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Notes: since I like Barcids, and the game doesn’t seem to create ones in the beginning, I have created two Bardid brothers, Hamilcar and Mago. Also, i have created 5 nice nubile young women, so there might be a few more little Carthagians running around. Especially Barcids, of course.

The war harbour of Carthage was bustling today. Most of the fleet was in there, making final preparations. Sailors checking rigging one last time, rowers flexing their muscles, captains shouting at everybody. Total 100 ships, filling up nearly all the port. Plus, 8000 troops, trying to board the ships. Soldiers cursing, sergeants cursing even more and officers just trying look like they’re in charge. Few elephants, protesting loudly to attempts of their trainers to force them step from solid land to unpredictable planks with deep sea under them made things only worse.

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Military and civilian harbours of Carthage. Military is the inner one

In the middle of the harbour, separated from the noise with a wall, stood the temple of Melquart, the city god of Carthage. Of course, not totally separated, for nothing can suppress the noise of thousands of people, yelling at each other. Still, you could actually hear yourself and the noises from the harbour were reduced to a background noise. Always there, but not that bothersome.

At the roof of the temple, high above the harbour, two figures were standing and looking down the mess that happens only when lot of organized people try to make things happen. Both were young, either in their twenties or about to reach that age. They might seem usual at the first glance, probably some priest making preparations for some kind of ceremony. But on second glance, you'd notice that they radiated power, like people used to give orders- and even more important, used to see these orders carried off.

One of them, leaning against the railing in the casual pose and after a quick glance down again, shook his head.

“I don't like it, brother,” he said in a surprisingly high tenor.

“Like what?” the other one asked

“All of this. Look at these men. Militia, light infantry. They are not soldiers, they are rabble,” the man was obviously not happy.

“Is this the best Carthage has to offer?” he asked. “And am I really to take Syracuse with these troops? 8000, most of them used to shovel dirt, not to use arms. Some too young, some too old. Ok, archers are fine and elephants might be able to turn the battle. Still, most is rabble”

“We don't have any good infantry around, brother,” the other one nodded sadly. “And unless we find a good source of iron, we will get none either.”

“And actually, that is why I called you here today, Mago,” the older brother continued.

“Yes?”

“Besides of giving me this rabble and ordering me to take Sicily, I managed to convince Senate do one more thing: give you another 8000 of similar rabble and send you to Iberia, to guard our recent advances there. You know, barbarians and stuff. But... “ he hesitated for a minute.

“Hamilcar?”

“Well, we both know you and me are sent away with single hope: we will die in these campaigns. Senate thinks we are too much in power. We are the last of Barcids, you know. When we talk, people listen. And we both been doing a lot of talking lately. Not for the senate, not for current high general, but rather against them.”

Mago nodded. “I see what you mean. Giving us the promotions, positions of power... and hoping we fail utterly. Preferably end up dead as well, I presume”

The other men, obviously called Hamiclar, grinned. “But we're not about to give them the pleasure. I go to Sicily and instead of failure, I come back as the conqueror of Syracuse and winner of Epeirus. Given that they are at war with Rome anyway, it shouldn't be too hard.”

The grin went wider. “And brother, when I come back as victor, there is an election to be held. Election for the position of High General. And the people love Hamilcar, the Barcid, soon the Victor and the Conqueror.”

Mago nodded. “And then, we can bring Carthage back to it's feet. And crush these upstart Romans.
As for me, I follow the orders and march with army to the Iberia. But once there, I will try to recruit Iberian mercenaries for our cause and try to talk some sense into local governors. We need the resources there.”

A cough interrupted their conversation. As they turned around, a messenger was saluting them.

“General Hamiclar, the troops have loaded and the fleet is ready,” he reported.

“Looks like it's my cue,” said Hamilcar and hugged his brother. Then, he stepped on the ladder, climbed down and headed towards ships.

Mago stayed on the roof, looking down as the fleet left the harbour. After that, he looked at the horizon until the ships had disappeared into east. Then he climbed back into ground, found his bodyguards obviously very busy boring themselves to death on temple grounds. He beckoned them closer:

“Boys, we have a long ride ahead of us. An army is waiting for me in Hippo Regulus”

By nightfall, the harbour was quiet again.

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Brothers Barcids.

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And the rabble that passes as Hamilcar's army. Not like Mago has any better.
 
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Sweet! Our 1st post-beta AAR. :cool: Good luck and we'll definitely be watching this.
 
Thank you for this AAR hjarg.

I like the setup. :)

Btw. Did you make the two brothers friends of each other? Or will we see both of them battling each other for dominance? :p
 
wuhuuu.... AAR :)


Also, ARGHHH the smileys have been moved :rofl: :cool: :D

I don´t know what smiley is where :eek:
 
24th February, 474 AVC (Hey, brother, why do we keep using these Roman dates? Ahh, never mind, just wondering)

I'm writing to you from Panormus. We have just landed and added another 1000 archers to our army. The declaration of war is ready and soon after the ambassador goes off, so do we. I expect the rugged terrain of Sicily and smaller Greek units to slow us down, so we probably reach the walls of Syracuse in May at the earliest.
The men are still pretty shaken from the journey, and elephants are a pain. Still, most survived, so it wasn't that bad. Looks like Epeirus doesn't have much units there, so the rabble I brought with me should be more then enough to deal with them.
And you should really meet the ambassador. Shame you probably won't get a chance soon.

Your brother,
Hamilcar


Hamlicar put the quill down and handed parchment to the messenger, saying: “Mago should be somewhere between Hippo Regios and Ikosim. Can't be too hard to miss, look for the men with 8000 soldiers at his tail. And take the fastest ship.”

Then, he turned his attention to his visitors. Chelbes Ahiromid was the admiral. Young, pleasant and more then capable as admiral. He knew the sea well, he knew the tactics, he knew how to ram the enemy ship and when need arouse, he knew how to jump to enemy ship, holding sword in his hand and murder in his mind. In the early years, he had proven himself several times against the constant plague of Carthage- the pirates, always ready to pray upon merchants of Carthage. In short, he was good and he knew it. Hamilcar liked him.

The other man... Bomilcar, from the Eshbaalid family, was a different fruit. Much different. His eyes looked wildly upon room, always trying to glance at his back. Hands shaking a bit and a stuttered speech made it even worse. Shame that there was still about 2000 years before the discovery of potato, or Hamilcar sure would have used that term to describe him.

“But... but... sir, Ph-ph-phyrrus isn't going to li-li-like this,” Bomilcar protested, looking at the declaration of war in this hand. “Th-the war”

“It's up to you to soothe him then. Smooth him up a bit. Talk him to surrender to us without a fight.” Only when looking deep into eyes of Hamilcar, one could see a hint of a smile. He continued: “You shouldn't had taken a job as our representative here in Panormus then. So, no more arguing. Go! And if you utter another world, I swear by god I shall behead you myself and find another ambassador.”

With that, Bomilcar stormed outside, muttering to himself “He is out to get me, they are all out to get me, I'm never safe. Hah! I'll show them bastards! I won't go down!”

Chelbes commented: “He is so going to be one head shorter”

“For the sake of all of us, I really-really hope so.” Hamilcar nodded. “Now, back to business. We expect to reach Syracuse in the beginning of May. There is another unit of archers in Malta, could you organize them to arrive on same time?”

Chelbes just nodded, bowed and left the tent.

A week later, a spy sent to follow Bomilcar returned. His report showed that Bomilcar had delivered the message, but though he waited for few days for a special head to appear on a pike before city gates, nothing of a kind happened. Hamilcar sighted. Can't have it all. At least they hold him.

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Two very different men- admiral of Carthagian navy and an ambassador

Outside Ikosim, 25th March
Dear Brother,

As you probably already heard, I am now the new high general of Carthage. Surprisingly, or rather unsurprisingly, I had almost the full backing of the Senate. And I wasn't even there, they elected me behind my back.
Obviously, our rivals had a smart idea to drive a wedge between us, since you are the one with political ambitions. In their minds, you must be filled with rage when you hear the news and start to hate your own brother more then anyone else.
Luckily for us, the missed one minor detail- even if it's me, it's still a Barcid ruling the Carthage again. One of the first things I did was to order fresh triremes to be constructed here in Ikosim. Do tell Chelbes, he will be thrilled.
Also, I sent Eshbaal Magoid with the rest of our army, another 8000 of “brave” soldiers, to Phazania. We really need the horses there, so he has orders to pacify the local barbarians.
Finally, I'm staying with the troops at the moment. We keep on marching, but I have no plans to call Hamilcar proposal in front of the senate before we both do some work. Some letters to be sent, some arrangements to be made. You know what to do, right? I think December will be fitting?


Your brother
Mago


15th May, Carthage.

A town crier in the main market looked at the text for a final time, then pulled his lungs full of air and shouted:

“People of Carthage! I bring joyous news! Praised be Baal and Dido, for 5 days ago, Hamilcar has won a battle against Phyrrus outside Syracuse and the city is under siege! Forces of Epeiros, commanded by no other then Hieron himself, the most cunning general serving under Phyrrus and numbering about 30 000 finest Greek warriors was beaten by Hamilcar and his 10 000 brave Carthagian soldiers! It was a total victory, a total 20 000 Greeks were killed and brave Hamilcar himself lead the charge that broke the Greek lines! He killed more then 100 Greeks himself, as skilled with sword as he is with moving armies!”

The crowd cheered.

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The glorious battle of Syracusae

11th December, Carthage

Two senators made their way through the crowd. And what a crowd it was, more then half a city was trying to fit themselves outside the Senate building. Plus, a great deal of people from the rest of the Carthagian domain. After all, it was the first time Mago addresses the Senate. Plus, there were some rumours around that Mago is going to do something... but no-one was sure, what exactly and would it be a good or a bad something. Senators exchanged worried glances, but dared not speak openly with so many common people around them. Finally, they reached the Senate stairs, where guards were doing the best to keep the crowd at bay.

In the distance, trumpets were heard. Noise of the crowd loudened in the main street leading to Senate. Soon, Mago appeared, riding in an open chariot, with only 50 bodyguards surrounding him. The crowd split like a Red Sea before Moses, letting Mago pass and kept on cheering. Smiling high general waved at the crowd and rode at very slow speed towards Senate building.

It took more then 30 minutes for him to cross the plaza. With every minute, the message sent to the senators waiting for him at the door, became clearer and clearer- Mago was the man of the people. People knew that Barcids stand on their side. As a thanks, they made it pretty clear that they were on Barcid side. When Mago finally reached the Senate, dismounted the chariot, hurried up the stairs and bowed before senators, even the dullest of them had realized who had the power in here. At least for now, most of them thought.

They all entered the Senate. Crowd stayed outside, waiting patiently, cheering, drinking and some pickpocketing the innocent bystanders. All the things crowd usually does.

After two hours, the senate doors were opened. Crowd went silent as the town crier exited the building, Mago following close behind.

“People of Carthage! In their infinite wisdom, the Senate of Carthage decided to accept the proposal of Mago, our High General and Hamilcar, our hero currently still outside the walls of Syracuse.
The proposal is as follows: the citizenship of Carthage will be extended, offering all the provinces ruled under Carthage to be allowed to become citizens of Carthage. It comes with the following demands: their men are demanded to take up arms when Carthage needs them and they pay extra tithe for the honour. In return, they have a representative in the Senate. One senator for 10 pops! The first province to accept these terms is Leptis Magna ”
The crowd was still silent, apart some cheers from non-Carthagians.
Crier continued: “And to celebrate this historic moment, Mago has offered wine and food to every citizen of Carthage! All are invited to the temple square.”
Crowd went wild. Mago grinned.

1st January, 475

In the ceremony to celebrate Dido's grace and the beginning of new year, the representatives of Leptis Magna were present for the first time. The offering was plentiful this year, with a record number of pigs stabbed. People felt happy.

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The granting of citizenship to people of Leptis Magna

12th February, 475

Hamilcar smiled as city gates opened. Starvation and despair had finally done their job and the city had surrendered.

His troops cheered. As opposed to citizens of Syracuse, they had been well fed, spending their time sieging the city and happily pillaging and raping the countryside. Only a few of Carthagians lost their lives there and they had lived a nice and comfortable life.

“Hamiclar the Conqueror,” they called him. Soon, the whole nation called him that.

With that, the centuries of conflict between Sicilian Greeks and Carthage finally came to an end, with Carthage ending up in the winning side.

13th May, 475

Today, Hamilcar Barca in the name of High General Mago Barca and the people and Senate of Carthage signed the peace proposal brought by Nikomedes Xenonid. Epeirus ceded Syracuse to Carthage and gave up all the ambition in Sicily.

After their allies in Italy had fallen to Romans and with the war with Rome still ongoing, king Phyrrus had no other chance then to give up. Carthage finally controlled Sicily, but Romans have also expanded further south. Now, just a narrow straight separates Phoenicians and Romans.

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The political situation after the last Greek Sicily-Carthage war
 
Thanks, coz1. I'll try my best :)

Ezzezze, they're friends. For now. Unless the game decides they're rivals, it will be that way. Bardids are in bit of a low supply right now, so i have to be careful.

Gigalocus, Romans are too... apparent of a choice :p
 
I don't get it. The first post-beta (demo) AAR is here and it is perfect. I don't get it, where is the logic. Please continue!! Please!

Anyways, I like how you keep writing in sarcasm of how "brave" your army is, that is very humorous. And thanks for adding in screenshots that go along with your AAR.
 
Oh my , glad to see more of the game XD looking forward to this !
 
So here we go with the Rome AARs, good luck and I'll be following!
 
yes let the ball roll :p