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I am just dropping a line to say that I am going to start following this AAR, Le Jones. I have read the Prologue about the death of King George VI and will binge read everything else later. I really like your attention to detail in the Prologue, so I am looking forward to reading the rest. :D
 
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Chapter 56, Christ Church, Jarrow, 5 October 1936

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The Church spire soared above the terraces and shops around it (most of which were small, two floor terraces). Soot from coal fires and smoke from the docks drifted slowly over town; the weather augured well with an easterly breeze forecast to roll in from the coast and clear up the air over Jarrow, Hebburn, Shields and Sunderland. It was, Arthur McKay pondered, a grand day for a march.

Arthur, as a local union man, had asked and had been granted permission to attend the launch of ‘the Crusade’ while his son Reg, still unhappy, still on probation at the Sunderland Echo, had asked and had been granted permission by the paper to accompany one of their reporters to the scene (Arthur’s union connections granting, the editor had surmised, unique access to the Labour movement at the start of this demonstration). The streets had been crammed with well-wishers, there was a band on the street corner. Battling through the crowds, Arthur and Reg had been waved into the Church. Both sat, silently, idly, waiting for the blessing to begin.

“I told you, lad, there are stories, you should tell them.” His accent was an odd mix, his native Glasgow now sprinkled with Tyneside.

“McDermott has only asked me to come along because he thinks you’ll get him an interview with Ellen Wilkinson or Dave Riley.”

“I can get him Riley, but he has to let you do some of the interview,” Arthur said with flinty resolve, although Reg caught the beginnings of a smile. “Ooops, quiet, yon parson, he’s limbering up.”

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The Bishop of Jarrow, James Gordon, had eschewed formal vestments for a more businesslike (Reg knew that his dad would approve, disliking the ‘trappings of Popery’ but he felt it was drab) appearance. After saying a few words of welcome, George Smith, one of the older members of the march, rose to the pulpit and gave the reading, from James.

“Consider it a great joy, my brothers, whenever you experience various trials, knowing that the testing of your faith produces endurance. But endurance must do its complete work, so that you may be mature and complete, lacking nothing.”

There were further readings and finally, realising that the men in front of him had a long trial ahead of them, Gordon finished with the blessing.

“Then they said to him, ‘Please inquire of God to learn whether our journey will be successful.’ The priest answered them, ‘Go in peace. Your journey has the Lord’s approval’.”

They filed out, Gordon surprised that so many of the marchers wanted his hand before they left. Arthur and Reg, mere bystanders to this venture, filed out where McDermott was waiting, impatiently.

“Decent enough sermon, I thought. I’ll put something in the article. Who are you?” This was asked rudely of Arthur by a man in smart if unshowy clothes. He had a strangely accentless voice, as if a regional accent had been carefully erased.

“His dad”. He looked sharply at Reg.

“Ah, right. Yes! Ted McDermott, Sunderland Echo. Am I going to get an interview with one of the organisers?”

Arthur’s initial reaction was that he wanted to hit the unpleasant senior reporter, but huffily stomped off to find Riley.

“Say nothing, McKay, understand? Leave this to me.”

“Reg! David Riley, Labour Councillor and chair of the Borough Council greeted Reg with fulsome enthusiasm. McDermott fumed quietly, put on a brave face when Arthur got his name wrong, and took Riley to one side. The marchers were milling around, so there was time.

“I have written,” Riley said, “to the Home Office. They are fully aware of our plans.”

“London is a long way away,” McDermott said as he scribbled, “what arrangements have been for the welfare of the marchers.”

Riley smiled, pleased to show off what had been planned. “The local medical officer has already inspected each man to ensure that he is fit to march, we’ve bought each marcher a pair of boots with a stronger inner sole,” he stopped when he saw McDermott looking underwhelmed, “and in most towns where we’ll be sleeping we’ve already arranged accommodation.”

“Some will say,” McDermott asked, “if you have timed this march to take advantage of the crisis in Westminster.”

Riley laughed. “Unemployment doesn’t stop just because Mr Baldwin has resigned. The loss of Palmer’s Shipyard, the steelworks, the blast furnaces, it has all destroyed this community.” He spoke with a bitter passion.

McDermott liked that line. “But you’re marching to make the Government listen?”

“The Mayor of Jarrow,” Riley said, with the air of a zealot, “has a petition with thousands of signatures from Jarrow and the adjoining towns. This will be laid before Parliament.”

“Do you have the support of any Members?”

“Ellen Wilkinson, MP,” Riley confirmed. “Our local MP. She’s here today, and will be with us in London. Can I introduce you to her?” McDermott was beaming. “Any friend of Arthur and Reg is one of us. Is that alright with you, Arthur?”

Reg McKay would have needed a heart of stone to not have enjoyed the moment when McDermott looked pleadingly at his dad. To make it even better Arthur looked at his son, who, copying the lofty air of some of his old schoolmasters, gave the slightest, most dismissive of nods. Riley led McDermott away.

Arthur McKay waited until they were out of earshot. “Careful son, he’s taken against you.”

“He’s not in the editor’s little gang, he’ll do anything for a front page story.”

“Just the same, mind him.”

Reg changed the subject. “Dad, will this do anything?”

Arthur frowned; he was a union man, it was true, and renowned for having a clear head and abundant common sense, but he was a local man. Even Jarrow, a few miles from his little patch, the pit village of Whitburn, was on the boundary of his influence; he was mines while Jarrow was ships and steel (or had been, he thought ruefully). To contemplate the Jarrow March reaching London, and the reception that they would get was beyond his experience. But he was a father asked a searching question from his son. So he guessed. “Someone will listen,” he said, slightly sadly, “Morrison might be the one, now he is in the Cabinet. But he’s a London man. And Attlee is busy dealing with the King’s crisis.”

“At least they’re trying.”

“Aye, there is that.”

“I’m going with them,” Reg said suddenly. “I want to get away from the Echo, I want to get away from McDermott.”

“Now hang…”

“It’s not the Army.”

The Army had been the subject of an earlier attempt by Reg to escape what he viewed as a boring life. Arthur had quietly reminded him of what happened to boys who had joined the Army and under his refusal the idea had abated. “Aye but it’s not the Sunderland Museum either.” Arthur had also tried to secure Reg an administrative job in the Museum through a friend on the Whitburn parish council.

“Tell the stories, that’s what you keep saying.”

Riley returned. “He’s not very canny is he.” ‘He’ was presumably McDermott.

“Can I come with you? Write the story of the march? Help out?”

Riley looked from Reg to Arthur, whose expression was thunderous. “It’ll be a long walk lad.”

“I can walk.”

Riley saw the distance between father and son and looked burdened with yet another administrative problem on a day full of small issues. Picking a fight with a respected local union organiser was not a good idea. “Go back to the Echo. Make sure your mate there gets the story out.”

“But Mr Riley,” Reg said, immediately becoming a child again in Riley and his dad’s eyes. He frowned, and tried to speak with logic and resolution. “Anyone can do that,” he said firmly, “I mean someone to chronicle what happens to you on your travels.”

A wry smile formed on Riley’s tired face. “Ask them if they’ll send you to Darlington, make sure you bring some copies of what you write. Stay for a bit, the fund will pay for your train fare home. He’ll be alright, Arthur.” He looked to Reg’s father.

Arthur McKay looked sadly down at his feet. His craggy face looked softer. “Go.” He silently shook his son’s hand, put on his cap, nodded his thanks to Riley, and turned to leave.

“Where are you going?”

“The Jolly Sailor. I’ll need a pint in me before I explain this to your mam.”

As Arthur trudged to find his bicycle the marchers, in good humour, set off. Reg McKay looked once at the marchers, once at the disappearing form of his dad, and chose the future.

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GAME NOTES

The Jarrow Crusade sets off. The idea of a bunch of unemployed shipbuilders and steelworkers walking from an obscure part of the depressed North East all the way to London, where their plan was to hand in a petition and hold some form of a rally may seem mad to our modern age, but it is all true and has entered popular (and Labour) folklore. It is one of the symbols of the economic woes suffered by traditional British industries in the 30s and has been weaved into the fabric of the left in England (I use that term deliberately).

But…

The glory has been tarnished. No that’s not fair, it’s more that the there are many shameless types that want to bask in the marchers’ glow. It is no longer remembered for what it was.

(sighs) I am, as is occasionally mentioned, a child of the North East. Hence the use of the DLI as ‘my’ regiment, and the ‘Lit and Phil’ in Newcastle for Sinclair’s speech many chapters ago. I am neither a “son of the coal” or a “son of the yard” although scratch the surface and both are probably there, somewhere. My family, on one side, are staunchly middle class yeoman types, the other working class (largely brewers) who knew, even then, that it was better to make something fun than to dabble in heavy industry. Both sides of the family ‘did alright’ in the prewar era as well as under Thatcher. We were strictly neutral in the Miners’ Strike (gleefully selling stuff and administering medical advice to all – or in my case, being at school). But there is something about the Crusade that has been instilled in me; it remains a ludicrously eulogised subject up there (and I speak from my new retreat in leafy Gloucestershire – “Fog on the Severn” just doesn’t have the same ring to the original) but I am occasionally rather moved by the idea. I accept that it was, the achievement of the march getting to London aside, something of a failure. But to look at recent commentary, you would never see this. The problem is that now everyone on the left (or from the North East) claims to find meaning in it for their own mad projects, and the number of ‘descended from a marcher’ claims from Northerners indicates an impressive degree of promiscuity in 1930s Tyneside unemployed (perhaps they did it to keep warm?!) which is rather offensive; particularly as Labour (Ellen Wilkinson and a couple of others aside) largely ignored the march or, even worse, tried to kill it at birth. What is also often overlooked is that marches of this nature happened all of the time and in 1936 our Jarrowmen had to compete with veterans, miners and other dispossessed members of the working classes from all over Great Britain. Jarrow, at the time, was just another depressed community with a leftish, increasingly outmoded way of making things. Hence it failed.

There is a strong ecclesiastical element to the march; Riley and the organisers were determined to have the blessing of the Church(es) and insisted that Methodist, Catholic and Baptist ministers attended the Anglican ceremony. At the time it was seen as a bit of an oddity. The send-off from home was as grand as described and the Bishop of Jarrow (a Suffragan Bishop, subordinate to the Bishop of Durham) did given them a benediction before they left (I’ve guessed at a couple of Bible passages, from James and Judges, that talk about journeys) and for which he was roundly criticised; the Bishop of Durham felt that he was taking sides in a political issue and Gordon had to backtrack by saying that he was merely praying for the welfare on the march. Ellen Wilkinson and the other organisers realised his predicament and forgave him, but it is indicative of the uncertainty over how to treat the event.

Riley, Wilkinson and the supportive Mayor (his name was Billy Thompson) were real, as was the first reader at the service, George Smith, who was indeed one of the oldest men on the march. The McKays are of course, fictional, although I do not think that I am stretching things too far by having a local union man from the miners being invited to show solidarity (the adjoining authorities, including Conservatives, did seem to support them so some senior miners would be invited). For a glimpse of the aims and arrangements I commend https://www.nationalarchives.gov.uk/wp-content/uploads/2014/03/mepo2-3097i1.jpg which formed the basis of Riley’s comments to the press.

McDermott is fictional and I have tried to avoid making him too stereotypical, although I needed a foil for Reg McKay. The Sunderland Echo’s coverage of the start of the march was, indeed, probably the best of the local coverage and so I have explained this by having Arthur get McDermott an interview with one of the organisers.

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What will happen to the marchers? Well, in the real world they were ignored by Baldwin. But in this 1936…

To be fair, all parliamentary process is Bullshit. It's just some of it is so buffed and polished that no one really notices until you have to sit in it.

That is a fair observation @TheButterflyComposer - and even Erskine May has something akin to persuasive precedent, in that it is an informal 'rulebook'. I do commend Lord Lisvane's writing, if you get a chance to read it. I heard him speak at Middle Temple pre-pandemic, he was outstanding.

One wonders whether the chaos in London will encourage the French to take a stronger line in the various upcoming crises... after all, no point in trying to forge a common policy with a nation descending into a non-shooting civil war.

Another good point - France has a real dilemma here given the introversion and chaos engulfing her recent ally. We'll look at France in the next update.

Well as we all know, that is exactly what happens if the king party route is chosen. As in the empire splinters and you have to go get it back. Stronger eventually, but what a horror show in-universe that must be?

I'll cover this in your later analysis below...

A rather damning-with-faint-praise assessment for a general of that rank in a command position. idea he should be able to do all three to at least a decent level.

I agree, but my lasting impression of Dill is that he was a better administrator / diplomat than a commander. I may be unfair in this, but I don't think that I am. His temperament and intelligence were not matched by decisiveness or charisma.

"We live in a period-"

:)

Governments may come and go in Whitehall, but there will always be trouble in Palestine. The idea of Duff Cooper and Churchill trying to solve various problems east of Suez by point at a map and shuffling troops around rings entirely plausibly, and it's entertaining to see what that looks like from the other side – the people actually being pushed around.

That is almost exactly what, in my head, I imagined happening. They're not wrong to think about India, but the strategy seems to be "stop off in Palestine on the way and sort it out".

I can see someone in No 10 thinking “Another Splendid Mess You Got Us Into, Allenby!”

Probably true - and given that both DLG and Churchill were in Government for the fall of Jerusalem, as well as the Versailles negotiations, they have a deep understanding of the problems (if lacking answers!).

From a purely cyclical and game perspective; this works out fine for the british given that unlike the rest of the Empire, they don't actually lose any colonies and proteftorates over this shitshow. So going in guns blazing actually works totally fine.

And on a purely ethical and moral level, the Empire collapses, which is 'good'. But not the African parts, because they're just totally lost without britian. Even Egypt stays within utter control of the empire. Somehow. Yet 'British Malaysia' gets away.

I'm not entirely sure what sort of logic paradox was using here. The crisis allows all major players and already independent leaning places in the empire to cut their losses and leave cleanly.

Except Egypt of course. And there are no issues in rhodesia or Sudan or any of the colony bits of the empire. They're loyal to the end...except British Malaysia I think who does leave.

It's so specific to Africa, with the exception of South Africa (which has white people in charge) that...Well...um...I think this is less anti-imperalist as it is extremely pro-white man's burden?

Uhh… right, yeah… Whatever you say, Paradox…


Right, so… chaotic good? Just be so imperialist that you break the system? Would love to see @Le Jones ’s in-narrative take on that one…

I have no idea how they're going to try to implement or ignore or mod the system. I have said this before but the game ostensibly gives you three and a half choices (and you MUST pick at least one, it's mandatory) when it comes to Britain start 1936.

1. The OTL route (possibly with minor deviation). Edward is quickly forced out with little fuss, though you lose a bunch of poltical power and a bit of stability in the process. You can then move on normally with the game under the OTL con gov.

2. Go all in on edward and adopt the King's party. Britian goes non-aligned (which is paradox code for...mumbles) and has edward as head of state and for some reason occupying the head of govermnet portrait. This is assume to mean that royal Prerogative has been empowered back to early victorian days. The empire all leave *except the black dominated bits oops!*, leaving britian adversely weak and destabilised. However, you can then bring them all kicked and screaming back with 'loyalist rebellions' and the British army 'reclaiming' the lost empire. More control over them too, wouldn't want them to leave again. This makes imperial federation much easier to achieve, by the way.

You can also annex amercia at the end of this route because why not?

2.5. Instead of allowing edward to wave his sceptic and newly empowered cock around, you can depose him and probably have the rest of the King's party shot. Mosley takes power and I think is fascist but I'm not sure? Otherwise can do much the same as in option 2, but with facism! And probably German support, if you want it.

3. Hedge your bets and destroy the empire. This one...this one is the path we are currently on. The normal government doesn't get their shit together and edward stays on for way too long in the crisis, a bunch of poltical power and stability is lost, the dominions and assorted others leave...and then the player kicks out edward before he gets married and abdicates him anyway. Locks you out of the paths you can use to get the empire back and strengthen britian. Locks out a bunch of the normal tree because the empire is gone. Only real path you can now take is either forcing the country to go communist or fascist so you can use their branches, invading the empire with no bonuses so its rock hard and you will probably lose...or decolonisation and getting rid of what's left for a manpower boost.

Those are the (non modded) choices. Looking forward to how we avoid/how close we get to option 3. I'm expecting a mix of 1 and 3 somewhere along the line, I think.

SO...

We are currently on "Option 3" but being ready for veering off when it is necessary to so do; I will declare when I used console commands, but the game lumbers players with decision trees that range from the vaguely sensible (shadow factories) to the downright insane (annex the US. Yup. Ok). There will, as you say @TheButterflyComposer, be fairly calamitous events as a result of this course of action. Some of them (the collapse of the 'Political Power' and 'Stability' in-game commodities) I can absolutely live with, some (India magically becoming independent) are just offensive and the classic Paradox "yeah it's a colony" view of the Empire. I will roleplay away some of the madness, but yes it will be necessary to use a couple of console commands and one (very very limited) Mod event to reflect what I think could have happened. But this AAR is a weird mashup of the game events (modded into sanity) and a narrative of how I think a more dramatic Edward VIII marriage crisis would have played out.


It is worth remembering that Palestine had been relatively quiet for all of Wauchope term as High Commissioner, I think he over-estimated how much of that was down to his efforts and that affected how he behaved. I also find the interaction with Appeasement fascinating, even at this early stage the failure to do anything about Italy in Abyssinia was getting people twitched and worried that failing to do anything about Palestine would just make things worse. Somewhat by accident LLoyd George and Churchill have stumbled upon a policy that covers those concerns, perhaps not a good choice but at this point there probably aren't any good options so maybe 'least bad' is a better way of putting it.

That's very fair, and Wauchope was, I think, not the worst of administrators at the time.

As for the policy, I'm not going to give too much away, but I wanted to show that a) the Government can do some things without needing a vote in the Commons (and on this it absolutely doesn't - this is comfortably Royal Prerogative territory) and b) that it may sometimes get it right, or, as you say, 'less bad'.

Hey, it works. Britian won't lose Palestine!

It'll lose almost everything else, but nothing in the middle east. Those guys must have been on the ball or something.

Britain won't Palestine - and again there is a bit of roleplay, coupled with a plausible decision, that reflects that in-game fact.

I am just dropping a line to say that I am going to start following this AAR, Le Jones. I have read the Prologue about the death of King George VI and will binge read everything else later. I really like your attention to detail in the Prologue, so I am looking forward to reading the rest. :D

Thank you @Nathan Madien - just like old times!
 
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But there is something about the Crusade that has been instilled in me; it remains a ludicrously eulogised subject up there
What will happen to the marchers? Well, in the real world they were ignored by Baldwin. But in this 1936…
Now then, the lost and forgotten love child of industrial action and unions: the protest march. One of the oldest forms of protest they had, and one of the least effective. And yet, for some reason, these tended to be the area where things got the bloodiest between the government and the unions.

It's astonishing really but every union, large and small, seemingly loved going on marches around places, judging from the huge weight of banners and flags they've made over the years. Before the 20th century, unless you were in London, this was how you protested.

Oftentimes it was said, a single march is an annoyance. But when they all march, we run.

So what I imagine will happen here is either the march fizzles out as usual or, in keeping with their forebears, the government freaks out when every other union joins in on the march, sends the troops in, bloodbath, result!

Mind you, if Labour is savy at all, they will want to discourage this sort of all out class warfare until after this government is dealt with. Not much point kicking the government already on the way out the door, down the street. Much better to wait, let the old guard come to pick up the pieces and then stand on their throat.

This however, requires labour to be poltcially savy and control the unions. Which...
That is a fair observation @TheButterflyComposer - and even Erskine May has something akin to persuasive precedent, in that it is an informal 'rulebook'. I do commend Lord Lisvane's writing, if you get a chance to read it. I heard him speak at Middle Temple pre-pandemic, he was outstanding.
The father and mother of the house throughout the ages always has some choice words to say on the matter. The current father of course, has plenty to say on many subjects...

That informal rulebook has taken a beating over the last five years though, with the supreme court and the government exchanging some pretty public shots with each other.
Another good point - France has a real dilemma here given the introversion and chaos engulfing her recent ally. We'll look at France in the next update.
They only have two real choices. Be utter bastards with the nazis and fight them at every turn, force them into war early and pin them to defensive lines as their enemies starve to death...or roll over and bascially let Hitler do whatever to them.

Withput the British guaranteed to show up, its everything or nothing with regards to German aggression.
the game lumbers players with decision trees that range from the vaguely sensible (shadow factories) to the downright insane (annex the US. Yup. Ok).
This concept of just 'taking back Amercia'. As if it were just the 13 colonies again. 'The civil war made them weak' (or x event made them weak) event or excuse argued is just bollocks. Its like saying the Chinese were ripe for annexation after the boxer rebellion.

The US by the middle of the 19th century, let alone the 1930s, is a gigantic continent spanning empire made up of vast empty spaces and a fuckton of guns. It'd be like...well, it'd be like Japan trying trying invade Australia in the 1940s only a million times worse (though of course in HOI land it's easier than taking poland).
Britain won't Palestine - and again there is a bit of roleplay, coupled with a plausible decision, that reflects that in-game fact.
Best bit is that the UK absolutely will jettison the protectorates if it needs more stability or pp. This happened in my new roman empire game where Baldwin took just a little bit too long to get rid of edward, and suffered some pp shortages. Of course, because Egypt is fully integrated into the empire, I can't prise that off them without a massive fight, and so my roman empire very awkwardly is partitioned purely by a blot of pink in a sea of magnificent blood red.
 
Riley saw the distance between father and son and looked burdened with yet another administrative problem on a day full of small issues.
A very nice line that. The mots are bon! :D
their plan was to hand in a petition and hold some form of a rally may seem mad to our modern age, but it is all true and has entered popular (and Labour) folklore
I know the context, cause espoused, scale etc are of course very different, but I was reminded of the tradition of things like the Pilgrimage of Grace (1536) and such like from the late medieval/early modern period. Off to confront the King’s Evil Counsellors with a demand or petition to right wrongs and defend the erosion or destruction of things held dear in the northern heartland.
What will happen to the marchers? Well, in the real world they were ignored by Baldwin. But in this 1936…
Oh dear, let’s hope it doesn’t end up like the Pilgrimage of Grace, then! I admit to a bit of foreboding when the son decides to join them. He’d best not show a picture of his best girl to his buddies just before they go in to confront the police ... with DLG and Churchill in charge, there could be empty chairs at empty tables afterwards. :eek:
 
Oh dear, let’s hope it doesn’t end up like the Pilgrimage of Grace,
Didn't end too badly to be honest. As I said earlier, a march is either annoying or terrifying, with little in between. In Grace case, not enough people showed up and the ringleaders got caught and executed.

Much earlier and more dramatic Great Uprising rather puts paid to the idea that the English never had to deal with a mass popular Uprising. They did a pretty good job of scaring the shit out of the government, the army and kicking the crap out of anyone who tried to stop them, for a while anyway.

It's not quite as important as 19th century hsitorians would have you believe, but it did set the trend of parliment being the source of taxes, and them being rather nervous about imposing extra taxes (especially for war, which had an impact on the 100 years war later on). It also briefly halted serfdom in England, though Richard walked back on this as soon as he could.

Much better to say in general that, though it is rather hard to have a popular revolt or movement in England, it can be done with dramatic results if the situation becomes dire enough.
 
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The Pilgrimage of Grace updated to XX Century?
 
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They might as well give marching to London a shot. It's not like they have a job to go to, so even if it doesn't work out, they got some exercise, and some community bonding time, not to mention they will be remembered for decades after. I'm not surprised they had competition from other disadvantaged groups. I find it surprising this doesn't happen much nowadays. I guess people just don't feel anything is worth walking hundreds miles for, though I find it a more powerful symbol than everyone coming in by train to have a manifestation in the big city.
 
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They might as well give marching to London a shot. It's not like they have a job to go to, so even if it doesn't work out, they got some exercise, and some community bonding time, not to mention they will be remembered for decades after. I'm not surprised they had competition from other disadvantaged groups. I find it surprising this doesn't happen much nowadays. I guess people just don't feel anything is worth walking hundreds miles for, though I find it a more powerful symbol than everyone coming in by train to have a manifestation in the big city.
Because marches don't work, as covered before. They're just the flashier and generally more bloody event that gets focused on regardless of whether the overall movement was a failure or success.

Unions have generally realised this by now and thus the march has been taken up by protesters in general (students mostly) whilst unions just strike and if they have the numbers, picket.

The problem with marches is that they are mere annoyances if it is just your protesters or union coming, but if everyone comes, then it's a scary threat to everything and so must be put down hard. Or in the case of Pride, comodified to within an inch of life and kept as watered down as possible.

So in the case of this small March down south, I don't expect much to come of it, or even generate much attention at all...unless the collective unions of the country decide the time is right to commit some chaos, thumb their noses at the Labour party and have everyone join in on a mega march/strike.
 
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They might as well give marching to London a shot. It's not like they have a job to go to, so even if it doesn't work out, they got some exercise, and some community bonding time, not to mention they will be remembered for decades after. I'm not surprised they had competition from other disadvantaged groups. I find it surprising this doesn't happen much nowadays. I guess people just don't feel anything is worth walking hundreds miles for, though I find it a more powerful symbol than everyone coming in by train to have a manifestation in the big city.
The most modern example I could think of that involves coming from any sort of distance would be the anti-nuclear Aldermaston marches in the 1950s and ‘60s. But originally these went from London to Aldermaston, about 80km away, where the British Atomic Weapons Research Establishment is. The initial idea was that a march on the facility itself would be a more useful ‘direct action’ (not that a march alone is a direct action) than a march in the other direction, although by the end of the ‘50s what the organisers realised was that marching from Aldermaston to London would mean more people could come along. They pitched it as a march onto the seat of power, which is fair enough although obviously nothing actually happened.

More recently you tend to just have people going to march in London. I did it once when I was younger, but honestly that was more of a day out than anything. TBC is right, really. A march in itself doesn’t do much unless you want to be a bit radical about it and not get permission from the cops, in which case you can at least disrupt traffic. But even this is only useful for certain causes (like environmental ones). Really these days they’re just carnivals, which is cool but it’s not going to scare anyone. Compare government responses to people flooding into London for a big parade vs unions bussing people around the country to picket in faraway places. The police tend to have more to say about one than the other… (The exceptions tend to be when marches stop being marches and become demonstrations where everyone stays in one place. Then you see the police pull out the heavy tactics.)

In this case, I’m with Butterfly. Either nothing will happen, or we might see the unions having some fun and sending everyone on marches. But then Walter Citrine has the TUC under his thumb at the moment, and the Labour Party with it, so seeing as he is near enough one of the gods of social-democratic trade unionism I’m not sure how likely mass wildcat strikes are going to be…
 
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The most modern example I could think of that involves coming from any sort of distance would be the anti-nuclear Aldermaston marches in the 1950s and ‘60s. But originally these went from London to Aldermaston, about 80km away, where the British Atomic Weapons Research Establishment is. The initial idea was that a march on the facility itself would be a more useful ‘direct action’ (not that a march alone is a direct action) than a march in the other direction, although by the end of the ‘50s what the organisers realised was that marching from Aldermaston to London would mean more people could come along. They pitched it as a march onto the seat of power, which is fair enough although obviously nothing actually happened.

More recently you tend to just have people going to march in London. I did it once when I was younger, but honestly that was more of a day out than anything. TBC is right, really. A march in itself doesn’t do much unless you want to be a bit radical about it and not get permission from the cops, in which case you can at least disrupt traffic. But even this is only useful for certain causes (like environmental ones). Really these days they’re just carnivals, which is cool but it’s not going to scare anyone. Compare government responses to people flooding into London for a big parade vs unions bussing people around the country to picket in faraway places. The police tend to have more to say about one than the other… (The exceptions tend to be when marches stop being marches and become demonstrations where everyone stays in one place. Then you see the police pull out the heavy tactics.)

In this case, I’m with Butterfly. Either nothing will happen, or we might see the unions having some fun and sending everyone on marches. But then Walter Citrine has the TUC under his thumb at the moment, and the Labour Party with it, so seeing as he is near enough one of the gods of social-democratic trade unionism I’m not sure how likely mass wildcat strikes are going to be…
I'm thinking given that Labour is already splitting over this issue with the monarchy and stupid government, that some are going to say screw it and try for some old fashioned luddite solutions. Everyone come down to London and make some noise. Can't possibly make anything worse, may yet lead to something good coming out of it.

If nothing else, it'll piss off the labour leadership, which is something quite a few members of Labour love doing, no matter which period we're in.
 
I'm thinking given that Labour is already splitting over this issue with the monarchy and stupid government, that some are going to say screw it and try for some old fashioned luddite solutions. Everyone come down to London and make some noise. Can't possibly make anything worse, may yet lead to something good coming out of it.

If nothing else, it'll piss off the labour leadership, which is something quite a few members of Labour love doing, no matter which period we're in.
I would obviously be all for this happening. It would be hilarious
 
I would obviously be all for this happening. It would be hilarious
Can always have a spoof version of your AAR happen here, or at least attempted. Everywhere north of Oxford just leaves and becomes a communist anarchist comune, and nobody notices for a while.
 
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Can always have a spoof version of your AAR happen here, or at least attempted. Everywhere north of Oxford just leaves and becomes a communist anarchist comune, and nobody notices for a while.
Over to you @Le Jones
 
Also Scotland gets taken over by puritanical priests (again) and start eating each other (because that's what they did in ck2, and in that game, Scotland is mighty).
 
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Chapter 57, Quai d'Orsay, 9 October 1936

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The Undersecretary of State, Paul Vienot, went up for the French, and with Hachem Bey Stassi for the Syrians made a great effort over their respective bits of the signature page. Camille Chautemps and Leon Blum exchanged witty badinage. As with every treaty signing there was a flurry of last minute panic and haggling.

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The British Ambassador felt absolutely nothing more than an ornament, a decoration. He exchanged pleasantries, made small talk, but felt utterly out of place. Thirty-Seven years in the Diplomatic Service, and he was forced to stand in a corner waiting for the Austrian or the Bulgarian Ambassadors to include him in their chit-chat. Not that they did.

Not that Sir George Russell Clerk was actually that eager to participate, for every conversation, no matter how politely it started, always, always resorted to some variation of ‘look, what has happened to your country’. Even old friends seemed wary of this uncertain Britain, and the reactions to the collapse of the Baldwin National Government and its replacement by the shaky, Lloyd-George led improvisation made for uncomfortable conversation. Of course so much of this was obliquely and particularly harmful to the French; the Government had, in a few short weeks, reneged on the financial deal between Britain, France and the US, had sent thousands of troops to Palestine in a public criticism of French interference from Lebanon, and was refusing to engage with any discussion of Spain, even non-interference. The near fury of the reaction of the British Dominions was another element, and an excruciating one at that. Clerk began to yearn for his looming retirement.

“Ah, Sir George,” Yvon Delbos, the Foreign Minister, said quietly to his British guest.

“Foreign Minister,” Clerk, a model of Victorian English formality and civility, said as he stooped over the rather shabby, swarthy little Frenchman.

“What, er, do you make of this?” Delbos’ English outstripped Clerk’s French (even after two years in Paris) and so they routinely spoke in Clerk’s native tongue.

“A most promising agreement,” Clerk said safely, “I’m pleased with the parallels with Mesopotamia.”

“Er, ah, Iraq.” Delbos spoke with earthy, gravelly tones, forged through years as a journalist and left-wing politician. The clever Dordogne writer looked with suspicion at the towering, lofty, aristocratic Englishman. “It will, I hope, keep the, er.”

“Status quo?”

“Non, non, the peace. Ah yes. Keep the peace. Like you, with your troubles in the, ah, Palestine.”

“Mandated Palestine, ah ha,” Clerk said primly. He recalled that Hoare and Churchill were furious with alleged French illicit involvement in the troubles in the Mandate, and rather stiffly attempted to make a muted protest.

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“We are concerned,” he began slowly, “with the reports of support and succour for the Mufti coming from Syria. And now, with this new agreement, I worry whether your ability to rein in those elements will be necessarily stymied.”

Delbos, who had outsmarted more than one entitled, haughty grandee, seized upon the one word that could undermine Clerk. “Ah, it is just, as you say, ‘reports’.”

Clerk realised, too late, that he was flailing. He knew that he had some good points to make but was struggling to organise them. He was a decent, honest, Englishman, and perhaps that was strongest card here (not that he played tiresome games). He decided that straightforward logic and reasoning was the way to play this; he knew that he could not outsmart Delbos, and remembered that this was a man that Anthony Eden had valued and rated highly.

“Now, look, Monsieur Delbos,” he began heavily, rather hotly, “you cannot deny that al-Qawukji and al-Ashmar,” he saw that Delbos was both surprised and impressed that Clerk had the facts to hand, “received a rapturous welcome in Damascus. They are involved in openly raising funds and purchasing arms and equipment in Syria. Arms and equipment, Sir, that will be used to murder,” he allowed a hint of passion, “murder, British soldiers trying, just like your Frenchmen, to keep the peace. Mr Hoare would be grateful for you exerting your influence.”

Delbos offered a canny smile in response. “But, as you can, see, France is letting go some of her grip upon Damascus,” he gave a textbook Gallic shrug and waved, helplessly, towards the Syrian delegation. Seeing a steely, honest determination on Clerk, he frowned. “I promise that I will try. You will tell Hoare that?” Delbos absolutely murdered the word ‘Hoare’, making it sound like ‘oar-er’.

“I will,” Clerk said earnestly. “You had a point of your own, Foreign Minister?” Clerk asked sadly.

“Oui, Sir George,” Delbos said, not unlike an animal pouncing upon its prey. “You will hear” (as ever he said it ‘eee-er’) very soon of our attempt to, what is the word,” he frowned, “re-build, ah oui that it is, rebuild France’s position in Eastern Europe.”

Clerk nodded, he had heard the rumours. Given Hoare’s sweeping jettisoning of much of Britain’s existing overseas commitments, that France was attempting to preserve her security elsewhere was not a surprise. “Thank you, Monsieur, for the briefing.”

But Delbos wasn’t finished. “The reason for this, it is simple. You will hear, Sir George, announcements that our Entente is not the only alliance that we must have.”

Clerk looked appalled. “May I ask why?”

“Oui, bien sure! With your political problems, at home, we in France are…”

“…concerned?”

“Yes! The failure of the financial discussions has hurt us, Ambassador.”

“I am aware, and Churchill has proposed a meeting in London,” Clerk was not financially minded and was trying to steer Delbos away from this baffling topic. You have other concerns?”

“Yes. I am concerned that you are not with us on Spain, and Germany. So we must, as you English say, cast a big net?”

“Close, Monsieur, you mean cast your net widely.”

“This is the same, no? But Blum, he will soon announce that France will look to her friends in Europe, and not always the British Empire. I wanted you to know.”

Clerk was certainly grateful. “Might I inform London of this?”

The mercurial Delbos was now exasperated with this pondering Englishman. “What, Sir George, you do? That is for you and your Embassy. Shall we eat?” He gestured to a beautifully arranged buffet. “Monsieur, we cannot,” he frowned, “let these differences,” he nodded at the word, “make a bad time for England and France. Blum has to make his people, his er…”

“…supporters,” Clerk offered.

“Oui, his supporters. He has to make them happy. I will do what I can with Beirut and Damascus. But you,” he pointed, in what was, to Clerk, a very French display, “must keep Hoare close to France. With Spain, with Germany, we must be arm in arm! Bras dessus, bras dessous! Yes?” He chuckled at Clerk’s obvious discomfort.

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Oh Lordy loads to talk about for such an innocent little meeting.

First to the personalities – this chapter has, at it’s heart, an (almost) stereotypical French leftwinger with a (completely) stereotypical British ‘second eleven’ diplomat. I have to like Delbos, anyone who can range around like he did is worthy of some attention.

Poor Sir George Clerk – it’s not that history has been unkind to him, instead it’s that he has been completely overlooked. Here, I’ve handed him a difficult task which he was wielded without flair, but has honestly and valiantly tried to accomplish. Already earmarked for retirement, this last term in Paris (unless Hoare extends him, which I doubt, meaning that he’ll go as he did OTL), with a minority British Government imploding, a France seeing this and scurrying after new alliances, and the twin ‘nasties’ of the Franco-Syrian Treaty and the continuing French ‘blind eye’ for the ongoing chaos in Palestine, will sadly be a stressful one. He wasn’t Britain’s best (although he was not the worst – that field is crowded in 1936) but I believe that he did an adequate job; that a stronger candidate could have achieved more is, sadly, rather harsh but ultimately true. In my head, my portrayal of Clerk was probably aligned with my boyhood one of Douglas Hurd – an old-school toff trying to play with a ‘straight bat’ in a world that he clearly found deeply unsettling. Slightly sadly, Clerk was never particularly highly regarded in his day and there are dozens of rather catty comments his lack of dynamism or intelligence; he seems to have been viewed as "a man with a great future behind him."

Readers of The King's First Minister will remember that I take as much pleasure from ambassadorships as Churchill does with Cabinet posts, so don't expect Phipps (Clerk's OTL successor) to automatically get the job.

Now to events, and there are three, only one (of course!) is explicitly in the game. To the ones that aren’t…

The Franco-Syrian Treaty of Alliance, giving independence to the Syrian people, was signed at the Quai D'Orsay by representatives of the two nations. The Treaty was patterned after the agreement made by Britain and Iraq and was to come into effect three years after ratification by the French and Syrian Parliaments. A similar treaty was signed with the Lebanese later that year. These treaties promised curtailment of French intervention in their domestic affairs as well as a reduction of French troops, personnel and military bases in the newly autonomous states. In return, Syria and Lebanon pledged to support France in times of war, which boiled down to use of airspace and bases. Of course, with Hitler and Mussolini active, and with the British mandates in real difficulty, the French did not ratify the treaties. Some historians have called this failure to ratify as a ‘missed opportunity’ – I’m not sure that any French Government contemplating a struggle with Germany or Italy would or politically could have signed. We’re almost at the point at which the French, to a degree, appeared to care as much about their fading empire as the British did theirs (perhaps more, in some cases).

And in the world of A Royal Prerogative, France is now very worried about the implosion of the supposedly stable British…

We’ve seen the chaos that the collapse of the Baldwin Government had on the Treasury, coming just as Chamberlain was preparing the measures to support the frankly wheezy French economy. That British failure has hurt, perhaps more in wounded pride and a sense of betrayal than in economic harm (although I do believe that while the UK and US are fine without it, to the French it would have been damaging) and taken with the failure to follow up on Baldwin’s (already inadequate) approach to Spain. There will be, ultimately, no agreement in the near future between France and the UK and as the British are consumed with problems at home (and are therefore unlikely to involve themselves) the French have a real dilemma - the ships are starting to unload German, Russian and Italian arms and some of this, particularly in the North and Catalonia, is perilously close to Metropolitan France. The British indifference to this will raise concerns in France, so what can Paris do?

My instinct is that any significant change on policy towards Spain is still officially unlikely; I don't think that France would know, yet, what to do or what the best outcome looks like. So any policy change is still out of the question, but I can see France starting the slow process of unravelling her non-interference, perhaps a blind eye to shipments across the border, passing Naval intelligence etc. I therefore conclude that while France, unshackled from British direction, would start to use her influence, this would be faltering and incremental - at best.

But of course France in the 30s must always gaze East, to her narrow but accessible Mediterranean coast, to the sweep of flat, little countries huddled along the North Sea Coast, to her Maginot defences a bulwark against a Germany that has a greater population, a rearming military and an impressive industrial base. France needs friends, either her recent British ally with its Royal Navy, financial dexterity and industries, or friends new and old in Central Europe. If the former is unreliable then France, again slowly, and probably for little gain initially, must start to bolster her position on the Continent.

All caught up again! Let's hope Jarrow gets a better outcome in this timeline.

Jarrow, depending on how mad I go with the implosion, could very well walk into the history books for entirely the wrong reasons.

Mind you, if Labour is savy at all, they will want to discourage this sort of all out class warfare until after this government is dealt with. Not much point kicking the government already on the way out the door, down the street. Much better to wait, let the old guard come to pick up the pieces and then stand on their throat.

This however, requires labour to be poltcially savy and control the unions. Which...

Labour is in a nightmare position here - Attlee has enough to do holding his party together while the Tories fight and the rebel administration clings on. I believe that Jarrow would just be one of several unwelcome distractions.

They only have two real choices. Be utter bastards with the nazis and fight them at every turn, force them into war early and pin them to defensive lines as their enemies starve to death...or roll over and bascially let Hitler do whatever to them.

Yes. This chapter shows a mild tilt toward the former, but it is still, probably, not enough.

I admit to a bit of foreboding when the son decides to join them. He’d best not show a picture of his best girl to his buddies just before they go in to confront the police ... with DLG and Churchill in charge, there could be empty chairs at empty tables afterwards. :eek:

Yes I wondered if it would be too cliched, and actually 'rowed back' a lot; the problem is that I need Reg McKay to start somewhere, as he will crop up later in the story.

Didn't end too badly to be honest. As I said earlier, a march is either annoying or terrifying, with little in between. In Grace case, not enough people showed up and the ringleaders got caught and executed.

I have to agree. The got to London, were treated fairly indifferently, went home.
The Pilgrimage of Grace updated to XX Century?

They might as well give marching to London a shot. It's not like they have a job to go to, so even if it doesn't work out, they got some exercise, and some community bonding time, not to mention they will be remembered for decades after. I'm not surprised they had competition from other disadvantaged groups. I find it surprising this doesn't happen much nowadays. I guess people just don't feel anything is worth walking hundreds miles for, though I find it a more powerful symbol than everyone coming in by train to have a manifestation in the big city.

Because marches don't work, as covered before. They're just the flashier and generally more bloody event that gets focused on regardless of whether the overall movement was a failure or success.

Unions have generally realised this by now and thus the march has been taken up by protesters in general (students mostly) whilst unions just strike and if they have the numbers, picket.

The problem with marches is that they are mere annoyances if it is just your protesters or union coming, but if everyone comes, then it's a scary threat to everything and so must be put down hard. Or in the case of Pride, comodified to within an inch of life and kept as watered down as possible.

So in the case of this small March down south, I don't expect much to come of it, or even generate much attention at all...unless the collective unions of the country decide the time is right to commit some chaos, thumb their noses at the Labour party and have everyone join in on a mega march/strike.

The most modern example I could think of that involves coming from any sort of distance would be the anti-nuclear Aldermaston marches in the 1950s and ‘60s. But originally these went from London to Aldermaston, about 80km away, where the British Atomic Weapons Research Establishment is. The initial idea was that a march on the facility itself would be a more useful ‘direct action’ (not that a march alone is a direct action) than a march in the other direction, although by the end of the ‘50s what the organisers realised was that marching from Aldermaston to London would mean more people could come along. They pitched it as a march onto the seat of power, which is fair enough although obviously nothing actually happened.

More recently you tend to just have people going to march in London. I did it once when I was younger, but honestly that was more of a day out than anything. TBC is right, really. A march in itself doesn’t do much unless you want to be a bit radical about it and not get permission from the cops, in which case you can at least disrupt traffic. But even this is only useful for certain causes (like environmental ones). Really these days they’re just carnivals, which is cool but it’s not going to scare anyone. Compare government responses to people flooding into London for a big parade vs unions bussing people around the country to picket in faraway places. The police tend to have more to say about one than the other… (The exceptions tend to be when marches stop being marches and become demonstrations where everyone stays in one place. Then you see the police pull out the heavy tactics.)

In this case, I’m with Butterfly. Either nothing will happen, or we might see the unions having some fun and sending everyone on marches. But then Walter Citrine has the TUC under his thumb at the moment, and the Labour Party with it, so seeing as he is near enough one of the gods of social-democratic trade unionism I’m not sure how likely mass wildcat strikes are going to be…

I'm afraid I agree; well, not sure that I am afraid, but I certainly agree. The interesting element of Jarrow, and one that I very nearly focussed upon, was the endless round of meetings that led to the Crusade being adopted as the course of action. It is a fascinating exercise in 'group think'.

I'm thinking given that Labour is already splitting over this issue with the monarchy and stupid government, that some are going to say screw it and try for some old fashioned luddite solutions. Everyone come down to London and make some noise. Can't possibly make anything worse, may yet lead to something good coming out of it.

If nothing else, it'll piss off the labour leadership, which is something quite a few members of Labour love doing, no matter which period we're in.

I would obviously be all for this happening. It would be hilarious
Attlee, as I say above, is going to have a nightmare.

Can always have a spoof version of your AAR happen here, or at least attempted. Everywhere north of Oxford just leaves and becomes a communist anarchist comune, and nobody notices for a while.

Echoes of a Royal Prerogative, anyone?


Oh, it's apparently me. The problem is that I'll go mad if I have two narrative AARs on the go, I don't really (intentionally!) 'bring the funny', and any history book AAR would be a poor substitute for your work.

Also Scotland gets taken over by puritanical priests (again) and start eating each other (because that's what they did in ck2, and in that game, Scotland is mighty).

God help us all...
 
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I very much wondered how France would cope. My mental image is of a 'two-legged' race where one man has fallen down and the other is trying to figure out how to proceed without capsizing himself. Hilarious, unless you remember the prize is European hegemony.

France is, all at the same time, glad to be independent, terrified of being alone, desperate for allies, resentful of 'help' and in general fervently wishing they could sit back and criticize leadership instead of having to provide it.

Still... with Britain effectively sidelined, there should be some way to make a diplomatic play for Italy, Czechoslovakia, Poland, Romania and Bulgaria. 'In game' I don't expect that to happen HoI tends to run somewhat on rails in that way - - but a Little Entente with some backbone, or Italy, could go a long way toward checking Germany.

The clock is definitely ticking, and if Britain doesn't want to be completely alone in a German-dominated Europe, she had best get a move on.
 
I missed Jarrow and on reflection I feel that is an entirely fitting response to the march. I mean the best response to the march would have been gathering them all in Trafalgar Square, getting Frank Woollard to give them a speech explaining why their working practices are so awful and what they should be doing better, then sending them back to Jarrow to go and do things properly. I doubt they'd enjoy it, but it would at least be useful advice that would keep the heavy industry going a bit longer.

The interesting element of Jarrow, and one that I very nearly focussed upon, was the endless round of meetings that led to the Crusade being adopted as the course of action. It is a fascinating exercise in 'group think'.
I would have been more surprised if there hadn't been endless rounds of meetings, I understand such things are compulsory whenever the left gathers in numbers greater than two.

And so to France. I was half expecting Delbos to ask if Eddie was available to become King of France as he seems over-qualified for the position, but alas no. There is probably a HOI4 event chain to allow it to happen, certainly there is an AAR in it. On a more serious note the implosion of the Tripartite Agreement is a massive change, arguably far more important than anything Eddie is mucking about with. The Franc is going to absolutely go through the floor without UK and US support, so either Paris will start burning through gold reserves to prop it up (and seriously distort the world gold market as a result, not to say her own economy) or we have another round of the fun parlour game "international currency war". Neither sound good.

I do feel a bit sorry for Sir George, the French embassy was never supposed to be a taxing position and he is in many ways trying to defend the indefensible about actions back home. I'm also unsure what exactly you expected anyone to do differently in Paris, I don't think it was a lack of communication between London and Paris that caused the Entente problems in the inter-war. Could someone else have done the same things with a bit more flair, perhaps, but would it have made the slightest bit of difference, I struggle to see it. But as you say you are a connoisseur of ambassadorship so perhaps there is a subtlety I am missing.
 
And so to France. I was half expecting Delbos to ask if Eddie was available to become King of France as he seems over-qualified for the position, but alas no. There is probably a HOI4 event chain to allow it to happen, certainly there is an AAR in it.
Well as you know, HOI4 is a deeply immersive and serious historical simulator. Thus, there are many more ways to establish various different monarchies in the French Republic than in any actual preexisting monarchy in the game.

The UK for example has three monarchs set, but one is going to die very quickly, one is standard and only one actually has any event chains around him (George V, VI, and Edward respectively).

France meanwhile, aside from the basically elected monarchy that is the presidency system, has options for a bourbon, hapsborg, carlist, napoleonic etc restoration.

No doubt even more are coming. I'm actually rather surprised there is no option to make De Gaulle Prince of France or something like that...then again that's probably behind the Emperor McArthur expansion on the list.

On a more serious note the implosion of the Tripartite Agreement is a massive change, arguably far more important than anything Eddie is mucking about with. The Franc is going to absolutely go through the floor without UK and US support, so either Paris will start burning through gold reserves to prop it up (and seriously distort the world gold market as a result, not to say her own economy) or we have another round of the fun parlour game "international currency war". Neither sound good.
Surely everyone will, after the dust has settled in the UK, try to get back onto the agreement again, or something similar ish? Mind you, that could take a long time, and there's no end of crisises coming up after this one finally gets resolved...and as you say, any delay is going to fuck Paris like it hasn't been fucked since...pick your favourite sacking here.

One would hope this would destroy the attempt at restoring the gold standard consensus but if anything, it might make people dig their heels in harder ("Well, it would have worked if...")?
I'm also unsure what exactly you expected anyone to do differently in Paris, I don't think it was a lack of communication between London and Paris that caused the Entente problems in the inter-war. Could someone else have done the same things with a bit more flair, perhaps, but would it have made the slightest bit of difference, I struggle to see it. But as you say you are a connoisseur of ambassadorship so perhaps there is a subtlety I am missing.
It sounds like one of the most thankless appointments you could get. Very little chance of success, and failure means France gets bodied by Germany and England is on their own.