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Deliberately ending on a cliffhanger. :)

I fly out tomorrow to marry my Ndebele Queen next Friday, and I won't be back until November 20th. Because internet and electricity in general are somewhat questionable in Zimbabwe, and me and my new wife are going to be busy enjoying the first three weeks of married life, I can't say for sure that an update for Life2.0 or TerraGen Dominion for that matter (ideas are still being worked on in the background while I focus my writing time on Life2.0) will come in the next month.

If you've been waiting for a lull to catch up, now's a good time. :)
 
I fly out tomorrow to marry my Ndebele Queen next Friday, and I won't be back until November 20th. Because internet and electricity in general are somewhat questionable in Zimbabwe, and me and my new wife are going to be busy enjoying the first three weeks of married life, I can't say for sure that an update for Life2.0 or TerraGen Dominion for that matter (ideas are still being worked on in the background while I focus my writing time on Life2.0) will come in the next month.

If you've been waiting for a lull to catch up, now's a good time. :)
Congratulations and travel safe! Best wishes to you and your new family!
 
Real life always comes first.

As for the story... these new alliances should be good for Life 2.0. They won't need to stand alone against MSI.

What are these AI riots of which you speak?
 
Sharpbeak, Part 1
"Sharpbeak, Part 1"
4th Shendredie, 9 (2188)
Rivkah Of Unity

We watch Mei Hua and Ossuhphuhr review the data coming in from the Prikkiki-Ti's Sentry Arrays before she begins her statement on our conference call. "So, the Prikki are keeping tabs on the main MSI fleet for you." She brings up the display of the MSI fleet on the border of PDRTC space. "The thing is, the MSI registered navy is only a piece of MSI's true naval strength. Galactic Community legislation tries to constrain navy size deployed by MegaCorps to avoid runaway commercial exploitation and competition."

Mum shakes her head. "Such restrictions never really work. The Great Game has been played enough for us to know that. How are they bypassing it?"

Mei Hua smiles. "Quite right. This means MSI rely heavily on other groups - for most operations they use mercenary forces that are built and run by successfully uplifted pre-FTL civilisations as a means of hiding their capabilities. These Bulwark vassal states count as separate for naval strength, and function as propaganda to show how wonderful MSI uplifting is."

Mum smiles grimly. "But inevitably they are restricted to paper tigers."

Mei nods. "Naturally. Can't have uplifts running around on up to date tech. So, they also employ external merchant-marine mercenaries that have their own Galactic Community registry entries to hide their numerical strength, and lastly there is one secret offensive fleet that is hidden inside the Meklusin Nebula that is not on the Galactic Community registry. That nebula is the remnants of an O-type star that was destroyed during the War of the Stars of Aphisi."

I have loads of questions. But I ask the scariest one. "Blowing up a star?"

Mei Hua looks at me. "The War of the Stars of Aphisi was fought using extremely powerful weapons. In this case, an artificial wormhole was used as a weapon by bringing the wormhole end deeper into the system until it was close enough that the gravitational interaction collapsed the wormhole, and released enough energy to blast the star into a gas stream. Even today the region is intensely radioactive, and is one of the few places in the galaxy that can be hidden from the Great Powers' Sentry Array Networks."

Mum's eyes narrow. "So MSI have a fleet there. How do you know that?"

"Yes. We have cloaked science ships that have infiltrated the nebula. There's another few special things about that fleet - they have jump drives equipped. And are led by Skrand Sharpbeak."

Mum looks at her. "You say that name like we should be familiar with it."

The display switches to some Arishkan data; I don't recognise the language, but the Avian cuts an imposing figure. "During the war, Skrand Sharpbeak was one of the most formidable Commanders, a legendary Paragon employed by the Nalynoids to lead their Ether Drakes to victory. He was extremely effective. So effective that it was decided to shut him in a Gateway cycle rather than try to beat him in battle. After that, we were able to contain Nalynoid expansion until the Prikkiki-Ti interfered. MSI released him when they reactivated the Gateway we had locked mid-cycle. He agreed to fight for them in gratitude, and they keep him in reserve in the Meklusin Nebula."

"So, how far is the nebula?"

Mei's eyes lift to her forehead as she counts. "By Hyperlanes, fourteen connections. Jump drive however, has them possibly coming straight here. We aren't sure on their maximum range."

Mum leans towards her. "How so?"

Mei leans on her other foot as she weighs her answer. "Jump drives are considered a restricted technology after the Unbidden Invasion was discovered to be linked to their use."

Mum asks slowly this time. "Who or what are the Unbidden?"

Mei Hua looks very carefully at Grepp-Schnepp Rikki. "A race of energy beings who invaded the galaxy many centuries ago. The Prikkiki-Ti arose to galactic prominence at the same time while still in their original incarnation as Fanatic Purifiers."

Me and Mum look at Grepp-Schnepp Rikki. Dozens of possibilities flash through Mum's eyes. The others look at us. Then they realise it. He nods. "The Prikkiki-Ti in those early stages was devoted to taking vengeance on those who imprisoned us inside a shielded world. At the Unbidden Invasion and the Repucid-Auridan War of Awakening, a revolutionary movement within the Prikkiki-Ti obliterated large amounts of infrastructure and ultimately destabilised the Prikkiki-Ti, which led to a reformation to more militaristic values in order to win the numerous ongoing conflicts. In the process, a less extreme Prikkiki-Ti emerged that no longer sought vengeance, but instead had found their place in the worlds. Xenophile Prikki like myself are still rare, but we maintain a voice in the decision making process of the Prikkiki-Ti."

Ossuhphuhr looks at him. There's tension as Grepp stares back. "What exactly is the Prikkiki-Ti's interest in Life2.0?"

Grepp looks at me, and Mum. "Look Arishkan. We Prikki know what will happen if we let you and the Nalynoids fight over this region again. Our solution therefore is a new buffer state led by Naomi and her children after her. We will resource them to win that objective."

Ossuhphuhr and Mei Hua mute their connection and talk in his language. I wonder what they're talking about; Grepp is pointed out a few times.

Dad looks at Mum. "Do we have a choice in this? I feel like we are livestock being bartered for in the market."
 
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Real life always comes first.

As for the story... these new alliances should be good for Life 2.0. They won't need to stand alone against MSI.

What are these AI riots of which you speak?
Yes.

But are they worth the cost?

The logical extrapolation of rapidly improving AI - even without the speculative development of AGI - leads to large scale unemployment of Humans in areas where AI performs at an acceptable cost-effectiveness level. This is a process we've already seen extensively since the industrial revolution and the rise of automated production, but will accelerate and in more fields. (The recent writer's guild strike is an early example)

Eventually, there's a point where the threatened or perceived threatened roles are so extensive that violent action to prevent such replacement takes place.
 
Skrand Sharpbeak is in service of the opposing force? Huh boy, this is trouble.

Also, the Unbidden Invasion has already occurred!? Fascinating. I love the detail that there appears to be some reluctance among the rest of the galaxy to use Jump Drives now because of it.
 
This update really puts the technological gap between Life 2.0 and MSI into perspective.

Also, Buri isn't wrong. Living in a buffer state is rarely good for the people in the area.

How influential is the Galactic Community? What's stopping MSI from violating their decrees? Everyone else ganging up on them?
 
Skrand Sharpbeak is in service of the opposing force? Huh boy, this is trouble.

Also, the Unbidden Invasion has already occurred!? Fascinating. I love the detail that there appears to be some reluctance among the rest of the galaxy to use Jump Drives now because of it.


Yes - it'll be much tougher next time around.

If you remember The Prikki Endeavour, they had the Unbidden arrive alongside a War In Heaven. That detail hasn't changed.

This update really puts the technological gap between Life 2.0 and MSI into perspective.

Also, Buri isn't wrong. Living in a buffer state is rarely good for the people in the area.

How influential is the Galactic Community? What's stopping MSI from violating their decrees? Everyone else ganging up on them?
Yes. They are slowly learning just how far they have to go.

Definitely. Our protagonists are realising just how small a fish they are in the ocean they are in.

Think of the League Of Nations of the 1920s.
 
The Great Game
"The Great Game"
4th Shendredie, 9 (2188)
Rivkah Of Unity

The new motion capture virtual reality headsets our communications technology guys have developed are strange. Put it on and suddenly my vision sees black until Mum answers, and suddenly we are hundreds of light years away on Earth.

Mum stands at the edge of a vast canyon with a river cascading down, spray rising from a roaring waterfall on the opposite side that is so thick it blocks the view. I join her.

She's not wearing her usual Xenayan clothes; instead, she wears a dress. It's ancient - white, with a faded crown of red, a cascade of beads of many colours around the sleeveless shoulders, with a cloak around her waist of vibrant patterns. It's been altered a few times.

She looks at me, then turns to the waterfall. I can only just hear her. "aManz' aThunqayo."

"What?"

"This place. The smoke that thunders."

"I don't quite understand."

She turns back to me. "Rivkah, when you asked me to tell you what I was talking about when I said the phrase 'the great game', this is what I wanted you to see. Not the poems of the Great Powers declaring their own glories, but to a real location, a real people, their lives irrevocably altered by the machinations of the Great Powers. These waterfalls have many names in the languages of the various native tribes that inhabit the land. My ancestral people, amaNdebele, called them aManz' aThunqayo. But they were themselves later arrivals, and before them the Tonga knew them as Shungu na mutitima, and the Lozi knew them as Mosi-oa-tunya. And these names are all about the pulverising torrent, the spray that boils into the sky, the roar of the crashing waters. But, only the name given by some European coloniser for a queen of some faraway land who turned up late has truly international recognition."

She's practically spitting derision. "Where are you going with this Mum?"

She turns back to me. "Simple. We must not repeat the fate of Mthwakazi. On my world, the sad tale of the invasion of vastly more powerful empires, like the Prikki and Arishkan, played out thousands of times. Only a vanishingly small number had the native group survive independent. We must be one of them."

"What would they want with our little planet?"

Her eyes close. "All it takes is one Cecil Rhodes to decide he wants our world and to name it after himself, or one empire thinking they can use us as a pawn on their board."

The thought chills me. "What can we do to stop them?"

A spear - a short stabbing spear, with a wide iron tip - flies into her hand. She flaunts a few strikes, before discarding it for the Olinbar pistol she took from the ship captain. "The only thing empires respect - force. Diplomacy would be nice, but war is the continuation of politics by other means. Lobengula thought he was protecting his people even as he sold their lives away at the negotiating table, betrayed by those he trusted. But the players of the great game care nothing for the lives of others. Not even those of their own people, their lives to be spent as manpower. They do not care about agreements unless it suits them. They care only for power."

And I thought MSI were bad enough. "This is putting a rather downwards tone on things Mum."

She sits in the long grass. A tear falls. I sit beside her. "I am afraid Rivkah. I am afraid to repeat the mistakes of the past." Images of Grepp and Ossuhphuhr appear. "I am afraid our Moffats are already here."

I start thinking of options. But surely Mum has examined them? And if her conclusion leads her to fear...

That isn't good.

No.

I am not afraid.

They come here, I eat them. "Mum. Snap out of it."

She looks at me, and smiles. "You have ideas?"

"Yeah. But first. Just curious - what's with the dress?"

She runs a hand through the beads. "This is the Lobola celebration dress that originally was made for Yehoshua's Ndlovukazi, a very long time ago. A few HaMaadimi women wore it after her, the last being my mother."

"That's a wedding dress then."

She nods slowly. "Well, an equivalent."

It sparks an idea. "So how did Yehoshua differ then? I mean, I've seen the Holocron. Let's face it, he's closer to Heinrich than to you."

She nods as she examines her dark skin. "In more ways than you think, as Yehoshua's ancestry is north Germanic tribes. But what Yehoshua did differently was he came with no real agenda except to marry his Ndlovukazi. He waited for and worked within the Zimbabwe political process until the Yabuntu Iriphubliki became possible, and even then operated on the kind of inspirational consensus that I rely on."

I pause while I collect my thoughts. In an ideal world, we would just be left alone. But we can't really be left alone as we've been noticed. So, we have to rely on other areas.

I look at Mum again. "We need to find out exactly where Ossuhphuhr stands."

She nods, and the call disconnects.
 
Is that Lake Victoria? Are they on Earth? Who's managing things back on Unity?

Does Life 2.0 want to become Ethiopia in this analogy?
 
Right foreign ruler, wrong location; they're looking at a representation of Victoria Falls - think of a kind of video call that uses a VR headset instead. Still on Unity physically.

Given Ethiopia survived the Scramble for Africa intact, yes.
 
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Now that I think about it, the Scramble for Africa can be a disturbingly good parallel for this series of events. Might go back to earlier chapters to see if you foreshadowed this...
 
From our protagonists' perspectives, MSI has a very strict information blackout on the Galactic Community and other alien powers in the region and therefore their knowledge of non-MSI factions is purely from outside the colony.

Thando and his people have a somewhat wider knowledge base thanks to the piracy years, but are still very MSI oriented because they were the target.

Grepp knows far more than he is allowed to reveal owing to his hands being tied by the obligations to the Pompous Purist nature of the Prikkiki-Ti this time around.

Mei Hua and Ossuhphuhr have a very difficult situation ahead when their love will be what stands between Arishkan efforts to retake the Stars of Aphisi (which for the avoidance of doubt, in Arishkan foreign policy planning considers every star system future property of the Arishkan Galactic Empire) and PDRTC independence (And relatedly, Llife2.0's independence) and Ossuhphuhr has to weigh up whether he sacrifices his love for his nation or his love for his wife.

Outside what our characters know, the situation is analogous to the pre-Berlin Conference period, among various aspects of Human history I'm drawing on. But, there's possible catalysts for change, and of course the Nalynoids are yet to make their introduction.
 
"Sharpbeak, Part 2
"Sharpbeak, Part 2"
5th Shendredie, 9
Buri Of Unity

He flinches as I approach the table outside the Quzzi feasting parlour - the only other reptilians on Unity. His eyes try to avoid looking at my sabres and horns. They don't look very impressive, these Arishkan; barely my wife's height, and almost as thin. Still, I'm here for diplomacy. "Ossuhphuhr."

"Buri Of Unity, I presume."

"The one and only." I turn to the waiter. "A glass and a bowl of last year's red water."

The Human man nods. "I'll be back with the wine momentarily."

Ossuhphuhr blinks as the waiter leaves. "Social call?"

"Quite." I sit beside the table; the chairs are too small. "I figured we could exchange notes on our respective wives."

He blinks. Slowly.

Such a weird place to have eyes. She would describe them as hammerheaded as a reference to some Earth sea creature, but I think not. They're obviously useless as hammers, having the eyes on the sides like that.

He finishes the drink he was nursing from before my arrival. "We both know that you are here for more than just notes on Mei Hua."

"Yes."

"Tell me Xenayan, what exactly do you think of your situation as a colony?"

"We started with my wife's leadership and my ability to turn Olinbar into prey. We've done pretty well."

"You don't trust me."

I think about both of them. "Nor the other one."

He clears his throat. "Grepp-Schnepp Rikki."

I'm careful in my tone now. "Being clear, both of you believe in using us as pawns on your boards."

"I can't speak for Grepp, but it is different for me."

"How so?"

There's a long pause. It's interrupted by the return of the waiter. "Human women are... Endearing."

Memories of her flood through my mind. "Yes. They are."

"They get under one's skin, into the heart."

"And into the beast within."

He blinks, and raises his glass. "True." He sips as I lap my bowl. "I was assigned as a Field-Clerk when I met Mei Hua."

Memories of loss flow. "A broken warrior in shackles when I met Naomi."

He blinks. "And she broke the shackles."

I see her in my mind again. "She had nothing but two weapons taken from the ship's captain when we met."

He pauses for a moment. "Metaphor or literalism?"

I let my mind dwell on my now wife. "Well, she did have a belt too. And a keycard."

He blinks. "Mei Hua had battle fatigues on when we first met."

I try to pry things open a little. "I know little of Earth's history past my wife's parents being taken from the Iriphubliki." Lap my bowl. "What did you do?"

"Oh, I was there conducting a clandestine transfer of weapons to the People's Revolutionary Army. Mei Hua was the first person on the ground I met. We got talking."

"That's when they get you."

He blinks. "Yes. It's when they are silent that you worry."

I remember some of the times I've upset her. "Indeed."

"I love Mei Hua. And I love my nation."

"And you worry that Imperial desires will force you to choose one?"

He blinks, before downing his glass. "And I'm afraid of that."

I pour my bowl down my throat. "Me too. Another?"

He blinks. "Please."
 
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Somehow, reading about these two waxing nostalgic about their significant others warms my heart a little.
 
That was nice. Even so, I wonder if Ossuhphuhr can choose between his love and his country. That could be an interesting subplot...
 
Sharpbeak, Part 3
"Sharpbeak, Part 3"
6th Shendredie, 9 (2188)
Buri Of Unity

"Yuck."

I watch her wipe her mouth in shock. "I nuzzle you, and you say that?"

She shifts uncomfortably. She's probably working out how much of the red water I had. Probably has a better idea than I do too. "How much have you drunk? I mean, I could get drunk off your breath..."

I lean on a wall. "I'm a little tipsy."

She slowly turns away, and watches the doorbell footage. "Buri, you fell over three times just getting from the corner to the airlock." I fall down. She looks back at me. "I can't help you up my love."

I give up and lie down. "I got the information we wanted. You were right about the Arishkan Galactic Empire."

She joins me on the floor. "So Ossuhphuhr is plotting against us?"

"No. My new drinking buddy feels trapped between his wife and his Empire. Choose her and he says goodbye to everything he's worked for and the personal favour of the emperor. Choose the Empire, he loses his wife."

"And Mei Hua had figured this out and therefore put herself so intimately into his life he can't imagine a future without her."

We stare into each other's eyes. I wonder how many people my wife tried to do that with in the past.

I wonder. "Have you tried to do this with me?"

She draws her knees up to her chest. "Not intentionally."

"But it's a survival mechanism."

"Yeah." She scratches her arm absent mindedly. "I hate it, having a screwed up sense of love as a tool instead of a gift."

"Want to talk about Ossuhphuhr?"

"Please."

"I got him talking about MSI, and our options. And he's outlined a solution that I think you'd like."

She leans in. "Oh?"

"There's a legal route with the Galactic Community to stop MSI without going to war."

Her smile erupts. "Tell me!"

"MSI has a legal charter to be sanctioned to operate as the Galactic Community appointed uplifter of pre-FTL civilisations. It goes back to the opening of commercial leasehold in our region of space. And there's the possibility of having them stripped of legal sanction to operate in uplifting if it is proven that systemic abuse of uplifts is taking place."

"Which we can prove."

"He immediately listed dozens of problems, biggest being MSI wrote that aspect of the charter specifically to suit themselves. And they spend a lot of resources on lobbying the Galactic Community."

"But, it offers a far better engagement environment for us to go head to head with them than going to war."

"The downside is, it will provoke them to act. We'd have to be ready to fight at least one battle to stop them silencing us."

Her eyes blaze with ideas, ideas she narrows to a conclusion. "They'll send this Skrand Sharpbeak and the secret fleet then."
 
So, is this an indicator that Life 2.0 is going to chose "With Words" instead of "With Weapons" when the time comes to select a Payback method?
 
Humiliating MSI on the galactic stage sound like a great idea...

The "red water" is wine, right? Is it just wine from Earth? How much did Buri drink, if Naomi feels like getting drunk off his breath? Or is that just an aspect of Xenayan physiology?
 
So, is this an indicator that Life 2.0 is going to chose "With Words" instead of "With Weapons" when the time comes to select a Payback method?
Naomi is keeping her options open.

Humiliating MSI on the galactic stage sound like a great idea...

The "red water" is wine, right? Is it just wine from Earth? How much did Buri drink, if Naomi feels like getting drunk off his breath? Or is that just an aspect of Xenayan physiology?
It does, and it avoids the need for offensive war.

Yes, in much the same sense as "tasty furry thing".

He's gotten back home the next day.
 
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