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-= 119 =-

July 1783
South Carolina



"You have failed me, Reginald." Black rose slowly from behind Edward Rutledge's desk, staring at the sweating captain. Except for a roaring, cheerfully lit hearth the study was dark and Captain Barcer couldn't make out much in the flickering light. Black nodded at the guard by the door, who saluted and gratefully fled the stifling heat. With the fire and torrid weather it had to be over ninety (32 deg Celsius) in the room.

When they were alone, he returned his cold, black gaze to Barcer. "I'm waiting."

"Twasn't my fault!" The captain winced at the whine in his voice and tried again. "I did as you asked 'n we certainly have the volunteers. Seems t'ain't a man in the state who don't want to kill himself an injun or nig who don' mind his place...."

"But?"

"We don' have the equipment, suh. We don' have the credit to pay the tailors for uniforms, nor to buy muskets nor powder 'n shot. Then there are the swords, and..."

"A militiaman does not need a sword."

"No, suh, but his officers do, and 'e needs a bayonet. We're hard pressed as it is securin' the supplies to our army in the field, and I've still not 'eard feedback on my report that someone's divertin' goods to Georgia."

"I am tired of your excuses, Reginald." Black's voice never rose or quickened in anger. It didn't need to. "The economy is healthy, the people prosperous. You are trying to tell me we can't outfit a few volunteers?"

"Respectfully, suh, every able bodied man in Carolina is mo' than a few. Most of the country's credit was used up outfittin' an expedition Canada-way 'gainst the injuns there."

"Ridiculous." And troubling. Fate seemed to conspire against his plans. The Cherokee war couldn't be going better: No defeats to hurt morale, but no major victories either, which kept the population angry and anxious. On the other hand, John Preston's messages from Georgia hinted the resistance was getting overconfident. While the Iroquois had shown token support to their Cherokee brothers by granting free passage and access, an idea that angered and alarmed many Americans, there was no real way for them to take advantage of the offer. Some Frenchman tried to convince the Lakota and Shawnee to join the fighting, which would have been quite useful....but the message had been intercepted. Now America divert Carolinan resources for their efforts elsewhere. That could spoil his plans. "I need those men in the field."

"I understan', sir, but as I said we jus' don't have the resources. If we could fin' out what's happenin' down in Georgia..."

Black scowled. Rutledge's brother in Congress was supposed to watch for this kind of thing. He was also starting to ask pointed questions about Edward's health. He'd have to be dealt with.

"NO....."

"Suh?" Barcer stepped forward as Black stumbled into the desk, breathing hard. "Suh, are you...?"

"Leave me," Black hissed.

"Suh?"

"GO! And Captain, I don't care if you have to sack every tailor-house in Charleston and they're armed with sticks! I want those men practicing in the field within a week!" Black's face shone bright red in the hot room, he looked fit to explode.

"Yes, suh!" Barcer fled.

Black heaved himself up with some effort and glared at the door. After several seconds the pounding in his ears faded along with the pain. His breath slowed, and panic reverted to a calm serenity. He straightened and smiled soberly. "So, you are still there Edward? How amusing." He rose and paced to the hearth, removed his jacket and rolled up his sleeves. "Remarkable really, Edward. Your predecessor didn't last half as long. Did you not appreciate my plans for your brother?"

He jerked to a halt, and an outside observer would have seen his face contort. "Don't..."

"Don't what, Edward? Kill him? I probably wouldn't have. He proved his usefulness in tying up the vote on a new northern state and pushing my agenda. Now, however? You were disobedient, Edward. You must be punished."

Yes, he could still feel Rutledge inside, struggling to break free. Hammering. Screaming. Black chuckled as he stared at the fire. "Whatever happens to your brother, Edward, is entirely your doing." He straightened and lurched half a step towards the fire. Black narrowed his eyes. "You are still trying to win? You can't, you know. You fought your whole life to be in control of people and situations, and now you cannot even control your own body. I think that's the saddest thing I've ever heard." He chuckled.

"Very well, let me teach you about disobedience." Black abruptly pushed his hand into the fire.

He watched calmly as the flesh first turned red, then darkened with trails of acrid smoke. He felt no pain. That was for Edward Rutledge's pleasure alone. He listened to the agonized cries and tears echoing in his mind, and just before his hand would have charred to ash Black pulled it out. He watched impersonally as bone, muscle, flesh and blood began to knit and regenerate. By morning there would be a red blemish, little more.

He would allow no further resistance to his rule.

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Catknight...

You made my day when I saw the graphic of the "frack" response bar! That's what I'm going to think every time I see one from now on. :D

Stuyvesant, btw, that's a fake swear word made up for the TV show Battlestar Galactica.

Sorry I've been behind on my reading... I will catch up!

Rensslaer
 
First, thanks for giving a bit more insight into the...shall we say...Black/Rutledge "relationship." ;) So he acts as a type of spirit, possessing that which he wishes to possess. One wonders why he does not go directly for Heyward. And further, and as you mentioned, it seems rather ironic that a man like Rutledge who has made a career out of controlling people cannot gain control of himself.

As for the "nasty word," I would not spend more than a second on it. "Nig" is hardly anything compared to the language that was most likely used during the day. I prefer to use "negra" which is no less offensive, but not near as politically incorrect in today's verbage (days around the dinner table with the grandparents can give you quite an education on the prejudices in the south, I can tell you. :rolleyes: )

But I would take a look at some of the word usage used above in terms of dialect. At times, I was not sure if you meant Barcer to be southern or Cockney. A sentence like "No, suh, but his officers do, and 'e needs a bayonet" provides two dialects, it seems to me. The "suh" suggests southern, while the "'e" suggests Cockney (what with dropping the H's and all.) It's a fine line, and one I know all too well. I think most of it comes across fine, but some of it did not read perhaps like you wanted it to, dialect wise. Not a breaker in any way, but something I thought you might want to hear, writing wise. Certainly no offense meant, to be sure. As I said - dialect usage can be a tricky thing. ;)
 
Rensslaer: Actually I didn't know Battlestar... used frack. I just know I do :) I used to watch the old series though, I wouldn't be surprised if that's where I picked it up. :)

J. Passepartout: Yep, Rutledge is still there.

jwolf: Hopefully! I liked the old Ed, even if he was a manipulative bastard. Black's very powerful, but he's not omnipotent nor omniscient. We've seen him make mistakes. Rutledge may still have a trick or two up his sleeve.

coz1: Remember as of right now Black doesn't know about Heyward. He suspects there might be a problem, but isn't sure. He went after Rutledge because he saw him as the easiest and quickest way to gain substantial power in America.

I thought long and hard on the 'nasty word.' Though I have hopes for it ending happy, this is by far the darkest (and longest!) story I've written. A part of me is obviously concerned with offending or upsetting people, but at the same time I do want people to be as shocked and alarmed as I am about what Black's trying to do to America. The scary part is, and I know Dead William and I among others have discussed this, is that if you rip out the supernatural elements something very similar could have and did happen. The US in 1780 could easily have been warped into something horrible.

So, for me it's a balance between being as sharp and hard as I need to to make a point, without upsetting people. I am uncomfortable with some of what I've written. I may be worried about nothing, but for me at least I'm in dangerous waters. :)

As for the accent, you're probably right. I can speak a fairly good southern accent considering I'm a born and bred Yankee, and I spoke those lines aloud as I typed them, but as you said: Writing accents are HARD. I'll have to practice before Barcer comes back - he's definitely not Cockney. :rofl:
 
Nice to know that Rutledge is still there. Not that I like Rutledge much, I think he's an unscrupulous man all by himself, but my enemy's enemy and that sort of thing... Black is obviously up a few notches on the Ladder of Badness.

The use of that racial slur, though offensive, seemed wholly appropriate for the reasons you outlined. It fits with the time and it shows how people are sliding down that slippery slope. I would not worry about using it: from the context of the story, it is clear that you only use to show how these people are bad. Or misguided. Whatever you want to call them, it is clear that you are not glorifying or justifying the word.

So, is Black trying to break up the United States from the inside? Make Carolina so powerful that it can secede from the Union and become independent? Or does he wish to eventually extend his influence over the whole United States, twisting all of it to fit his evil purpose?
 
-= 121 =-

September 1783
Georgia



"Colonel Preston, I'm happy to see you." Eric Crawford, de facto leader of the Georgian raiders, strode across the room dressed in his white robes and cloak, both stained with dirt. He looked exhausted, with wild hair and the beginnings of a beard, and saddle sore from too many days on horseback. His riding boots clicked on the hard wood floor and he smelled of swamp and horseflesh.

Preston on the other hand looked alert and fresh. He'd arrived at the plantation doubling as Georgia Army Headquarters the night before and filled himself with enough coffee to rouse the dead. He wore no uniform. John rose and shook Crawford's hand. "We expected you back last night."

"There was some trouble at the Altamaha. We took care of them though." Too many days in the saddle indeed, but good days. The redcoats sent troops in piecemeal: Easy targets for Crawford's raiders. The British had no cities and just two forts in all of Georgia, and just last month the fledgling government had appointed him a general. America and France wanted to see how well the Georgians held up before recognizing them, which vexed Crawford, but if the Brits continued to fight this incompetently... "I heard you had a run in yourself."

John sat, shaking his head. "It wasn't anything. There were a hundred moving to Fort Frederica. We trailed them in and picked off stragglers." With 500 men, Preston could easily have crushed their entire force, but not without it being obvious they were professional soldiers. Rutledge had been particular: There could be no hint of American involvement in this rebellion. At first this bothered him, but as the days and skirmishes passed John decided the last thing he wanted was another war.

Crawford, naturally, disagreed. "I wish you had crushed them."

Preston glowered. "There was no need."

Eric sat and drank his coffee straight from the pot, the hot liquid flowing gratefully into his belly. He put down the pot and frowned. "We have the British on the run. Now is our best chance to crush them once and for all. When you came here you were eager to kill as many of them as you could get your hands on. What happened?"

"There was no need," John repeated.

"You aren't growing shy, are you?" Crawford smiled as the American leapt to his feet. "So there's still a spark in there somewhere. Good!"

Preston leaned across the table. "My mission is to help you make this land unfit for British rule. We're doing that. Do you really think it makes a difference if I send a few more of them - and us - home in boxes?"

"I do. We want them out of Georgia."

"They are out of Georgia. A few forts don't count."

"Don't they? They allow any Brits in our territory to rest and resupply. Damn it Preston, I have the numbers but your men have the skill. Together we can chase the British out of North America!"

"Tom Heyward and Benedict Arnold tried to chase them out of North America. They're still here."

"Only because of your damned politicians!"

That, John reflected, is true.

Crawford leaned forward. "Colonel, I don't understand this change in you."

John didn't understand either, not really. All he knew is that he probably still had a wife and needed to fix things someday. She'd made a horrible mistake, but maybe he'd made a few as well. Plus, as the months passed he found himself tired of killing Englishmen. Just last week he'd slashed some boy from chest to bowels in one terrible blow. Certainly he couldn't have played a role in his father's death. He couldn't kill every single Briton, that was simple logic. There had to be another way to deal with that emptiness. Mostly he was just tired period.. "Look, Crawford...."

"General Crawford." Eric liked his title, but more importantly he'd need to establish dominance if his plan was to go forward.

"General Crawford," Preston scowled. "Have you taken a good look around? The people we're trying to save fear or hate us..."

"Not the ones I've met!"

"You kill the ones you meet! How can you be so eager to help Georgia, and yet hate Georgians?"

"I hate traitors."

"Anyone trying to make a living here is a traitor?"

"Anyone making a living that supports the current tyranny is!" Crawford shouted. "Oh aye, I know what you are going to say Colonel, but I have you. Most people just want to get by and stick to surviving, you'll say and you'd be right. However, simply by not making a choice they're supporting the status quo. As long as that means British rule, that makes them enemies. I do not kill anyone out of pleasure, sir, but I will do whatever is necessary to free Georgia. If that means a few sympathizers get hurt, then that is not my problem."

Preston shook his head and stared out the window, thinking of Charleston where life made just a little more sense.

"I have a mission for you, Colonel." John's gaze snapped back. "Are you aware of the British movements in East Florida?"

"A little. I know they're using Saint Augustine for resupply by sea, and that's the home base for the sorties they send into Georgia."

"That's correct," Crawford nodded. "We've learned that a General Burgoyne has landed there with four thousand men. As you know, our patriots now number almost five thousand. I am going to go down there and crush him."

"Outside of Saint Augustine?" John shot. "You're mad. The land there is swamp, completely unsuited for raiding."

"We're quite used to raiding through swamps," Crawford reminded him with a smile. "Think of it, Colonel. The land down there doesn't allow for force concentration, which is something this Burgoyne would rely on. We'll be able to pick him off regiment by regiment. If your men hold the front, we can turn the flank and..."

"You want five hundred to hold a front against four thousand?"

"Not for long, I assure you. We will turn the flank and by the time they realize they're in trouble it'll be far too late. They'll be trapped in isolated pockets and we'll cut them to ribbons. Naturally I can probably spare a regiment to help you, but with your superior skill I don't see it being necessary. Once they're crushed we'll just walk into Saint Augustine - they still haven't recovered from the siege."

Preston stared at the man. Raiding outlying farms or small detachments and engaging in a standup battle were two entirely different things. He didn't trust these 'rebels' to stand against a band of Indians let alone a professional British army. If they fled, he'd be alone - a cavalry unit, in a swamp, against infantry. "You can't fight the entire force. You're not ready."

"Of course we are. We outnumber them." Crawford smiled. "Yes, we may lack battle experience, but I can assure you a Georgian can stand up to anything the British choose to offer. We've fought and we've bled, and with your help we will end this war."

Well, you're right about the war ending. "And if I refuse?"

"Then I'll tell your captains you're shy, and if they want wealth and glory they'll follow me."

Preston's jaw set. "Shy?" he snapped. "I've been in duels, General. Have you? I can arrange one!"

"I'm not interested in comparing our manhoods, Colonel. I want your men!"

They glared at each other. Finally Preston looked down. "I have no choice," he muttered. "We'll do it."

Eric's smile broadened. That'd been easier than he thought. "Good. Most of my men are back, we can leave within two days."

"Most of mine are still scattered. Anyway, if we're going to mass this many men for your one stroke we need to secure the supplies. We can probably be ready in a week. Less if you don't think we'll need the wagons."

"We shouldn't need much. An extra horse per man with powder, shot and food should do. We have the horses after all."

"Alright, then I just need my people to come in. Probably four days. It'd be better to secure the St James River immediately though. The last thing we need is this Burgoyne getting around us."

"I agree." Crawford's heart began to pound, his face flushed. At last! Georgia would be free at last! "We'll move out on schedule, and you can catch up. Once we're together we'll take it to them. I'm so happy we understand each other, Colonel."

John watched the white cloaked man leave, no longer tired and saddle worn and shook his head, drinking his coffee. A frontal assault by raiders. The world really was mad. Finally he stood, stretched and walked to the stables. As expected, his deputy commander was there working on his horse: Major March.

"Good morning, sir!" March put down a thick, steel brush and saluted.

"Morning, Major." Preston looked around suspiciously. "Any of them here?"

"No, sir. A pack of 'em rode in this morning, but they all went to bed and left caring for the horses to the local slaves. I think they're still at it."

John nodded, looked around again. No choice at all, it seems. "I want you to get a message to our men in the field: Tell them to make for our camp south of Savannah and wait for us. Send out a few riders around the plantation to intercept any incoming sorties, we don't want them coming here. In a few days the rest of us will go up and meet them."

March's brows rose in question. "Is everything alright, sir?"

"Yes. We're going home."
 
Hmm, there be alligators there. Perhaps wise to return home for Preston. And he seems to have a newfound strength (for lack of a better term.) I wonder if that won't serve him well in what may become a showdown with "Rutledge." He'd had his issues before, even if unspoken. The longer things go, the more he has a reason to bring those issues to the floor.

And good on the Georgian Crawfords. A big family down here! :D
 
Do I dare set myself up for yet another disappointment? I mean, Preston actually started to appear to have grown up a little! Will miracles never cease, or are we just bein' set up again? :confused:
 
Nice work; its taken a bit to catch up and I haven't been able to get the entire thread down yet, but it reads well. Can't wait to read the rest as you do it. Can I ask some questions though?

Are you planning on bringing the HOI part of it in later or are you doing a similar AAR in the HOI forum?

The events that you have, like the last one "Mr. Black's War"--are those in normal or are you coding those in to go along with your decisions and such?

Are you playing and then writing or are you writing and then using coding and such to mimic what you have written?

Again, its all very good.
 
Draco Rexus said:
Do I dare set myself up for yet another disappointment? I mean, Preston actually started to appear to have grown up a little! Will miracles never cease, or are we just bein' set up again? :confused:

I agree! John making a smart decision? :eek: Why the next thing you know he’ll make up with his wife and then what? Become friends with Tom? Good lord I might just start liking him. Of course he’s not out of Georgia yet so something could go wrong. ;)

Joe
 
On the issue of accents, please remember there is a high probability that these men were British, or their fathers or at most grand-fathers were born in Britain. Some trace of British dialect is not really remarkable. Britons might have sneered at 'American' speech as rustic and crude, but there was a very high percentage of recent British immigrants in the colonies.

That said I'd stay away from Cockney unless you really mean it. :)

This is interesting: LINK.

And I thought glottal and velar fricatives were illegal excepts from the Kama Sutra! ;) Or lost races from Star Trek, or festival dishes. Or something like that. Who knew? :rolleyes:
 
Stuyvesant: We'll have to find out what Black's plan is. Georgia was a big part of it, but the EU2 AI had its own opinion on the matter. :)

coz1: Yes, a very large family! I guess Crawford's good at recruiting!

J. Passepartout, Draco Rexus: I'm honestly not sure (whether you're being set up or not.) Preston surprised me too!

carlec: We're probably done with the HOI portion. That was my initial plot hook. I'd played Allenby's 1914 scenario and it came out a virtual draw if the US didn't become involved. I'd seen several cases where left to its own devices the HOI AI would happily keep fighting until 1948 with no clear winner. While playing one game Germany and England started trading atom bombs and I thought: Hm...... All this said, being done with HOI doesn't mean I'm done with the twentieth century...

Mr. Black's War is clearly not a normal event, unless you believe early America was manipulated by a body-possessing spirit. :) The two recent events dealing with Mr. Black and the one for Vermont was hand coded. In general I play a little ahead, then I write. If I know something's about to happen I'll code it into the game. I knew Black was going to go after Georgia and start messing with Carolina, so I could put those events in and react as I played. The Vermont event came up as a result of my writing, so I have it set to trigger when I restart the EU2 game.

In game I'm about one year ahead of the current writing. At that point I'll probably have to sit down and do some major event changes, because I expect the EU2 AI to play a serious role in the conclusion of this story.

Storey: That is true, something could still happen! Preston surprised me this round. As I wrote for him I realized: "Wait, he's making sense." No matter how hard I pushed myself into Preston's role, he kept making sense. I don't know if the character's changing on me or not. (Anyone who says authors have full control over their characters hasn't written enough.) It's possible he just sounds sane compared to Crawford, who's a fanatic.

I don't think he's out of rough waters yet, but I think Preston's starting to put two and two together and realize all this pent up bitterness isn't solving anything. To go back to an earlier comment though, I don't know if he's ready for Mr. Black though: He's well out of Black/Rutledge's league.

Director: You know....I consider myself a reasonably bright guy. That said, your link really hurt my head. :D

Still, it's a nice article! I think I'll just be careful of my accents for awhile. Either that or Captain Barcer had a really strange upbringing!
 
-= 122 =-

October 1783
Florida



"Wish you joy, gentlemen." John Burgoyne, Lieutenant-General of the Florida Army, beamed at his colonels. "We move out at dawn tomorrow."

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Aren't I handsome?

His regimental commanders looked startled, as indeed did his adjutant. Burgoyne was a decent strategist and did well in social settings, being the very heart of dash, bravery and courtesy. He wasn't good at delegating though, and saw no reason to tell his staff anything until absolutely necessary.

Colonel Buckland, the veteran of Heyward's campaign against Saint Augustine, spoke first. "Into Georgia?"

"Well, of course into Georgia!" Burgoyne beamed as a servant came in with a thick roast, its savory aroma filling the room. He cut into it with a will as more servants brought out fruit and vegetables, the true treasure of the West Indies. "MacArthur, your plate? That's a fellow. Now then...yes, Georgia. I wouldn't tell this to anyone but you, gentlemen, but we have had agents in their rebellion for over a month now. Mister Crawford saw fit to try and build an army and infiltrating was as easy as kiss my hand. Buckland, a glass with you?"

The servants stood behind their employers, hands folded as the proper toast to king and country was made. One closed his eyes and listened intently, for if Burgoyne wasn't good at delegating, he was horrible at keeping secrets.

"The American detachment seems to have moved off, ostensibly to help draw supplies in for their army. They've not returned, however, while Mister Crawford has crossed the border into East Florida with some five thousand men."

"They must be moving slowly," Colonel MacArthur offered. "So many men and horse in this terrain."

"Aye, and their supplies are regrettable. No pontoons, no wagons. It seems Mister Crawford planned to just march up to us, flank us and so drive us out of Florida."

"Then he's a fool."

"Somewhat, yes." Burgoyne poised his knife at eye level, studying the chunk of beef impaled there. "Inexperienced is a better word." He ate.

"It's easy to underestimate the supplies one needs for such an advance," Buckland offered. "Just the food would weigh ...."

"Tons," Colonel McMillan offered. He had a gift for mathematics, but was shy and reluctant to expose himself..

Buckland had no such qualms. "Would it not be prudent to wait in Saint Augustine? I don't know what they hope to accomplish out in the field, but I can't see them doing anything at all to a fortified city."

"With respect," MacArthur retorted, "a fortified city we've lost before."

"There will be no incriminations at my table," Burgoyne said sternly. Then Major Buckland had been court-martialed, as was appropriate for losing Saint Augustine. He'd also been found completely blameless. "To answer your question though, Colonel, I think not. Our men tire of being picked off piece meal, and normally I'd say we were to invade Georgia in force they could slip around us and take Saint Augustine. Now it is a different thing. Mister Crawford seems eager to fight? Let us oblige him. Right up the Post Road, straight at them."

Behind McMillan's head, his servant smiled.

"Will they not expect us? Is that not their hope?"

"Probably and no doubt, Colonel. I have every faith in the stamina and skill of the British soldier against this rabble."
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I've been betrayed. Eric Crawford sat in his tent, nursing a cup of coffee by a fire billowing smoke from damp wood and leaves. Preston was supposed to be two days behind him. It was now five and the supply horses had arrived. There could be no mistake, the Americans weren't coming.

Well, damn them. Preston had been losing his heart and bowels for this fight for awhile. Let him go home and cry while real men finished the work.

The tree of liberty must be refreshed from time to time with the blood of patriots and tyrants. These words, first spoken by Thomas Jefferson, were Crawford's mantra, prayer to God and justification rolled into one. It'd be nice if only tyrants bled, of course, but life wasn't always that cut and dry. When one fought for freedom a few patriots would inevitably fall, and a few innocents too. That was simply the way life worked, and if Preston was too much of a coward and a child to realize that then Crawford didn't want his help. Let men handle the affairs of mankind. He'd deal with the backstabbing scrub later. He knew the rebellion's benefactor, a Mister Black, lived somewhere in South Carolina now. A few whispers in the right ear would take care of Colonel Preston.

He felt the thudding ground before he heard it. His men felt it also and looked around. Some rose from their tents, weapons drawn. A few paced over to their horses. Seconds later everyone relaxed - only one horseman approaching, hooves beating a rapid, staccato beat on the hard dirt Post Road, running very fast.

Crawford ran out when the horse stopped and he saw its rider, doubled over with exhaustion and panting almost as much as his sweating, shaking palmetto. He literally tumbled out of the saddle and men moved to support him.

"What are you doing here?" Crawford demanded. "You're supposed to be in St. Augustine."

The servant smiled shakily. "They're coming up the Post Road."

Crawford's eyes widened. "So soon?"

"Aye. Burgoyne has spies, he knows your general plans." The servant coughed. Two days hard ride had left him frail and exhausted. "He doesn't care, he plans to offer you battle."

"How very noble of him." The raider grinned. "Did he say who the spies were?"

"No."

"Too bad. Good work." Crawford exchanged salutes and walked away, thinking furiously. First I have to close this leak. I can team the men up in threes, with strict orders that if one tries to leave the other two are to take him down and raise the alarm. Second we'll have to change the attack plan. Back when he'd still hoped the Americans were coming, Crawford had planned a basic set piece battle with Preston's experienced cavalry holding the front and his men turning the flank. Yes, the Americans would take heavy losses..but it wasn't like they'd done much bleeding for Georgia up until then. Now though.... Yes, didn't the Post Road bottleneck about a day's ride south? That would do nicely for an ambush.
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"Colonel McMillan, a word with you?" John Burgoyne stood on the seaward side of Fort St. Mark overlooking the approaches to Saint Augustine by sea. Far below and behind him four British regiments, red squares perfectly exact, made final preparations for the long march to the border.

McMillan stepped next to his commander and followed his gaze to Eustasia Island east of the city. Formerly a smuggler's haven, it now served as Florida's key link with the sea. Three sloops and several merchantmen docked there, with ferries and ship's boats whispering back and forth to the mainland. "Sir?"

"How many men could we fit on those boats?"

The colonel narrowed his eyes. "Maybe fifty each on the sloops. A hundred..."

"A British soldier can put up with a little discomfort, McMillan."

"Sir." He stared again. "Then...eighty or ninety on the sloops, and I doubt the sailors will love you. Maybe hundred and fifty on the merchants. Two thousand in all."

Burgoyne nodded slowly. "Quite."

"Though they'll be packed like sardines, and God help us if there's a storm. But sir, I thought we were traveling up the Post Road?"

"I changed my mind." Burgoyne beamed. "Send a few companies up the road anyway, Colonel. If these Georgians have scouts, let them chew on that. As for the rest of us, I think we can steal a few marches on our friends."
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Crawford sat hunched over his horse's neck, listening to the drums and fifes of the passing redcoats. His scouts had sighted them hours before, an advance guard of company strength. At least four more companies, and no doubt the entire British army sprawled insolently along the road behind them at two to three mile intervals. He reasoned they'd be expecting a frontal assault somewhere near the elbow of the Saint Johns River. Naturally they'd never get that far.

His army spread over miles to Crawford's left, hidden in gully and behind ridge, within swamp and behind trees. An entire company waited covered in brush, so they looked like an uncommonly tall thicket. The deception wouldn't have to last long. As soon as the last of the Brits were in position they'd close in on all sides and crush this General Burgoyne.

Far to his left Crawford heard the pop-pop of muskets. What? What could they be shooting at? He lifted his head as the drums and fifes stopped. Yes, the British recognized gunfire as well. Heads twisted this way and that and their fine column crumbled. Their captain stepped forward, sword drawn. Crawford shook his head. He couldn't allow them to restore order.

"Advance!"

Hunting horns blasted the air, intended to and successful in startling the Brits. Crawford kicked his horse in the flank at the same time as much of his regiment, and a ghostly wall of white robes, cloaks and executioner's hoods appeared on the redcoat flank. Their captain paled. Two men dropped their muskets. One fired in panic, hitting a willow tree in New York.(*) Crawford grinned, a wolf about to enjoy its evening snack.

(*) If you have to ask, you had to be there. :)

"And take them down!"

Horses neighed and raiders roared, drawing swords, spears, pistols and even knives. Now this was a battle! Crawford grinned as he closed with the British front rank, fouling their attempts to load muskets. One or two shots, but by far the dominant sounds were the clanging of metal and the screams of dying men. Crawford hacked right, hacked left. Found the standard bearer, hacked his pretty flag down. One of the redcoats stabbed at his horse, who reared instinctively and kicked the man in the face. The British first rank fell into the second, who fell into the third and pandemonium reigned. As hoped the left end of Crawford's regiment wrapped up the company, smashing into their flank. More screams. A jet of blood as Eric stabbed a drummer of fourteen in the throat. Someone tried to leap on his horse, but missed and fell into his mate's bayonet. Back, back. One pistol shot passed so close to Eric's face that his ear burned despite the executioner's hood. He whirled and there was that fool of a captain, throwing his pistol away and weaving his sword at Crawford's horse. The captain stabbed. Missed. Eric pulled back on his reins, sawing into the horse's mouth and it reared in pain, striking the Brit in the head. He fell and the horse landed on top, crushing him instantly.

And in that breath of a second the battle ended. Redcoats fled eastward to be pinned against the river. They could be dealt with later, for now here came the second company, trotting up the road. They stopped one hundred yards away and started to form a firing line.

"Right!" Crawford cried, pointing at different 'captains' with his sword. "They have no cavalry, hit 'em in the side! The rest of you, with me!" He noticed his sword arm was bleeding. No matter, none at all. He'd defeat them company by company if he had to, all the way back to Saint Augustine and into their little boats.

"General!" A messenger pushed through the milling throng of his reforming regiment. "Sir, it's Burgoyne!"

"Yes," Crawford waved grandly at the British firing line. "We'll take him too!"

"He's hit our north! They're breaking!"

"WHAT?"

The British line opened fire.

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General John Burgoyne rode his white stallion through where the fiercest fighting had been. He'd hoped to maybe catch them in the flank, or at least still setting up by the river elbow. Hitting their rear had been unexpected and welcome. The swamp was littered with dying and dead men in white. Soldiers moved back and forth among the bodies, slitting throats and looting freely. Normally Burgoyne would never have tolerated such nonsense, but these weren't soldiers they'd been fighting. They were rebels at best, and terrorists at worst. Mercy would have to come from God, because it certainly wouldn't come from him.

"Colonel Buckland." Burgoyne stared at the blood and dirt stained man disdainfully. "Did you fight here or fall and roll around?"

Buckland flushed. "A bit of both, sir. One of them jumped from horseback onto me and we tumbled about. I gained the upper edge though."

"Oh? Quite." He paused. "How many men did we lose?"

"Not many, sure. I hear your 'decoys' lost maybe one hundred fifty. We couldn't have lost more than a hundred."

Burgoyne nodded. "So many for such a small bout. And them?"

"Well over fifteen hundred, sir. Many of them got away on horse, but in this swamp they'll founder for sure. I think we've seen the last of these Georgians."

"I agree, Colonel." Burgoyne waved grandly. "The blood of patriots and tyrants, you know."

"Sir?"

"Nothing, Colonel. Simply something I heard once."
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And another AI rebellion leaves its home province and runs into more than it can handle. :)
 
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That poor poor suffering willow tree! This is an outrage! New York has no part in this quarrel!

I find it interesting that Crawford knows Mister Black by that name and not by the name of the man Black is pretending to be.

Have you ever seen (or perhaps read the script of) The Devil's Disciple? It's one of Shaw's play's, and it involves Burgoyne as one of the main characters.
 
Thank you for your answers and insight.

Well written post yet again.
 
J. Passepartout said:
I find it interesting that Crawford knows Mister Black by that name and not by the name of the man Black is pretending to be.

:eek:! I didn't pick up on that until I read this comment. JP is on to something, and Crawford must be neck deep in some kind of evil skullduggery.

As for the tree, couldn't you just have had that British soldier commit "arboricide" against one of the local flora? ;)

Preston certainly diagnosed the situation correctly; I'm glad to see he bowed out of this one. Now you'll really have us wondering if you have him write tender words of love for Cassie. :p
 
Again with the tree-hate? ;)

And yes, I too noticed and wondered what was up with Crawford being familier with Black. I don't believe you've let that slip before.