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It's nice to see you back Catknight and also good to see that your time away doesn't seem to have been too troubled. :)

Well, whether it was intended or not Chesmu looks like he could be shaping up to be a nice little smokescreen for Black, drawing Preston's (and others) attention away from what he's doing for now. There's also nothing quite like an outside threat to make people rally around a strongman. Also, I noticed there were some Cherokee warriors with Chesmu as well. Where does the rest of the tribe stand compared to him?
 
Chesmu, Preston and Tom about to have a mexican standoff? That would be fun.

Whilst it is certainly true that no USA could mean a much much stronger British Empire, in your version of an alternative future it did not.

Chesmu, it seems to me, is fanatically loyal to his people and wants to protect the Cherokees land and way of life from the white man. Guarantee him and the Cherokee that and there's a fair chance Chesmu will join them against Black.

Exeter on the other hand has no redeeming qualities. A bully given tremendous powers is simply a more dangerous bully. Preston should have shown Exeter justice and hanged him not misquided mercy and compassion.
 
I am urgently awaiting an upda... never mind.

I don't know if this is just my mind sticking this in there, but Chesmu's character even seems tp have become wolfish (well, bloodlust and all that yes, but I mean in a general way), not just his form.
 
“We will hunt them like animals” indeed…
 
Maxmilliano: As you saw I did update Tannenberg and hope to do so again soon. :) Unfortunately John and Chesmu probably aren't working together any time soon.

Zhuge Liang: We'll find out about the rest of the tribe soon enough. You're right - Chesmu's providing a nice ancillary smokescreen. He's actually doing exactly what Black would have wanted him to do....just independently.

Chief Ragusa: Chesmu has a bit of a problem though - it's what made Exeter pretty much unredeemable and is doing a number on Tom. He WAS a fanatic. Now he's a fanatic with some of Black's power running around tainting him. He's going to be hard to reason with. And yes, John DEFINITELY should have killed Exeter while he could.

J. Passepartout: Good catch. Yes indeed.

Fulcrumvale: Let the hunt begin?

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Happy Independence Day to all you Americans and Americophiles out there. :)

(It's also my new friend's birthday, so...uhm..see ya soon :))
 
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South Carolina
October 1784



Private James Therrit rode in the middle of the two-wide column. Not a man spoke, lest they distract the trackers at the head of the column staring at the ground or alert their enemies. He drew a handkerchief from his sleeve and wiped his forehead looking back and forth at the green trees just beginning to fade to yellow. Sunlight slipped between the leaves washing the ground in light and speckled shadow, and a fresh breeze drove off the last reminder of Greenville's destruction.

Well, not the last reminder: Veterans around him scowled, with loaded pistol in hand or sword at the ready. Horses, sensing their riders' tension, also gazed around looking for trouble. One neighed. Colonel Preston, at the head of the column, turned and glared at the offender.

Therrit looked ahead to the unit's furled banner, the black and red of the Carolina Federation. Frankly he thought it ugly, a sinister shadow to the cheery red, white and blue, but as his father reminded him many times in the past no one really cared what he thought.

Colonel Preston turned and rode back through his party, the column splitting evenly on either side. Therrit thought him a rather ugly looking bugger too, and not very patient. On the other hand, the veterans told him, he had your back in a fight which was worth a few farthings more than a pretty face and uniform. He averted his eyes from Preston's pockmarked face and rough, almost carelessly thrown on, uniform.

"Keep alert," he said softly as he rode through the formation. "We're close. Keep alert. We're almost..."

"Colonel!" screamed a tracker. Therrit looked up just in time to see two arrows sprout from Captain Jasmin's neck and chest. He screamed and fell. More arrows. The man riding in front of Therrit fell. His breath caught, heart hammering in his chest. Mother of God! I'm going to die!

"Scatter!" Preston shouted behind him. "Scatter, God damn your hides!" Therrit cried out as John slapped him in the back with the flat of his sword and kicked his horse. The steed screamed and hurtled forward towards a group of bushes.

Gunshots rang out around him as the Carolinans rallied. How many were down? Therrit thought about turning around, but before he could a Cherokee rose from the bush in front of him wielding a two-handed axe. Providence alone saved James' leg from the first vicious attack, but not so his horse who screamed and stumbled. Therrit leapt and rolled clear. The Indian charged, but someone shot him in the throat and he fell.

James looked around. Captain Jasmin's body lay where it fell, abandoned by his horse. The Carolina flag lay nearby, next to the lifeless standard bearer. Three distinct melees surrounded the ambush site as his companions pursued and caught their tormentors. Therrit looked around wildly. Where in hell was the colonel? What to do? The flag! The flag couldn't stay down! Therrit took a last, desperate look around then sprinted.

An arrow whizzed past his ear then someone screamed from that direction. Angry voices around him cursing in English and Cherokee. Metal on metal. Out of the corner of his eye he saw a veteran shoot an Indian in the face then stumble back before his spear-wielding companion.

James pounced on the flag and rolled away from the bodies with it, lest some maniac using God knew what stood over him. No, alone. He leapt to his feet and waved the banner. "Carolina!"

A thin, answering cheer. The private turned to find at least one melee resolved, two men without horses running to support him. One pointed and shouted, then the flag was torn from his hands with incredible force. Therrit whirled as an Indian THING slammed the butt of a slim, narrow rifle in his stomach. It stayed low to the ground like a severe hunchback, almost on all fours and seemed to have a muzzle for a mouth. Pain exploded across his belly, only to be drowned out by the second blow across the side of his head. He fell.

Get up, he thought desperately. Get up or he will kill you! His legs didn't obey. His mind didn't really obey either. James looked up stupidly as the Indian creature swung its rifle like a club at his head.

A gust of wind sliced past him as a great horse raced past and trampled the creature down. The horse stumbled and its rider leapt clear. It fell from the blow, but quickly got to its feet and turned to face the new threat.

Colonel Preston.

"Therrit! Get the ____ out of here!"

James didn't move as two men raced past him to join the melee. One slashed Chesmu across the back, which only earned a howl of pain. He turned and backhanded the soldier who fell down. He turned and grabbed the ears of the second like an insane lover, pulling down viciously. As he fell, bleeding and screaming, Preston rushed in.

The strange, surprisingly narrow rifle. The creature dropped it. Therrit stared stupidly then began crawling.

"I don't know what you are," Preston taunted, "but I think the hospital will pay well for YOUR body." He slashed at the creature, who spread its hands wide and crouched. It didn't seem amused.

"I will wearr yourr skin like a coat," Chesmu threatened. Preston snarled and lunged. It easily sidestepped John, grabbed his wrist and twisted. John grimaced, reversed the twist to free himself, and punched Chesmu in the stomach.

No effect. Chesmu locked his fists around the colonel's throat, squeezed and began slowly, inexorably lifting him.

Therrit turned what he hoped was the barrel on the creature. "Let him go!"

Chesmu obeyed and turned towards the fallen private.

Therrit pulled the trigger. It blew a half inch hole in Chesmu's right shoulder, blood exploding from the wound. He screamed, staggered...then resumed his advance. James lay back, panting. No time to get away, and nowhere to go anyway.

Preston leapt on his back from behind, squeezing the bloody shoulder. Chesmu squirmed and twisted, dipping his bad shoulder and screaming. He gripped his fists together and elbowed the soldier in his stomach. John gasped, breathless. Chesmu raised his fists and slammed him in the head. Preston fell to his knees.

"Colonel!" screamed Therrit.

Chesmu leaned next to John. "Yourrr skin," he snarled, "then that of yourrr family."

John thought the Indian looked a bit like a dog. If so, perhaps he had the same weaknesses. He punched Chesmu on his nose at the tip of the muzzle.

The Indian screamed again, raising both hands to the bloody mess. Then Therrit screamed. "Colonel! His shoulder's healing itself!"

It was indeed. The hole was already half size and closing rapidly. Preston stumbled to his feet as Chesmu dropped both bloody hands and snarled. He crouched to leap - then straightened and whimpered in Cherokee. He switched to English: "How did he find me!?" he demanded of the pair.

Preston's brow furrowed in confusion, but it didn't seem important. He urged his aching body into motion, racing for Chesmu. The Indian almost absently slapped him down, but rather than pursue he sniffed the air and shouted something in Cherokee.

Across the field, those Indians still alive disengaged. Chesmu ripped his rifle from Therrit's hands, whimpered again and fled.

"What the hell was that?" Preston demanded. Then, as adrenalin abandoned him he fell to his knees.

John's question would be answered seconds later as a man riding a pale horse, wearing the uniform of an American general rode into the clearing. The newcomer slowly surveyed the battlefield, then turned his attention on the fallen colonel.

"Get up, bastard."
 
Wait…when did chemsu become a demigod again?
 
Well, Tom seems to have saved Preston from Chesmu at least for the time being, though I doubt he was being as charitable as Preston might think. Tom thinks that Preston is just a puppet of Black (a situation that isn't going to be helped if he sees the standard he's fighting under) so it looks like things are going to kick off big-time. Though if Tom would give Preston five minutes to explain himself... Nah, that would be far too logical a solution wouldn't it? ;) The fact that Chesmu is still free to run around is disturbing, but it's interesting how scared he seemed by Tom's appearance.
 
First, I stand corrected on my hypothesis, I was making some leaps of logic that were... not resting on bedrock. Thanks for clarifying that for me.

Second, to answer Passepartout, I think that's gonna be a big negative!

Although I'm hoping I'm wrong and Tom will take a breath or two to recover before unleashing his fury.
 
No, No, NOOOOOooooooo!

This tale isn't over?! I'll have to wait for updates like everyone else?!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!

<cough...pant...wheeze...>

Okay, I think I'm through...

Well, I've spent the last three days at work reading this :eek: and have been greatly impressed! I've been dealing with writers block and decided I needed to take a break and this tale has been 'just so.'

That said, I hope (for the timeline) that Part V is indeed the finale, or else the poor citizens of S.C. will have suffered too much!

I like how you've been able to distinguish the characters...from Tom, the spiritually tortured hero; to Black, the powerful, deliciously evil manipulator...the various angelic deities, seriously, a CAT?!...Jasen 'RRRRR' Exeter and his antagonist buddy Chesmu....the brilliantly devious Mrs. Foster and her driven personality...the good natured Harding and his gruff (but I've got a tender side hidden within) superior Weymouth...the gentlemanly Rutledge and his fellow argumentative buffoons in Congress...the multitude of generals and bit players...Cassie, the ultimate in passionate woman...and MY FAVORITE of ALL (take that old readers!) Mr. humanity himself...John Preston! He embodies all the human elements...stupid, easily manipulated, hotheaded, selfish, but in the end...HE HAS THE GIRL AND A FAMILY...and is FIGHTING FOR WHAT HE THINKS IS RIGHT!

This is just an awesome tale! I'm interested to see your take on the spiritual elements in the story as well...it is always tough to represent the supernatural in a story for just that reason...its just not natural!

Imagine if everyone knew what being posessed by the Holy Spirit was like!

In other news:
Congratulations on your 'special friend!' May she be as much of and more of an inspiration to you than Cassie is to John!

Grimly determined to see this AAR to the finish,
TheExecuter
 
Chief Ragusa: The Carolinans are welcome to TRY and arrest Tom, sure :)

Fulcrumvale: Black's last trip as "Rutledge" he...modified...Chesmu.

Zhuge Liang: Yes, interesting that Chesmu 1) could sense Tom at all, and 2) didn't like it. Tom indeed thinks John is a Black-puppet, though of course that's not why he's so angry.

Director: Thanks :)

J. Passepartout: Hm. No.

Draco Rexus: Still nope. :)

TheExecuter: Welcome Executer, and thanks for so nicely summarizing the major characters. I was really pleased by your analysis - you're right pretty much down the line.

Well, as I've lamented before there wasn't supposed to be any supernatural elements (other than being thrown back in time) to begin with.... then things kinda took off. :)

For purposes of this story (and not to launch a massive OT religious debate) all humans are 'possessed' by the Holy Spirit. It's more or less our soul, and as Jessie and maybe Bast said - it's indestructible. The "angels" don't have that. Their abilities are more overt - though I try to be at least somewhat subtle there as well. No D&D style fireballs and the like. (Hard for me as a D&D player!) What makes Tom special (and dangerous) is now he has both. That's one of the reasons Black REALLY wants Tom dead.

And thanks on my 'special friend.' She does indeed inspire, frighten, awe, and pretty much every other emotion out there. :D
 
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South Carolina
October 1784



"Get up, bastard."

Preston knelt on hands and knees, his body aching from the fight with... he looked hardly human. Deformed. Monstrous. He turned his head to look at the newcomer and smiled through bloodied lips. "Tom!"

Heyward sneered at the pathetic shadow of a man who'd killed his lover. Not a man, but an animal, unworthy of God's gift. The voice in the back of his mind, mostly silent since Philadelphia, sang softly promising revenge through blood. He snarled.

"It's General Heyward," Private Therrit said. He cleared his throat. "Sir, by order of Governor Moultrie, you are..."

"Wait a minute," John said, getting to his feet. "I want to talk to him first."

Tom drew his sword. Two other soldiers, the only ones left capable of fighting, fumbled with their rifles.

"I said wait a minute!" Preston hurried forward. "Tom, I know you're upset, but together we..." He choked as something heavy and strong clenched around his throat. He tried to wrench it off, but encountered only air. He couldn't breathe! He twisted futilely, trying to force air past his throat...

"Upset?" Heyward demanded through gritted teeth. "I am going to kill you!"

Therrit looked between his thrashing leader and the cold, implacable stranger. "What's happening!?"

"Then I am going to kill them."

One rifleman raised his weapon and fired. The shot ricocheted inches from Heyward and flew into a birch tree.

"Then," Tom threatened, pointing at the flag, "I am going to kill that."

Therritt charged. Heyward pointed, propelling the still thrashing colonel into him before turning on the riflemen. As Colonel Preston gulped air into his grateful lungs, heaving with his head down, he heard cries and shouts, the clash of metal, silence. Then slow, determined hoof beats.

"He's coming!" cried the private, panicked. Nonetheless he tried to shelter his colonel, covering his body and bracing for the blow that would end his life.

Heyward stopped a foot away. "How touching," he sneered.

John lifted his head. "What the hell has happened to you?"

"Do you let children fight your battles now, Colonel?" Tom rested both hands on the pommel of his saddle. "Alright, boy. Show me what you can do."

"Don't do it!" Preston warned. Tom's demeanor made it clear that somehow he'd almost choked him to death. From twenty feet away. This was..he didn't know what it was. He pushed himself up and glared first at the broken bodies of his soldiers, then at his former guardian. "Do you let your horse fight for you, General?"

Heyward laughed darkly and dismounted.

"Colonel...?"

"Whatever happens, stay out of this," John growled. He drew his sword and crouched.

Tom swished his sword back and forth a few times, then entered a more or less formal dueling stance. Therrit scrambled away as Preston slashed high. Heyward caught it easily, countered low. Preston pivoted away, and as his foe stumbled swung for the shoulder. Tom ducked under the whistling blade and spun about, the two swords striking sparks as they slammed into each other.

"He's very good, actually," a woman's voice told Therrit.

The private whirled around but saw nothing. Behind him Heyward lunged. John beat his blade aside and counterthrust, opening a small welt on the general's belly.

"Very, very good."

Therrit looked up a tree to find an orange cat intently watching the battle.

"Unfortunately, my guy's much better," the cat added before looking down at him. "You should probably go."

Therrit stumbled back, one hand reaching for his sword, the other covering his mouth. "My God," he whispered. "Oh my God."

The cat sighed. "No, you're not going insane. You're suffering a stress based delusion following your first battle. It's more common than you think. Now go!"

Across the field John steadily retreated before a flurry of blows. He'd hit perhaps three or four times, but none even slowed Tom down - not that he really wanted to kill him. He fought defensively trying to reason through it. Could Rutledge and Moultrie have been right about Tom after all? Even so, why this sudden anger? Why not at least try to reason or talk his way out of it? Why try to kill...?

Preston landed on something round and his foot shout out from under him. He tried to bring his sword up, but Tom thrust his sword just under his Adam's apple.

"How fitting," Heyward said, stepping over the fallen Carolina banner. He braced and slowly, inexorably increased pressure on the blade. "Any last words?"

"Why!?" he rasped.

"For Anne!" Tom cried. He thrust, but at that moment John slashed with his sabre, forcing Tom's sword into the ground. He rolled in that direction trying to break the blade or at least disarm his guardian, but Heyward brought up the sword too fast.

Preston stumbled and wiped at his throat. "Anne!?" His eyes widened with realization. "I didn't kill her!"

"LIAR!"

"I swear it on my life!"

"Your life is worthless to me," Heyward roared. Enough games. He tripped and pinned John with a thought and approached, bloody sword drawn.

"Rutledge sent me there to arrest you!"

"I will deal with him soon enough."

"But he's d....I didn't kill her! I wish I knew who did! Maybe he sent somebody after me!"

He could be right, the calmer voice in Tom's mind murmured.

"You stay out of this!"

KILL HIM!

"You stay out of this too!"

Preston struggled against whatever bound him. What could do this? This was impossible! He racked his brain. "Tom!"

Heyward raised his sword high, like an executioner.

"I swear it on the life of my daughter!"

Tom snarled.

You can't afford to be wrong about this.

Neither man knew how long Tom held that pose. Seconds. Minutes. An hour? Finally Tom's breathing eased. He lowered his sword and turned away. Preston felt his bonds loosen and leapt up.

"Tom?"

"Go."

"Tom, how are you doing...what are you? What's going on? How can...?"

"GO!"

"Tom,.." Preston swallowed. "I'm sorry about..."

Heyward whirled, eyes jet black. "Say her name and I will kill you."

John lowered his gaze. "...about everything. I..." He turned and fled.

Tom felt the anger and rage drain out of him, leaving him empty, alone, and more confused than before. If...If John was innocent, then who killed her? He sank to his knees and stared at his hands.

"Mercy," Bast said behind him. "An advanced trait! Excellent!"

"Shut up,"

"You've mastered what my brother 'gave' you." She padded past him with a swish of her tail. "You're ready now."

Heyward watched her sullenly. "Ready for what?"

"To fetch me dinner."
 
Oh that darned cat likes teasing humans. I hope Tom finds her days old rats.All he's likely to find is a Chesmu in ambush. I don't think Bast eats Indian.


Preston doesn't know when to leave things well alone. He'll try to rally those of his men and try to find Chesmu again and settle the Inidan problem once and for all.
 
The cat sighed. "No, you're not going insane. You're suffering a stress based delusion following your first battle. It's more common than you think. Now go!"
I love bast. :D
 
CatKnight said:
"Do you let your horse fight for you, General?"

:rofl: LOVED this line...John's learning the game well!

CatKnight said:
Therrit looked up a tree to find an orange cat intently watching the battle.

"Unfortunately, my guy's much better," the cat added before looking down at him. "You should probably go."

Therrit stumbled back, one hand reaching for his sword, the other covering his mouth. "My God," he whispered. "Oh my God."

The cat sighed. "No, you're not going insane. You're suffering a stress based delusion following your first battle. It's more common than you think. Now go!"

Yep...pretty much would be my reaction too if a cat was suddenly debating the merits of my friend's swordplay... :D


Soo...Tom manages NOT to kill John. Excellent...now to see what happens to the rest of our nefarious gang now that the 'good' guys are here...although some might not think Bast is so good...anyway...keep up the good work!

TheExecuter
 
CatKnight: "Get up, bastard."...Preston stumbled and wiped at his throat. "Anne!?" His eyes widened with realization. "I didn't kill her!"

i actually expected the Holy Ghost part of humanity to inform Tom that Preston was innocent. your explanation clarified (somewhat) things for me.

CatKnight: "But he's d....I didn't kill her! I wish I knew who did! Maybe he sent somebody after me!"

oh how right John is on all counts ! ! :D

CatKnight: ..."Mercy," Bast said behind him. "An advanced trait! Excellent!"

so true a statement. :)

awesome updates ! !
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