((Let me make some changes then... I respect you made the first claim in the area 
. If you still don't like it, let me know.))
((EDIT: Changes made. Hope this is better! Let me known if its not, and I'll make further changes...))
. If you still don't like it, let me know.))((EDIT: Changes made. Hope this is better! Let me known if its not, and I'll make further changes...))
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