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"The hands of a king are the hands of a healer."

With Naomi it really seems to be turning this way. Which is great, because in a world filled with ex-slaves ripped from their homes, many suffering still from memories and the (to their species) unwelcoming environment, what is needed is a healer who brings people together.
 
So, I've been through and revised the formatting on the various stories so far, and added threadmarks. I will admit I'm not sure how that system works though.

The new format gives the title, then the date, and then the point of view character that I was intending to write as. (I do have a tendency to head-hop, especially with Buri and Naomi)
 
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Return
"Return"
1st Shendredie, 5 (2182)
Buri Of Unity

I watch Her leave our home. On Her head is a circlet of greenery – She talked to me about aeroponics making the plants grow, but I don't really understand how plants grow without soil – while polished scales sparkle in the light atop the white of Her former wedding garment, a billowing silk web floating from Her shoulders. She twirls for me.

"How do I look?"

I kneel. "You look like a queen."

"Good."

I walk to Her, and nuzzle Her hand. "I'm glad you are embracing your destiny. You are a High Queen."

"Today, I return to the Council."

"You should lead them."

She smiles a look that tells me that She already does. "Look after Rivkah for me." She nuzzles me. "I love you."


Monica

I look at her. She's well and truly gone native during her year out. "You look..."

She smiles. "Regal?"

I go tactful. "I was thinking tribal."

"The Xenayan like it."

I fold my arms. "At least I know you aren't seeking re-election."

"Nope. Not any more."

"So, what's the plan?"

"Well, obviously we now have two Humans on the Council. And because Odoos and I had a detailed conversation several weeks ago, and we've worked out a plan that should enable a solution to the defence question, and resolve the rising political strength in the Council of Rejoin MSI."

I nod. "About damn time. It'll be good to see Qutrok splutter."



As soon as Naomi and I are inside the chamber, Qutrok starts. "We can't possibly have two humans on this Council."

Naomi scowls. "I am here for the Xenayan."

"The Xenayan? But, but... They send Buri."

"The Xenayan have declared me their High Queen, and therefore, as their head of state I am taking the appropriate position. If anyone wants to challenge it, I will respond as Buri would."

A chill settles. After all, none of us would challenge Buri. He's a freaking monster.

I change the subject. "One of our most pressing concerns is what to do about the looming threat of MSI. Tensions are building, and unless we come to a workable agreement, could become a concern for public safety."

Qutrok interrupts. "The correct response is to reaccept vassalisation. If MSI come, we can't hope to beat them, it would be a folly to try. Our best chance of survival is to surrender."

Naomi yawns. Odoos replies. "How much are they paying you to say that, Qutrok?"

Qutrok glares at Naomi.

She smiles. Odoos continues. "Defence against MSI is possible. Naomi has ideas that will protect our world. All we need is to focus all our efforts on advancing our technologies to make them buildable."

Hoggagha spoke. "We should consider evacuation. All of us know that life under MSI is not life. But, equally, if MSI know we are here and decide to come for us, they will be able to make a move before we can protect ourselves. I counsel that our best option is to get ships constructed as soon as possible, and begin moving our people off world, or head underground like my people do. Then, we should spread out, seek alliances with others. MSI must have enemies, or if not, there must be others out there just as advanced who will object to their treatment of slaves."

Ykrett - the representative of one of the colony's two lithoid races - stirs. "Whatever we do, we must not allow the continued existence of Rejoin MSI. The raid on the comms relay is inexcusable. It is appalling that we still have not drowned the perpetrators."

Qutrok immediately denies it. "The raid was not carried out by Rejoin MSI."

Now Ykrett raises one of the crystal boulders he has for hands, pointed at him. "The problem you've got Qutrok, is no one believes you when you say that. I for one certainly don't."

Sor-Gor joins in too. "No one else would want the comms relay anyway, it is totally incompatible with the radio technologies we are using. Only someone wanting to contact MSI would have a use for it."

Naomi looks at Sor-Gor, sharply. "I'd be cautious about stating that so absolutely; there are other possible reasons why someone would want the comms relay."

Sor-Gor focuses his compound eyes on her. "Please, explain."

"It's entirely possible that the raid was carried out by someone seeking to get Rejoin MSI stamped on."

Ykrett rumbled happily. "That would be good, would it not?"

Naomi sways her head. "The question is why do they want them stamped on."

Ykrett growled. "They're a menace."

"They are also a single opponent; once crushed, dissent against us would factionalise further, making keeping the colony secure harder. It would also drive hardline Rejoiners underground. Someone wishing to work against us could easily find reasons to take out Rejoin MSI."

Ykrett covered his chest. "Why Naomi, you sound like you are defending them."

"I'm not. But I would prefer to only have to keep track of one dissident faction."

Hoggagha focused back on the more important thing. "What we should absolutely do is develop our technology base. With ships of our own, we could return to our homeworlds, bringing with us Naomi's ideas. We could protect our homes."

"And others too, somehow I doubt even MSI has found every inhabited homeworld."

"Perhaps we should do uplifting ourselves. I know I'd pick us over MSI if I had a choice of uplifter."

Murmurs of consent surge around the table; Naomi makes a note of the idea for later. Odoos speaks. "It seems we are reaching a consensus that developing our technological base is a priority. The question is, what to do right now about defending ourselves?"

"It's obvious, we can't..." Qutrok starts to answer, before Naomi interrupts him.

"Qutrok, I am sorry that your people were so brutally victimised by MSI. But this time around you've got the dangerous folk on your side. I will not allow this Council to talk of defeat when we are here because we fought them and we won."

"Naomi. Suppose that MSI return tonight. What exactly would you have this colony do?"

She stabs the blood-stained blade into the table. Silence falls. "I will fight for my husband. For my daughter. For my people. For the world we have built. I say that what we have achieved here matters. We Humans know a lot about slavery, it's one of the oldest forms of social structure on Old Earth. And what we learned most of all is that the price of liberty is eternal vigilance. I can see the merit of flying away; but where does the line get drawn? They know where we came from. All of us. We cannot go back; divided, they conquer. The line must be drawn here; this far, no further. Here we can make our stand. United." She pauses. "I know you guys think I am crazy, wearing this outfit. But I love my Buri. I love him with all my heart. I would die for him." She pauses again. "But more importantly, I would kill for him." One last pause. Just for effect. One quotation. "If this be the end, then I will rage towards it."

Silence hangs.

Ykrett stands. "Hear, hear!"

Qutrok looks at her. It's a new expression on his face. One he hasn't worn in a very long time. "Do you honestly believe we can win? Truly believe it?"

She picks up the blade, dancing it through her fingers, smiling like an ancient goddess of war in her laurel crown. "No matter what happens, I love you all."
 
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Hey, it looks like the colony has an agreement to fight against MSI if it ever comes to that.

Is Naomi wearing a laurel crown? It just said it was a crown of greenery - which fits her quite well. I can't tell where the metaphor ends in that last line.
 
Battle Plan
"Battle Plan"
2nd Shendredie, 5 (2182)
Naomi Of Unity

Qutrok sits down beside me. "I've decided to abolish Rejoin MSI."

"Oh?"

"But I do have a condition."

"What it is it?"

"Naomi, you are Human and Xenayan. You are a warrior, a soldier, a predator. My people are none of those things. If I am to tell my people that we are going to war, to fire and death, I have to tell them exactly what is the plan. And why you believe it will work."

"You know my past."

"You were a prostitute."

"Yes. And it hurts. I have been treated like a toilet by thousands of Minamar, Qutrok. Thousands. Thousands who treated me like... Like..." Breathe. Control. Focus. Breathe. "They used me in two brothels. One was among the high leaders and dignitaries, the other on the docks of a shipyard. And while they were abusing my body, my mind was extracting all sorts of information from them as they let their guard down. Some true, some lies. Confirmed by memorising the MSI ship captain's guidance manual."

"I need to know how you got that manual."

"The ship captain of our slave ship was in dire straits fiscally, verging on bankruptcy if the slave ship venture failed. He was very stressed. And when a woman offered him comfort, relief, care, interest, and sexual pleasures, he couldn't help himself. And over time, I got him to tell me, and show me, things he was not supposed to reveal."

"And then killed him."

I hesitate a little. "While in a moment of intimacy, yes."

"You cold-hearted tlazsdaka."

His voice is shocked. I tap my synthesiser. "That last word didn't translate." Hmm. "On second thought, maybe I'm better off not knowing."

He cocked his head. "How did he die, exactly?"

I hesitate again. After all, Qutrok is a man... "Where do you think a prostitute strikes when she wants to kill a man?"

Qutrok looks at me, his feathers ruffling. "Forget I asked."

"Done. The point is, I know exactly how they will fight us. They will not drop soldiers down onto our world - they will send a Flagship and bombard us from orbit."

"So how can we fight back? I need the details, otherwise my people will not go along with it. They aren't impressed by oratory, we've been deceived by oratory before."

"There's numerous flaws in MSI's methodologies that enable a first-strike attack composed of missiles with highly trained infiltrators on board instead of warheads to successfully board capture the Flagship."

"You want to turn a space battle we can't win, into a ground battle we can win?"

"Precisely."

"How?"

"Do you know why I have vetoed every proposal to use the recovered shuttles from the ship?"

Qutrok thinks it through. "You're proposing to use them to lift men and materiel into space."

"Men and manufacturing capacity, not men and materiel. But essentially yes."

"But you had to wait until we would all go along with it."

"Yes. The shuttles are single stage to orbit capable; nothing else we have is. Building the infrastructure to make our own rockets is something we are only working on so far. We use the shuttles to send people, mining and manufacturing equipment up to our world's asteroidal ring, then build the missiles there."

"That sounds workable. How do you know it will succeed?"

"Imagine that this big fruit is our planet, these nuts are the various orbiting rocks around our world, and this fork is the enemy flagship. That they will send a Flagship is the key. In a ship to ship combat military role, they are immense artillery and hangar craft platforms. They are not intended to engage themselves, but to fight at extremely long range by strikecraft, with the guns blasting anything that gets too close. Corvettes and Destroyers are used to screen for missiles. However, that is only a secondary purpose of a MSI Flagship. Militarily, the main purpose is to intimidate pre-FTLs into surrender, and obliterate them from orbit if not. Now, bombarding through atmosphere isn't easy; energy weapons get diffracted while kinetics are slowed by friction and burn up. Which means the Flagship comes close. Like, clearly distinguishable from the planet below close."

Qutrok watches me move the fork inside the ring of nuts. "And too close to avoid missiles that are launched from asteroids in a ring."

"And it is also trivially easy to hide laser point defence weapons inside asteroids; generate the laser in the asteroids core while streaming the beam using mirrors out to turrets on the surface."

"Which means we can defeat the Flagship and the strikecraft."

"We're looking to capture it, not destroy it don't forget. We need it. I'm envisioning a three race attack strategy in boarding. Xenayan, Lokra-Kitan and Humans. I and Buri will lead the first wave, composed of Xenayans. Our job is to breach and sweep. We will fight our way to gravity control, and take it offline. Our Lokra-Kitan friends have extremely good spatial sense, and they can fly as well in zero gravity as they can in normal planetary gravities, while the Minamar will be floundering trying to figure out how to move; MSI doesn't train for zero gravity operations. Humans will follow and start taking over the ship's systems from Minamar control."

"Are you absolutely sure that boarding will work? Surely they will have soldiers aboard."

"Keep in mind that MSI are corporate slicks. They aren't soldiers. It costs them money and resources to train soldiers and have them on board ships. Ships which generally fight at extremely far distances; fighting can take place as far out as light-minutes away for launching strikecraft, while ship weapons fire at light-seconds away."

"How far is a light-second?"

I do the maths quickly. "Roughly 25 times the diameter of our world."

Qutrok's eyes go wide. "Very far."

"Yes. So out in the wider galaxy, there's almost never a case to have boarding trained soldiers. Never close enough to deploy them."

"But our circumstances just happen to line up."

"Exactly. Plus, being a Flagship, it will not have an experienced starship captain in command."

"Why not?"

"MSI shareholders like to have the prestige of leading Flagship missions. In their experience, colonies like ours break down badly - it's why they mix us up with other races, to try and make us factionalise and turn on each other. The shareholders bid for the prestige and reputation enhancement of being seen to deliver aid to former rebels who have decided to abandon rebellion and accept the mercy of MSI."

"They want the propaganda. The scheming little rats. Which indirectly answers why they won't send warships first I suppose."

"Yes, and why they will wait several years, maybe decades, before coming; they were once a media conglomerate, a very long time ago, and they still always keep an eye on public perception. But also, there's no need to send warships."

"The chances of a pre-FTL race managing to beat a Flagship are that remote. How would a non-unified, pre-spaceflight civilisation beat them?"

"Theoretically, you could use artillery, but sufficiently high velocity artillery would generally be gun-rocket hybrids to be sufficiently weaponiseable. The point I'm making is that they're arrogant and decadent. They won't see us as a threat. We will face someone who has likely never been in combat before, who's entire military knowledge is speed-reading the handbook, not realising he's facing someone who already memorised it."

"I do have one last question. What happens if they decide to go straight to planetary bombardment with the fleet?"

"Well, in the best case, we would capture ships by the same method as they too come close in to bombard us; in some ways, it would be easier. Flagships do have dedicated guards on board, but warships don't. Once we are on board, they will face the prospect of their formations falling into disarray, and because they are running by the book, and the book has no plan for what to do if your ships get boarded as it isn't a scenario that takes place, we can still defend ourselves. In the worst case of them sweeping away our weapons platforms with overwhelming force, we will lose."

"What can we do to prevent the latter?"

"The more weapons platforms we have in orbit, the better our chances. Our technology won't be as good, so we need huge numbers to win an attrition based slugging it out battle."

"Ok, let's say we win. We capture the flagship, fix the holes we drill to get in or fix the airlocks or however we punch through the hull. How can we stop MSI turning up in full force?"

"We have to keep changing the paradigm. Keep them off balance."

"How?"

"An individual rebellion that chooses to defend a single location, is easily crushed. The key advantage of a rebellion is that you can be mobile, and force your enemy to defend everywhere. We can no longer do that."

"Which is very bad for us."

"Yes. But what if they aren't facing one rebellion?"

Suddenly it clicks for him. "The soldiers you've been training. They aren't to defend our world at all, are they?"

She smiled. "Imagine the beautiful chaos a thousand people, trained to do anything I can do, would unleash."

Qutrok looks at me as he thinks it over. "You are completely mad. And the worst part is, you make sense."

"Qutrok, your issue is you have a prey mindset. You're thinking 'Oh no, I'm stuck in a room with MSI.' Me however, I'm not."

"You are thinking 'Oh yes, they are stuck in a room with me.'"

I smile, and hold his wing. "I refuse to be prey."

Qutrok trembles. "What... what kind of... demon are you?"

"I'm not a demon. Just a good woman, who has to do a lot of bad things."
 
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Hey, it looks like the colony has an agreement to fight against MSI if it ever comes to that.

Is Naomi wearing a laurel crown? It just said it was a crown of greenery - which fits her quite well. I can't tell where the metaphor ends in that last line.
The physical circlet is just green flowering plants. (and a framework that sprays nutrient solution mist into the roots when her head is upright, or is stationary in storage)

The symbolic redefinition of Augusta however, is metaphor.


With the latest story, this is largely extrapolated from the game's mechanics with the major exception of the asteroid-derived defence platforms being built around the planet itself.

The boarding operation is something that I have in mind that they could get away with the novelty once with, but won't really be able to repeat it.
 
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Qutrok's people were assigned the "Depressed" trait, which I've integrated into the story by having Qutrok be the main surrender to MSI advocate as he and his people feel resistance is hopeless.

Here, the two factors are:

1. This poor guy has been tricked by a woman into thinking there was a real relationship, only to find that she was in reality so cold to him that she could kill him during intimate relations. (Hence why it didn't translate; being depressed at a racial level, they actually have a word for that; if it was an expletive he was calling her, it wouldn't be in the synthesised speech at all)

2. The depression obviously makes finding love harder for his people, so in Qutrok's culture, this particular guy has a life that is even more tragic than normal; his life goes horribly wrong, ends up on his last ditch effort, and then finds love, only to find that the one person he thought was helping him, goes on to kill him. And her reason isn't really anything he personally has done, but was essentially that he got in her way.

He doesn't necessarily mean Naomi is cold-hearted in general.



Naomi's worry is that she can fluke a victory by this method once, but she can't actually defend the planet without technological aid from other people.
 
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"Family"
Earthdate: July 6th, 2160
Atalyah HaMaadimi

The sound of the alarms blares through. The sum of possibilities blaze through my mind, converging on a single path. I turn to my son amid the huddling ex-slaves. "Thando."

"Yes Mum?"

"Take care of them. There's one final door, already unlocked, then you are outside. Free. But they are onto us. I will create a distraction." I hug him one last time, before looking each of them in the eyes. "No matter what happens, I love you all." She turns to reopen the airlock back inside. "Don't look back. Run."

Thando opens the door; the others join him as they sprint into this planet's winter, while I, the last daughter of Tipheret HaMaadimi's parthenogenic genetic tweaking, kick down my own door. Naturally, it breaks beneath my enhanced body's muscles and bones, steel shattered like glass. I enter the mind's eye. Perfect memory recall and enhanced senses and reactions build a picture of where her enemies are faster than eyesight alone, her pistol shrieking as streaks of glowing iron flash at each target. Room clear.

She leaps, vaulting across the room in a single bound. The next door puts up even less resistance as her body smashes home, and security personnel flee for cover; one man is too slow, and gets his stun-baton hand trapped in her vice-like grip. Suddenly he is looking at his chest, unable to feel anything beneath his neck as blood-covered prongs punch through from his back. Trained marksmen try to lead the target, but her movement is faster than anything they trained against; another corridor falls.

The next door opens with a volley of sizzling rounds and flashes, all aimed uselessly as she tosses out liberated stun grenades. The noise and flash ignored by her rapid responses shutting out the stimuli before they can be registered, and Minamar are screaming as she tears through them before their eyes and ears recover, a piece of steel bar swung hard enough to crush bone flings the mere mortals aside; what scant injuries she does take sealed by medical nanorobotics.

Another atrium, another corridor.

Both laid waste.

The intercom flickers into life. "Atalyah HaMaadimi, we have your daughter. Lay down your weapons and she will be spared."

Her blazing eyes fix on a security monitor. The emotion overwhelms my defences, and I return to the surface of the mind. A visored man holds a rifle behind my daughter Naomi's head. Dozens of scared Olinbar guards file into the small corridor around me. Half a dozen plans surge through my mind as I calculate vectors, wondering if I can make them take themselves out.

"We repeat - Atalyah HaMaadimi, we have your daughter. Lay down your weapons, and she will be spared."

I run the analysis. My battle is over.

My daughter's is not.​
 
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So now we have a new mystery thrown into the story: "Where in the Galaxy is Thando?"

Assuming he survived the initial escape into the winter of course. If a reunion with Naomi happens, I may start taking bets on how the story twists from there.
 
I wonder what this latest chapter means.

This part of Naomi's past is interesting - and I would not want to be a member of MSI in her path. Of course, I also wouldn't hire a prostitute at all for exactly this reason.
 
Qutrok
"Qutrok"
2nd Shendredie, Nightfall, 5 (2182)
Naomi Of Unity


Monica bursts into my waiting room. “Qutrok is dead.”

Well, this calls for a colourful metaphor. “Dead? What? How?”

“When he went to dissolve the Rejoin MSI faction, they formed a mob, and hacked his head off. They're coming here.” She paces frantically. “I don't know what to do... Please tell me there's some master scheme you have planned here, our wise chessmaster?”

Damn. “All my schemes relied on the assumption of his existence.”

“Any plan Bs?”

“None. Well, none applicable. Qutrok was a stable, calming influence, loved by all his people. Why on earth would I assume he might be taken out? I have contingencies for some of us, but not Qutrok.” I pause. Begin working out interception times, how long until they arrive... “How far away and how numerous is the mob?”

“They are marching down Flavius' End, hundreds at least.”

“North or south?”

“Heading south.”

I work it out. “At typical walking speed, we have less than ten minutes.” I have a plan. I stand. “Where's Buri?”

“Waiting with the Council.”

“Let's move.”

Monica follows me out the room. “Do we have a plan?”

“I need my husband to help me out of my dress.”

“Naomi, you do have a plan?”

“I'm working on it.”

As they got to the Council chamber, Ykrett was speaking. “...foul Qutrok, this mob is an absolute-”

I don't have time to open the door; I barge it. “Qutrok is dead.” The lithoid silences himself as I recovered my blade and pistol. “The mob is coming here. I am going to try to negotiate with them. Buri, help undress me.”

He looks at me like I'm... Distracted. “What? Now? I mean...”

I shake my head. “I don't want to get their blood on my High Queen dress.”

Ykrett rumbles happily. “Their blood. I like that.”

Buri looks at me, somewhat relieved. “I can summon the Xenaya in the city.”

“I don't want a bloodbath, their fear alone is enough to win. I want peace.” I nuzzle him as he undresses me, then I pass the garments to him. “If I fall, give these to Rivkah.”




I intercept the crowd on the street. “Peaceful protest is allowed. Get violent, and I will crush the perpetrators. Those responsible will hand themselves over for the murder of Qutrok.”

The mob – I can't see any proper weapons – stop walking. They aren't exactly expecting me to meet them. Some of the agitators call out. “There she is! Get her!”

A few start to advance. I draw the pistol I took from Hortensus. “The first twenty five of you to move will die.”

The agitators – hiding inside the mob, naturally – cry out. “Come on, she can't kill us all!”

I smile my... somewhat demented smile. The smile of one with nothing to lose, drawing the blade in my other hand. The mob begin to waver. “Let's look at some facts, shall we? You are an unarmed, uncoordinated mob. Not even smart enough to realise you should have divided your approach to force me to split my backup forces. Your sole advantage over me is numbers. But I am a disciplined athlete, an accurate shot, and the least encumbered by clothes. I outgun you, I can outrun you, and if you do manage to get in range of my blade, I can kill you. Now sure, you might eventually get me; but I bet I can take fifty of you before any of you touch me.”

I let the words sink in, as my allies began to make themselves visible. “What's more, if you do touch me, the Xenaya in the city will hunt you down and eat you. My mercy alone is why you are not being torn to shreds as it is.”

The mob began to form a circle, realising they are surrounded by red eyes in the darkness. The agitators began to try to rouse the crowd, but no one pays them any attention.

“I repeat. Peaceful protest is allowed. Me and my people are not going to attack first, if you want to make your case politely, you may. If you don't have a case to make, then present the killers of Qutrok, and they will face due process of law.”

The crowd handed over the agitators, promptly bound by the Xenaya, and dispersed back to their homes. I prowl around the captives. "I'm going to make this clear. Between you, you are responsible for murder, riot and attempted revolution. Even worse, you failed." I scowl at them. "Do you know what the punishment would be back in MSI territory?"

"We'd get crucified."

"Fortunately for you, we have trial by jury. Unfortunately for you, there are hundreds of witnesses, as well as recordings, that tell about the death of Qutrok. We will hold trial tomorrow morning." I look to my people, the Xenaya. "Please guard them for tonight. If they try to escape, hunt them down."

The agitators looked at each other. "You don't mean..."

"Surely she can't..."

The Xenaya look to me, then show off their sabres and horns. The terrified agitators whimper quietly. I walk away, thinking about Qutrok.
 
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DAMN.

There is no starship in the Galaxy large enough to contain Naomi's chutzpah.
 
To be fair, the strategy only works because she knows that the mob understands she is absolutely capable of backing up her claims, and that she knows any invididual within the angry mob will choose self-preservation rather than certain death, and therefore when confronted in this manner and made to comprehend their own division, the mob as a whole will choose self-preservation.

Against a disciplined army, it would get her killed.

I wonder what this latest chapter means.

This part of Naomi's past is interesting - and I would not want to be a member of MSI in her path. Of course, I also wouldn't hire a prostitute at all for exactly this reason.
That chapter was a snapshot of Naomi's mother, and offers an insight into Naomi's heritage. It'll come back up after Naomi and Thando get reunited. As I'm also thinking about the possibility of an Olinbar defector, and there might be a connection for him via some ancestor who was involved on the MSI side.

Naomi is prone to forgiveness. It's Thando who has to be worried about, as he is not.
 
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Well, that's bad. Let's hope that these Rejoin MSI people don't get smart and form a new party - most functioning states need a loyal opposition, not one actively plotting treason.

Naomi had guts.
 
Qutrok, part 2
"Qutrok, part 2"
4th Shendredie, 5 (2182)
Tryykad

I look at the funeral preparations for my father. Qutrok is laid in an open casket, on his funeral pyre. We Kyasese believe in open air cremation, allowing the ash to return to the sky and fly free one last time, symbolic of how the spirit flies free. I think about my mother, the Minamar had denied her that last flight. He had never known the Infinite Wheel, but Qutrok had; the constant vying of nation-states had led Qutrok to seek peace, and led to him being selected to lead here on Unity. And he had trained me to replace him over the years. As the eldest son, it would fall to me to light the pyre, and send him on his way.

I take the lit branch, and to the chorus of the Kyaese around me I chant the supplication of release, before lighting the pyre.

And I weep.

The emotion of it all is overwhelming.

It shouldn't be like this...

Murder.

My father... Murdered.

Only because Naomi had made him believe that victory was possible...

Some victory.

I want to seethe, want to cry, want to rage... I decide to find her. It isn't difficult, she has come to the funeral, stood at the edge. Guilt maybe?

I fly at her. Her cheeks were wet. "Why did you have my father killed?"

"I wanted your father to live."

"I don't believe you. You're an orator, you would say anything. You shouldn't even be here."

"Tryykad, I came because he was a friend. I know we were often at opposites in the Council, but he was a good leader who cared about his people above all, and he was a conscience, a balance, that helped us more wrathful types. I would never have wanted him dead, and all my plans assumed his existence. I know you won't trust my words, so look at my actions; do you really think it would have taken me three years to get rid of him if I didn't want him leading your people?"

"Probably not."

"Besides, imagine how much more of a problem Rejoin MSI would be for me if it had been someone else leading."

"True, he was a moderate. Too much of one."

"I'm not your enemy."

"I will be the judge of that." I back away from her warily; I may be wrathful, but Naomi is bigger and stronger. My father trusted her, but I know something is off with her. "Tell me, Naomi. My father trusted you in the end. Enough he died for what you told him yesterday. I'll give you a chance to explain what you told him to me. And I'll be fair - I will meet you at a time that suits you so that you can give your best presentation."

"Shall we say next week? I know you are busy right now."

"First day then."

"Afternoon is best for me, Council meetings in the morning."

"Just remember - I want facts. Evidence. Proof. If you try rhetoric, then I'll never listen to you again." I turn, and fly back to my family.
 
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I've now downloaded Notepad++ and 7zip, so I can now indulge in save game editing.
Oh, I'm excited! Fingers crossed that your machinations turn out well.