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J. Passepartout: Four's a good start...but they were the easy four. Figure NC and SC definitely won't go along with any anti-Rutledge matters, so they need 4 of the last 6.

Fulcrumvale: I'm also from CT originally. I don't know how many times I passed the engraving on the Travelers Tower (near where Butler Tavern was) describing the Charter Oak incident. :)

GhostWriter: That'd odd. I would've sworn I'd read your site on the Iroquois but apparently not. My mind must be going. :( That'll be my next project!

Maximilliano: Thanks and welcome!

As for publishing, it's crossed my mind...though there are minor copyright issues, and even with the major rewrite it'd require to avoid those (along with editing and getting the plot in line) I'm not sure a publisher would like knowing the alpha/beta version was already posted publically. Still, it's crossed my mind Thanks for the compliment!

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General comment for EU2 players: If you haven't grabbed Europa Portugalis ... I recommend it. Earlier in this AAR I mentioned my shock and awe at seeing British Admiral Howe wandering around with 120 ships. Well... I was playing a game in 1740, and happened to wander into the med... where the Ottoman Empire had 380 in one nice fleet. In another game as Japan, I was mucking around in Korea when China joined in and crossed the border with 98,000 men. In 1433.

EP does a lot of work to the AIs getting them up to speed, and everyone develops similarly to history now. In the 1700s game you can almost sense the 'great powers' working to maintain a balance of power just like IRL. Colonization is stronger than in any other mod I know of, and as you can tell from above the AI puts up a much better fight. You, too, have increased resources and capability. I have no way of knowing, but I suspect the economy, men and ships fielded, etc. are much closer to IRL than you might find elsewhere. Heartily recommended, especially if you're not afraid of a fight.
 
-= 164 =-


Nova Scotia
July 1784


Babylon in all its desolation is a sight not so awful as that of the human mind in ruins.
- Scope Beardmore Davies (d. 1852)


A woman's scream pierced the morning air as His Majesty's Ship Reliance threaded through the shipping in Halifax harbor. She moved slowly, on coursers and a single spritsail alone. Few of her sails survived her rumble with Ranger, and many of the spares had been exposed to water long enough to mould alarmingly.

Most of her masts therefore were bare, not to mention bound with thick ropes to hold together despite the damage wrought by her American counterpart. She listed badly also, water from the pumps pouring from her in continuous streams. Captain Adam Bristol, standing stiffly on his quarterdeck in full uniform, hoped this was the reason two brigs and a frigate so far had signaled offering assistance and not the shrieking from below.

His crew crept along deck, shocked and terrified by her cries. They had a right Jonah aboard, to be certain, and even with the shore clearly in sight Reliance was by no means safe.

"Send word for the surgeon!" snarled Bristol.

"Aye, sir!" A little midshipman fled.

"Sir! Defiant is signaling!" called the signal yeoman.

"Tell him we don't need his bloody assistance and just leave the flags up this time!" Bristol closed his eyes and turned to his new lieutenant, Mr. Dawson. "Are the guns primed for the signal?"

Dawson looked quite as terrified as his men. "Aye, sir."

"Very well. In two minutes we'll come about." He glanced at the spot where his wheel should be. "I want two men on each side of the tackle controlling our rudder. I want this done smartly."

The midshipman approached. "Mr. Ramstein's compliments, sir. He begs to be excused, as he's with Mrs... the lady. He will report as soon as he may."

Bristol glared, then nodded. "That is probably the best place for him now. God help us all."

"Amen," murmured Dawson.
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I warned him this would result without the light, Ramstein crouched next to his patient, who sat on the floor glaring at him. Her blond hair flew wildly in all directions, and her dress was worn, crumpled and covered with dust and the occasional bit of tar that slipped through the ship's seams. Being the only woman on board, there was none to help her care for herself. "Madam, you must take physic."

Foster snarled like a caged animal, which at the moment was about right. The marine behind Ramstein stiffened, but so far she'd offered no violence whatsoever. He held his lantern high and she flinched as the light stabbed her eyes. They'd been obliged to remove her own lamp several days earlier when, in her passion, she'd knocked the lamp down and nearly set the ship on fire. Already somewhat unstable, obsessed with Heyward and what would happen in Halifax, left in the darkness, alone behind a wooden grate designed to keep her there...

"Mrs. Foster!" Ramstein reached for her. She screamed and smacked his hand away. Several decks above them, Captain Bristol cringed.

Ramstein suggested allowing her on deck for a few hours each day, under escort of course, hoping the fresh air and light would stave off madness. Bristol refused citing the good of the service. As if this does us any credit, he thought. "Madam, take your..." Ramstein sighed as she turned away. He'd hoped to avoid this. "Private, seize her."

The marine swallowed. His training hadn't prepared him for raving women. "Aye, sir." He placed his lamp on a barrel and walked past the doctor.

Foster screamed and backed away, but there was nowhere to go. He knelt beside her. She answered by punching him in the jaw, making his head snap back.

"Mrs. Foster!"

Her next attack barely missed. She howled as she struck his belt buckle. The private retaliated by backhanding her.

"Private!" Ramstein snapped.

"Always answered for my pa," the private muttered defensively.

It didn't answer here. Rather than being cowed, this encouraged her to try raking his eyes out. The marine twisted his face away and she scored across his cheek. He grit his teeth against the pain and finally, finally managed to grab her wrists.

She screamed once, then again as Ramstein grimly moved in and gripped her jaw. One hundred...no, two hundred drops of laudanum would hopefully put her to sleep long enough to find a hospital. She twisted violently and tried to spit out the liquid, but Ramstein held her jaw closed until she swallowed.

"Medicine has no answer to life long illnesses," he said, "but with recent traumas such as we see here, there are certainly measures at our disposal." Whether he said this to comfort her, the marine, or himself didn't appear. Ramstein was at sea with mental illnesses - the worst he ever saw were occasional melancholics who did well enough once used to their surroundings with occasional starting against lethargy. Finally he relaxed and sat back. "You can release her, private."

He obeyed. Foster continued to glare at them, but at least she'd quieted down.

Ramstein rose. "Let me see your face." He turned the private's head this way and that. "Just so. No damage, though I'm sure it stings, Here, take my handkerchief and hold it to your cheek until the bleeding stops. Good."

Over their heads their guns signaled Reliance's presence to the port admiral.

"I will report to the captain. The sooner she is gone, the better for us all I think." The surgeon nodded at his now docile patient. "Wait here until I return."
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Foster watched him leave. He left the grate caging her in open, and she too knew what the cannon firing overhead meant. It was now or never.

She knew Ramstein wanted to kill her. These last few days her mind worked so much more quickly and accurately, it was child's play to see through his deception. Even now she could feel his poison coursing through her limbs, trying to deaden them and quiet her mind. Angrily she fought against it.

Foster fought her entire life to get away from the perpetual hell of her childhood in the slums of London, warding off thieves, muggers and rapists all. She'd risen as high as any could without advantages of birth, and now they wanted to take it all away. Jealous, the lot of them. Jealous that a woman could rise so high. Yes, she saw through their treachery now. She knew perfectly well what that coxcomb of a marine was thinking: That his comrades would be busy docking the ship for an hour yet, that they were alone, that even were she to scream no one would come.

Well, she'd once again defy fate. She wouldn't go back to St. Giles. They couldn't make her. Never! She'd rather die.

"You first," she swore, stumbling to her feet.

The marine, jerked out of a reverie of his family, straightened. "Mrs Foster, please sit down." She didn't comply. "Madam?" He sighed, put away the doctor's handkerchief and reached out to grab her.

She kicked him. Hard. He roared and doubled over, but the guns overhead continued to bellow. "Bitch!" he lunged for her, but Foster pivoted away.

You tried to put me to sleep! she thought. Now you pay. She darted past him and slammed the wooden grate shut before he could turn.

"Let me out of here!"

"Rot in hell!" she cried. Picking up the marine's lantern she fled deeper in the hold.

God's death, they'll laugh, he thought, but there was no way around it. "Help!"

"Eleven." Eleven guns fired, two to go. Then they'd hear him. Then they'd find her and kill her. Foster thought quickly: Half the crew would be on the main deck, the other half over her head. No chance of hiding, they'd tear the ship apart to stop her now. She ran around the hold looking into various crates: mostly water and food. She hadn't toured the vessel, but knew the armory and spirit room would be on this level, though on the other side of an impregnable bulkhead. Apparently Reliance's leaks were there since this part of the hold stayed relatively dry.

Twelve. The sails, disgraced by their failure and so moved out of the sail room, lay in a heap next to several barrels claiming to be dried peas. She glared at them then about. How to escape?

"Help!" bellowed the marine. Thirteen. No time left. Foster smiled.
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On deck, Bristol took off his hat. "Well, given the circumstances that was well enough, Mister Dawson. When the port master signals, pray take us..."

"Captain!" cried the yeoman. "Defiant is signaling again!"

Bristol glared. "Which part of 'no assistance required' are they unaware of?" He looked up the mast at the trail of flags trailing to leeward. "Drop the signal slightly, then back up."

"No, sir!" Bristol's eyes narrowed at the yeoman. "Defiant says....smoke!"

A midshipman ran up, eyes wide. "Sir, the hold's on fire!"

Men swarmed down the hatches towards the blaze, already spreading to nearby barrels. No one asked questions, or thought twice when they found an imprisoned marine. There would be time for that later, once their ship was safe. None thought to question the slight, cowled figure threading past them up the deck with a bucket, one of several pushing their way up for water.

Bristol stood on deck shouting orders. "Mr. Dawson, take charge of the fire team! Bring the fire-engine forward, mister!" A team of axemen led by the boatswain thrust past them without so much as a 'by your leave' to thrust through the smoke towards the casks below. Men and boys ran on deck for more water, one absurdly dressed in a cowled cloak. Probably thinks it helps him breathe. He looked up at Defiant, who apparently decided her sister ship didn't know her business for she'd launched boats to assist, looked down into a marine's pale, sweating face.

"Captain, she escaped. She threw my lamp at the sails!"

"Find her!" Bristol snarled. "She's on ship somewhere, she hasn't gotten far. You, sir! What are you about?" This to the cowled child, who also didn't appear to know his business. "Come here!"

The child turned enough for him to see a spot of blond hair, a savage expression. "There she is!" Roaring furiously he plunged after her. Foster turned and fled aft towards the captain's cabin. "Oh no you don't, God damn your eyes!"

Bristol drew his sword: Woman or not, mad or not, she was trying to sink him! He ran past several startled men. Foster charged downstairs, opened his door and sprinted in, not bothering to close it as he was already leaping downstairs. Past the bread room, past the sleeping cabin.

"Mrs. Foster!" he roared. Trapped! This was the only way into his main cabin. He swung, expecting her to stop short

She disagreed with his assessment and, leaping, threw herself through the stern gallery and into the sea. Bristol halted, seized his pistols from their case and looked into the swirling water of Reliance's wake.
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Hours later a lone figure came on shore west of town. She'd spent most of her time underwater, surfacing only to breathe before diving again to avoid attention. It took precious time for that fool Bristol to warn his friends, time when only they sought a person in the water, and it allowed her to escape.

She headed inland, away from Halifax and off the road. First she needed rest, then she'd deal with the ringleader of this plot.

Anne Foster had never seen Boston.
 
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Well done, CK! Not only was Mrs. Foster's mania frighteningly evident, but also the origins thereof. I suspect we haven't seen the end of her machinations, but I believe that they will become much less subtle.

Vann
 
It seems that we all forgot about dear Mrs. Foster a bit prematurely. Heaven help Heyward and company if that woman meets up with Mr. Black! :eek:

As usual, nice writing Cat.
 
Wow, she's gone stark raving mad, hasn't she? I'm surprised all that laudanum didn't put her out like a light.

Here's hoping she doesn't interfere with Heyward's coalition too much...
 
She knew Ramstein wanted to kill her. These last few days her mind worked so much more quickly and accurately, it was child's play to see through his deception. Even now she could feel his poison coursing through her limbs, trying to deaden them and quiet her mind. Angrily she fought against it.
*Shudders*

That's borderline Stalin level insanity.
 
I'm with Draco here: if Forster meets Black, the world might well come to an end. Remember how well Black managed to manipulate Preston, who at least was sane and did not believe the whole world was after him. I shudder to think what he could do with an insane-yet-cunning woman!

Here's a thought: maybe Andre can redeem himself by killing the mad woman once she shows up on Heyward's doorstep (as she -inevitably- must).

If the coalition of the willing can influence the remaining states one at a time, they might be able to get the votes required. But how long until Black finds out about the wheeling and dealing and takes countermeasures? Heyward and company better work fast.
 
CatKnight: ...She disagreed with his assessment and, leaping, threw herself through the stern gallery and into the sea. Bristol halted, seized his pistols from their case and looked into the swirling water of Reliance's wake.

so much for seeing Anne Foster deal with this in a British court ! ! :D ( which is what i expected ! ! ;) )

magnificent update! ! :cool:
 
Indeed, a Foster/Black combo might be the worst possible thing for Heyward. And she must have had quite the time of it trying to swim to shore with so much laudinum in her. Madness or not, she has a stout perserverance.
 
Vann the Red: Thanks! I'm glad her madness, and just as importantly how things fell apart so quickly, was evident. She was never that stable and yes, subtlety is pretty much out the window.

Draco Rexus: Well, maybe. I mean, Foster's so confused right now she might try to kill Black if they meet. THAT would be a fun fight. :)

J. Passepartout: Yes, Boston's going to have a time of it. Fortunately they're 'only' in the way.

dublish: I'm not sure it was a lot of laudanum. (That said I've done no research on opiates.) In the Aubrey/Maturin series, Dr. Maturin once gives himself four THOUSAND drops. Now, at this point he's addicted and nearly immune, so one may assume this is normally a massive overdose. I'm hoping 200 is about equivalent to a modern sleeping pill. Modern pills can be very powerful, but if you want to you CAN fight it off.

Fulcrumvale: Stalin!? OMG, Nazis AND Stalin? Heyward better just give up now.

On the other hand, they'd probably be busy killing each other....

Hey, Black! Want a playmate? :D

Stuyvesant: Andre definitely has no reason to like Foster. Remember she 'recruited' him for this assignment, and she was the force telling him he needed to keep going. And this was before she went crazy.

Black's definitely not going to be happy Heyward's reentered the picture.

GhostWriter: Thanks! Alas no, no English court. Honestly that wouldn't be much of a post. Foster's guilty of quite a bit.

On the other hand, poor Captain Bristol might get court-martialed. I mean, in just a few weeks he trashed his ship fighting against a country they aren't at war with, lost TWO prisoners, and last we left him his ship was on fire. He's really having a bad summer.

coz1: Perseverance...determination...stubborness. It's all one. :)
 
-= 165 =-


South Carolina
July 1784



"And now we'll hear the report of Colonel Preston." William Moultrie, Governor of South Carolina following Benjamin Guerard's abdication due to illness and freshly reappointed by the South Carolina Assembly, banged his gavel. He presided over the Assembly now, sitting behind his desk on a raised platform facing the delegates. The flag of the Carolina Federation spread behind him along the wall.


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If he'd known the banner belonged to another time and place, Moultrie might have done something about it. As it was, he thought keeping it pleased Rutledge's supporters and he had far more important things on his mind. "Colonel Preston?"

"Eh!?" John looked up from a haphazard pile of barely legible notes.

"Your report, sir?"

Preston flushed, feeling everyone's gaze on him. He stood, forced his notes into a pile and opened his mouth. Closed it. Frowned and shuffled through his papers.

"Sir?" Moultrie grimaced.

"I have it," Preston muttered, waving his hand at the governor. He finally pulled out a piece of paper and grinned triumphantly. "I'm ready."

"Thank God," muttered a delegate.

"Of the eight pending sedition cases left after Mister Rutledge left, I'm recommending the State dismiss seven of them due to either lack of proof, or under our new guidelines they're too minor to signify."

"And the eighth, sir?" a delegate asked.

"That..." Preston flushed again. "That would be Mistress Bailey."

Laughter. Bailey stood on the town green as church let out and, in a ringing voice, advised the city they'd been taken over by Satan. The only way to be sure of throwing off his influence was to burn Rutledge, Guerard, Moultrie and most of the Assembly at the stake. Failing that everyone would certainly go to Hell. When Preston told her to move along, she first tried to seduce him in front of thirty people including his wife. When that didn't answer, she offered to help him permanently holster his rifle somewhere that, while technically feasible, would almost certainly hurt.

"I'm not sure that's sedition," one offered. "The poor woman is deranged."

"Aye, she was only admiring your backside, Colonel."

More laughter. Preston whirled and glowered at the last speaker, an inimical glare backed by a face pockmarked by cannister at close range. What was his name? Right.

"What's wrong, Sparrow? Do you still remember the thrashing I gave you at Mister Rutledge's party?"

"Order!" Moultrie called. "We will defer this to the courts, gentlemen. Colonel, have you closed the labor camps as we asked?" Slaves supposedly in league with Indians plotting Carolina's overthrow had been interred under brutal conditions since last autumn. In time some Cherokee wound up there as well.

John turned back to the chair and nodded. "Almost. We're having some trouble locating the owners, and there are the Indians of course."

Moultrie frowned. "I want those camps closed, Colonel. They represent a drain on manpower we don't need, and I don't need to tell you conditions there do the Guard, and us all discredit."

"I'm doing what I can!" Preston snapped.

"Certainly, sir, but this must be dealt with immediately. We need them in the fields if we are to have a good yield after last year's famine. The people of Charleston have known our intent long enough. If they have not retrieved their property by now, they're not going to. I reoommend talking to Mister Earles about an auction." Moultrie glanced over the crowd. "Are there any objections?"

None. Several nods.

"Very well. Then I move we adjourn this meeting. Is there a second? Good. All in favor?"

As the meeting broke up, fat, gasping men in formal attire shuffling out talking eagerly, John pulled his papers together. Most of them had nothing to do with the Carolina Guard or his investigations. While other men talked about doings in Columbia and Beaufort, or how much more profitable cotton would be if Charleston would regulate the price upwards ten percent, to keep from falling asleep he tried his hand at poetry. He read over one of these papers and smiled:

Shal I compair thee to a sumer flour.
You are stouter, lik a tower.
If fis can swim and birds can flie,
I look at you and wonder whie?


Cassie would like that one.

"Colonel Preston!" William Moultrie paced over, accompanied by a man in his late thirties, dressed in a sky blue vest and dark breeches. "May I present Colonel Pinckney?"

Preston bowed his head civilly, then looked up sharply. "Do I know you?"

Charles Pinckney smiled. "It is good of you to remember, sir. Certainly I recall you. We served in the Altamaha campaign against that creature Exeter together. I seconded the commander of the Third North Carolina.when his own deputy died."

John nodded slowly. "That seems like a very long time ago, Colonel."

"Three years," Pinckney agreed. "Perhaps we may share a drink later."

"I'd like that."

"Colonel Preston," Moultrie interrupted. "I have imposed on Colonel Pinckney to represent our interests to Congress and answer any concerns they may have."

Preston smiled shortly. "Good luck. Last I heard from Tom...," he checked himself. "Well, I heard it can be bad there."

Pinckney laughed. "I serve as justice, Colonel Preston. I am used to such men. May I add that, having worked with General Heyward, I am not at all convinced of his guilt in these terrible matters. Inconclusive I believe you phrased it."

Moultrie looked around uneasily. "I trust you'll keep your opinion to yourself, gentlemen." He needed those who'd prospered under Rutledge. Clearing their greatest enemy of wrong doing simply wouldn't answer. Later, perhaps, when things had calmed down and their position was more secure.

Pinckney bowed. John looked dogged, but nodded faintly.

"Excellent." Moultrie smiled. "Then I would like to invite you both to dinner. With Colonel Pinckney here representing us to Congress, and Colonel Preston heading the Guard - that reminds me, sir, I've issued recall orders for General Allen. This business with the Indians must end. Together I believe we may set things right."
 
When that didn't answer, she offered to help him permanently holster his rifle somewhere that, while technically feasible, would almost certainly hurt.
How delicately phrased. And speaking of delicately: poor John is clueless when it comes to women, isn't he? That poem? Comparing his wife to a stout tower instead of a flower... Words fail me. :)

I like how Moultrie feels the need to 'honor' Black's memory, simply because he doesn't feel strong enough yet to discredit him and his supporters completely. Still, at least he's closing the camps and the treason cases are being dropped. There are some hopeful developments here (I would always prefer cynical, powerhungry bastards over demonic overlords bent on Mankinds destruction - bit of an easy choice, really). But overall, I can't shake the feeling that we are watching the mice enjoying the scraps from the dinnertable, unaware that the cat is lurking behind them, ready to pounce. How much longer before Black makes his move again?
 
CatKnight: ..."Certainly, sir, but this must be dealt with immediately. We need them in the fields if we are to have a good yield after last year's famine.."...

excellent ! ! a good harvest will do wonders for the economy, and for the people's independence. :D


CatKnight: ..."Colonel Preston," Moultrie interrupted. "I have imposed on Colonel Pinckney to represent our interests to Congress and answer any concerns they may have."

interesting! ! having a North Carolinian represent South Carolina in Congress. hmmm. or, was that having a South Carolinian as second in command of a North Carolina unit? ? tsk, tsk. just don't remember. :eek:


CatKnight: ..."..This business with the Indians must end. Together I believe we may set things right."

about time! ! most excellent ! ! :)

awesome update! ! :cool:
 
CatKnight said:
This business with the Indians must end. Together I believe we may set things right.

That doesn't sound good... Can't wait to see what happens next, awesome update CatKnight!
 
Glad to see Carolina moving forward with the attempt to restore some sort of dignity and honor to the State. I don't necessarily think Moultrie is going about it in the best way, but hey, I'm not in his shoes so what do I know, eh?

I also must compliment you, Cat, on this wonderful phrase:
...she offered to help him permanently holster his rifle somewhere that, while technically feasible, would almost certainly hurt.
That, I feel, is going to go down as a classic! :rofl:

Poor John, when he's not doing stupid in the service to the State, he's doing something stupid in his personal relationships with those closest to him. I dearly hope that something prevents that poem from ever reaching Cassie or John is going to be in deep kimmchee... again! :eek:

And this Indian thing... I can only see it getting uglier before it gets better. :( But... that just makes good reading for us, no matter how bad for our brave but sometimes foolish band of heroes, eh? ;)
 
...although he is a poor poet.

QFT.

Nice to see an attempt at reclaiming South Carolina. Interesting to see what happens when the 'reformers' there meet the folks from up north.

Vann
 
Fulcrumvale: Stalin!? OMG, Nazis AND Stalin? Heyward better just give up now.

On the other hand, they'd probably be busy killing each other....

Hey, Black! Want a playmate?
I'm laughing so hard right now...
 
Great update, Cat! I wonder what Tom's coalition will do when Pinckney tells Congress that Rutledge has left, the camps are being closed, and Carolina is ready to play nice again.

I've just realized you switch your avatar more often than Kerry switches positions...