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Well, I for one am very pleased by the rythm of this AAR because even when I come and look once every week or less there have been only a few installments not the pages and pages you can expect from your more prolific brother writers :p .
So please, Vald, keep up as it is :D !

Whoops ! And praise for the ongoing quality of your story too ;) !
 
Chapter two, part X

Benedict stayed for dinner, but soon afterwards claimed that the toils of travel had left him exhausted and withdrew.

Once back in his room he quickly changed his cloth into something nondescript and doused the lights. The he waited for a while until he was certain nobody was near his room, then he quietly slipped out of the room and into the garden.

At the back of the garden there was a huge rose bush, only a few wizened flowers still clinging to its limbs, but most of the leaves where still there. Benedict approached the bush and then carefully slipped behind it and pulled out a small key from behind a loose stone in the garden wall, fitting the key into the small abandoned looking door behind the bush he opened it surprisingly without a sound. He slowly peered through the door. Satisfied that no one was around he crouched and walked through closing the door behind him.

Moments later he stood in the hollowed out wall. The space was dark and damp, but out of experience he reached out and grabbed a lamp from an unseen ledge, then he quickly and with out seeing lighted the lamp. He stood for a moment letting his eyes adjust then he looked left and right down the narrow tunnel like structure before moving to the right.

He walked slowly, trying to avoid the damp walls, he passed a few more doors, until he finally stood in front of a door, almost identical to the one he had entered. He produced another key from another hiding place and turned it in the door. He blew out the lamp and carefully opened the door, only to reveal another dark room, this one smelling of stale water from the canals and fresh wood. Slowly his eyes readjusted and allowed him to take in his surroundings, he was in a small shed, used for boat building and storage, he draped a piece of canvas over the door and stepped around the permanently half finished Gondola that hid the door from the casual observer.

Benedict carefully stepped to the door; the small building was located at a small landing at an unobtrusive side canal, not a place with a lot of traffic. He eased the door open and exited onto the landing then he carefully walked up the stairs to a completely deserted small market square that got its supplies from the small landing in the daytime.

Benedict quickly moved further in to town, distancing himself from the hidden exit. He had no real goal for the night, but the overall purpose was to find out more about both Carmagnola and the merchant houses entangled in the eastern trade. The real gem would be to find out something hidden.

He moved in to the working parts of town, away from the Palaces and large houses of the traders and officials, into the area of artisans and local trade. Here he went to a local Tavern and quietly seated himself. The barmaid came over,

“Antonio, it has been awhile since you where in town, the usual?”

“Yes, please my dear, do you know if that Frenchman, Renaud is in town?”

Well, yes, he was here yesterday, I expect him to come around later. You should be careful though, the Doge’s men have been asking for him too.”

“Oh,” the man she knew as Antonio looked vary, “But you still think he’ll be back?”

She smiled, “well, where would our profit go if we told on our special brand of customers? Besides, even the Doge needs to buy his information once in a while.” With a toss of her hair and waving hips she slowly moved to the bar to fill his order.

So the Doge wants him too? Perhaps there is something to be had here?

Benedict settles in for the wait, nobody bothers him, the Tavern is known in the community as a place to buy the right information on your business partner, and nobody wants to be ousted as being overly curious.

Fortunately he didn’t have to wait that long. Moments later the familiar figure of the small Frenchman appear by the door. Benedict remained seated, certain that the barmaid would relay his presence and that the little man would get around sooner or later, he didn’t want to appear eager.

The diminutive man popped his nose over the counter and ordered wine, then he turned to the nearest customer and engaged in a discussion with the man’s chest, before finally the barmaid bent low and whispered something in his ear. The small man nodded his thanks and slowly started a tour round the room.

Benedict watched with an amused detachment, tempered by the fact that the man was very competent at his job and that the small man had absolutely no awareness of the entertainment his low stature provided.

Slowly as a fish circling the bait Renaud went through the room, before he finally chose a chair at Benedicts table.

“So Antonio, you wanted to see me?”

Benedict nodded, “I’ve been in town for a few days and I need some information on some potential partners for trade in the east before I leave for Alexandria again.”

“Alexandria, Eh? Well, some houses trade in the east through Alexandria, but most of them go through Constantinople.”

Benedict faked a grimace, “Ah well, truth be told, I have a deal set up going through Constantinople, to the Genoese colonies of Kaffa and Kerch.”

“Ah, I see, yes off course the Venetian traders cannot be seen doing that, so you’re the front and you want to avoid getting hung out to dry? Why use me, you know your way around here?”

“Well, I have been away and I don’t know these minor houses that well,” he continued to produce a revised list of names, in part similar to the one Arn and Sif had provided.

“These houses? What do you need to know?”

“The usual, an unfinanced trade or a swindled partner, something that could topple a burgeoning merchant family,” he smiled to himself, “or help them to finance that trade, at a cost.”

Renaud nodded in understanding, that was the way of the game, if you were an honest man you didn’t use that hold over your partner unless it was needed, if you were less than honest, you used it to the fullest extend, he didn’t care, he just provided the information.

“I can have some of this ready by tomorrow, though I need to check a few of these families, some of them are not into the eastern trade at all as far as I know.”

They better not be, I particular placed them on the list to test you. “Well you can sort the list then and only provide the information for the right ones. That should reduce the price as well.” He stood up and drained hi wine, “until tomorrow then.”
 
Is this short "Frenchman" going to sport a funny hat too? ;)
 
For those of you who are still reading after this, it will not be as long as anticipated, but luckily this means it will also move a tad faster (thoug it is allready moving faster than I expected.)

THIS is already moving faster than you had expected?!? Ye gads, that's a scary prospect! :p

Regardless, fast or slow, long or short, I'm enjoying this greatly. Are you going to play Venice against Genoa? Historically, it was the Genoese who took over the leading role from the Venetians in Byzantium after the Byzantine reconquest of Constantinople in 1261, so I'm sure a lot of Venetians would be aching to once again get control over the trade in Constantinople, just as a lot of Genoese would be loathe to see the Venetians do just that.

Anyway, keep up the good work, as long as you want.
 
Suyvesant, Thanks, well I never expected to post as many or as long posts as I actually have already, Hence the sloow AAR. :)

I did however have a problem with the lack of forward movement andthe number of detailed plots, and that's what I'm adressing :D

as to Genoa, I never really expected much to come of that, it was primarily a plot device to intice or explain why the Venetians would want an alliance with Byzans (if they ever get to the negotiations) :)

V
 
Well, considering the role the Venitians played in the sacked and taking apart of the Byzantine Empire by the "Crusaders", is it really a wonder they were not exactly welcome in Constantinople after its reconquest ?

Now, what is it with Frenchmen ? I will end up questioning your motives there :D !

Good work as always . Apart from that V., I'd expect there would be times of fast-paced action tempered by moments of leisurely ones, at least when you're not a war-mongering world-conquering tyrant :p .

Only one remark, night in the Middle Ages was not what it is today and there were remarkably very few people going abroad exception made for some outlaws and a very few wealthy people and their hired guards. I'm afraid we're all imagining too many going-ons then who were for these people very frightening.
 
TF, you are absolutely right, but the Genoese makes for much worse allies than the Venetians game wise.

Oh and who say that Benedict is a lawabiding citizen? ;) I figure somebody got to go to the tavern in the evening if not the night, and this particuallr tavern are very well visited especially after dark. ;)

V
 
Originally posted by Valdemar
TF, you are absolutely right, but the Genoese makes for much worse allies than the Venetians game wise.

Oh I was in no way suggesting that !

Originally posted by Valdemar
Oh and who say that Benedict is a lawabiding citizen? ;)

What are you suggesting there :eek: ! I am shocked, good sir, that you should allow such a foul character to soil these pristine premises, truly shocked indeed :D !
 
Originally posted by Valdemar
To anybody who might still be reading this, ;)


So the conclusion is that I'll continue the detailed plot at least Venice out, then reduce the detail a little for a while, but still keep the plot oriented, detailed character driven style.

For those of you who are still reading after this, it will not be as long as anticipated, but luckily this means it will also move a tad faster (thoug it is allready moving faster than I expected.)

V


I think this is a good choice on your part. With the detail you've been putting into the story I was worried about you caving in under the weight of the load. :D There is also the fact that with long delays between posts it can be very hard to remember enough of the facts to keep the story straight. It's still an interesting read Valdemar and I’m looking forward to more. :cool:

Joe
 
Joe, that was very good observation, that's exactly what happened, I had so much fun that the subplots grew on me and then I lost sight of the overall story line. Finally I got stuck, I need to turn the conference or negotiations with the Doge into something tangible, but it just isn't happening.:(

I have decided to write one or two all consuming posts that resolve all of this Venice stuff ( and let's Norgs of the Hook :) ) then return to the more forward movement.

I will however not drop the detail level, but move it into the form it was (as I see it) in Constantinople, that is, small subjects gets lots of attention (like the councilmeeting) then a lot gets glossed over and then return to a given subject.

Next post Wednesday if I'm lucky.

Thanks again all and especially you storey for unwittingly rekindling this. :)

V
 
Thx Valdemar for a exelent AAR. :)
 
Chapter Two, Part XI

Another couple of weeks passed without word from Carmagnola or any significant breaks in the negotiations.

Stefanos had met with Petrini a couple of times but nothing significant had come of it. The rest of the delegation was becoming restless as they had less and less to do and the weather got worse.

They were now well into the autumn and Venice had become a dreary and damp place, plagued by rain showers and high winds, only occasionally interspersed with sun.

Only Benedict still seemed to have some purpose, he left a couple of times a week to meet with different contacts, mostly Renaud, though only Stefanos truly knew that. Finally Renaud had delivered and Benedict now had a complete overview that would allow Stefanos to know which houses could be persuaded.
That left Benedict free to pursue the odd presence of Carmagnola in Venice, but he had to thread lightly as this was an area less prone to sell its information at a Tavern.

One morning when the sun finally peeked through the clouds for the first time in days, Stefanos finally felt he had the background to pressure Petrini, he ordered several delegation members to join him in the dining hall and asked Arn and Sif to witness it all. As the small group seated themselves around the table Stefanos stood up and held up his hand for silence.

“All, I’ve come by some information and it now time that we get to work and earn our pay.” The small group smiled, they all knew that the waiting was part of the game, the Envoy continued, “I have asked Petrini to meet me here an hour after noon and then I will broach the true subject of this delegation, the alliance against Athens and the Turks.”

A hush followed his statement, they all knew off course that this was the goal, but so far nothing substantial had been placed on the table and thus the usual tactic of offering something and then slowly escalating the stakes until the true matter could be presented was being tossed out the window. Stefanos looked at their faces.

“I know this it not the way we usually do it, but I have confidence we can pull it of, I have something else to tell you. I front of you there are a number of lists containing small and not so small merchant houses, some of them on the Council of ten, some not, some of them looking to become members, some of them influencing members.”

As one the men looked down over their lists and Stefanos could see recognition and surprise drift across their faces as the names revealed themselves to them.

“Each of the lists contains details as to their transactions in the eastern trade. You are to seek them out and make sure that they understand the following. We are going to tie their trade concessions and favorable tariffs to the success of the upcoming alliance, not only gaining the alliance but also honoring it. You will threaten those already in the trade and wave the promise of admission to those who are not. You can discuss altered number of trade concessions and traders and higher and lower tariffs. You are not to promise anything substantial, I will change matters when we get back, but make no promises.”

A murmur rose among the men, and more than a few delegates smiled at the prospect of being on the offensive for once.

“You will have two days to complete this,” he raised his hand to still the objections, “You don’t have to succeed in convincing all of them, just make sure the word get out.” He looked down the table and nodded to one man, “You, you have different task, that’s why your list is so short. You will have to go to Genoa.” The man looked surprised but nodded.

“You will take this letter, addressed to the Genoese Doge and his Council, it has no real content, so do not be overly concerned should you loose it.” The man was about to object, looking indignant that Stefanos could suggest such a thing, but the foreign advisor merely smiled, “off course you can bring it securely to its destination, but I don’t want you to. Your job is the hardest of all, you have to pretend you go in secrecy, but at the same time make sure the Doge’s men know where you are going, and hopefully who you are to see.”

The man nodded catching on, “You want them to know we talk to the Genoese, so that we may be able to use that as a pressure as well.”

“Yes, I’m sure the Doge has spies in Genoa as well, so I would like you to seek audience with the Genoese council and deliver a message. Another message than the one in the letter, you are to tell them that I am considering opening a closer relation between Pera, Kerch and Kaffa and our beloved city. For far too long we have relied on only one partner, it is time Byzantium woke up and began feeling the power.”

One of the other delegates looked up curiously, “What is the content of the letter then? I mean, if its empty and they steal it won’t they know its a trap?”

Stefanos nodded, “it is a discreetly formulated request for opening correspondence regarding the trading right of the Genoese on terms very alike the Venetians. Enough, hopefully to make them worry.”

The delegate nodded his thanks.

“If nobody else have any questions, then I‘ll adjourn the meeting, Petrini will be here in another hour or so and I would prefer if most of you where gone by then. Make sure nobody gets access to the information on that list, it has costs us quite a lot of money and is likely to be of use later in the detailed trade negotiations with those families.”

*****
Petrini walked into the study Stefanos had claimed as his own, his usual arrogant attitude tempered by curiosity over the unusual summons he had received.

“Milord, so good to see you again, I gather you have some important news, perhaps from the latest Galley from Corfu, since you asked me to joined you?”

“Please Petrini, have a seat, some wine perhaps, dried fruit?”

“Wine yes, that would be nice, the sun is finally shining, no I have just dined, lucky that I had time today, my days are full of the Doge’s business.”

“So Petrini, I have come to a conclusion on our earlier discussions...”

“Ah, yes the trade concessions, we feel that there is an important need to look at the quotas for when the tariffs are imposed, the recent figures clearly indicate that..”

Stefanos waved off the interruption, “I don’t think you understand, Petrini, I‘m not here to make concessions on trade or discuss lowering the level of tariffs, I’m here to discuss how we easiest manage to return the status of Venetian traders to normal trade relations like the rest of the world.”

The Greek could almost hear the Italian’s mouth clamp shut. He had not seen that one coming.

“You see my dear Petrini, we have come to the conclusion that we are not getting enough out of the trade with you, compared to what we could get elsewhere and we need more money if we are to support an army large enough to stand against the Turks.”

“But you have an agreement with the Turks?”

“Ah, yes, but then there is the matter of Athens allying it self to most of Italy, and”

“Now wait, it is only to allies, not really..”

“That is not the matter, we do not feel we can in all honesty indulge such a lenient attitude towards Venetian traders and have come to the conclusion we need to normalize the relationship. Could you please inform the Doge of our decision?”

Stefanos knew he was playing a dangerous game, if Petrini didn’t offer up the idea of alliance, then the window of opportunity could very well be closed.

Petrini looked flustered and Stefanos allowed him self a sip of wine to give the Italian time to think.

“All right then what do you want?” Petrini had a clear feeling that Stefanos was fishing for something and he had to get it out in the open.

“Funny you should mention it, we would like to offer Venice a chance to join an alliance with the Byzantine Empire, a mutual military alliance of support and defense of course.”

Petrini looked taken aback, the Duchy of Athens was a simple thing, but the other Italian states and most importantly, the Ottomans lurked in the background and he knew it.

“And for that you would keep the trade concessions and lowered tariffs?”

“Let’s just say my report to the council would be far more favorable than it is right now,” Stefanos glanced at a pile of papers on his desk, indicating the unfinished and nonexistent report.

For once Petrini seemed at a loss for words, he looked searchingly at the Greek as if looking for signs that this was a joke, that the Envoy was out of mind, or trying to bluff, but no such signs appeared, Stefanos appeared as cool and calm as ever. Finally the Doge’s assistant managed to find his speech.

“An interesting idea, my good friend, I’m sure the Doge will be intrigued, we have no prior commitments that will conflict with such an alliance and I’m sure we can find a way to compensate the Venetian traders for the hardship any wars might impose on them.”

Stefanos shook his head, “No you misunderstand, I’m going to report that the special concessions to Venice should be removed or reduced. If on the other hand you join our alliance, I just might reduce that wording to a more lenient reconstruction of those concessions.”

Petrini stood up a tad too fast and bowed stiffly at Stefanos, “I see, I will report this to the Doge, I trust you will give us a few days to ponder your generous offer?”

Stefanos nodded, a couple of days were exactly what he needed for his plans to take effect. “Off course my dear friend, we are not leaving right away, though a winter in Venice is not of the most pleasant experiences? Or so I’ve heard.”

Petrini merely nodded his farewells and headed out the door.

As he left, his arrogance had been replaced with uncertainty and insecurity, a touch of the earlier anger still visible in his face.
 
Ah, I love the smell of diplomacy in the morning. It smells like... deceit. ;) :)
 
Gulps !... Looks like friend Stephanos enjoyed his bit of diplomacy with a knife on his opponent's throat :D !
Good for him. And he's right too, nothing like threatening to cut their purse's strings to help them focus on the problem :p !

And of course thanks to you V. Without you there we would be made poorer by missing your tale.
 
Sytass, deceit, me :eek: how on earth did you get that idea? ;) more like brute force brought on by the dual nescesity of a stleed plot and the Greek need. :)

TF, exactly, if I had the tech and EU supported it, a reverse trade embargo, refusing to trade goods in Venice would have been the right choice :D

Thanks both for reading.

V