convinced we won't see a voluntary de-escalation on the king's part anytime soon, I suspect Mieletty knows what he has to do both for his brother and nation (This genocide sure isn't helping Finnish relations with its neighbors), but I don't know if he can bring himself to actually dethrone his father.
 
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@Cora Giantkiller as you probably have seen from my reactions I've been reading this for a few weeks now. I'm a slow reader, and have only gotten through the first page. But I'm committed, now.

This is a very high quality work, with engrossing historical context balanced against well-employed literary elements. The dialogue, plotting, character development, and so much else is top notch!

Looking forward to hopefully catching up on this.

Rensslaer
 
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Brilliant chapters as usual. I’m liking the couple of Pihla and Zygmunt, perhaps it would be better if they ruled. However it looks like Zygmunt will be in a world of trouble soon
 
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Ulvila, Suomi
April, 1133​

Somehow the weather in the king’s council room was colder than the weather outside. Or perhaps Zygmunt only felt that way because of the glare that Risto was giving him. I wish I knew what I’d done to earn his hatred, he thought to himself. But the spymaster was unlikely to say.

Zygmunt’s tempers were thin as it was. He fretted over his wife, home and heavily pregnant. Childbirth was hard enough for any woman, and Pihla’s humors were particularly delicate. He had longed to send the king his regrets, but the cautious habits still lived within him. If you refuse to come to his council, he will wonder why.

He had at least left the young prince home to keep Pihla company. Otso had taken to his aunt’s collection of birds and bird skulls with boyish enthusiasm. Pihla had maintained her birding trips well into pregnancy, and the prince was her constant companion. He smiled to remember the two of them on the day he left, poring over a barnacle-encrusted piece of driftwood looking for God knows what.

There was an odd tightness in Satajalka’s manner when he learned that his grandson remained in Chełmno. Zygmunt could not make sense of it, and that made him uneasy. Risto was being hostile as well, which was not new, but now the king seemed indulgent of it in a way that he hadn’t in the past. Zygmunt had not felt this unwelcome at the king’s palace since he had first arrived as a hostage. Perhaps he had been foolish to come after all.

It was the spymaster’s fashion to watch in silence as the normal affairs of the realm were conducted, and only announce his own news just before the meeting concluded. So it was today: sound tolls from the Danish king; raids from the Bjarmians; and the king ranting about Slavs and Viros conducting private masses in defiance of the newest mandates. Only as the meeting seemed like to conclude did Risto announce that he had made an important discovery.

“The arch-conspirator has been apprehended. Even now, Lilla of the House of Sigurdr-Sund sits in a cell awaiting the king’s justice.” The king’s council was stunned at this revelation. Risto himself was preening, and small wonder. The king had desired her capture for years; rivers of blood had been shed to identify and find her. This was the spymaster’s great accomplishment.

The declaration was so astonishing that it took Zygmunt a second to fully appreciate what Risto had just said. “Of Sigurdr-Sund? So this Lilla is Queen Helena’s…?”

“Cousin. Daughter of the late Svend’s beloved brother Ivar.” Risto fixed his eyes on Zygmunt just then, looking for just a second like a bird of prey.

“How did we find the bitch?” This was Kaur, who didn’t seem to know whether to rage at the would-be regicide or to celebrate her capture.

“It seems that the late Ivar left her quite a fortune, and she has her money in a variety of merchant houses–Suomi and Christian alike.” Risto’s lip curled as he spoke. “A friendly corsair ran across her while she was sailing from Visby, and delivered her to us.”

Zygmunt sucked in a breath. A noblewoman, of the royal family of Sweden, and we captured her on the seas so that we may put her to death. A worried glance from Susi suggested that he had a similar thought.

If Risto sensed their hesitation, it did not stop him. “If these Christians think that they can attack us without fear of reprisal, they will soon see the error of their ways. This house of Sigurdr betrayed their ancestral gods decades ago, and in so doing they lost their right to rule. Your majesty, it is time that we give the Norse back their gods.”

“Your majesty, you cannot.”

Risto responded, in the same smug, self-confident purr. “It’s not for you to say what your king can do. And even if it were… this so-called queen is a child, a girl-child, with perhaps two thousand swords to her name.”

“I know, I did not mean… I only meant that… This is a grave error. Sweden is not the half-pagan kingdom that it was when you were a child. Erik the Heathen died long ago, and so did all of his grandsons. The Norse people do not speak our language, they do not know our gods. The church has been there all their lives. They will fight us, every step of the way.”

Risto raised an eyebrow, that damned smirk still on his face. “Our gods, your grace?”

Zygmunt continued, ignoring the jibe. “The Queen may have only a small army, but what of Denmark? Norway? What of the Kaiser? Will these kings stand idly by while a Christian monarch is brought low? And besides them… there is an order, your majesty. A holy order of Christian knights dedicated to opposing pagans, opposing us, their ranks numbering in the thousands. They will surely take up arms against us.”

Risto snorted. “How is it that you came by this information, your grace?”

“How is that you didn’t, Risto? Are you the king’s spymaster or not?” Zygmunt was getting heated now.

“Perhaps you spend more time with Christians than I do,” Risto said pointedly.

Risto’s sly insinuations had always rubbed his nerves raw, but this was truly too much. Standing up abruptly, Zygmunt strode over to the spymaster and lifted him by the collar of his tunic. “Do you have something to say to me, you filthy fucking worm?”

He had not planned to grab the man. He simply wished to see that damned smirk melt off of Risto’s face, to see a moment of genuine alarm. Instead… instead the gleam in the spymaster’s eye looked suspiciously like triumph. As Zygmunt was considering the implication of this, Satajalka rose awkwardly from his chair. “Unhand him, Ossowski. Now.”

Zygmunt let the man drop back into his chair, and turned to face the king. “Apologies, your majesty, my temper got the best of me.” As Risto no doubt intended.

“You are a duke of the realm. Act like it.” Satajalka’s face was like ice.

“Of course, your majesty. I simply wanted… I fear that Suomi may be starting a war that we cannot win.”

Risto coughed pointedly when Zygmunt said ‘we’, but the king ignored him. “Yes. As for your counsel… will you swear that all you say is true?”

“Swear, my lord?”

“Swear. On the gods. Right now.”

Zygmunt could feel the blood rushing to his head, the heart pounding in his chest. Mother Mary please no please please no. “Your majesty, I have served you for years. I grew to manhood in your court. Surely you know that I mean what I say. Surely.”

Duke Susi began to say something, but the king just silenced him with a look. He turned back to Zygmunt, a single eyebrow raised. “Do I know that?”

“Ask your heir, majesty. Ask Pihla. Ask them.” Zygmunt could hear a slight pleading tone to his voice.

The king’s voice was quiet but urgent. “Do I have your oath, my lord?”

It would have been so easy to swear a false oath. Zygmunt would not have been the first Christian to do so, nor the first one even in his own parish. Such things were sometimes necessary in a hostile world. The Lord understood human frailty, Father Tadeusz said. Surely it was a small lie compared to the great evil that would be this coming war.

Still, as he tried to form the words, Zygmunt found that he could not say them. His spirit and his body rebelled at the notion. Instead, he said quietly, “You do not.”

Satajalka’s good eye shone with a cold fury. “You are relieved of your position as steward, my lord. Erkki, escort the good duke back to his chambers until I decide what to do with him.”

Zygmunt felt the warrior’s massive hand land on his shoulder.

*****​

Zygmunt sat in his chamber later that day, watching the sun set behind Ulvila with a feeling of profound weariness. The city was larger than it had been when he was a boy, he realized, and the waterfront was crowded with homes and shops and taverns and warehouses. There was only one large plot of land that lay empty, and it took him forever to realize what it was: that was where the chapel had stood, once.

He spun around when he heard the door unlatched, but it was only Mieletty. The prince inspected him, a concerned look on his face. “Did that whoreson hurt you, Ziggy?”

Zygmunt grimaced. “Not really. I’m fine, just wondering what happens next.”

“Well, I went to Father right away, as you can imagine. He thinks…”

“...that I had a hand in the plot against him?” He had given the matter a lot of thought, and it seemed the most probable explanation.

“What utter rot.” The prince shook his head. “I told him in no uncertain terms that you were with me the whole time we were in Tallinn.”

“And that worked?”

“Well, I also told him that the dukes would never line up to fight his war if he’s going to lock up one of their own on nothing more than supposition. That seems to have gotten through to him. Still… Father does nothing these days but brood over his injuries and let Risto whisper poison into his ear. I don’t know if it’ll last.”

Zygmunt’s mind started running. “Is the Sea-Bear still in the docks? I don’t want to wait for him to change his mind.”

“That’s a good idea. Go home, gather your banners, and don’t come back here until you have a couple thousand swords around you.” At Zygmunt’s startled look, the prince continued. “That was the deal, Ziggy. Your freedom for this fucking war.”

“It’s a disaster waiting to happen, Mieletty. Do you know how many young men in Christendom are just dying to cross swords with the pagan armies of Suomi? They’ll bleed us for every patch of earth.”

“I believe you, it’s just…” Mieletty made a helpless gesture. “He’s the king, Ziggy. What am I going to do?”

Saying anything to that question was dangerous, Zygmunt knew, but apparently just the look on his face was enough. Mieletty flushed and turned to stare out the window. After a moment, Zygmunt joined him.

“They never built over the chapel,” Zygmunt observed after a long silence. “It’s been nearly ten years.”

“That land is cursed, Ziggy. The smallfolk won’t walk through it, won’t even look at it if they can possibly avoid it.”

Zygmunt started to chuckle, but stopped when he saw that his friend wasn’t smiling. “Are you serious?”

“Look, your god isn’t my god and it sure isn’t the one god as far as I’m concerned, but… he has to be some kind of powerful väki to command so much worship, right? The man who antagonizes a spirit like that is just asking for trouble.” Mieletty had a haunted look in his eyes. “That’s something else that Father doesn’t want to understand.”

“Mieletty, the war…”

“Dammit, I can’t stop the war from happening. My father wants it, the court wants it, the commons will be baying for Swedish blood. Maybe it’s a bad idea but nobody wants to hear that right now.

“After, we can talk about a regency. But right now I need you with me in this gods-forsaken war.”
 
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All caught up, and hopefully I can keep on top of it to the conclusion. Risto is quite the snake, even for a spymaster. His veiled accusations could cause a lot of grief.

Indeed! A lot of blood looks to be shed before this is done.

I'm convinced we won't see a voluntary de-escalation on the king's part anytime soon, I suspect Mieletty knows what he has to do both for his brother and nation (This genocide sure isn't helping Finnish relations with its neighbors), but I don't know if he can bring himself to actually dethrone his father.

We hear Mieletty say as much in this chapter, but like you say--it's a tall order for him, when everything about his upbringing demands a level of filial obedience.

Also, thanks so much for your kind words!

@Cora Giantkiller as you probably have seen from my reactions I've been reading this for a few weeks now. I'm a slow reader, and have only gotten through the first page. But I'm committed, now.

This is a very high quality work, with engrossing historical context balanced against well-employed literary elements. The dialogue, plotting, character development, and so much else is top notch!

Looking forward to hopefully catching up on this.

Rensslaer

Thanks! Your comment and Daybreak's really made my day.

Brilliant chapters as usual. I’m liking the couple of Pihla and Zygmunt, perhaps it would be better if they ruled. However it looks like Zygmunt will be in a world of trouble soon

Zygmunt is in a precarious position, for sure. He's getting backed into a corner, and he'll be forced to take action soon.
 
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Another amazing chapter! Even more blood will be spilled because of Satajalka's paranoia...

Also, I may be seeing things where there aren't any, but I think there's a parallel to be drawn between the king and Ihar of the Viro. Monarchs who slaughtered thousands because of someone whispering in their ears (Risto for Satajalka and the Russians courtiers for Ihar) and turned their own family against them.
 
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If you refuse to come to his council, he will wonder why.
Smart. Best to maintain close ties.
This was the spymaster’s great accomplishment.
Is this the peak before Risto's fall? I'd like to hope so, but the way this story is going, I'm not sure.
“You are a duke of the realm. Act like it.” Satajalka’s face was like ice.
Risto's a member of the King's council. He should act like it and not antagonize his fellow advisors.
“That was the deal, Ziggy. Your freedom for this fucking war.”
There was no evidence to imprison and fire him in the first place, and now Zygmunt has to prove his innocence regardless--by putting his all into a war that he disagreed with. If he steps even slightly out of line, doesn't show he's 100% loyal, Satajalka will have his head.
“Dammit, I can’t stop the war from happening. My father wants it, the court wants it, the commons will be baying for Swedish blood. Maybe it’s a bad idea but nobody wants to hear that right now.
This whole thing started by an assassination during a war. Maybe it will end that way too.
 
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Time for an ill-fated war. If anything, this might draw the Christians’ attention and threaten the safety of Suomi itself
 
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Västerås, Sweden
September, 1136​

Through here, the woods were dark and deep, and the road was little more than two ruts in the ground. Only the birdsong let you know that it was not actually night out. It was easy to imagine soldiers lurking in the shadows, watching them. Besides him, Mieletty could see Heathen quailing just a bit. He was a little nervous too, but there was no sense letting the men see that. So Mieletty treated the man with a confident smile and then crept further in.

The Suomi had arrived in Västerås late this spring to find the farms burnt and the grain stores empty. Every well they’d found had a corpse in it too, in order to leave the water befouled. This was the third year of war and the new regent apparently had no intention of letting them live off the land if he could help it. So the Suomi were reliant on their supply lines back to the villages on the islands of Åland, and that proved their soft underbelly. The knarr could be raided and often were.

But worse, the locals had a penchant for stealing their wagons. It was hard to blame them, Ziggy had noted. The Swedish peasants were starving themselves thanks to Duke Sigurd and his scorched earth policy. Of course they would go for food wherever they could find it. That was just the sort of thought that Ziggy was good for, Mieletty reflected. He was always trying to imagine what the other fellow was thinking.

As commander of the Suomi forces in Sweden, the prince should have been back at his tent coordinating the second siege of Västerås. Second, yes. They had taken the capital once, three years earlier, and nearly had the queen herself. They might have won this damned war, at which point Arvo would have been installed on the throne of Sweden and Mieletty could have gone home to deal with his father. Instead, Helena ran as fast as her little legs could take her to the waiting arms of Sigurd, who announced himself Protector of the Realm and Defender of the Faith. Then the real troubles began.

That damned Holy Order of Saint Whoever-the-Fuck landed in Suomi and unleashed unholy terror on the peasantry there. When the good and righteous knights made to besiege Ulvila, Mieletty had been obliged to leave Västerås and go defend his father. As soon as they got there, however, they found that the damned holy knights had melted into the damned holy aether and meanwhile Sigurd had taken back Västerås.

It was then that Mieletty began to realize that there was no winning this war. If the army went to Sweden, then their homeland was exposed. If they remained at home, then Sigurd could rebuild his army. If they split up their forces, then Sigurd and the Holy Whomever Knights could overwhelm each part individually and do whatever they damned well wanted.

That was not to say that things were hopeless, necessarily. Take Västerås a second time, and perhaps they could work out some kind of face-saving peace with Sigurd. Father would be furious, but he wasn’t here and he didn’t really understand. But to win the siege, the Suomi would need to outlast their enemy, and that required food. And so the drip-drip-drip of missing wagons was getting to Mieletty, until finally he gathered up a small group of warriors and said let’s go find one of these damned things. Hence why he was here, with his cousin Aapo, a Dane named Erik that they all called Heathen, and a dozen other warriors.

They were creeping along the forest road for perhaps an hour when they found the wagon, abandoned after an axle had broken. Sacks full of grain were scattered on the ground, Mieletty was glad to see. Perhaps they might come back with some supplies tonight, a minor victory that should boost morale. Aapo felt the same, apparently, because he let out a little whoop of delight as he approached.

As he approached, however, a queer anxiety curled up inside of him. The Swedes are starving more than we are, Ziggy had said. So why had starving men left grain behind?

It’s a trap!” Mieletty cried out, just before the arrows flew out from the underbrush. Besides him, men were diving for cover behind the wagon or throwing themselves onto the ground. Aapo had been a touch too slow, and an arrow caught him in the shoulder. He spun around and fell with a thud.

Mieletty paused for a second, considering the three arrows piercing the wagon. Four archers, all on one side of the trail–this wasn’t exactly Sigurd’s finest. They must have expected a couple of footmen to look for the wagon, not a dozen armored warriors. We have them outnumbered, three to one.

“Heathen,” he hissed. “Tell them that we accept their surrender.”

"Highness?” The Danish youth looked incredulous.

“Tell them–” Mieletty thought for a second. “Tell them that we have food for them, all sorts of food. A new shipment from Suomi. And whatever you do, don’t stop talking.” While the Heathen started crying out in guttural Norse, Mieletty silently pointed to three warriors to come with him. Slowly, they started creeping through the brush with daggers in hand.

After three painfully slow minutes, Mieletty got his first look at the archers: deathly skinny, with prominent clavicles and hollow cheeks. Their blonde hair was matted and stringy, their beards patchy and thin. They might have been fifteen or fifty. He was struck with a pang of sympathy, and thus did not look where he was stepping. A twig snapped beneath his foot.

Well, there was nothing to do then but charge the rest of the way. Mieletty stood up and screamed, waving his dagger about like a madman and hoping that he appeared intimidating. The three behind him screamed out Hakkaa päälle!, and the men on the road took up the cry as well. The sound of their voices echoed around them, until they sounded like a host rather than a small band.

Three of the Swedes threw down their bows in surrender. The fourth, a bit shorter and more boyish than the others, had the courage to raise his bow and loose at the pagans bearing down on him. Mieletty felt the arrow hit him in the side, but in his battle fever it scarcely felt like anything. The blow did not stop him from closing with the boy and holding the dagger to his throat.

Uppgjöf,” he growled to the Swedes. Surrender. It was one of the few Norse words that he knew. The boy, looking at him with wide eyes, simply nodded. The men beside him murmured something that must have been words of surrender.

“Take their bows,” Mieletty said to his men. “We’ll take them back to camp and give them a good meal before sending them on their way.”

*****​

Zygmunt was sparring with Adam and a dozen other Polish men-at-arms when the prince returned. Immediately, all notion of training was lost as the men pressed forward to see how the expedition had gone.

Mieletty had returned from his sortie without loss, it seemed, although Aapo had received a nasty shoulder wound that would require attention. When Heathen hoisted up a sack of grain over his head, there was a cheer from Zygmunt’s men. The fact that they might recover some of the lost supplies had seemed too much to hope for.

Mieletty then called forward a handful of starved-looking men behind him. “Ziggy, could you see that these men get something to eat? Maybe with a bit of meat? And bread and hard cheese for when they go.”

As Heathen translated the prince’s words into Norse, one of the men, scarcely more than a boy, burst into tears. Zygmunt felt a wave of sympathy. It must have been an age since they last had meat. He smiled and looked at Mieletty. “Of course, your highness. Any particular reason?”

“It’s a prize. For marksmanship.” Aapo had a crooked smile, but Zygmunt could see the strain in his eyes and the thin sheen of sweat on his brow. The man’s good humor came only after some effort, it seemed.

“Thanks for the reminder,” Mieletty said with a snort. ”Let’s find a tietäjä for my cousin here. And this–” the prince lifted his arm to reveal what was left of an arrow pierced into his mail “–may take some looking at too. The little bugger pierced the skin, if only just.”

“Your highness is too generous.” Zygmunt had not heard Duke Kaur approach, but just like that the steel-haired Latgalian was there beside him, wearing a frown as often he did. “Free them and they’ll come back to plague us again.”

“Generosity is not a mistake, Kaur. Let the Swedes see that we are kinder to them than their own lords, and that will serve us well.” Mieletty was smiling still, but there was a note of command in his voice. “Now somebody find that tietäjä before my cousin falls over, all right?”

Aapo did not collapse, but his fever only got worse over the course of the afternoon. Mieletty asked Zygmunt quietly to take care of some of his tasks that day so that the prince might watch over his favorite cousin. Zygmunt noted the slight tension in the prince’s manner. No doubt Mieletty was concerned. Infection was oft more deadly than the wound itself.

Thus Zygmunt was there when Riku arrived with his outriders. Riku was a short, wiry man of an age with the king himself, and he wore his travel-stained leathers like a second skin. The old veteran cocked an eyebrow when noting Mieletty’s absence, but he said nothing about it.

“Any sign of the Order?”

Riku shrugged. “No, m’lord, and in truth I wouldn’t expect them. They’ll be in Viro no doubt, burning and looting as they like to do.”

Zygmunt was not surprised. It was Duke Sigurd’s intention to bleed the Suomi from a thousand cuts, it seemed, and only then provoke a battle to settle the matter. “Must have been a boring day for you, then,” Zygmunt said with a smile.

“I wouldn’t say that exactly, m’lord.” Riku reached into his saddlebag and pulled out a sprig with a few purple flowers still attached. He held the flower in his gloved fingers with an odd delicacy. “I don’t suppose that your lordship knows what this is?”

“It looks vaguely familiar. I must have seen it on a hunt once or twice back home. Why do you ask?”

“A fellow tells us that Sigurd’s got people bringing this up from Saxony or somesuch. Rub it on a blade or an arrowhead and the target shits himself to death, beggin’ your lordship’s pardon.”

A chill ran down Zygmunt’s spine. There had been a story, when he was growing up: a haughty king and a crafty cook and a dangerous little flower that grew in the hills. Father Andrzej had liked to tell it as a lesson on humility. “And Sigurd has been giving this out to the common folk?”

Riku nodded grimly. “His purse is open for Suomi heads. Silver for the commons, gold for a noble.”

Zygmunt recalled seeing the Swede weeping at Mieletty’s generosity. Gratitude, he had thought. Or shame. He started running without thinking, careening heedlessly through the crowded Suomi camp. He accidentally knocked over a camp follower, but kept running as she began to call out Norse curses against him.

Zygmunt rushed into the large Virtanen tent and found the prince abed. Besides him, the prince’s page was trying feebly to convince the prince to have some thin broth.

Mieletty was drenched in sweat, and his eyes had the thick film of fever. “Ziggy? I must have eaten something foul, because–” The prince paused for a second, and then suddenly convulsed with the force of his retching. “Sorry, I–it smells awful in here, I know, I told Aapo… Where’s Aapo?”

Oh no oh no oh please God no. Zygmunt fixed eyes with the page. “Get the tietäjä. Tell him that it’s wolf’s bane. Run.”

The page fled the tent in a hurry, and only then did Zygmunt sit down and grab his friend’s hand. Mieletty was still lost, no doubt because of the fever. “I think you… must be mistaken, Ziggy. I haven’t even seen a wolf today.” He tried a feeble laugh, but that too turned into a heave.

Now that there seemed to be nothing else to do, Zygmunt felt helplessness consume him. To ward off morbid thoughts, he started, instinctively, to pray as he learned as a child. Ave Maria, gratia plentia… At some point, he noticed that Mieletty was clasping his hand. Zygmunt opened his eyes and saw the prince looking back at him, a moment of clarity in his eyes. “Ziggy, I’m going to be fine.”

How like Mieletty to be reassuring now. “I know,” Zygmunt said, blinking back tears. It was the kindest lie that he had ever told.

The tietäjä came rushing in, carrying a brown concoction in a narrow earthen jar. “Charcoal and ale, your highness. No promises for the taste, but it should absorb the poison.” The healer spoke with brisk efficiency, but the glimmer of uncertainty in his eyes told a different story. As he gently raised the jar to Mieletty’s lips, Zygmunt resumed his silent prayer. Sancta Maria, Mater Dei

When Kaur arrived, Zygmunt realized that he had lost track of time entirely. Kaur’s face was grim, and he took Zygmunt aside for a quiet conference. “The guards are on alert,” he said in a brusque whisper. “I sent Riku out too, to find that damned Order.”

Zygmunt nodded. It was a good precaution, but probably unnecessary. “I don’t see how they knew it would be him, until he came.”

Kaur nodded. “Aye. They were most like what they seemed, starving men. That silver would have meant life for them. Even so.”

Kaur was having trouble looking at the prince. It was curious to find that this blunt-speaking warrior that once intimidated Zygmunt as a boy was now so nervous around the sickbed. For his part, Zygmunt could not look away. Mieletty had stopped vomiting perhaps a half hour ago, but his stillness afterward was worse. Now the prince simply lay there, seemingly unable to move. Only his eyes darted around, regarding this person or another in confusion.

There was a long heartbreaking silence, and then Kaur spoke again, with an unusual delicacy. “Zygmunt. Who’s in command, if…?”

“You should command, Kaur.” Zygmunt could feel a fury building within him, or perhaps it was a fury that had always been with him. “I have business elsewhere.”
 
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Another amazing chapter! Even more blood will be spilled because of Satajalka's paranoia...

Also, I may be seeing things where there aren't any, but I think there's a parallel to be drawn between the king and Ihar of the Viro. Monarchs who slaughtered thousands because of someone whispering in their ears (Risto for Satajalka and the Russians courtiers for Ihar) and turned their own family against them.

That is an excellent parallel, Daybreak! I like that a lot. Not intentional but I think it works.

This whole thing started by an assassination during a war. Maybe it will end that way too.

Things are certainly coming to a head, that's for sure.

Time for an ill-fated war. If anything, this might draw the Christians’ attention and threaten the safety of Suomi itself

The war is certainly costing the Suomi a lot, that's for sure.

Mieletty needs to become King, and soon for the sake of Zygmunt and the entirety of the Kingdom...

That would have been for the best, no doubt.
 
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Ooof, that’s definitely a harsh war we’ve walked into.
Mieletty better hold on or I can envision Zygmunt making a break for independence if his friend’s protection goes missing
 
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Mieletty, no!

I don't expect him to live through this, but maybe I'm wrong. The real question is how this affects Zygmunt and Satajakla. There's a couple ways I see this could go:

One, the King sees the destructive, stupidity of this war for what it is after the death of his son. He tries to make peace and give Risto the talking to he deserves. But I feel that's optimistic.

Or, Satajalka now hates Christians all the more. He continues to be stubborn and persecute his subjects. Maybe even, somehow, he blames Zygmunt. Maybe he believes that Zygmunt's Christian nature corrupted his son and cursed the campaign.

I fear how this affects Zygmunt, Pihla, and their family.
 
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As much as I wish for this to open Satajalka's eyes, hate and paranoia are one hell of a duo of drugs. Mieletty, the man most likely to bring peace to Suomi is on death's door.

I fear that this story's end will be one in deep contrast to Ermenganda's more positive one, it seems to be shaping into quite a tragedy. I would love to be wrong though.
 
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A couple of fine chapters. When will Satajalka realize he is in a no-win situation, and the cost is too high, or has Risto managed to poison his mind beyond common sense? Risto and Satajalka's relationship kind of reminds me of King Theoden and Grima Wormtongue from Lord of the Rings.
 
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