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WOW.. first person i have heard of suggestion an revolt... (ps don't declare war on a good naval country.. try and pick an inland on)
 
Xizo said:
Prehaps I'll try that later tonight once my caffenie burst has worn off a bit. Now I have been going in my opinion pretty fast with this tale and it is my sad duty to inform you that summer break is over. :( Thus, I might slow down a bit. Let us say an update every other day? :D
Yea school... we can't blame u if u don't update every other day... I think that a good long update every week would be good.. but everyother day would be awesome... will that is what i think...

SCHOOL= :confused: and :mad:
AAR= :rofl: and :cool:
 
Good uppdates :)
BTW, how many divisions do you have, manpower, resources etc...
 
A Meeting with the Devil'a Kin Part Three​

War is an unfortunate event to befall any nation, or people. As summer began to fade into autumn Peru was yet again faced with a period of turmoil. Yet again many an honest man would have to forfeit his life for the sack of rapid expansionistic ideals. Months of preparation had led up to this tremendous event in Peruvian history. Then as our country stood fragile and weak we would have to prove our will to stay firm and steadfast in our ideals. As much as it pained me to raise my gun upon another man it hurt my soul many multiple times more when I realized the destruction war left in its' wake.

Palos had planned upon having the war's first engagement in the north-eastern Bolivian province of Riberalta. Forces dispatched to the area would include the two infantry divisions of the 3'corps. Their original position had been within the confines of a northern province. When they bashed into enemy territory they were resisted, but only with minimal effort. Upon entering the rural area of Riberalta troops were confronted with dug in Bolivians’ and a cavalry division. Expectations for the battle included warnings of possibly fanatical defenders', and a fierce prolonged siege. In truth after only one day of easy fighting the defenders disbanded into submission.

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Fueled by this victory Palos ordered three additional divisions stationed in Cuzco towards the Bolivian capital of La Paz. Following several days of double pace marching the divisions arrived at their intended destination. Despite high expectations and the momentum of the Riberalta battle the engagement was an utter failure. It resulted in the tragic death of a multitude of Peruvians and set the campaign back several weeks. New orders issued to those army units included a full retreat and then a period of recuperation.

Whilst the attackers of La Paz back tracked towards friendly territory the 3'corps began to implement Palos grand plan. A major aspect of the Bolivian war was a plan to form a semi-circle around La Paz. Under a most capable general the Peruvian Armies most battle hardened unit was making it a reality. After several weeks of travel and a difficult trek the 3'corps finally arrived in Conabama. At long last the cards were in place so to speak. November 3 of 1937 saw five infantry divisions' of the Peruvian Army ordered into the enemy strong hold of La Paz.

Blood flowed upon the ground on November seventh of the same year. La Paz was under full siege that day as five division of battle hardened and brilliant men stormed their objective. Defenders held their positions as best they could despite this many vital advantages that were in the hand of their invaders. We in the Peruvian army contained the advantage of being overwhelmingly outnumbering to the Bolivians. More than a two to one ratio to be precise young ones. Thus it was only natural for after several days of fierce and mentally convincing combat that the Bolivian gave way. On November 9, 1936 the nation state of Bolivia surrendered its' sovereignty to the most honorable order of the Lama.

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*above - Peruvian divisions prepare to strike into the enemy stronghold of La Paz.

Nothing of the future was clear to the great minds of the day at this point in history. We all lived in a mind clouding fog. Each and every man chose to live his life day by day and use his morals and ideals to guide himself thought the mist. As time progressed the nation state of Peru became more and more noticeable an entity to the outside world. In the turbulent months and years to come her fate would lie in the hands of the privileged few.

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Antonia shock his head. Grogginess still lingered within. The old prune had stopped momentarily again. A familiar glazed look paced across his clear blue eyes and he too violently shock his head to banished unfriendly thoughts from the confines of his mind. Of course as his mount opened once more the audience that had been boisterously conversing fell silent in an instant.
 
Thanks for reading chap, :)

Though is anyone else reading? I'm just kind of feeling weird seeing allot of other tales having comments pour in. Not to sound weird, but as this is my first attempt I was hoping for some feed back on my writing skills, so if I give it another go the new one would be even better.

Oh, well I'm going to keep writing either way :)
 
Keep writting and the readers will flock to you.

Also what kind of style are you trying to use? It is interesting and it works well.

Normally I would say write how you are comfortable writting but I think when it comes to Amatuer works I say write how you wish you could write.

Hope that halps some. :D
 
Naturally, your writing improves as you write more. But I like your style and you don't see many Peruvian WD AARs around. You'll probably see that your second AAR will have more replys&views than your first, and the third more than second etc...
 
I am not so sure of people go to u if u have a lot of forums.. o well.. i would follow u to ur next one.. but try and be origanal but not on the band wagon.. .so don't do a GERMANY aar becouse sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo many people write those..

good luck and keep up with the updates!
 
Thank-you all I intend to keep up with this and then perhaps throw myself into a new project. Who knows. Anyway I've incountered a slight gaming problem. I have in a test run ahead a bit and then gotten to the point where I must pick Allied or Axis. This leaves me at a quandry. Axis will prove interesting yet will lead to death. Yet allied will be dull as I can't get my hands on any bloody transports. :mad: I will post several updates before this point comes, but any opinions upon the subject? :)
 
Why can't you get tranports?
Assume military control of the US, send them your forces (soon to die in Europe) to them as Exp Forces and there you go.

tip: this can also be used to avoid losing manpower as it will be aforded by the controler of the exp. force.

Also, the allies seem to do a lot more tech shearing.
Finally watch out for those Japs.
 
The other thing to keep in consideration regarding your aar is look at your view that is more often a better sign of your raedership than the 2 or 3 people who will pop in after each post and say "Good update :D "

Also the longer your aar goes it will build in readership. It took a long while for my AAR to get more than 10 views per post. Didn't matter who posted it. It was like 20 post's = 200 views. I think Each AAR reaches a "critical mass" point where your readership breaks past that barrier and you can end up with around 100 new "views" everytime you post or more in some aars. I am not a very good writer and I think I've had success. I know you acn too.

Just remember to be consistant with your story and people will come back for more. Sorry for the ramble.

Going Axis might not cause you to die depending on what the other countries in the allies do. If you can take the french lands before the fall of france you can put a hurt in them. Depends on what you want, even if it ended short I think going axis might provide a more entertaining story, but it's your call I will read what you choose.
 
Did I mention this is my third game? :D

Well help me here elbato if I give my exp. forces would I control them fully and then note their exploits in Europe. Ethier that, or do I shift to a more view of the allies and mention units as though Peru was aiding them. Like as in giving commandors and such? Interesting concepts. Plus, I have heard that even with military control you can't use allied transports. Is that true? Sorry for the newbie questions, but I really am one.

Edit; Greven thanks, do you have copies of the 1.06c .inc files for the east vs west mod. My upgrade feel through. :(
 
If you have control either military or Exp you have to match up your troops and transpost by country.

Ie American troops can use american transports. If you send Exp forces to america AND have control over america YOUR exp forces can board the american transports.

Hope that helps some.
 
You can control exp. units you have given to someone else, but AI had a habit of cancelling your orders. Plus you don't "see" what your units see, i.e. you don't see in the neighbouring provinces, and you don't get messages about their exploits.