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There will be outrage in the North, but if the Carolinas' seccession will lead to a war... I'm not sure. It might, however, lead to closer cooperation amongst the remaining states. Moultrie/Black is Governor of South Carolina, but he has no problems making decisions for North Carolina as well. Perhaps the Northern states will realize Black/Moultrie is not leaving the Union for principle, but merely to safeguard his own power (and to wreck the future US, but that's a more longterm consideration), so hopefully the states will recognize weakness in the face of Moultrie/Black will only lead to more trouble with him.

Perhaps the Carolinian Seccession is just the push needed to strengthen the rest of the Union. Once that's accomplished, I favor Passepartout's approach, albeit with one slight modification: Preston should become the Carolina strongman who will lead the Carolinas back into a stronger Union. It would be a crowning achievement for a man who's slowly finding his way (and it would finally make up for all the things he's messed up until now). :)
 
CatKnight: ...John flinched at Cassie's terrible grip on his hand. He gradually squeezed harder to even out the pressure. She looked up at him and flushed.

IIRC, Cassie is a Yankee ! ! ;)

CatKnight: ...Black grinned. "I call for an emergency meeting of the state assembly at nine in the morning tomorrow to address this question. You are welcome to attend and see justice done!"

why do i have the feeling that Black/Moultrie will be upstaged ? ? :D

excellent updates ! !
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Well we saw it coming, but it is still a mess. If the Carolinas go out and Britain keeps her southern colonies the US is well on the path to becoming a series of banana republics.

Here's hoping the good guys can do... something.
 
CatKnight said:
ohms_law: Hi ohms! Welcome to the party. Yep, this is my main hideout and you've stumbled on my magnus opus...or something like that. "Resurrection" is almost three years old now. It might finish by 2010.

Might.
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I know how you feel. I've been slowly catching up on this story. This is great so far!

Back to page 20 though, I don't want to ruin the storyline for myself...
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MORE ! ! :cool:

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Chief Ragusa: Heyward as Superman? LOL! I doubt it.

Batman maybe. Hmm :) Preston can be Robin. The second Robin, who was kinda bitter :)

Does that make Black the Joker?

We'll have to check in on Virginia and North Carolina soon. The United States is definitely going to react to Black's secession.

Fulcrumvale: Possibly. I expected one, but I'm not sure it's going to work out that way. :)

Judas Maccabeus: I know. Horrible how badly I'm twisting SC :)

J. Passepartout: Possibly re- Heyward being a strongman!

Draco Rexus:
The Articles don't really allow for a war. Not that that would necessarily stop people. Congressional reaction will tell us much.

You're wrong though - a theoretical US break up does not ruin Black's plans...it guarantees he wins, and would be perfectly acceptable. Think about it: His original goal was to have the US lose the AWI. When that didn't work out, only then did he try to corrupt them instead. If he can get Britain to gobble up the US, then it's just as good as if we lost the AWI.

Stuyvesant: Hopefully you're right that the states will realize showing weakness to Black is a REALLY bad idea. As for Preston being a strongman to bring Carolina back - that's possible too!

GhostWriter: Cassie's from NY, so she's a Yank :)

Director:
Hm. That sounds like an interesting alt history - the US as a bunch of banana republics.

It would make more sense than Turtledove anyway :)

ohms_law: Well, let me know when (if) you catch up. We've been a long way.

GhostWriter: MORE? I dunno...

Fulcrumvale: You too? Hmm...

Venz: Alright Venz, you talked me into it. And welcome!
 
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South Carolina
October 1784



"John! Come in here! Hurry!"

John looked up sharply from his desk, where he was in the process of painfully decoding his own scrawled notes into legible script. "Cassie!?" He grabbed his sword, never far away in the weeks since breaking away from the other states, and bolted down the stairs. "What's the matter?" He hit the landing at a run and swerved into the sitting room.

Christina Preston paused in mid-crawl and looked up. "Da!" Then she lowered her head and advanced, wavering but steadily. "Da da da da!"

Cassie looked up from where she knelt with shining eyes. "She's crawling!"

"I can see that." He dropped his sword and scooped his daughter up, tossing her to the ceiling. She squealed and giggled as he caught her. "Well done!"

Christina bat his face. "Da da!"

"Yes, I'm sure." He beamed, then looked down at his wife. "Next week she'll be walking and there'll be the devil to pay!"

Cassie's face clouded. Her mother died when she was still a child, and she had no idea how long it took babies to develop. Women in Charleston came up with different figures; those that would still talk to her. Many feared her husband's power. And his temper. "Perhaps."

"Come, Chris. You can help me write my notes."

The child gurgled, then in her excitement forgot herself on his arm.

John flinched and held her out by both arms. "Cassie?"

She sighed and came over. "Martha! Chris needs to be changed." Cassie wrinkled her nose. "And John needs a shirt."

The huge black woman's voice echoed from the kitchen. "Right away, missus!" Seconds later she bustled in, handed Cassie a shirt then retrieved the sniffling child. "Now, now, darlin'. Martha will take good care of you."

John began unbuttoning his shirt. "Is she treating you and Chris alright?"

"Martha? Your father trained her well." Cassie's face clouded again. Her own family never owned slaves and she found the whole idea unsettling.

"That's not what I asked." He shrugged out of his shirt, frowned at moisture on his arm and wiped at it.

"She's always kind, Johnny. Chris adores her. Why?"

"I'm thinking of selling her. Selling all of them."

Her jaw slackened. "Why!?"

He took his shirt and walked to a mirror.

"Johnny, you know she's too old...and big...to start over in a field. Even if someone took her for their house, she's been here so long that...why? None of them have given you trouble, have they?"

"No," he replied. "However, we could use the money."

"Is something wrong with the harvest?"

"No, Cassie." He shook his head. "Cassie...maybe it's time for us to go."

"Go? Go where!?"

"I don't know. North. Maybe west."

"What the devil is to the north!?"

He stared at her reflection in the mirror. "It's what isn't there. This whole place... Charleston." He sighed and buttoned his shirt. "It just might be better if we left."

Cassie turned him to face her. "What happened?"

"Nothing yet. This whole breaking away from America thing. I think it's only going to make things worse."

"Do you think they'll fight us?"

"I don't know if it matters. We always seem to run from one crisis to another. Between that and my bandit who likes to jump roofs."

"What about her?"

John's head shot up. "What makes you think it's a woman!?"

Cassie flushed and thought quickly, fiddling with the buttons of his shirt. "No...No, I meant... I meant Martha. We can't just leave her."

He relaxed. "She'll be fine. If something goes wrong here I don't think she'll get in the way."

"But Johnny, this is home. I don't think..."

"I thought you'd want to go."

A thundering knock interrupted them. John quickly tied his neckcloth as Jacob, his houseboy, stepped in. "Beg pardon, Master, but there's a messenger here. He says he comes from Governor Moultrie."
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Moultrie stood on the balcony of the State House looking down at the busy street below. Men and women hurried to get home before sunset, not knowing just what the proud black, red and white banner flying next to the broken Liberty Tree across the street meant. He contemplated its black and corrupted limbs and smiled.

He didn't turn as Preston came in. "John. I was starting to think my messenger was waylaid."

"Apologies," John replied curtly. "I needed to dress."

"Undressed in the afternoon?" Moultrie turned and arched a brow. "Are you ill?"

"I'm fine," he snapped. "You wanted to see me?"

"Yes, John." He turned and regarded the street again. "I received word today of Indian raids near Greenville."

"Did you?"

"You sound skeptical, John."

Preston shrugged. "Let's say it's the first I've heard of it."

"Not surprising. As I said, word arrived today." Moultrie regarded him coldly. "I want you to deal with it."

John looked away. "Perhaps you should send somebody else."

"Why?"

"I...I don't have that much experience with Indians."

Moultrie smiled. "Come, John. You are commander of the Carolina Guard. This is your responsibility. You do understand duty?"

Preston glared at him. "Where is Greenville anyway?"

"It's new, only a few ranches and farms along the road northwest of Columbia. It was only founded after war's end in former Cherokee country. They hoped to at least stake their claims and clear land before snow hit, but, as I say, the reds won't leave us be."

"So I'm to provide security?"

"In a sense. You're also to find any Indians on our side of the border and encourage them to leave. Bring trackers. And guns of course."

"Any idea how many Indians we're dealing with?"

Moultrie shook his head. "No. I would assume a fair body to terrorize their village so. You are capable of dealing with a few impure redskins?"

"I can!" John sighed. "All right. I'll go."

"Good. Perhaps this will make up for your failure to deal with your masked villian."

"I have preparations to make," Preston growled. He turned for the door.

"John?"

"What!?"

"Happy hunting."
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Black watched him stomp out and smiled. Still easy to manipulate. Greenville really did exist, and it really did report an attack. He recognized at once the description of an Indian 'more dog than man.' Chesmu.

Either he would kill Preston, or John would kill the Indian. One way or the other he won.

Plus, with John gone, he could turn his undivided attention on the bandit people began to call 'Spider.'
 
CatKnight: ...Plus, with John gone, he could turn his undivided attention on the bandit people began to call 'Spider.'

it seems that Cassie is making quite a name for herself ! ! :D

magnificent update ! ! :cool:
 
John could take the whole Carolina Guard with him, just in case there's a full Indian attack brewing. It would leave Moultrie without any troops. That would be a shame.

Cassie made a nice recovery. I wonder what flies she will catch whilst Joihn is away. There's a sparrow (Captain Jack?) to kill.

Has Miss Foster caught up with Heyward yet? She doesn't seem a woman to stay awayor do what she's told. I do miss Bast, she has such a refreshing way with mortals. I imagine Heyward more as the Lone Ranger, just without Silver and Tanto or was that Tonto? If he could fly, he'd arrive before he was ready to face Black, wouldn't he?
 
Interesting turn of events that. John has got the right instincts, now he just has to follow them and prevent himself from being so easily handled.

But we have a problem now, Cassie has gone an' gotten herself the attention of dear Mr. Black and Preston is heading off into the woods to play games with the oh-so-friendly Chesmu. :(

Cat, not to mess with your story arc ( if I'm steppin' on toes, just call out and I'll cease and desist right quick! ), but I'm thinking that that Black might not necessarily "win" if American loses AWI. Let me sum up my thinking: If the Brits never loose the American colonies (or in this case regain them), that fact would make them infinitely stronger throughout the 19th Century, and quite possibly prevent WWI from occurring or create a completely different outcome. And if WWI doesn’t occur or has a different ending, then no rise of Adolf and the clash of arms of WWII, right? Unless, of course, ( just to shoot a boat load of holes in my own theory :rolleyes: ) Mr. Black has a series of plans in action across alternate realities.
 
I suppose another war in the boonies is just as good as a war of succession. We need our violence fix somehow!
 
This fits in with my strongman plan.
1 Preston brings all the troops to Greenville.
2 Either Heyward meets up with him there, and everything gets straightened out between them or something else happens to cause 3.
3 Attack Charleston.
 
Nice update :D


come to think of it, Black kinda reminds me of Hitler, with the way he "inspires" others, and with the comment "They Joined me!"(speaking of the Nazi's). Mmm.
 
Wow, I've just finished catching up to this behemoth and I must say it is an excellent piece of work that's just as good as (if not better than) most published books I've read recently- even if it has grown beyond recognition over the years (I can't believe you didn't intended for Black to be in the story!)

Throughout the story it's been interesting to watch John's progression (albeit with many, many setbacks ;) ) from general jerk and hate figure into one someone who is at least trying to get to the bottom of events, even if he isn't always successful. Indeed, he may even be more sensible and focused Tom at this moment in time- I am hoping that the two won't meet up any time soon, although it is probably inevitable. The two have never had a brilliant relationship and with Tom likely to slaughter John on sight without waiting for explanations such a meeting wouldn't exactly be pleasant.

Black's plan appears to be going very well overall, although he isn't yet in total control. Evidently there is still some resistance to him from the population and he still has his old tendency to underestimate people- he hasn't yet realised that John isn't the obedient pawn he thinks he is and still appears to think he's a hot-tempered youth. He also appears to have failed to take into account the reaction of Congress to his move, which could hurt him very badly indeed.

The return of Chesmu shows that Black isn't infallible- he never did regain control over him and now he's causing trouble in Carolina. Chesmu's hatred for Americans combined with his enhanced abilities could be trouble but I move that Preston obtains vengeance for Von Zahringen! On a similar note what did happen to Exeter? Black said he wouldn't kill him but we haven't seen him recently.

Also we haven't seen what happens when Andre flees yet. The reaction of Congress to that should be very interesting but also extremely worrying.
 
CatKnight: ...Black watched him stomp out and smiled. Still easy to manipulate. Greenville really did exist, and it really did report an attack. He recognized at once the description of an Indian 'more dog than man.' Chesmu...Either he would kill Preston, or John would kill the Indian. One way or the other he won.

emphasis added.


so, it seems that for Black to lose, John and Chesmu have to join forces. or, perhaps Tom and Chesmu 'join forces'.


for example:

Tom, on meeting Chesmu, "I see that you recognize that i have power from the Great Spirit. i am ordered to remove a certain evil spirit from our midst. I am also ordered to establish peace between our peoples. will you assist me?"

something like that should put a (heavy duty?) monkey wrench into Black's plans...


magnificent updates ! ! :cool:



EDIT to add: it seems that CatKnight has something along these lines planed, RE: the way for Tom to Charleston (SC?) is through Cherokee country... ;)
 
Christ. It's been over a month. :sigh: Hi, folks. Yes, I'm alive.

Life's been....a lot - for some time now. I think a full explanation would fall under too much information. Let's say I think the sky's finally clearing after...4 moves since starting this story. :) I haven't been around 'cause I found someone I'm rather fond of that has been the focus of my attention. I've missed you all though (even if DoW DID miss my birthday :sniff:) and I think it's time for us to get back on track. Or at least try to.

GhostWriter: You're right about Cassie. Having Black's undivided attention is never a good thing though.

Chief Ragusa: Unfortunately John was a bit more conservative - not that you haven't given me some good ideas though :) As for Miss Foster...no sign of her. We'll check in sooner or later.

Draco Rexus: Regarding your hypothesis:

Remember Tom's original timeline. The US loses the AWI. As such, while Britain is stronger than they are historically, they're weaker than the UK and US TOGETHER. WW I is a draw. The Nazis take power anyway, but are stronger. WW II is a draw that ends in nuclear fire.

If the US loses the AWI, Britain IS stronger...but there will not be that massive push westward. Industrialization will proceed slower. I see that version of the US as a British Dominion - or probably SEVERAL dominions - not much stronger than Canada.

I don't see even an infinitely stronger Britain stopping WW I....nor changing the outcome. Britain was in favor of the harsh terms at Versailles, which I believe directly led to the crash of the Weimar Republic and the Nazis becoming a political force. Indeed, a stronger Britain may cause WW I to happen early as everyone else tries to keep them from overwhelming the planet - balance of power and all that.

Fulcrumvale: Hm. Well, some violence coming up. :)

J. Passepartout: It'll be a bit more than that, but a good idea there :)

Venz: :nods: That's intentional. With the "They joined me!" line he's claiming (at least) responsibility for the Nazi movement...or at least for how bad it got.

Zhuge Liang: Hi and welcome! I hope you read this. I didn't intend it to be so long between updates.

John is at least trying. Tom....well, as others have guessed Tom's not quite on top of things right now. As you say, their relationship has rarely been warm and is likely to explode if they meet up at the wrong time. Black...well, you hit it on the head. He's continually underestimating people and sooner or later it's gonna bite him. Actually it already has. Chesmu's return is but one example.

Jasen Exeter is still lurking out there somewhere. He'll return when we really wish he wouldn't.

Ghostwriter: Perhaps! Tom is indeed going through Cherokee country - though right now it's to find out whatever Bast and Gabe didn't want to tell him in person.
 
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South Carolina
October 1784



Black and grey smoke hung sullenly over the sapphire sky smelling of burnt wood. Colonel John Preston grimaced and tied a cloth across his nose and mouth, signalling to his riders to do the same. No call for hurry - he couldn't hear the crackling of fire nor the screams and cries of the living.

The Guardsmen with him, fifteen strong, obeyed with grim expressions, tying their knots with sharp, angry gestures. Private Therrit, a thin boy of twenty with grey streaks in his hair and holding up remarkably well for his inexperience, brought his horse closer.

"Orders, Colonel?"

John shook his head. The fighting may be over, but there might still be natives about. Instead he pointed, splitting his command into three to envelop the beleaguered village. Grim nods, the veterans nudging the rookies. Preston silently drew his sword and waved it at the smoke. Advance.

Greenville dressed black for the occasion. Black dust and ash, charred wood, broken timbers, every house set ablaze. No sign of anyone from the outlying farms. He had to assume those were destroyed too. Preston's squad marched through the center of town while his colleagues rode along the perimeter.

Therrit's horse reared. "Colonel!"

John stared at the half-clothed body of a white woman, her blouse torn open with one breast nearly sliced through. Wide eyes and mouth hinted at a stillborn shriek and her final terrible moments before someone thrust a knife through her heart.

"Savages!" he swore. No call for silence now. "Where in hell are the others? I won't believe they left her behind!"

"In the houses?"

Preston glanced at the burnt ruins. Christ, he hoped not. "Check them. What the devil?" A large body of his guardsman coverged on the burnt church, really little more than a one room shrine, at the far end of town. Captain Jasmin looked up and beckoned frantically. He looked...ill. Jasmin barked some command and his men began removing timbers from the shattered building.

"Oh hell no!" Preston galloped over. Someone - someone strong - lay several heavy timbers across the church's door barricading it from the outside. "Is this the way you found it?"

"Yes," Jasmin whispered.

John leapt off his horse, rushing to help move a tree it took three men to lift. They thrust it aside. A private thrust his bayonet into the crack between door and frame and pried it open. A fresh cloud of smoke and ash greeted them, smelling of wood and...

Captain Jasmin leaned over his horse and lost his breakfast, as well as most of last night's dinner. John stared for a moment, then flinched away as men around him coughed and cursed.

Private Therrit caught up with the gathering and turned away as well. "Jesus!"

Preston opened his mouth then closed it tightly over a fresh wave of bile. He turned fully away from the church and waited for his stomach to settle. He waved his men closer, sword flashing in the sullen light trying to pierce Greenville's death. "Captain!"

Jasmin waved at him feebly but didn't look up.

"Right." Preston inhaled sharply, then regretted it as his stomach heaved. "Men!" Once more he mastered himself. "Men. We are not dealing with people, but with animals. They will be treated as such!" He took a few steps away from the church. Yes, that helped. "We hunt!"

"Colonel?" Therrit pointed. "The bodies?"

"Their souls are with God," John snapped. "Nothing we do here will make the least difference except allow their killers to escape. We're not going to let that happen. Start sweeping around this village. They came in, they obviously left. I want to know where they went, when and how many! Captain, are you recovered?"

"Sir," answered a weak voice behind him.

Good enough. "Take half the men and sweep east. I'll head west. We meet at the other end of town. If you find anything, report in immediately."
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"Master!" A young brave with the unfortunate name of 'Running Dog' raced into camp. He dropped to his knees, half in supplication and half to ease the pressure on his heaving chest. He'd run the last five miles without pause. The brave gasped. "The white men, they come!"

Chesmu regarded him from his 'throne,' a wooden stump. He leaned forward, hands below his knees. "Wherrrre?" he demanded, his elongated muzzle drawing out the word.

"I saw them south of the place we attacked last night. They should be there by now."

"He plans to stop me?" Chesmu lifted his head and laughed wildly. The braves around them smiled nervously. It never would do to cross their new leader. The Cherokee loped forward, resting almost on all fours as he studied the exhausted scout. "Goood. How many?"

"I'm sorry, master. I didn't want to get closer, so I wasn't able to..."

Chesmu leapt on him. Running Dog screamed, but not an Indian moved to help. Chesmu slammed his face into the dirt once, twice. Blood spurted and he screamed again. Chesmu grabbed him by jaw and skull, twisting violently. He laughed again at the sharp crack and knelt over the scout's body for some moments.

"It does not matterrr," he said. "He thinks he can kill me, when I shall kill him!" He pointed at the oldest warrior in his party. "Brrring me my rrrifle!"

Chesmu finally stood, taking the breech-loader and rising to his full height with difficulty. "Brrothers! They will be looking forr us!" he called. "We will let them find. Tonight there will be morre firrres!" He smiled at his frightened 'brothers.'

"And morre scrrreams."
 
Catknight is back! Whatever else i hope you enjoyed your month off which, for which a comment you made makes me think you did :) Congratulations!

And thank you for another excellent update, its interesting to see how this will play out... It would be in John's best interest i think to try and get Chesmu on his side but doesn't look like that one will be possible... we eagerly await your next installment. Will you be updating Beyond Tannenburg II as well?
-Maximilliano