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What an interesting take on Pihila. I enjoy my students and friends on the spectrum when they are at their bluntest. I look forward to seeing the erudite and polite lords of the realm quail when she calls them out.

@StrategyGameEnthusiast, maybe writing a neurotypical character isn’t as hard as you might think because you have their character traits. Imagine a world where all people wore their defining characteristics like icons and their stats were available for all to see? Then, imagine that you as the author get to take all the time you need to ask, “why did they do that?” without any social consequences? Most neurotypical people I know aren’t as subtle as they like to think.
 
Thank you for this new chapter, although calamity has certainly come to this AAR!

She imagined them frantically clawing through the water unable to breathe, before bursting forth from beneath the waves like Ilmatar bringing forth the land from the sea. A voice seemed to say to her, You too will figure out a way. Was it the goddess? Was it herself?
Love this passage. So well written. What works for me is the cultural touches you have added.

There's no good way to say this explicitly in a medieval setting but I do intend Pihla to be autistic (as I am).
Wow! There's a revelation. I can certainly see that in Pihla they way you have rendered her on the page, although her awkward nerdy ways do not necessarily spell out autistic. (However, I think we all agree there is a lot for our society and science to learn about autism.)

On another topic, you have nicely set up the next chapter as we still do not know the origins of the fire or just what happened to the king. My guess is that Sviendorog has engineered one of those typical CK moves of going right to the throat and landing at the enemy capital for a siege.
 
My guess is that Sviendorog has engineered one of those typical CK moves of going right to the throat and landing at the enemy capital for a siege.
If Sviendorog is the architect of this murder, that is ironic considering Satajalka refused Risto's suggestion before.

I really hope Mieletty doesn't push Zygmunt away because of the defeat and murder. He needs his friends in this time of crisis the most.

I wonder how Pihla is going to feel in the future. Witnessing her dad's murder right in front of her can't be great mentally.
 
Ulvila, Suomi
September - October, 1126​

Zygmunt had an uneasy feeling as the ships returned to the capital that morning, made worse by the distemper of his companions. Duke Kaur was making sour jokes, while Prince Mieletty’s sense of failure radiated off of him in waves.

As the longship sailed up the Kokemäenjoki river, Zygmunt could see gaps where once there had been warehouses; some nearby structures had visible scorch marks as well. “Sviendorog,” Kaur said at once. “He demands that humiliating peace of us, and then sacked the city just in case we thought to deny him.” Zygmunt could believe that of Sviendorog well enough, but still he wondered. The Virtanen banner still flew in the castle, after all…

As they pulled into the dock, Zygmunt noticed to his surprise that Pihla was standing there, flanked by a dozen guards. Her hair was a tangled mess and her face drawn, and she watched the longship with a grave expression. He felt a sudden spike of unease as he saw her; beside him, Zygmunt could hear the prince suck in a breath.

The two nearly ran down the gangplank to speak with her. Without any traditional greeting, Mieletty simply asked, “Is it Father?”

“He lives,” she said, “But only just. He was struck by an assassin’s blade three days past, and now he fights a fever.”

Kaur swore, and Mieletty flushed with rage. “I will strangle that Latgalian dog with my own bare hands,” the prince said heatedly.

Pihla raised an eyebrow. “I would not stop you, brother, but Risto does not believe that this was Sviendorog.”

Zygmunt had a sudden realization. “The assassin–did he start the fire in the harbor?”

“I believe so, yes. The wretch struck on Kekri as well, to maximize confusion.” Pihla shot her brother an impatient look. “Brother, we must hurry. Even now Father’s council waits for you.”

The mantle of command settled on Mieletty’s shoulders almost like a physical weight. “Kaur and Zygmunt, with me.” Zygmunt found something unsettling about his friend’s decision to use the formal name, rather than calling him Ziggy as he had since he was ten years old.

The council room was bare and cold, it seemed to Zygmunt. There was only a simple table with one seat for the king and five on the other side for his loyal councilors. Duke Susi of the Karelians was stroking his beard in thought. Andrejs, the young Pruessi who served as the royal tietäjä, ran his hand through his blonde hair. Risto wore a tight smirk, which could mean anything.

“We are one short,” Mieletty observed.

Andrejs offered a pained expression. “His grace Duke Manvydas has been claimed by Tuoni, majesty. A summer fever, just weeks ago.”

“Duke Zygmunt of Masuria will take his place until a replacement can be found.“ Mieletty’s voice was curt and brook no disagreement. “Also, it is highness, Andrejs. My father lives.”

Andrejs flushed. “Of course. My apologies, your highness.”

Mieletty sat down in his father’s chair and scanned the councilors before him. Finally, his eyes fell on Risto. “The villain who attacked my father. What do you know about him?”

“The would-be regicide was found yestere’en attempting to book passage to Malmö. He had on him a hefty pouch of riksdalers…”

Zygmunt shifted in his seat, uncomfortable with the spymaster’s insinuation. “Most merchants use Swedish coin, yes? Visby still dominates the Baltic trade.”

“Yes, that alone means little enough,” Risto conceded. With an aggrieved sigh, he continued: “Albinas–for that is the wretch’s name–was a drunk of no account. He held no grudge against the Suomi, nor against your father in particular. He simply wished to buy enough beer to drown himself in.”

“So he was paid,” Mieletty said impatiently.

“Yes, your highness. He met with a woman in a tavern of no account in Tallinn, perhaps one week past. She was short, plump, perhaps forty. Norse accent. She had a man with her, and the man called her ‘Lilla.’” Risto gave Zygmunt a cool look, with just the hint of a sneer, before returning his gaze to Mieletty. “And your highness? He says the woman wore a cross around her neck.”

A chill went down Zygmunt’s spine. If Satajalka lives, the gutters will run red with blood. “Anyone could wear a cross. That doesn’t mean–”

“Yes, surely there are those who ape the practices of their fellows to disguise their own false hearts.” Risto’s tone was cutting now. “But in Suomi, where the worship of the cross is forbidden? What fool would claim allegiance to a despised cult, lest she meant it?”

“Someone who meant to throw us off the scent, surely.”

Before Risto could speak again, Mieletty held up a hand. “That point is well taken. Risto, continue to hunt for this Lilla–and make no assumptions about her.”

Risto’s face twisted into a false smile. “As your highness commands. And how goes the war?”

Mieletty grimaced. “The war has ended, my lord, in all but name. Suomi valor was no match for Sviendorog’s numbers.” At Kaur’s outrage, he continued. “I do not take the loss of our land lightly, my lord. We will forge new alliances over the winter and return to contest him again.”

Risto spoke up again, this time in an insinuating tone. “Your highness, there may be a way to, ahhh, to handle Sviendorog personally, if you will.”

To the prince, this hardly seemed to be a question. “By all means, Risto, kill the scoundrel if you have the chance.”

The seasoned councilors of the realm were stunned to hear their prince speak so bluntly about murder. Even Risto raised an eyebrow, apparently expecting that he would need to argue much more fiercely. Zygmunt raised a finger to object, but Mieletty cut him off. “Ziggy, honestly. How many brave boys did we bury because of this one man’s ambition? How is this even a question?”

Risto cleared his throat in an exaggerated attempt at courtesy. “Your highness, should your father recover…”

“When my father recovers.” Mieletty’s voice was like ice.

When your father recovers, you will, ah… you will let him know that this was your decision?”

Mieletty made an irritated gesture. “Of course. Just see Sviendorog dead.”

*****​

Satajalka awoke before the sun the following morning, blinking in confusion. He attempted to sit up, but a sudden sharp pain in his right flank stopped him before he even began. When he cried out in pain, he noticed that his voice was a rasp. Lying there in the predawn hour, he found himself trying to recall precisely what had happened. It had been Kekri, there was a fire.

He recalled at last the Pruessi man, who had seemed for all the world to be blind with panic. The man had crashed into him, and Satajalka had thought it was just that: a clumsy man, a momentary indignity. And then… and then he saw the blood…

How long had it been since then? Days? Weeks?

The door opened with a creak, and Satajalka belatedly realized that his cry of pain had alerted Andrejs. The meek tietäjä crept forward, peering with wide eyes. “Your majesty has awakened?”

“No, this must be some wonderful dream you’re having.” Satajalka spoke with irritation. Andrejs lacked a man’s courage, and thus he spoke as a woman does, with questions and deprecation rather than plain speech. This grated at Satajalka so much that he became more cutting, thus making the man more anxious still.

“I see that your humor has returned. Shall I inspect your wound, majesty. The infection was most fearsome.”

The king gritted his teeth. “In a moment, tietäjä. First, tell me what has happened.”

Andrejs bit his lip uncertainly. “You were stabbed, majesty.”

“Well, yes, obviously.”

“The knife was tainted, we believe. Befouled in some way, in case the blade itself failed to kill you. You might have died a dozen times in the last five days, but Kuutar had willed that you were knitted back together. The wound, please?”

Gods, Andrejs, do shut up about the wound. “First, the assassin. Was he found?”

“Found and interrogated. His Highness questioned the rogue last night, rather sharply as I understand it.”

As it often did, the king’s wroth came upon him suddenly. “You let a boy question him?!” He attempted to prop himself as he spoke, the better to glare at this irritating little man, but a sudden spasm in his injured flank forced him on his back again.

Andrejs squeaked in alarm, either at the king’s rage or the extent of his injury. “Certainly not, majesty. It was your elder son that I referred to.”

“Mieletty is back? Why did you not tell me that to begin with? What news of the war?”

Andrejs flushed, and he unconsciously backed away from the king’s bed. “I–you will want to ask Mieletty directly. I shall fetch him.” Before Satajalka could object, the tietäjä had fled from the room, the king’s wound forgotten.

Long moments later, Mieletty arrived, with Andrejs lurking timidly behind him. The prince must have been roused from bed, because he looked tired and his manner was taut with tension. “Iskä,” he said bluntly, “stop pecking at Andrejs like a cornered goose and let him check your wound. He is a holy man, you know.”

Satajalka begrudgingly gave his assent at last. Andrejs removed the dressing, frowned in thought for a time, and then said, “The infection seems to be healing, but his majesty will need to spend the next few days abed.” The king couldn’t help but notice that Andrejs was speaking to his son, not to him.

Mieletty gave his father a pointed look. “I’ll see that he does that. You should get some rest, Andrejs.”

After the little Preussi scampered out the door, the prince sat down heavily, his shoulders slumping. Mieletty looked half a boy again, boneless and exhausted. Satajalka reached out with his good hand to grasp his son’s. “Poju, I’m going to be fine. It’ll take more than this to stop your father.”

“You should tell that to Arvo. He’s locked himself in his room, and won’t speak to anybody even when Mother comes. I think he blames himself.”

“He was a boy, and unarmed. There was nothing he could do.” Arvo’s guilt made Satajalka feel helpless and enraged, both at once. “Bring him here and I’ll tell him so myself.”

After Mieletty nodded in assent, Satajalka added, “What about the girls?” His eldest Käpy had been with her children in Karelia, but Pihla had been with them when he… when it happened.

“A rider was sent to Karelia; if I know Käpy, she will be here demanding to tear the assassin apart with her bare hands. Pihla… whoever knows what Pihla is thinking? Last I heard she was going out to see some bird this morning, like nothing ever happened.”

“She worries like the rest of you, just in her own way.” Satajalka regarded his son with concern. “And you?”

Mieletty stared out the window, watching a light flurry fall in the moonlight. “I shouldn’t have tarried in Viro. I should have…”

“A full complement of guards could not stop him. Besides…” Satajalka placed a hand on his son’s arm, and paused until the prince met his gaze. “Besides, I am your father and your king. I am to protect you, not the other way around. You have nothing to be ashamed of.”

Mieletty grimaced. “You haven’t heard the news from the war yet, Iskä.”

“So we are to lose Selpils? I always knew that was a possibility, and Kaur must have too. There’s no shame in losing a battle to a numerically superior foe, poju.”

“He… he holds Selpils now. We’ll have to cede him the land, or let him burn his way up and down our Baltic provinces.” The prince looked away from his father. There was an uneasiness in Mieletty’s face now, one that looked perilously close to shame. “Only… Sviendorog won’t live the winter, and in the spring we’ll fight again, with better numbers to our side.”

Ah. Satajalka had refused Risto, but he had been undeterred and had made the same suggestion to his son. The king remembered his wroth before, how he had considered it murder. That was before, however. Before the battle had been lost, before he had been attacked, before he had known his children, his beloved children, to be so distraught. Most importantly, it was before he had felt so feeble.

“As I was saying, you have nothing to be ashamed of. Let Risto kill the rogue in his own bed. Let him gut the bastard like a fish. We will march down there next spring, and we will put his holdings to the sword one by one. His sons will be cut down, his daughters cast out, and all will soon forget the name Sviendorog.” Satajalka favored his son with a grim smile. “You are my son, Mieletty. You don’t owe that dog a thing.”

*****​

“...and heave!” Two servants strained under the weight of the chest they held between them. Behind them, Pihla stood, watching the process fretfully while anxiously tapping a finger against her left flank.. She had wanted to move this chest herself, filled as it was with samples of birds that she had dissected–the bones were quite fragile, it seemed. Zygmunt had gently reminded her that the chest was too heavy for him to lift, let alone her; and so the princess reluctantly permitted servants to move it only under her own close supervision.

Perhaps her anxiety was not just about this simple chest, Zygmunt reflected. She was leaving the only home that she had ever known. This was a wife’s lot, of course, but it could not have been easy. He felt a pang of sympathy for her; at this moment she looked like the girl that she had been not long before.

Zygmunt had not wished to leave either. At least, he had not wished to leave so quickly, before the king had fully recovered. However, the risk that the Kokemäenjoki might freeze over grew ever larger, and once that happened no one would be able to leave until spring. Thus the king had given his leave for Zygmunt and his household to return to Masuria.

Of course, they would not be gone from Ulvila forever, or even for a full year. Satajalka had named Zygmunt steward in place of the late Manvydas, and the council would return the following summer to see about the king’s business.

And if Risto’s plan works, Sviendorog will be dead soon enough and we’ll be on campaign again next spring. As soon as the king tendered his official surrender of Selpils to the Latgalian chief, Risto dispatched his cutthroats to Curonia. Just what they planned to do there, Zygmunt did not want to know. He would not mourn the rogue’s death, but the whole business turned his stomach.

Just then Mieletty arrived, there to escort them to the knarr. He pulled Zygmunt into a firm embrace and wished them both a safe voyage. Pihla mumbled a polite greeting to her older brother’s shoes, before returning to her concern over the chest. Mieletty’s mouth quirked at his little sister’s awkwardness, but he said nothing.

“Agne sends her apologies. The bear cub is fierce this morning, Ziggy,” Mieletty said fondly. The bear cub was what he was calling his yet-unborn child. “The midwife says that it won’t be long now.”

“I wish we could stay until your son is born,” Zygmunt confessed, “but there is already ice in the Bothnian.”

“I understand,” Mieletty said good-naturedly. “You will see him next summer for sure, when we present him with Curonia as a name-day gift.”

As the train of heavily-laden servants awkwardly made its way through the castle, Zygmunt saw the king at last. Satajalka’s hair was shock with white now, and he leaned heavily on a walking stick, but he was out of his sickbed and stronger than he had once been. He would not escort them as far as the city docks, but Satajalka had pledged to bid them goodbye from the castle gates.

Satajalka gave his son-in-law a grave nod, but his warmest regards were for his daughter. The king asked her a question, softly, and soon Pihla was animatedly expounding upon a passage that she had just translated from Pliny’s Natural History. This Pliny apparently had the notion that the Earth was a ball, suspended in space. Besides him, the translator Hasan was piping in to agree. Apparently the Arabs had measured the dimensions of the earth centuries before.

When the commons caught sight of their king, a cheer rang out. Satajalka had never been more beloved than he was now. Some were even calling him Satajalka the Just, a name that inevitably made the king grimace. The king smiled at the crowd, and treated them with a beneficent wave, but his grip on the walking stick tensed. Plainly he was still wary of large crowds.

The king was spending most of his time with his spymaster, or so the court gossip went. His desire to find the conspirators who had attacked him was bordering on mania. Who knew where it would lead, how much blood would be shed as a result?

Zygmunt imagined the Earth as a ball, not fixed in space but plummeting into an abyss. You will have war, whether you like it or not. He shivered and started walking faster. The sooner they were free of this city, the better.
 
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Is Mieletty in for a rude awakening once he returns home?

He certainly is, as we've just seen.

What an interesting take on Pihila. I enjoy my students and friends on the spectrum when they are at their bluntest. I look forward to seeing the erudite and polite lords of the realm quail when she calls them out.

Thanks! I enjoy it as well.

Thank you for this new chapter, although calamity has certainly come to this AAR!

My wife (who does copy-edits for the AAR) said something similar: 'everything's gone to crap in Suomi.'

On another topic, you have nicely set up the next chapter as we still do not know the origins of the fire or just what happened to the king. My guess is that Sviendorog has engineered one of those typical CK moves of going right to the throat and landing at the enemy capital for a siege.

Not a bad guess, honestly. In a way, things might have been easier if it had been Sviendorog--for a lot of people.

If Sviendorog is the architect of this murder, that is ironic considering Satajalka refused Risto's suggestion before.

I really hope Mieletty doesn't push Zygmunt away because of the defeat and murder. He needs his friends in this time of crisis the most.

I wonder how Pihla is going to feel in the future. Witnessing her dad's murder right in front of her can't be great mentally.

Pihla is not in a great place in this chapter, that's for sure.
 
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When the commons caught sight of their king, a cheer rang out. Satajalka had never been more beloved than he was now. Some were even calling him Satajalka the Just,
There has to be someone in the kingdom who thinks he set it up to make himself more popular. Of course, that can't be it, right?
 
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What a delightfully cynical idea.
Well, this is a CK AAR. Just about anything can happen!

This is certainly an interesting turn of events. So Sviendorog will pay both for being the victor and the blame for the attempted assassination pinned on him too. (And we have no idea if Risto's men will carry out their mission yet either.)

However, some of the evidence points back to Sweden. What Catholics want the king dead? Could it be someone playing the long game of revenge for the Catholic merchants being tossed out? I definitely like the mystery elements here.
 
BTW, meant to mention this earlier: next week is finals, so I'll be spending my time thinking about polynomial rings and quantum mechanics; I'll be back in two weeks with the next chapter.
 
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I'm surprised Satajalka pivoted so quickly on wanting to murder Sviendorog, but almost dying tends to switch people's priorities.

I'm disliking Risto more and more every time he speaks. And I think he at least suspects Zygmunt is a closet Christian, even if he can't accuse the Duke openly...yet.
 
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People who I wish hired the assassin but probably didn’t.

1. Mieletty. It’s predictable. The tries to fast track his reign. At the same time, he’s been so well written as the good son that it would be fun.

2. Ziggy. He’s Christian and has an axe to grind, but he’s gone through the series as a bit of an innocent.

Whoever did it, @Cora Giantkiller will make it worth our while to wonder as the story unfolds.
 
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Chełmno, Suomi
May, 1128​

No Suomi woman truly expected her husband to go without other women. Pihla had known that since she was a girl. Her father had a Pommeri concubine that he seemed to prefer to Mother. Whenever Father was with his other woman, Mother would be in high dudgeon. Pihla had hated those nights most of all. Mother might even scream at Mieletty, who could otherwise do no wrong in her eyes, but she preferred her usual antagonist: her misfit younger daughter, the one with the blunt manner of speech and the constantly tangled hair.

As a girl, Pihla asked her father once if she could go with him when he left. She was not then clear on precisely why her father sought the company of another woman, but she imagined that it had something to do with her mother’s foul mood. The king had laughed at her request, but with affection, and with a soft smile said that it would not be so long before he returned.

Her older sister Käpy was much more sanguine about the whole institution of concubinage. Käpy had been betrothed at a young age to the much older Duke Susi of Karelia, in a gesture by their grandfather to maintain internal stability. Her resentment of her husband was well-known, and it was said that they only appeared together at public events. Once in her cups, the miserable duchess had proclaimed, “If his whores can stand the sight of him, they’re welcome to him.”

With those as her reference points, Pihla found that her own marriage was surprisingly tolerable. Zygmunt was an amiable and respectful husband, a person that she might have called friend under other circumstances. He was correct, too, that there was pleasure to be found in the act of coitus. Quite a bit of it, in fact.

There was something in her, however, that was deeply suited to solitude. Zygmunt had not understood this, at first. She in turn had not quite realized that solitude was a thing that she might ask for. In those early months, his presence began to wear on her, and made her snappish. She sounded in those times almost like Mother, and that made it even worse.

Making matters worse, her husband proved to be a man of unfathomable moods. They would receive letters from the capital, telling of the latest crop of traitors hanged; and then Zygmunt would be in a funk for hours after. He would stare out the window, brooding on something or other; but when she asked why he simply waved it away, as if it were nothing. She began to wish that her husband might indeed find a concubine. Perhaps he could confide in his mistress, and thus be in better temper when he was with her. She would at least get some time to herself.

After a few months, it seemed that he had. Zygmunt began to find reasons to spend the day out of the castle, always on some thin pretext. These were calming restful days for her. She might spend the day slowly translating the Kitāb al-Hayawān into Suomi, or observing the mating dance of her goldfinches. One morning, she had a couple guards haul a piece of driftwood into her solar, and for the rest of the day, she examined the barnacles encrusted thereon. They bore no resemblance to any avian body that she had observed, and quietly she began to doubt the story of the so-called barnacle goose.

When Zygmunt returned from seeing his concubine, Pihla found that she was excited to see him again. Their conversations were more amiable, and their coupling more ardent. Whoever this mystery woman was, Pihla was grateful to her.

More than a year passed before she learned the truth. By then, Pihla was consumed by the fear that she might be barren. It seemed only too reasonable: there was some flaw at the core of her being, some hidden defect that had prevented her from being the noblewoman that she ought to have been. It would only make sense if her womb was similarly afflicted. To fight this anxiety, she began to approach the marriage bed with the same structure and discipline as her scholarly pursuits.

In this spirit, she asked Zygmunt one morning if he might postpone his regular visit to his concubine. They were breaking fast in his solar, and her question prompted an irritating little titter from the nearby serving woman.

Zygmunt just looked at her, astounded. “Excuse me?”

“Surely you can see her the day after tomorrow? The midwife expects that I shall be most fertile tomorrow evening, after all.” She frowned. “Am I not supposed to discuss her? Your mistress, I mean. Not the midwife.”

Zygmunt gave a quick glance to the serving woman. “Oda, that will be all,” he said, his voice suddenly thick with tension. As Pihla watched the servant leave, she began to feel uneasy.

When they were alone, he spoke to her in a low tone. “Pihla, I need to tell you something. Something that–well, something that I need you to keep secret, at all costs.”

Now she was truly alarmed. A dozen thoughts went through her head at once. He’s killed a man, or perhaps, he plots rebellion even now. “What is it?”

He chewed his lower lip before proceeding. “I don’t have some concubine in a house somewhere, I’ve been going to Mass–to a Christian ritual.”

Zygmunt and his damn jokes. She snorted, irritated as much at her own gullibility as at him.

“I’m serious, Pihla. I’m a Christian.”

She blinked. “Don’t be ridiculous.”

“I am. I always was.”

A chill ran over her as she finally realized that this was not his typical dry wit. “The Christians killed all those tietäjät in Viro. They tried to kill Father.” Pihla eyed the door nervously, and for a second entertained the notion that she should flee for her life.

“Yes, some Christians did that. Christians are like Suomi, some do good and some do evil.” He tried to reassure her with a smile, but the tension in his face made it seem like a grimace. “And most of us are somewhere in the middle.”

“You lied to me. You’ve been lying to me. This whole time– you passed yourself off as–”

“I was dragged before your father in chains, Pihla. Your man Erkki held a sword to my throat. I thought I was going to die right there. I said whatever the king wanted me to say, and I thought that I just had to keep pretending until I could escape.”

The fear in his eyes was plain. Still, it was hard for her to imagine the scene that he described. To Pihla, her father was always the kind one, the secretly indulgent one, the one with a soft smile just for her. She knew that the king must be stern with others, but she could never see him that way herself.

Zygmunt looked at her, imploringly. “Please say something, rakas.”

It was the endearment as much as anything that finally loosened her tongue. He did not usually speak to her in that fashion, and it showed how distressed he was. “But you didn’t. Escape, I mean. You could have left at any time, you could have raised the banners against my father, you could have…”

“I was a boy alone in a foreign land, Pihla. I had no coin and no friends and I did not speak the language. I might have fled the castle, but what then?”

“And when you got older, when you learned to speak our tongue?”

“By then there was your brother. He was the only one who didn’t see me as a captive. He just thought I was another boy his age. He was… kind.”

Oh. “You love him.”

“He’s my brother too, really. I would follow him anywhere. I… I love him more than anyone in the world.” Zygmunt winced, apparently remembering who he was speaking with. “Sorry, I just meant…”

“I know what you meant.” When Zygmunt spoke of her brother, she could see that there was nothing false in him. Still, that did not mean that he was harmless. Men do a lot of evil in the name of righteousness. “How can you be loyal to your god and to my father?”

“God knows, it’s a trial sometimes.” Zygmunt gave a mordant chuckle.

Pihla was unamused. “That’s not an answer.”

Zygmunt flushed and held up his hands in surrender. “You’re right. I… I saw this city sacked once, the castle under siege… maybe a thousand people died that day, including women, children. It wouldn’t serve my god or your father or anybody if the city went up in flames again. So I keep the peace, as best as I can.”

“Even if that means lying.”

“Of course! Do you know many people your father beheaded in the last two years because they went to a Mass or had a cross in their house? Do you think every one of those dozens of people was trying to kill him? Every crofter or peasant girl?”

She still remembered the terror of the day that her father was attacked. She remembered too when his would-be assassin was placed upon the block. The execution was a long and gruesome affair, taking three firm slices to sever the man’s head at last. The man’s agony had felt like justice to her.

They continued to get reports from the capital, however. There were always new conspirators, and thus new heads on new spikes. So many people, spread over so many places. How could all these people conspire together?

Troubled, Pihla arose. “I have to think about this.” On seeing the spike of panic on her husband’s fate, she softened and added, “I’m not going to say anything, husband. I’m not so eager to get rid of you.”

She spent the night alone in her own chambers. She scarcely ate, did not sleep, and could not even focus on her translation. She spent hours laying awake in bed, staring blankly at the driftwood still propped up on a table. She imagined goslings hanging off of it like apples on a heavily laden branch. How do people come to believe these foolish notions? How did I?

The following morning, she joined Zygmunt for breakfast again. He sat there stiffly, like a prisoner waiting in the dock, while Oda spooned beans out onto their plates. Once they were alone, Pihla looked him in the eye and said, “I want to see it.”

Zygmunt blinked in surprise. “Excuse me?”

“This… ritual. I want to see it for myself.”

*****​

The Christians gathered in a nondescript room on the second floor of a brewery. There was a small cross on the wall, a few benches that had seen better days, and the pervading odor of ale and sweat.

Pihla was not sure how one dressed for a ritual like this so she wore a simple woolen gown, a hooded cloak–and a moon of Kuutar around her neck. A few of the others gave it curious glances, but nobody dared question the duchess. Pihla supposed that her presence here sent a reassuring signal no matter what she wore around her neck.

To her surprise, she recognized a good many of the faces here. Most of the leading tradesmen of the city still held to their former faith, it seemed. The brewer was here, naturally, along with a half dozen master blacksmiths, a handful of merchants and the castle’s master of horse. These men greeted her with effusive courtesy, no doubt trying to maintain her husband’s good will.

More interesting to her were the people that Pihla did not recognize. Many of the men were ordinary laborers, and they regarded her with honest suspicion. There were many women here as well, a good number with their husbands and children but also a number in mourning clothes. The children ran through the aisles and cried out jokes to each other.

It was not so very different than the sacrifices that the royal family had attended. Many came to get access to the king, or be seen in fine company, or see their friends and gossip before the elk was killed, or simply to feast on the meat of the sacrifice. Many others came because, when the nights were dark and cold, you need to remember that the gods were still there.

The Mass itself was remarkably underwhelming. She understood Latin quite well, better even than the priest. However, the prayers and chants were still abstruse, referring to persons and spirits and blood and flesh that she had no context for. She found it all bewildering at first, and then eventually let it wash over her while she continued to study the crowd.

Iskä in his ignorance had invested this world with a drama and intensity that it did not actually possess. It’s really quite boring, she thought to herself, and that thought made her giggle until eventually Zygmunt gave her a confused look. His gaze made her smile, and for the first time she began to suspect that she might love this man.

I get it now, she wanted to tell him. I get why you come here, I get why you protect this place, I get it. This isn’t a conspiracy, this is a community. I understand. Instead, she slipped her hand in his and lay her head on his shoulder.
 
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Well, this is a CK AAR. Just about anything can happen!

This is certainly an interesting turn of events. So Sviendorog will pay both for being the victor and the blame for the attempted assassination pinned on him too. (And we have no idea if Risto's men will carry out their mission yet either.)

However, some of the evidence points back to Sweden. What Catholics want the king dead? Could it be someone playing the long game of revenge for the Catholic merchants being tossed out? I definitely like the mystery elements here.

Whether or not people literally believe that he did it, Sviendorog has the misfortune of being on everybody's mind when they're good and mad about the recent invasion.

I'm surprised Satajalka pivoted so quickly on wanting to murder Sviendorog, but almost dying tends to switch people's priorities.

I'm disliking Risto more and more every time he speaks. And I think he at least suspects Zygmunt is a closet Christian, even if he can't accuse the Duke openly...yet.

Risto really is a piece of work, isn't he?

People who I wish hired the assassin but probably didn’t.

1. Mieletty. It’s predictable. The tries to fast track his reign. At the same time, he’s been so well written as the good son that it would be fun.

2. Ziggy. He’s Christian and has an axe to grind, but he’s gone through the series as a bit of an innocent.

Whoever did it, @Cora Giantkiller will make it worth our while to wonder as the story unfolds.

I like both of these notions; but as the man says, you might think so, I couldn't possibly comment.
 
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Another very good chapter, and thanks for that.

Thanks also for answering my earlier questions within the story. I had a feeling the Catholics were behind the assassination attempt. Well, that is going to cause a lot of misery (and it already has).

So now I wonder if Zygmunt was a secret Catholic within your game or is everything here springing from your rich imagination? Either way, interesting work as we wind our way forward. (Unfortunately, I think some of these excellent characters are headed toward disaster.)

Best wishes for the holidays and thanks for this gift of a chapter.
 
Secrets become harder to contain the more people are in on it. Mieletty and Pihla love Zygmunt, but do they love him more than their father and king? I agree that the king needs some sense talked into him. Perhaps family ties can help here too?
 
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Ulvila, Suomi
October, 1132​

The baker street was one of Zygmunt’s favorites in the city of Ulvila. There was always a treat or two that one could find, if one had a little coin. Just now he could hear bakers and butchers calling out their wares, along with a variety of fresh vegetables and a stall or two serving bowls of lohikeitto. He and his wife were due to present themselves to the king shortly, but perhaps they could duck out afterward to grab something for themselves. The smell of the creamy fish stew was making his mouth water.

Pihla’s mind was still on their other business, it seemed. “And what will you tell the princeling when he asks about the gods, my good duke?” she asked in a low voice, a smile dancing on her lips.

Zygmunt grinned. “I’ll tell him to ask Täti Pihla, for she is far more learned than I.”

Pihla acknowledged his rejoinder with a simple hum of satisfaction, and slipped her hand into his.

They had just arrived in Ulvila for the name day celebration of Prince Otso the Younger, known by all and sundry as the bear cub. Otso was an amiable and rambunctious child. What’s more, he would be six tomorrow, which meant that he would be traveling back with them to Chełmno to start his education. After Pihla had suffered two miscarriages, the prospect of having a child running around at home had raised their spirits immensely.

“You know,” he added slyly, “the social expectation is that one flattering comment should be met with another.”

“I shall keep that in mind,” Pihla said with a laugh. “But you just told the simple truth, my lord. ‘Twas not flattery at all.”

Zygmunt was busy formulating another flirtatious remark when he was stopped short by his wife’s sudden cry of alarm. Beside him, Pihla was looking in horror at a half dozen bodies dangling from the castle walls, a gruesome token of some recent execution. Zygmunt did not need to see the one corpse in bloodstained vestments to know who these people had been. Another group of suspects in Risto’s never-ending investigation.

He squeezed her hand and urged her forward. If the king was intent on this madness, there was nothing that either of them could do to stop him. Zygmunt had long since lost hope that finding the mysterious orchestrator of the plot would mean anything at all. For all he knew, she was a fiction made up by a tormented man while on the rack.

Did the king have any notion that he was playing with fire? The Church had no love for pagans, and still less for the zealous pagan that ruled Suomi now. However, few kings wished to confront the pagan at their doorstep. Satajalka could raise five thousand swords, and he maintained powerful alliances with the Sami clans in the north. If he had but left the other kingdoms alone, the kings would have left him alone–as they had left alone his father, for the most part.

Instead, Risto and Satajalka were murdering Christians, including who knows how many priests sent from Sweden or the Holy Roman Empire. The Archbishop of Bremen and his suffragans in Scandinavia were telling lurid stories of atrocities from their pulpits. There was a new story to tell everyday, most of them true.

The Archbishop had even established a new order in Bremen: holy knights, sworn to the Cross and to their brothers. They wore the badge of his illustrious predecessor, Saint Ansgar the Apostle of the North, and pledged themselves to purge the devil from the northern lands. He had heard of young men in Chełmno who slipped away from their homes one night to seek out the order. The notion was romantic, but horribly short-sighted: a war would harm the Christians of Suomi as much as anybody.

Just then he felt Pihla squeeze his hand. At least I know a few who understand. Thank Christ for small blessings.

*****​

Otso had in his hand a child-sized wooden practice sword. As soon as he saw Pihla and Zygmunt run in, he called out, “Setä! Täti! Look what I can do!”

The boy then proceeded to act out an extended melee with a series of invisible foes. The fracas reached an anticlimax when Otso’s mother, the endlessly patient Agne, snatched the sword from her son’s hand. “Fighting is for the practice yard, poju,” she said with a laugh. Otso stuck his lip out in protest.

The boy shed his pouty disposition when he saw his beloved isänisä enter the chamber. Men thought that King Satajalka had a fearsome disposition because of the eye he had lost as a youth. Pihla had never seen him that way, however. Just now he looked like an old man, leaning on his walking stick while he doted over his grandson. To look at him, one could almost forget about the corpses they’d seen outside.

Almost. Once Otso had been distracted by another new visitor, Pihla joined her father. “Do you have a moment, Iskä?”

“Always, tytärkku.” His good eye regarded her with warmth.

Pihla fought the urge to roll her eyes. Tytärkku was what he had called her when she was a little girl. “I’ve been wanting to talk to you, Iskä.”

“Aye. I thought you might.” He gave her a soft, sad smile. “Did you know that your mother had three miscarriages between Käpy and Mieletty? Sohvi thought perhaps she might not have another child. Suomi might have had a queen, if you can imagine that.”

Pihla was stunned. “Truly?” She had trouble imagining her mother agonizing as she had.

Her father put his weathered hand on her own and held it firmly. “Äkräs will plant a child in your womb, sweetling. I believe that as much as I believe anything.”

Tears filled her eyes. For a moment she was tempted to weep and let her father tell her that everything would be okay. But instead she made an effort to master herself, before saying in a choked voice, “Actually, Iskä, I’ve been wanting to ask you about something else.”

Her father’s brows knit. “You can ask me anything, child. You know that.”

“Those people, the ones that were executed. Who were they?”

“Nobody that you need fear.”

“Yes, but… who were they? What did they do?” Did they deserve to die? Please, if I could only believe that.

“Plots of no account, tytärkku.” There was that same smile, the same twinkle in his eye. Gods, had he always been so condescending?

“You say that I can ask you anything. And yet you’re not answering me.” It was hard to meet her father’s eyes as she said that, but it seemed important and so she did.

Father frowned at that, and quietly he withdrew his hand from hers. “They were Balts, I believe. From Klaipėda. One was a priest, sent from Saxony as they often are. They plotted to overthrow the throne and raise up a Christian king.”

Pihla’s stomach was in a knot. Part of her wished to accept that answer and go away. But she had to know. “How did we learn of that? What proof were you shown?”

“We should send you down to work the rack instead of Risto,” her father said with a tight, mirthless smile. “You have a talent for interrogation, it seems.”

“The rack?” Suddenly she remembered words that her father had told Mieletty once, a lifetime ago: Torture can make a man speak, but it can’t make him speak truth. “Since when do we–”

“I would spill an ocean of blood to keep you children safe. I would put them all on the rack myself if need be. I would stop at nothing to keep you from harm. That is what it means to be king, child.” He was nearly shouting at her now, his voice shaking with passion.

A realization struck just then, so suddenly that she spoke without thinking: “You almost died, Iskä. You could barely walk for weeks after, you must have felt helpless.” Her father’s face darkened while she was speaking, his mouth twisted into a snarl. He had taken a step forward, and he was looming over her now. He was trying to intimidate her, she realized at last, and it very nearly worked. Pihla swallowed nervously, before continuing, “I don’t like what fear has made of you, Father.”

The king stared at her for what seemed like hours. His face was a rictus of fury. She became uncomfortably aware that the two of them had made a spectacle of themselves. Mieletty and Arvo were exchanging a concerned look, while Zygmunt was doing his best to fade into the background. Even cheery Agne looked ashen.

“Your mother was right about you,” he said at last, and then strode out of the room.

*****​

Satajalka swore and pinched the bridge of his nose in frustration. The weather turned chill overnight, and outside dark gray clouds threatened the arrival of an autumn shower. The advent of rain always gave him the most aggravating headaches. On another day the king might have made his excuses and returned to bed. Today, however, there was simply too much to do.

A knarr had arrived last night from Riga, with a captive priest chained in the hold. Risto would have been at him all night, doing gods know what, and soon the spymaster would have a report. Perhaps this interrogation would be the one to announce who this Lilla was, although Satajalka had his doubts. They had questioned two score priests in the past six years, and none of them had said anything worth hearing.

Otso must be out to sea by now, he thought sadly. Satajalka had few joys these days, but the young prince was one of them. He would miss the snowball fights and mock duels in the yard. The castle would be quieter without his grandson. Of course, he couldn’t think about the princeling’s departure without gritting his teeth over Pihla. What had gotten into the girl? He had never known her to be so hectoring. Not that he had covered himself in glory either. However provocative she may have been, he ought not have let himself be provoked.

Satajalka winced in pain when the hinge in his solar door creaked. Risto entered, carrying something in a satchel at his side. The gaunt, weathered man studied his king before asking in a quiet voice, “Your majesty’s head is afflicted?”

The king nodded, his mouth tight.

“I shall be brief,” Risto continued, as softly as before. “The priest from Riga is known to you, majesty.”

The needless mystery of this irritated Satajalka. “Speak plainly, Risto,” he snapped.

“The good Father Otto, of Saxony, has returned to our shores. The new archbishop has charged him to, quote, win souls for Christ, end quote.” The spymaster snorted. “His contact in Riga has already been put to the sword.”

“That scheming cur. I was too kind to him before.”

Risto smiled. “If it pleases your majesty… this man Otto has begged me for death often this past night.”

Unwillingly, Satajalka found himself remembering Pihla’s horrified face. Women could not understand these matters, however. They were too sentimental to understand that cruelty was sometimes required. “You are satisfied he has told you everything?”

“And then some. He knew nothing of the plot against you, I’m afraid. I am quite sure.” Risto smiled apologetically.

“He may die, then.” Satajalka thought for a second, and then added, “Take him beyond the city, where the chapel once stood. Tell him–his mission will not outlive him.”

Risto nodded. “Your majesty is wise. There is one more thing, I’m afraid. Otto of Saxony had something interesting on his person.”

Satajalka’s head throbbed again. “Quickly, Risto.”

The spymaster reached into the satchel and removed a large tome with a leather cover. The text was written in some strange alphabet, neither Latin nor runic. Interspersed amongst the odd characters were images, however: bearded figures, golden crowns, crosses. “It’s a Christian text, I take it?” Why was Risto showing this to him?

“An expensive one, too. It takes a cleric years to produce a text of this quality, it seems. Otto purchased the book from Novgorod before your father claimed it, and he held it close to him for decades. Until you had him arrested, and he grieved to know that it was lost to him.” Risto paused for dramatic effect. Another of his irritating habits. “He thanked his god, he says, when the text was returned to him. Some kindly soul here in Ulvila.”

A chill ran through Satajalka that had nothing to do with the autumn rain. “There is a Christian, you mean. Here.”

“Indeed. But who? Our people gave the chapel a wide berth. Who would have gone near it before it burned?” Risto treated the king with an insinuating smile.

Satajalka ground his teeth. “If you mean to accuse one of my council, then just do so. Like a man.”

Risto flushed and dipped his head. “Very well. I submit that our good duke Zygmunt is the Christian in question.”

“You do recall that he burned the chapel to the ground, yes?”

“And left you quite convinced of his loyalty, as I recall.”

“Perhaps this Otto lied. He wished to cause trouble before we sent him to Tuonela.”

“I am not so poor an interrogator, majesty. I know when a man is lying to me.” Risto was getting animated now, and forgetting that he meant to speak quietly. “Your attack was planned in Tallinn, yes? Where was Zygmunt, days before the attack?”

Satajalka’s head was spinning now. “He was with my son and surrounded by my army. He would have been watched every minute.”

“The good duke has a habit of slipping off when he needs to. Your cousin Aapo used to say that he had a lover, if you recall.”

“Pihla,” the king said in a horrified whisper. Had he filled his daughter’s head with lies? Had he turned her against him? Ukko’s might, he has my grandson.

Still… this was just supposition so far. Just a set of possibilities. “You have no proof,” the king said at last. “This is a tidy story, one that might be true, but you have no proof.”

Risto bowed respectfully. “I shall get you your proof, majesty. Until then–?”

“Until then, discretion.”
 
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Happy holidays and a good new year to everybody! Tonight is night six of a later-than-usual Hanukkah, and seeing all the candles burning in the menorah cheers me up during the darkest days of the year. Hoping that you folks are enjoying light and community as well.

A quick AAR update: I've made a goal to finish up writing the Zygmunt story before my winter term classes start next Monday; there should be four more chapters after this one and then an epilogue. (I'm writing the last full chapter now.) I'm also planning how the third section will go; I found that featuring five or six characters with any kind of depth made the structure of part two much more challenging, so I may even (gasp) write an outline in advance rather than pantsing this thing like I have been.

So now I wonder if Zygmunt was a secret Catholic within your game or is everything here springing from your rich imagination? Either way, interesting work as we wind our way forward. (Unfortunately, I think some of these excellent characters are headed toward disaster.)

Best wishes for the holidays and thanks for this gift of a chapter.

Thanks! Zygmunt actually didn't do much of anything in the game itself except get captured; everything else is made up for the story. The broader arc of the story comes from the game (largely) but Zygmunt was designed to be a particular lens on it, and to provide tension with Satajalka.

What a sweet moment between a very interesting couple. I will be curious to see whether Pihla remains a sympathizer or converts.

I won't say much about what's coming but I don't think Pihla is interested in Catholicism for herself; I think seeing them as human beings has given her a new perspective on the world.

Considering that Christians are being purged following the assassination attempt, Zygmunt may have to rely on Mieletty or Pihla talking some sense into their father for his own good.

Secrets become harder to contain the more people are in on it. Mieletty and Pihla love Zygmunt, but do they love him more than their father and king? I agree that the king needs some sense talked into him. Perhaps family ties can help here too?

I was a little happy to read the both of you saying this, because it perfectly anticipates where we were going in the next chapter. And honestly, is there any talking to Satajalka? Pihla at least was unable to get through to him, but honestly I think the king has a little trouble with women who have opinions on things.
 
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