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Part 2: Visions in the Dark
  • Visions in the Dark

    Salt-Upon-Wounds had decided his people would need to change to deal with new threats in the outside world, but that did not mean they had to throw away their culture or traditions. Instead, the White Legs would focus on honing their fighting and scavenging, just like their ancestors since time immemorial.

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    The craftsmen were also directed to focus on three pieces of equipment: pipe guns, dynamite, and support equipment. Most of the tribesmen were equipped with machetes, spears, and other simple melee weapons while an elite few understood guns and explosives.

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    As Salt’s people adapted to the changes, the chief returned to the shaman and asked for guidance. He was directed to return to the cave where he had slain the Yao Guai ten years ago and consume a drink made from the sacred datura.



    As Salt entered the cave, he saw the bones of the beast had been undisturbed all these years. No scavengers had dared gnaw on the beast, as if they sensed the evil spirit that once dwelled within the cave. The chief seated himself across from the beast and drank deeply. Once again, his vision took on shades of blue and purple as a headache began to develop in the back of his head. He sat for a few moments, lost in contemplation. The headache grew in intensity, and the silence was suddenly pierced by a low, rasping voice.

    “It is kind of you to return. It has been many years, and my soul grows restless. It has not been in vain though, for I have done much work in the world,” the voice whispered. It seemed to be coming from the bones of the beast, but nothing had moved in the cave. “Go outside and look upon what I have wrought. Perhaps we shall even meet again.” Salt called out to the voice, but the only answer was his own echo. The shaman had only told him that he must discover what was necessary to save the tribe, nothing more.

    The cave held no more secrets, so Salt headed to the exit and looked upon the canyon. Despite being well past sunset, the chief could see as if it was day! To his left he saw bizarre apparitions: a giant clock smashed to pieces, tar sucking a White Leg in, a bull goring a bear, and things he could not comprehend or describe. To his right, the end of the canyon had a faint yellow-orange glow. The chief ignored the madness to his left and headed toward the light. His headache grew stronger with each step, making it harder and harder to think.

    As he reached the end, the canyon widened out into a bowl with a few bushes and scraggly trees dotted throughout. At its center was the beast, aflame with the fire that gave off no heat. The voice now came from the beast, saying, “It is good to see you again. You have changed much since we last met.”

    Salt’s headache was now so painful he could do little more than eye the Yao Guai and grunt in response. “You should be grateful, I have given you visions of the future. You shall initially lead your tribe to greatness, but you shall be defeated and forced to watch their deaths. Even as your people are subjugated and starve, the rest of the world shall descend into war, the likes of which has not been seen in two hundred years,” the voice gloated. Salt’s headache was so painful he had barely understood the voice. Instead, he charged the beast, determined to slay it once again.

    Salt’s only weapon was his trusted power fist, a pre-war pneumatic gauntlet that amplified the damage of the user’s punches. This weapon had slain many a man and made Salt-Upon-Wounds the undisputed master of southwestern Utah. The chief was relying on it to help him win the day once more.

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    As Salt charged the beast, it let out a deafening roar and reared up on its hind legs. The beast lashed out at him, but he ducked the flesh-tearing claws and punched the beast’s left leg. As his fist met flesh, the pneumatics drove a ram forward with bone-crushing force and produced a satisfying crunch when it made contact. The beast let out a roar as the bone broke and collapsed as the leg could no longer bear the weight. On the way down, the beast knocked Salt off his feet. As he began to get up, the beast was on top of him, snapping its jaws just short of his face. Even as the beast’s claws dug into his leg, Salt punched its face, knocking it on its side.

    The beast’s jaw was broken with teeth scattered across the ground while its rear leg was a tangled mess as bone jutted through the skin. The flames had died down to flickering embers, and the beast drew breaths in short, ragged gasps. The voice suddenly returned, gasping, “It is destiny, great chief. We are doomed to be locked in combat until the end of days. I have given you a glimpse of the future, and your world shall fall apart. At your lowest point, I shall be waiting for you…” With that, the beast drew one final breath.

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    Salt removed the head and paws of the beast before mounting the head at the end of the canyon as a warning of the evil spirits within. He then returned to his tribe and was hailed as a hero. Salt-Upon-Wounds was uncertain what his experience meant, and the shaman did not know either. Perhaps the tribe was in more danger than Salt had ever imagined, or perhaps the spirit had just been tormenting him and lied about the future. The great chief was troubled, so he turned to his people’s gods for guidance and salvation…

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    Note: Well here's part 2! Another fun vision quest, and hopefully you don't mind it being similar to part 1. I promise this is the last vision quest, and events should really start moving now!
     
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    Part 3: Meeting the Bull
  • Meeting the Bull

    Jump motioned to the rest of her scavenging party to join her. The group was approaching the burnt out remains of a farm. The house was completely gone, but its cement basement poked out of the weeds that had grown over it. A barn, once painted red but now faded, was about one hundred feet from the remains of the house and was still standing somehow. Jump’s loyal companion, Kip, darted ahead into the barn and disappeared. Jump decided to follow the dog as the rest of the party combed through the remains of the house.

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    She heard moaning as she approached the barn, causing her to jump. However, she quickly realized it was just the wind blowing through the remains of the barn. Many of the tribe’s members were terrified to venture into the ruins of the Old World, convinced they were haunted by the ghosts of the Harrowing. They would have been quaking in fear from the moaning of the wind, but Jump had always been clever and curious.

    Salt-Upon-Wounds had recognized her gifts and made her a scout and scavenger. She had served her people for two years and discovered numerous trinkets and tools of the Old World. However, the chief had begun organizing much larger, more complicated scavenging efforts tasked with finding strange new technologies to help the tribe. Jump had been honored to be part of the first expedition, one of only fifty tribesmen trusted with such an important job.

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    However, Jump’s party was given one of the least glamorous tasks as they dug through the remains of farms on the outskirts of a city. The bulk of the group had gone into the city itself in search of the real treasures. Regardless, the scout was pleased to be exploring and hoped to prove herself.

    The young woman ducked into the barn and waited for her eyes to adjust to the darkness. She saw Kip digging at something in the corner when he suddenly came trotting over with something in his mouth, wagging his tail.

    “Come, boy. Now sit,” she ordered. “Drop,” as she motioned for Kip to drop whatever was in his mouth. She bent down to pick up what he had found and was surprised to see a fingerbone wearing a golden ring. She ran to the corner and began clawing at the dirt. Kip dashed over and joined her, excited by the new game they were playing. As they unearthed more and more of a human skeleton, Jump felt her fingers hit something hard and metallic.

    She worked her way around the edge of it and found it was about five feet long and 8 inches wide. There was a latch on one of the long sides and hinges on the other side. Kip started digging at the container, and the two eventually uncovered the entire thing. As Jump pulled it up from the dirt, she wondered what marvelous technology was inside.

    She attempted to lift the lid, but there seemed to be some sort of lock on it. She tried to pry it open with the tip of her spear but only succeeded in breaking the point off. She then found a rock and tried to smash the container but could not make a dent. As she let out a sign, Kip came up again, wagging his tail as he chewed on the fingerbone and ring.

    Jump sat defeated for several moments before she realized the ring was the key and unlatched the container. As she lifted the lid, she heard a vacuum seal break and two-hundred-year-old air rushed out. Inside was a pristine lever action rifle, several dozen rounds of ammo, and a full maintenance kit. The gun’s receiver had been engraved with beautiful floral patterns, entrancing Jump in their intricacy and beauty. Such a gun was nearly unheard of among the White Legs and Jump silently praised the gods for her good fortune.

    Her reverie was broken as one of the other scavengers called out, “Halt, this is White Legs’ territory, Outman!” Jump emerged from the barn and saw one of the strangest men she had ever seen. His head was covered by a wreath of feathers while his face was concealed by a bandana and goggles. Most strangely, the man was wearing a skirt but carried himself as a warrior. He said something in a strange language and nine more similarly dressed men appeared. One of them carried a flag emblazoned with a golden bull on a red background.

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    The first man stepped forward and said, “I am Decanus Cornelius, an officer in the service of the mighty Caesar (Note: pronounced kai-zar), conqueror of numerous tribes, Son of Mars, and founder of the Legion. I come bearing a message for your great chief, Salt-Upon-Wounds.” He then reached into a pouch and withdrew a silver coin. “My lord would like to present your people with a gift and make a request.”

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    Echo, one of Jump’s companions, stepped forward and accepted the coin. “Follow us Outman, but do not cross us or you shall taste the sting of our spears!” Jump and her scavenging party escorted these strangers back to Salt-Upon-Wounds’ camp and left Cornelius to meet the chief.

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    Salt did not share the details of the meeting, but the rest of the tribe soon learned that Caesar and his Legion had offered to train the White Legs in battle in exchange for carrying out his will in Utah. Caesar’s emissary had promised the White Legs they would find meaning in service to the Legion, earn numerous glories, and secure their future against the encroaching dangers. Salt-Upon-Wounds was intrigued by the promise of a powerful ally, but he did not want his tribe to lose itself to Caesar. An important decision had just been made, but Salt could not convince himself it had been the right one…

    Notes: I suspect everyone will recognize the Legion's inspiration, but I hope to expand on their society as the tribe is exposed to it. Events are starting to pick up in the wasteland, and the tribe will slowly have to change...
     
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    Part 4: A Taste of War
  • A Taste of War

    Two weeks after the Legion delegation left, another group began to intrude in the White Legs’ territory. These Followers of the Apocalypse were a group of doctors and scientists determined to improve living conditions for the common people through free medicine and education. They had already worked with some of the neighboring tribes and were now attempting to ‘reform’ the White Legs by sending teams to teach more ‘civilized’ ways and moderate the savagery.

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    Salt-Upon-Wounds turned to the God of Salt for guidance in this troubling matter. The God of Salt had always eased the tribe’s troubles in the worst of times and was perhaps the main deity, along with the Sky Father and God of the Lake. After a night of sacrifices, prayer, and meditation, it seemed the gods had led Salt to one conclusion.

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    The Followers must be driven out by force or else the White Legs would become soft and weak like those they had raided in the past. The Followers had established a fort just within the tribe’s territory while supply caravans trekked across much of southwestern Utah. Salt-Upon-Wounds chose to lead the attack on the fort while delegating the caravan raid to Yao, one of his followers. Jump and her scavenging party were ordered to join Yao due to their skill as scouts.

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    The shaman led a prayer to the God of Salt, asking for luck and riches in their raids. With that, the two groups set out for their targets. Salt’s warband arrived first since Yao’s party had to track down the caravan and organize an ambush. The Followers had placed their fort at a crossroads of two pre-war roads and built walls out of rusting cars stacked on top of each other while a cluster of tents within the walls marked where the doctors did their work. The warband was observing from a cluster of rocky terrain, but the approach to the fort was almost entirely clear. A few stunted trees, desert plants, and small rocks broke up the area around the fort, but Salt knew his warriors would be slaughtered in any head on attack.

    That night, the White Legs saw that a group of refugees was allowed into the fort with only a cursory search. “That is how we will take them!” Salt exclaimed. He gathered volunteers to disguise themselves as refugees and enter the fort. Once inside, they were to open the gate and allow the rest of the warband to join the slaughter.

    Meanwhile, Yao was quite pleased with the ambush he had planned. His scouts had found the caravan and figured out the Followers had to use a bridge to get to their fort. Just before the bridge, the trail passed through a canyon. White Legs were scattered along both sides of the canyon while explosives were placed at both ends; once the caravan entered, the dynamite would be detonated, creating rockslides that would trap the caravan in the canyon. Now all they had to do was wait…

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    Salt’s volunteers had ambushed an isolated group of refugees before they reached the fort and wrapped themselves in cloaks to conceal their weapons. They then shuffled toward the fort until they joined the throng of desperate people milling outside the walls. The Followers’ guards gave only a cursory inspection of the milling horde and opened the gate. The crowd surged forward and entered the tent city within.

    Outside the walls, Salt and his remaining warriors waited for darkness to fall. A few hours later, the chief gave a sign and led his warriors forward. The group crept toward the fort like ghosts in the darkness of night. As they neared the gate, Salt ordered them to stop and waited for the gate to open. A few moments later, he heard a latch being thrown open, followed by a shout. The crack of a rifle suddenly rang out, followed by a moment of absolute silence. The gate suddenly opened a foot, and Salt ordered his warriors forward. Panic broke out inside the fort as refugees and doctors suddenly woke up, Salt’s infiltrators attacked, and guards responded to the intruders.

    A White Leg threw open the gate and revealed what had nudged it open; one of the infiltrators had been heard opening the gate and been shot. Her lifeless body had nudged the gate open, signaling the all-out attack. As Salt-Upon-Wounds rushed in, he was greeted by his warriors locked in combat with the guards silhouetted by burning tents. The chief was in his element and joined the slaughter, drenching the parched soil in blood...

    As day broke, the White Legs proved victorious. All of the guards had been killed, but they had taken many White Legs with them. The doctors had been run off and left the fort to the tribals, including the riches within. Salt celebrated his victory with his people and awaited news of Yao’s attack.

    A few hours later and miles to the west, the caravan blindly walked into the ambush. Nearly twenty brahmin, two-headed cows that had survived the Harrowing, and thirty people rounded the bend and walked past the first rockslide, totally unaware of the tribals lurking above them.

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    Jump was with her scavenging party on the caravan’s right, nervously peaking around the rock she was hidden behind. She had fought many wild animals for the tribe but had never participated in a true battle. Echo pulled her back behind the rock, whispering, “Hey, you will get us caught! Just wait for the rocks to come down.” Jump nodded in response and took a deep breath to calm herself.

    A few moments later, her calm was shattered by two explosions and scattered gunfire. On the other side of the canyon, warriors rose from cover and rushed at the caravan but were cut down by gunfire. Jump poked her head out and saw that the caravan was in chaos. Some of the guards had died in the blast or been hacked down by charging tribals, but others stood their ground and mowed down the charging White Legs.


    Jump took aim at a guard with his back turn and fired, hitting a rock to his right. The man was clearly startled and dove to his left to hide. Jump worked the lever and lined up another shot which found its mark this time. She did not have time to consider his death as a shot bounced off the rocks behind her.

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    A member of the scavenging party attempted to charge the shooter but was cut down by another unseen guard. The White Legs had nearly won the day in the initial attack, but a few guards had reformed and stopped the charge. Jump continued to exchange fire with the guards, but she couldn’t figure out where all of them were. One was hiding within several brahmin corpses, but there was another covering him. Every time she risked a shot, a bullet whistled by her position in return. All along the canyon, the battle had devolved into a stalemate until Yao unleashed the last of his dynamite on the remaining guards.

    One by one, the guards’ positions were blasted away, leaving them to be overwhelmed by the White Legs. Within a few hours, the entire caravan had been wiped out despite heavy casualties. The warriors went through the wreckage and found large amounts of medical supplies which the tribe lacked, celebrating their victory over the hated foreigners.

    When the two warbands returned home, both groups boasted of their acts of courage and great deeds. The tribe held a great feast and made sacrifices to the gods in thanks for their victories. Salt did his duty in guiding the festivities, but his heart was not really in it. His tribe had lost far too many warriors in the victory, and the only reason they won was overwhelming numbers and fearlessness. If they had not been fighting a group of pacifists and hired guards, the tribe might have lost! The White Legs were no longer the undisputed masters of war, so perhaps allying with the Bull was the right decision…
     
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    Part 5: Growing Ties
  • Growing Ties

    Cornelius hated working with these savages. He was one of the few in the Legion that had learned their foul language, so Caesar had sent him right back after he reported successful first contact. When he returned, the fools had decided to ingratiate themselves to Caesar by sending mercenaries south. Cornelius had tried to explain that Caesar did not need mercenaries, but the chief was adamant. In the end, it was easier to not argue with the idiot.

    Cornelius had remained in the camp for some time and tried to avoid the White Legs as best he could. They showered him with gifts, honored him at feasts, and regularly asked his opinion on the weather, the will of the gods, and all manner of inane things. He was quickly growing exasperated with the fools and wondered what value Caesar saw in them. He was saved from their pestering when another Legion delegation arrived to teach the tribe how to make better weapons and how to extract more resources from the land.

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    Beside translating the advisors’ teachings, Cornelius had very little to do. He spent most of his time avoiding the tribesmen, and this day was no exception. As he was lounging in his tent with the rest of his contubernium, a White Leg coughed outside the tent and asked to enter. One of the other legionaries rolled his eyes, but Cornelius ordered him to open the flap.

    A young woman entered, painted as a warrior of the White Legs, bearing a lever-action rifle and a ridiculous pair of goggles. She was closely followed by a dog, some sort of mongrel the tribe had bred. “Great emissary, would you teach me how to channel the spirits of the rifle?” she said as she held her gun out to him.

    Internally he groaned; not only had one of the idiots decided to waste his time, but it was some girl playing at being a warrior. Annoyingly, Caesar had insisted he not offend the tribe and comply with their wishes. “I suppose I have nothing better to do. Follow me,” he curtly replied. He then ordered two of his soldiers to grab some spare bottles and cans to use for targets. The group then exited the tent and walked through the camp until they reached an empty patch of desert on the edge. Many of the tribals followed along, curious what they were about to see; Cornelius was especially annoyed by this. It was bad enough that Caesar said he had to treat the women like warriors, but now he was entertainment for the unenlightened savages?!

    After the soldiers had set up the targets roughly 75 paces away, Cornelius started by explaining basic gun safety. The scavenger seemed to get it, so he decided to move on to something more complicated.

    He went behind the woman and helped show her how to look down the sights, plant the rifle stock in her shoulder, and form a good cheek weld. “That’s looking good. Now line up the sights on a can and squeeze the trigger. If you jerk it, you’re gonna miss. And the rifle’s going to kick so be ready…” Cornelius counseled. He stepped back from the tribal and waited for her to fire. The rifle suddenly barked out and sent the can flying.

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    She worked the lever, chambering a new round. “Good, now hit the next four cans.” The rifle barked four more times, and all but one went flying. “That last one, you jerked the trigger too much. It pulled your shot off to the side,” Cornelius commented.

    The two of them continued to work for the rest of the afternoon, and Jump was making good progress. A few other tribals that had guns had joined in, and Cornelius soon had a small rifle course started. It wasn’t going to make a huge difference, but it proved the White Legs weren’t quite as stupid as he thought. But only just.

    For the next two months, Cornelius continued to teach the White Legs simple gun use and eventually expanded into maintenance. However, he was informed by a Legion messenger that Caesar would like the tribe to begin gathering slaves; the Legion was built on slavery, and the war machine always hungered for new laborers. Salt then assured Cornelius that his people would deliver many slaves taken from weak tribes and scattered villages. The decanus did not really care as he had been ordered to push the White Legs into war with their neighbors. Cornelius hoped the slave raids would eventually escalate into a full blown war between the White Legs and one of their neighbors. If Salt won, the Legion would have a strong ally in Utah; if not, another primitive tribe was wiped out, which was no loss in Cornelius’ mind...

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    Note: A relatively short update, but I enjoyed writing Cornelius a lot, and I think it sheds some light on the Legion. I might post the next one update a bit earlier, and it's probably my favorite I've written so far. I hope you enjoy and feel free to comment!
     
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    Part 6: Gathering Fires
  • Gathering Fires

    Timekeeper Alexander, Alex for short, was waiting in the control room of Vault 24 for a response from the scouts that had been sent west. Refugees had been flooding east the last few weeks speaking of brutal tribesmen driving them off their lands, torching their farms, and kidnapping anyone that did not flee quickly enough. This could be any one of many tribes and raiders in Utah, but the scale of the raids was the real concern. A small team had been dispatched to determine the truth, and they were supposed to be making a check-in any moment now.

    The Timekeepers were descended from vault dwellers, descendants of pre-war citizens that had been settled in massive underground fallout shelters. The vaults were designed to stay closed until background radiation had reduced enough for people to return to the surface and rebuild America. In reality, the vaults did not hold anywhere near enough people to repopulate the surface, so they instead came to be outposts of advanced civilization, bastions of the Old World.

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    A vault dweller wearing the distinctive blue and yellow jumpsuit and wrist-mounted Pip-Boy computer

    Alex glanced over his shoulder, into the atrium. He saw the great mechanical clock his people were famous for. Its massive gears covered up a whole side of the room, standing nearly twenty feet square. The ticking of the clock reverberated throughout the vault, becoming a part of every Timekeeper’s thoughts. Even outside the vault, the ticking echoed through the Timekeepers heads, a side-effect of living underground with the great clock. In every interaction with an outsider, the vault dwellers would inevitably bring the conversation back to their great clock, leading the outsiders to name them Timekeepers as something of a joke. The name stuck and became part of their unique culture, blending advanced technology with a religious fervor for the great clock. Some said the clock was counting down to doomsday, others said it was counting down to salvation. Either way, the vault’s mission was to guard the clock until it reached its end.

    When the Timekeepers finally emerged from the vault in the 2230s, they encountered scattered villages, subsistence farmers, and nomadic tribes. Fortunately, the groups were friendly, so the Timekeepers allied with many of them and eventually formed a loose confederation centered on their home, Vault 24.

    Alex was shaken from his thoughts when he heard the radio crackle into life. “Victor Bravo, this is Patrol Alpha. I repeat, Victor Bravo, this is Patrol Alpha.”

    Alex rushed to the radio and responded, “Patrol Alpha, this is Victor Bravo. We are receiving you. Go ahead on your report.”

    “We intercepted one of the raiding parties and engaged it in combat at 0900. No casualties on our side, and we killed three raiders. They appear to be White Legs, best we can tell anyways,” the radio reported. “Strange thing was, they seemed more organized than usual. They had an actual patrol with attack dogs, marksmen with half-way decent guns, even actual tactics beyond yelling loudly and charging! We drove them off, but they didn’t seem interested in really fighting us,” the radio continued.

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    “Roger that Patrol Alpha. I’ll pass that intel up the chain. Command wants you to shadow the raiders into their territory. Find their camp and see how many we’re facing,” Alex responded. “Good luck, and may the clock ever tick.”



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    Salt-Upon-Wounds looked out on the desert scrubland from his vantage point on Indian Peak. Behind him, the rest of the tribe had set up the new war camp. Ramshackle tents pieced together from wood, tarps, and animal pelts clustered around numerous firepits. Behind Salt, war totems sat near the peak of the summit.

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    On the plain below, Salt saw the scattered raiding parties returning with loot and slaves. The chief had wanted to go with them and lead his men in their search for glory. However, Cornelius had insisted that a leader needed to plan and leave raiding to his insubordinates. Salt loved the thrill of battle, the smell of gunpowder and blood, but he knew the decanus was right which made him even more frustrated.

    As darkness fell, the tribe formed a ring just below the war totems. A massive bonfire had been lit at the peak of the mountain, silhouetting the massive war chief and the hunched, ancient shaman. The fire suddenly roared into life, towering over thirty feet tall as the shaman threw a powder on the blaze. He then held up his staff and called out to the Gods. “Sky Father, God of Salt, God of the Lake! Your people come before you on the eve of conquest and seek your blessing!” The crowd began to hum and sway in supplication to their gods while a warrior led a brahmin calf into the ring of totems. Salt held the beast as it attempted to run from the flames. The shaman turned and cut the throat of the calf and ordered the chief to throw it upon the fire. The flames greedily tickled the animal’s hide and sought to consume it.

    The shaman threw more powder on the blaze, sending it reaching ever higher. “Take this humble sacrifice and know many more shall follow when you grant us victory!” Salt-Upon-Wounds then let loose a war cry, and hundreds of warriors took up the call after him. The chief turned his gaze east, to the lands of the clock-worshipers, to the tribe’s next conquest…

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    Jump was growing tired of the Legion-man that had been with the tribe. He had taught her how to shoot, but she could tell he thought her a moron. Now he had annoyed her even more; instead of being with the other warriors sacrificing to the gods and preparing to conquer, Cornelius had dragged her into some inane patrol in the middle of the night! The group was trudging along with Kip and Jump in the lead, followed by Cornelius. The rest of his men were spread out, attentive but not overly concerned. They were well within White Legs’ territory, so who would be foolish enough to wander this far in?

    As the group neared a dry creek bed, Kip’s nose suddenly perked up and he let out a low growl. “What is it, boy? You smell something?” Jump whispered to the dog, tracking as he pointed his head to the right, along the bed. “I think something’s down there,” she said to Cornelius as she pointed.

    Cornelius grunted in affirmation and signaled to his men to form a skirmish line. “Stay behind us and cover our rear, scout,” he whispered to Jump. Her face took on a sour expression, but now was not the time to argue. She fell into formation twenty paces behind the legionaries and peered into the darkness.

    Two of the legionaries crept ahead, armed only with machetes. One crossed to the other side of the creek bed while Brush Snake climbed into it. Behind them, their comrades were spread across the near bank.

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    In the darkness below, the four members of Patrol Alpha huddled behind a bush in the dry creek bed, grimly fascinated by the ceremony on the peak. They had seen the bonfire flare up and heard the war cry echo across the desert, seemingly reaching for their homeland. They were trying to report to base, but static kept breaking in, distorting their message. The radioman could only repeat himself and hope the message got through.

    At that moment Brush Snake rounded the corner and immediately charged the patrol. One of the Timekeeper’s let off a burst from his submachine gun, killing the legionary instantly. However, this had given away Patrol Alpha’s position, and the legionaries were nearly upon them. Another four legionaries charged the patrol while another threw his spear. Meanwhile, Cornelius and the other four riflemen found cover and fired at the bank sheltering the Timekeepers.

    Jump was rushing forward to join the battle when another burst rang out. She felt a burning sensation in her thigh and collapsed as her leg suddenly gave out. As she fell, Cornelius and his men returned fire, covering the other legionaries in the final charge. Moments later, the patrol was overwhelmed as the legionaries got on top of them and hacked with their machetes.

    Even as the patrol was wiped out, Jump felt her blood spilling out across the desert. Her vision was beginning to blur, and the pain was getting worse. Suddenly, Cornelius filled her fading vision as he knelt beside her. “Faex!” he cursed as he inspected the wound and pulled some powder from a pouch.

    “You are fortunate the bullet passed all the way through. This is going to hurt,” he said. As he applied the powder to the wound, Jump felt a sudden, blinding pain. Her mind went blank except for the sudden agony centered on her thigh but spreading through her body. By the time Cornelius had bandaged the wound, the pain had hit her head and caused her to pass out.

    “Carry her back to camp,” Cornelius ordered two legionaries. As they picked up the wounded scout, another legionary approached carrying the patrol’s radio. It was squawking out, “Patrol Alpha, this is Victor Bravo! What is your status? Can you confirm an impending attack?”

    Cornelius took the radio and sneered, “Your patrol is dead. We are coming for you. Run and we will catch you. Hide and we will drag you from your holes like the worms you are. Fear us, for we are the Legion!”


    Note: The Timekeepers are a mod-only creation, and I've added a lot of information on them to flesh them out. All the mod establishes is they're from a vault and have a big clock for some reason. I hope you enjoy my thoughts on them, as well as a glimpse into my vision of White Leg culture. There will be another update out on Saturday, I just felt like sharing this a little early!
     
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    Part 7: Metal Monsters
  • Metal Monsters

    Salt-Upon-Wounds stood among row upon row of ramshackle tents, surrounded by his fiercest and most loyal warriors. It was finally time to make war upon the Timekeepers and drive them from their lands, bringing glory upon the White Legs in the eyes of the gods and Caesar!

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    Note: Added war dogs to Salt's warband, my best one. The other support is demolitions. I know nothing about HOI4's combat mechanics, but this seems to work well and fit the tribal theme so I'm sticking with it!

    When Cornelius had returned to the camp on Indian Peak, he had dragged Salt from the ceremony, angering the chief greatly. However, Cornelius’ head was saved when he gave his report, informing Salt that the Timekeepers’ patrol had been wiped out but now knew the tribe was going to attack.

    The tribe had immediately set out the following day, leaving only the young, old, sick, and wounded at Indian Peak. Jump remained among them despite her desperate desire to follow her tribe into battle because her injured leg made her useless. However, the blow had been lessened when Salt-Upon-Wounds informed her she was head of the camp’s few guards that remained. It was not as prestigious as making war, but she was still honored her chief trusted her to guard the tribe in his absence.

    As the White Legs marched to war, the tribe divided into three war parties. Yao had distinguished himself during the fighting with the Followers, so he was given eight warbands to lead and entrusted with the southern portion of the border. Vipponah, a warrior that had only recently proven himself, was given command of four warbands stationed in the north. These warriors were the youngest, eager to gain riches and glory. Finally, Salt-Upon-Wounds had positioned himself and his greatest warriors along the center of the border, ready to drive deep into the Timekeepers’ lands.

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    One day later, the White Legs fell upon their enemies all along the border. Some of Yao’s southernmost warbands had briefly skirmished against the Timekeepers but gave up when they did not make progress. Instead, the main attacks came in the center.

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    The Timekeepers’ mustered forces fought well for nearly a week, but they were not ready for a prolonged campaign. A breakthrough occurred in the south, and Salt’s elite warbands won their battle only two days later.

    These warbands continued to pursue the retreating Timekeepers into the settlement at Cricket Mountains, taking it after a brief battle. It looked like some Timekeepers had been surprised by the breakthrough and were about to become surrounded...

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    Timekeeper Alex had fortified his unit on a small hill that commanded his assigned stretch of the border. Unfortunately for him, his comrades to the north and south had been driven off, leaving him surrounded by the savages. He had extended the trenches all the way around the hill and readied his men for the inevitable assault.

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    Salt-Upon-Wounds charged forward with his elite warriors as bullets whistled past. The Timekeepers’ fire had been weakening as they ran out of bullets and fortifications got overwhelmed all along the hillside. It appeared that the battle was about to end when Salt saw a streak of red light fly past and cut one of his followers down. Suddenly, five strange figures emerged from the Timekeepers’ lines and advanced, blasting red lasers from their hands, cutting down numerous tribal warriors. The metal monsters had a roughly human shape, but a much bulkier body that merged into a conical head topped with a sensor node. Their limbs were not jointed like a human, enhancing the mechanical horror.

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    A pre-war Protectron security robot used by the Timekeepers to augment their human fighters

    Salt ducked behind a rock and narrowly avoided another laser bolt. To his left, a White Leg charged forward and hurled a spear at one of the advancing robots. There was a loud clang as it struck the metal body before bouncing off harmlessly. The robot turned to the threat and unleashed another laser, felling the woman instantly.

    “Deiyape!” one of Salt’s warriors cried as he joined the chief. “What are these metal demons? They are cutting us down with hell-fire!” Salt and his trusted warriors had found cover behind several rocks and a dip in the ground, and they saw the robots turning to face them after driving off most of the other warriors. There was a sudden lull in gunfire, producing an eerie silence broken only by the whirs and clicks of the advancing robots.

    “I do not know, but we must destroy them,” Salt replied. Two of his followers peeked out of cover and fired upon the robots with their makeshift handguns but had little effect. The mechanical weapons continued their relentless advance as bullets ricocheted off, pausing only to fire lasers in return. One of the warriors was slow in getting behind cover and was badly burnt by a narrow miss, taking him out of the fight. The robots were now within thirty paces of Salt and his five remaining warriors, and the rock was beginning to fall apart under blistering laser fire.

    A White Leg warrior was cowering behind a large rock just up the hill, terrified by the metal demons cutting down his friends and family. Beside him, his wife and fellow warrior was dying from a gunshot wound she had taken in the initial assault. Two of the robots were advancing on him as his wife faded away. “Kindred Spirit, do not leave me,” he begged of her, desperately squeezing her hand.

    “It is my time. I shall see you again someday. Be brave for me…” she gasped as her hand slipped from his and she drew her last breath. Something broke in the warrior, sending him into a rage as he stood up. Before him were two of the hated metal demons, staring into his soul with their lifeless sensors.

    “Please remain calm, peace will be restored shortly,” a monotone, electronic voice commanded. The heartbroken warrior lit a stick of dynamite and resolved to see his wife again. A laser lashed out, cutting him down instantly. The two robots continued their slow advance forward as the fuse continued to burn.

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    Salt had gathered his warriors for a final, desperate attack on the metal demons. He and two of his best warriors planned to charge the monsters and engage in melee combat, sacrificing themselves to save the remaining warriors. Salt’s final prayers to the gods were broken by an explosion which tore the furthest two robots apart. A third was sent flying and landed on its back, unable to get up. Salt and his followers charged forward in a desperate attack on the last two robots.

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    The warrior to his right was cut down by a laser, but Salt and his final companion were now upon the robots. “Please stand down,” one of the robots intoned; Salt responded by punching the robot on its conical ‘head’, causing it to shatter when the pneumatic ram impacted. Salt followed this with a swift uppercut which bowled the robot over, leaving it a sparking wreck. To his left, the final robot was leaking fluid and stumbling as the other warrior punctured the hydraulics controlling its limbs. Salt punched the machine in the side, shattering the armored plate and knocking it to the ground.

    The White Legs had won the skirmish, but the cost had been high. Salt and his warriors returned to their camp in order to regroup, buying the trapped Timekeepers yet another day. The beginning of the war was going well, but the metal demons had the power to stop entire warbands. One was trapped behind the lines, tying up far too many White Legs and preventing an advance to the north. The war was not quite as easy as Cornelius had promised, causing Salt-Upon-Wounds to steel himself for much more bloodshed…
     
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    Part 8: A Glimpse of Home
  • A Glimpse of Home

    Jump stood upon the summit of Indian Peak, lost in contemplation of the strange seal at her feet. The metal circle had been worn by hundreds of years of weather, but it was still legible. She knelt and ran her finger over the engravings on its surface, wondering what great battle or hero’s burial site they told of. Surely the people from before knew what a majestic, holy site Indian Peak was.

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    Jump was broken from her reverie by the calls of a young boy. “Jump, Jump! Warriors are coming back!” he yelled, bursting with excitement. “Come on, let’s greet them!” he called before running back down the winding trail. Jump began working her way back down the summit, limping slightly due to her injured leg.

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    When she finally returned to the camp, she saw a mass of prisoners entering under the watchful eye of White Legs warriors. The prisoners were worn down and covered in grime from a long march. The people appeared to be from all walks of life; Jump saw vault dwellers, farmers, and even a handful of tribals. At their head stood Cornelius and his contubernium.

    The two locked eyes and met in the middle of the camp while the prisoners were herded into a stockade. “Ave, scout. How has the camp been in our absence?” Cornelius inquired, not sounding dismissive for once.

    “It has been boring. My leg is almost healed, but I still won’t get to join the war!” Jump pouted.

    “You don’t have to worry about that. The tribe is approaching Vault 24 at this very moment. The Timekeepers are all but defeated, as you can tell,” he said, gesturing at the prisoners behind them.

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    A few moments later, two warriors walked past them, dragging a destroyed robot behind them. “What is that?!” Jump gasped. The machine’s sensor node was shattered while its front armor plate was cracked open, unveiling the complex mass of electronics within.

    “It is a Timekeeper war machine. They are cowards, reliant on their machines. The machines halted our attack briefly, but we soon learned how to defeat them,” Cornelius boasted. “Courageous men will always overcome some soulless machine!” A few moments after this declaration, the shaman hobbled his way over to the group, visibly upset.

    “We cannot take them, that’s too many!” the shaman exclaimed. “How long do we have to feed them for?”

    “Calm, elder. It will be less than a moon until my men and I take them south to Caesar. Your chief demands I return north to him immediately, so I cannot take the slaves until the war is over,” Cornelius replied.

    “They are going to eat all our food, leaving us to starve!” The old man was getting more agitated, and his face was beginning to turn red despite the white paint he wore.

    “My scouts and I shall gather food, venerable elder. Do not worry,” Jump replied. “The children can gather plants while I lead a hunt.” The shaman was mollified, although he continued to grumble under his breath as he left Jump and Cornelius.

    A few hours later, Jump had organized the handful of scouts still at Indian Peak into hunting parties while the children began harvesting plants near the war camp. Jump set out with her loyal companion Kip and Echo, a member of her scavenging party. Kip quickly found the scent of a herd of bighorners, mutated bighorn sheep.

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    The dog led them through dense desert scrub before heading along a dry creek. After half an hour of walking, the creek bed slowly ended, leading into a series of bluffs. Echo spotted a herd of bighorners grazing at the top of the nearest bluff, oblivious to the hunters below them. There were three calves, a huge bull, and three females. A bull alone would provide plenty of meat for the tribe, so Jump worked to position herself downwind of the herd.

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    After finding a good position to lie down and stabilize her rifle, Jump took aim at the bull. She lined up a shot for its heart, paused her breathing, and slowly squeezed the trigger. The rifle barked out, and the bull fell, mortally wounded. A moment later, the hunters heard a man cry out in pain as the rest of the herd fled down the far side of the bluff.

    Jump and Echo went running, Kip excitedly yapping at their heels, suddenly curious where the scream came from. When they reached the bluff, the bighorner was on its side, drawing a few ragged breaths as blood oozed from its wound. A pair of human legs could be seen sticking out from under the beast, clad in combat boots and bluish pants. The two tribals heaved the bighorner off the unfortunate man and were shocked by what they saw.

    There was a man, clearly alive except for the bullet wound in his side, but he looked like a corpse! His skin looked badly burnt as it was covered in scrabs and open wounds showing the muscle beneath while his nose was almost entirely gone, and his hair was patchy.

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    “By the Sky Father, what are you?” Echo exclaimed as Jump applied healing powder and began to bandage the hideous man’s bullet wound. Neither of them could understand his strange language, but Jump noticed he kept repeating himself, saying something like “Al bert”.

    “Help me carry him. We have to get him to the shaman, I’ve only stopped the bleeding,” Jump ordered.

    “What about the bighorner?” Echo demanded.

    “Leave it! You can come back with more hunters after we get back,” Jump said. She then took one of Echo’s spears and drove it into the ground. She tied a strip of fabric to the haft, marking the site of their kill. The two then set out, with Echo taking hold of the man’s upper body, and Jump his legs. The going was rough as Jump’s injured leg pained her and caused her to stop briefly. The final push through the scrub proved the hardest, but the scouts pushed on despite the branches clawing at their legs.

    When they finally reached the camp, almost all the hunters and gatherers had already returned and were preparing what they gathered. “Help, help! Someone is hurt!” Jump called out, spurring the White Legs into action. The shaman was roused from his meditation and gathered his medicinal herbs while the others brought the strange man to a well-lit hut, placing him on a crude wooden table.

    Jump shooed the tribals from the room since they only wanted to ogle the hideous man in the hut. She took his hand, silently willing him to cling to life. “The shaman is almost here; he will help you,” she babbled while the strange man weakly opened his eyes. He muttered something in response, but it was faint as a whisper. A few moments later, the shaman opened the flap and entered, leaning heavily on his staff. Another tribal rushed in, her arms filled with medicinal herbs and bandages.

    “He is an Old One! Where did you find him?” the shaman demanded of Jump, turning his stern gaze on her. The apprentice deposited her load and rushed from the tent once more.

    “He was standing behind a bighorner, and I shot him!” she exclaimed. “Please save him! I do not want this man to die because of me,” she continued, visibly upset at the thought.

    “It is alright child, I will do everything I can for him,” he said. At this point, the apprentice returned, bearing a bucket full of water. “Now go, child, sleep. I will care for this man. Someone will come when he is better,” he continued, pointing Jump toward the exit.

    The scout left as ordered and absentmindedly walked to her own tent, climbing into her bedroll. She slept, but it was the restless, anxious sleep of a worried mind. Several thoughts went through her head, foremost among them the possibility of killing an innocent man…killing the tribe’s enemies in war was good, but the strange man was not an enemy. Another thought nagged at her; how did the shaman know what this strange man was?

    When Jump awoke, she felt the soft light of a new morning filtering through her tent, giving her body a faint yellow glow. She resisted opening her eyes a few moments, relishing the comfort of her bedroll. However, the thoughts soon returned, driving her to check on the strange man. As she walked through the camp, few were stirring. A handful of people were preparing the morning’s cook-fires while a few hunters were returning with their haul from the traps.

    Jump reached the tent where the strange man was and paused briefly. She feared the man might be dead but had to know. She steeled her mind and gently lifted the flap, stepping inside. The shaman slept in the corner on a bundle of furs while the strange man was still on the table. His chest gently rose and fell, relieving Jump greatly. His wound had obviously been bad though, as bloody bandages were strewn all about the ground.

    Jump seated herself in the corner and patiently waited for the shaman to wake up. After quite some time he finally did, slightly shocked to see the scout back in the tent. “Help me up, child, and then we can talk,” he whispered. The two left the tent and seated themselves on the ground twenty paces away.

    “Will he live?” Jump immediately demanded, the concern clear on her face.

    “I have done all I can, and it is in the gods’ hands now,” the shaman replied. “But I think there is a good chance. I was able to remove the bullet, and he made it through the night.” Jump was clearly relieved but needed more answers.

    “You know what he is, don’t you, venerable elder?” she inquired, thirsting for knowledge. The shaman hesitated for a moment, clearly collecting his thoughts.

    “He is an Old One, a man from before the Harrowing. In exchange for eternal life, their bodies become like a corpse. Most say it is a curse, some say it is a blessing. Regardless, he knows secret, terrible things from the Old World,” the shaman finally offered.

    “What tongue does he speak? I do not understand him but want to,” Jump pleaded, desperate to know more.

    “It is something the Outmen call In-glisch,” the shaman said, pronouncing the strange word hesitantly. “It is the tongue of the Legion, as well as those to the west, on the shores of the Great Sea. I know only a few words, but it was enough to know the man’s name is Albert.”

    “Thank you, venerable elder. Has Cornelius left already?” she inquired with a hint of urgency.

    “I do not think so, child. He planned to leave tomorrow,” the shaman said. “Why the change in topic?”

    “I must go to see him! Thank you!” Jump called out as she excitedly rose and ran off to find the servant of the Bull. The shaman shook his head, concerned at this sudden need to know the Old World…


    Note: So, a new character is introduced. I hope you don't mind the adventure at home. It can be hard to write battle scenes that are unique and interesting, so I'm trying to save them for critical moments. This also allows me to develop my characters and the Fallout world, so hopefully you enjoy!

    We should learn more about this mysterious man, but I'm willing to answer any questions now if interested. Thanks for following along, and I look forward to your thoughts!
     
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    Part 9: The Last Tick
  • The Last Tick

    Salt-Upon-Wounds stood near a cave entrance, waiting for two scouts to emerge. Cornelius, his men, and Salt’s companions all stood back from the chief, afraid of earning his wrath. After several minutes, the group heard a faint voice call out, “Chief! This is where they have hidden!” A few moments later, one of the scouts emerged and gestured for the group to follow him in.

    The cave was fairly straight but had a steady downward slope which was perfectly smooth and clearly carved out by humans. After about 150 paces, the tunnel flattened out and suddenly ended. The stone walls suddenly turned into metal, centered around a gear-shaped door.

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    To the left of the door stood a console. The other scout was pushing buttons on it, swearing in frustration at the cursed piece of tech. One of Cornelius’ men whispered to him and he gestured to just above the door, “Look, they are watching us.” The group saw a small camera panning across the tunnel before it focused on Salt and Cornelius.

    Suddenly, a voice boomed out of a hidden speaker, “This is Timekeeper Horatio. We are willing to negotiate, assuming you are the leader of this pack of dogs.” A noise could be heard as well, the rhythmic ticking of a clock, and Horatio seemed to synchronize his words with the ticks, producing a strange staccato.

    Salt grunted as he looked for an enemy to destroy. “Show yourself coward! I am Salt-Upon-Wounds, chief of the White Legs! Face me in honorable combat, and I will show mercy on your people!”

    “I do not think that would be in our interests. Time is on our side in this. Come back when you have rethought your decision.”

    “Gahh! I will tear you from your metal hole, clock-worshipper! Your people’s blood shall drench these lands!” Salt cried out as he stormed from the tunnel in disgust. Cornelius rushed to keep up as the chief vented his frustrations. “We shall make camp here and starve the fools out. They shall have to surrender soon!”

    “I would not be so sure of that, chief. The mighty Caesar has fought several of these vault-dwellers before, and their bunkers are almost self-sufficient. We shall have to find someone who has a key…” Cornelius counseled.



    Timekeeper Alex’s entire body ached; he had not slept in at least 36 hours, and his few remaining men were in no better condition. The group had escaped the initial encirclement at Cricket Mountains, sacrificing the last of their Protectrons to do so. From there, they had been relentlessly pursued north before eventually joining a town militia in a desperate defense against the White Legs. Once again, he found himself encircled, and escape seemed much less likely this time. The tribals roamed across the land and nowhere was safe.

    Alex and his men had fortified a small farmstead on the northern shore of Sevier Lake and fended off White Legs for two days now. He glanced through the cracks of a boarded-up window on the second floor and took in the massive fires that marked a tribal raiding party. The fires reached up to the night sky, silhouetting warriors as they danced around, chanting in their guttural language. Suddenly, the chants ended, and an eerie silence set in.

    Gunfire suddenly broke out on the eastern side of the house. Alex rushed to a window as his mind raced. Damn! The tribals had tricked him by leaving a few to chant while the others snuck around to the farmstead. Alex peeked out a window and saw shadows dashing through the farmyard. He shouldered his assault rifle and let off several bursts, but it was almost impossible to hit anything.

    An explosion rocked the house and knocked Alex off his feet. The tribals had snuck another war party around to the west and had blown a hole in the wall. Alex suddenly heard war cries rise above the sounds of gunfire and screaming. A Timekeeper ran past Alex, desperate to escape the charnel house. Alex grabbed at the man, who turned to face him. His eyes were panicked, and he tried to shove Alex off. “Game over man, game over!” he screamed as he tried to free himself from Alex’s grip.

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    The man finally got free and dashed toward a back staircase, reaching it just as the door was thrown open. Salt-Upon-Wounds entered, flames flickering off his demonic helmet. He advanced on the panicked Timekeeper, felling him with a single blow of his power fist. Alex tried to fire, but the chief was upon him; Alex was convinced he was about to die, but the killing blow never came.

    “You are a Timekeeper chief?” Salt demanded as he shook Alex.

    “Y-yes, I am an officer,” Alex stuttered. He then felt his arms forced behind his back and bound by a rough rope. He now noticed the gunfire had died off and the night was quiet once more, disturbed only by the crackling of fire. The chief marched him down the stairs, prodding Alex and knocking him off balance to the amusement of the tribals on the ground floor. One of the savages stepped up and talked to his chief in their harsh language before raising Alex’s left arm and gesturing at his Pip-Boy computer.

    Salt barked out a command and two other tribals took hold of Alex and dragged him from the room, across the farmyard, and threw him over the back of a brahmin. They then blindfolded him, and the group was off, but Alex could not tell which way. He thought it might be east as he felt the rising sun’s heat on his head…definitely east as he thought further, east to Vault 24…

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    Alex did not know how long he had been carried on the brahmin, but he was glad to get off and stand on his own feet. However, he soon came to regret that when the blindfold was suddenly removed to reveal a horde of White Legs assembled at the tunnel to Vault 24. His stomach sank as his tormentors led him into the tunnel past group upon group of savages.

    They soon came to the vault door, still sealed up tight. Salt, Cornelius, and a number of their warriors stood near the control panel; Alex’s guards led him to the chief and knocked him to his knees with the haft of their spears. One of them yanked his head up by his hair, forcing him to lock eyes with Salt-Upon-Wounds’ terrifying mask.

    “You will open the vault,” Salt growled. “We will get in eventually, so your cooperation will earn my mercy. Otherwise, we shall sack the vault, killing whoever we please.” He then gestured to the control panel. Alex glared at the tribals defiantly and refused to move. Salt let out a grunt, stood back up, and then Alex felt a sudden pain in his back, knocking him over. Several tribals advanced on him, kicking and beating him mercilessly. The assault went on unbearably long until Salt ordered his warriors to stop.

    Alex caught his breath in ragged gasps, his body screaming out in pain. He just laid there, determined to resist until his death. He was pulled up by his hair again, leaving him mere inches from Salt-Upon-Wounds. He could feel the hatred of the chief and smelled his foul breath. “You will open that door,” Salt growled, barely audible but filled with force.

    Suddenly, Cornelius gestured to two of his men who brought a terrified prisoner into the room. “Chief, I believe this shall be far more persuasive than your – eh, simple – methods.” Within moments, one of the legionaries brought his machete down like lightning, beheading the prisoner and splashing blood across Alex’s face. Cornelius approached Alex, towering over him; “We have plenty of prisoners, and each of their deaths will be your responsibility. Now will you kindly open the door?” Cornelius sneered, an expression of mock friendliness on his face.

    Alex weakly nodded his head and felt his broken body being dragged over to the control panel. He booted up his Pip-Boy and plugged a cable into the panel. A prompt came up, and Alex entered the access code. Klaxons began to sound while red strobe lights suddenly filled the tunnel. The door began to open, unleashing a sudden rush of stale, processed air into the tunnel. A giant arm moved the massive door to one side, leaving the vault open to the White Legs.

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    The warriors hesitated briefly, unsure what to make of this relic of the Old World. However, Salt and his companions rushed forth, descending into the bowels of the vault, spurring the remaining warriors on. Screams of fear and agony drifted up to Alex, punctuated by brief gunfire, the final desperate breaths of his people. Within hours, the Timekeepers had been wiped out or captured, doomed to a short life of slavery to Caesar or the White Legs.

    Salt relished his victory over the hated clock-worshippers. The fools had fought long and hard, but they had never been able to stand up to the might of the tribe. All these thoughts passed through his head as he stood before the Timekeepers most treasured possession, a massive clock that stretched from the floor to the ceiling. Tick, tick, tick echoed throughout the room, invading Salt’s mind. He suddenly remembered a vision from his struggle with the Beast, a massive clock smashed into pieces. He then jumped into action, calling out to his warriors even as he ripped a chunk of the clock from the wall. His followers soon joined in, reveling in the destruction of something they did not and could not understand.

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    With the fall of Vault 24, the Timekeepers were broken, their people scattered, their crops burnt, and their homes devastated by war. They were at the mercies of the White Legs and were doomed to be forgotten by history. Salt-Upon-Wounds had led his people in a great conquest, doubling their lands while gaining new slaves and precious goods. However, his lust for conquest was not satiated, and his gaze turned further to the east…

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    Part 10: The Tar Walkers
  • The Tar Walkers

    Jump stared at the strange shapes Albert had scraped in the dirt, totally mystified as to their meaning. Kip was laying in the far corner of the tent, resting his muzzle on his paws. He appeared lazy and tired, but Jump saw his eyes darting about the tent, betraying his intelligence. As the scout looked up, Albert was shaking his head, in the motion she thought meant ‘no’, although the words he taught swam in her head, confusing her greatly.

    She had been studying with Albert in her spare time ever since he had recovered, determined to learn from the Old One. Cornelius had advised her not to bother before joining the assault on Vault 24, but the scout had not heeded his words. A few weeks later, Cornelius and his men passed through with news of victory against the clock-worshippers. The decanus had left just as quickly, leading the prisoners south to Arizona as a tribute to Caesar. He had also sent word that Salt-Upon-Wounds was moving east to conquer the Tar Walkers and gain further glory.

    Jump had originally been happy as it gave her more time with Albert, but she was no longer so certain; lessons had originally gone quickly as she learned his name, her name, and a few simple phrases. However, he had started teaching the ‘alphabet’, a mad system of squiggles as far as Jump was concerned. Albert insisted there was some meaning behind it, but Jump suspected he was messing with her.

    Albert groaned as he stood up, his ancient knees crying out in protest. He beckoned to Jump as he exited the tent, briefly checking if she was following. He led her out of the camp and through the wilderness to the ridge where Jump had shot him. He shook his head as he hiked over the ridge before descending. As Jump crested the ridge, she saw a small shack nestled against a hillside with an animal pen to the side. It suddenly dawned on the scout that the bighorners the tribe had eaten were Albert’s livestock, explaining why he was so close to them.

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    The Old One entered the shack, and Jump decided to follow him. She was not thrilled with entering the ramshackle structure, almost certain that it would collapse in a stiff breeze. It took several moments for the scout's eyes to adjust, finally revealing a cramped, filthy room. A counter ran along the entire left wall, covered in various pieces of machines and electronics. A bed was against the far side of the shack while the right wall had a chair that had once been nice together with a wooden table. The table was covered in stacks of papers and books. Albert was furiously digging through the stacks, clearly looking for something. He finally exclaimed in victory, satisfied with what he had found. Jump glanced over his shoulder, taking in a ragged book with yellowed pages.

    She was surprised to see lifelike illustrations of a boy, a girl, two adults, and a dog. The accursed ‘alphabet’ was scrawled all over the pages, ruining the beautiful pictures in Jump’s opinion. Albert also gathered up several random papers, and a strange yellow stick. He then led Jump from his home with a smile on his face, obviously pleased with himself.

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    When they returned to camp, Albert immediately set into a new lesson, drawing on the papers with the yellow stick. To Jump’s surprise, it left a dark mark wherever he went! He then started drawing the alphabet again when Echo entered, an eager expression on his face.

    “We are going to war!” he exclaimed. “Our chief has formed a whole warband of scouts, and we were chosen!”

    “When do we leave?” Jump inquired as she felt a strange mix of emotions. On the one hand, she had always dreamed of fighting for her people. On the other, Albert was beginning to teach her so many things. A thought of staying flashed through her mind before being squashed by her sense of duty.

    “At dawn tomorrow. The rest of the warbands have gathered, and Salt shall attack once we join them!” Echo exclaimed before leaving the tent. Jump turned back to Albert, desperate to make him understand. He wore a concerned expression on his face, obviously realizing something was wrong. Jump struggled to express herself, but she eventually made it clear she was going to war, leaving Albert for a time.

    Albert watched the young scout leave his tent and felt his heart drop. He’d finally met someone in these lands, someone that cared about more than surviving, but she’d just been torn away from him for some godforsaken squabble. After several minutes of wallowing in his misery, Albert suddenly had a mischievous idea, and a smile slowly spread across his face…



    Bron stood at the center of the makeshift arena, basking in the adulation of his people. As he flexed his heavily tattooed muscles, the crowd went wild with anticipation.

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    While Bron was engrossed in the crowd, a shaman entered, followed by two apprentices in simple robes carrying a barrel between them. The group advanced to the middle of the arena, where the shaman pried the barrel open, followed by the apprentices turning it on its side. Black tar oozed out, spreading across the center of the arena. The shaman raised his fist, calling the crowd to silence. Bron bowed his head in respect, allowing the shaman to continue.

    The apprentices began to chant, a low guttural thing. The shaman began to turn about, waving his arms as he spun in a circle, faster, faster. He spun into the tar and began to stomp his feet in the rhythmic dance of the Tar Walkers, a prelude to the sacrifice to the gods.

    Just as the shaman finished the ritual stomp-dance, the sacrifices were ushered in. On the far side of the arena, Bron saw two warriors that would face him. Their limited tattoos betrayed their relative inexperience, disappointing Bron that they had to be sent along the War Road. However, his regret disappeared as the young men came closer, betraying the sickness that plagued them. Their bodies were covered in boils and soot-colored splotches while the leftmost man’s body shook from an uncontrollable fever.

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    Like much of the rest of the tribe, these men were deathly ill. Rather than dying in agony, they had decided to be sent along the Sacred Route 89 by their king, Bron. The men were visibly nervous, clutching their makeshift blades tightly; it was too late to change their minds though as the crowd was beginning to go wild.

    “Gods of Tar, we prepare to send you these souls down Sacred Route 89 to join you in eternal battle along the War Road! Accept our offering and strengthen our warriors’ spirits!” the shaman called out before withdrawing from the arena, closely followed by his young apprentices. Bron approached his opponents, casually swiping his blade through the air in preparation for the duel.

    A horn suddenly sounded, marking the beginning of the duel. The crowd let out a loud cheer, encouraging their king to make it swift. He obliged them, working his way around the spilled tar. One of the warriors went to meet Bron head on while the other began to work his way around the tar to attack from behind. The strategy was sound, but it left the first man to face the ferocious king in single combat, a situation wherein many a warrior had been bested before.

    Bron approached the first, determined to best him before his comrade could help. He noticed a moment of panic in the young man’s eyes and then launched his attack, swinging his blade as quick as lightning. The youth clumsily blocked it with his crude machete and launched his own attack with an overhead blow. Bron deftly sidestepped and shuffled to the right, leaving the young man trapped between the king and the tar.

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    The warrior stepped back as Bron renewed his assault, hesitating when his foot reached the sticky tar. That moment of uncertainty was all Bron needed to break through his guard and deliver a devastating blow. The warrior’s eyes betrayed his shock as Bron buried his blade in the man’s chest, sending him along the War Road.

    As Bron turned to face his final opponent, the crowd let out a deafening cheer at the first death, slowing his reflexes just enough for the second warrior to deliver a glancing blow to the king’s arm, drawing blood. The crowd gasped, excited by the sudden turn in the duel. The warrior allowed a brief smile to cross his face, proud at wounding the king, the fiercest of the tribe. Bron did not give the man a chance to revel in his success, immediately launching a relentless assault on the hapless warrior. Bron seemed unbothered by the cut, and he continued to drive the young man back under a hail of blows that were only barely blocked.

    As Bron drove forward, the duel became a matter of endurance. If Bron’s arm gave out, the young warrior might have a chance; however, if the warrior’s guard slipped, it would all be over. The dueling warriors were approaching the scrap-metal wall of the arena, and the crowd’s cheers were approaching a fever pitch. The young man was a moment too slow in blocking, and Bron’s blade found its mark, cutting deeply into the man’s side. He gasped in pain as Bron batted his machete away, leaving him totally at the king’s mercy. He knelt before Bron, fixing his eyes on the sacred marker at the center of the tar. The king suddenly dealt the killing blow, leaving a prayer to the War Road the last words on the young warrior’s lips.

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    As Bron exited the arena, he was quickly greeted by Daarr, one of his loyal retainers. “Great King! Congratulations on another glorious victory! I have news from the west; the White Legs move against us, not satisfied with destroying the Timekeepers.”

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    “Gather our warriors! I look forward to sacrificing the fools to the gods. We shall revel in the slaughter and grease the War Road with their guts!” Bron exclaimed, eager for a real war to distract from the grim reality of the Sickness-of-Soot. A true clash between the warrior-tribes of Utah was about to begin, and only one could remain standing at the end…

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    Note: The Tar Walkers are another tribe only briefly mentioned in Fallout New Vegas that the mod has somewhat fleshed out. I've added my own characterization on top of this, and I hope you find it entertaining. This should be a much more even fight since the front is very long and I do not have overwhelming numbers. The next chapters will go into greater detail on the war.

    I know it's somewhat unlikely books would survive a nuclear exchange and 200 years, but that honestly goes for most things in Fallout, so hopefully it doesn't break your immersion in the story. I enjoy thinking about simple things in our life and how strange they would look to someone raised in an entirely different world, and I hope you don't mind my sidetracks on these. More will come in the future, and I hope they prove thought provoking

    Finally, the Q3 AAR Choice Awards are upon us! I highly encourage you to vote here for AARs you have been reading and enjoying. I know authors appreciate the support, and I would be humbled to receive your acknowledgement. Thanks to @jak7139 and @Eurasia for their votes, I'm glad you've been enjoying my work!
     
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    Part 11: Born of War
  • Born of War

    The Living Prophet, Jeremiah Rigdon, sat behind his handcrafted wooden desk, lost in thought as he looked out over the beauty of New Jerusalem. It was nothing like the cities of the Old World, but the walls were strong, and the buildings well built, nothing like the ramshackle huts Wastelanders lived in. The centerpiece of the settlement was its fine church; it had been painstakingly built from stones, shaped by hand until they fit the mason’s vision. The result was a building that a people could be proud of, a true testament to God’s will on Earth.

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    Note: I think he looks a bit like Jeremy Clarkson which is amusing, but not how I will characterize him (unfortunately)

    A respectful knock sounded on the wooden door to his office, breaking him from his reverie. “Come in,” the Prophet called out. His assistant, Isaac, opened the door and ushered in the visitor. Jeremiah smiled when he saw, Amos, sheriff of New Jerusalem. His face was deeply tanned from years in the sun while he wore laborer’s clothes, a plain shirt and pants, concealing his true status. The only hint of his importance was his hand-crafted gun belt, worked with intricate thorns, and the fine handgun it held.

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    “Jeremiah, I have news for you,” Amos began. “The White Legs have attacked the Tar Walkers and seem ready to overrun the northern pass. The Tar Walkers should hold in the center, but a breakthrough in the north threatens to cut us off from them. They need help in holding the White Legs back.”

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    “What more do they want?” Jeremiah asked rhetorically. “We have already given them weapons, and we supply them with our goods at a reasonable price. We shall not declare war unless their savage ‘king’ converts as I have told his emissaries before!”

    “They’re happy with the guns, and they don’t want us to join their war. The emissary explained we would ‘spoil’ the contest and ruin the dead’s journey down their War Road.” Amos spat out the last sentence, obviously bothered by the pagan nonsense of the Tar Walkers. “Instead, they want us to send some ‘volunteers’ to guard the northern pass, securing our trade.”

    Jeremiah’s ring encrusted hand went to his brow, betraying his deep consideration. His forehead wrinkled for a moment, and his eyes suddenly lit up. “Round up the usual suspects. I suspect they’ll relish a chance to oppose the White Legs, and they’ll be out of my hair for a while,” he ordered, a sly grin sneaking across his face.

    Amos nodded as he rose from his ornate chair, also flashing a brief smile. “It’ll be nice to get rid of a few troublemakers. They’ve been keepin my boys busy with all their rallies about the ‘White Leg menace’. They just don’t understand the intricacy of your plan, and my boys can’t make ‘em see reason.”

    Jeremiah nodded absently, his mind already turning to other issues. Amos then set about his task, putting out a call for volunteers to fight the White Legs. As hoped, those most opposed to the Prophet’s plan of indirect intervention by strengthening friendly tribes rallied to the cause. Amos thought it was a motley band, a bunch of farmers, miners, and city-folk bearing their worn shotguns, rifles, and handguns, but they might just give the White Legs some trouble. The group was formed within a week and set out to the south, arriving just in time to save the Tar Walker’s capital, New Nephi. When the White Legs met this opposition, they withdrew and reconsolidated.

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    A few days later, the White Legs renewed the attack while Jump and the rest of her scout warband flanked the city to its east. Jump had not realized how much marching and how little action made up war. Everything had initially seemed so exciting, but that illusion was shattered by a two-week march through the deserted wilds east of New Nephi.

    The only upside was Albert had followed along, becoming something of a mascot for the tribal warriors. He had seemed insistent that Jump must continue her studies, regardless of the war. The scout had not been willing to stay behind during a second war, so the Old One had decided to follow her. Every day, the scouts set off, loping across the desert with their hounds. At day’s end, the ancient, battered man would shuffle into camp hours after everyone else and begin his lesson, barely stopping for food or drink. At first, the scouts made bets about where they would lose him, what wasteland creature would eat him, or when he would give up and go home. However, Albert continued to shock them in his persistence, proving tolerant of the life of a roving warband.

    The warband was about to receive new excitement though, as they readied for a surprise attack on the New Canaanites guarding New Nephi. Salt’s warband had already pinned them down, and they appeared wholly unready for a warband suddenly arriving on their flank.

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    The sounds of gunfire, explosions, and screaming grew stronger as Jump and her companions approached the outskirts of New Nephi. Albert had found himself a vantage point on a hill, overlooking the entire battlefield. He watched intently, remembering the flow of the battle. Few had the chance to watch history in the making, and Albert had decided this was his purpose.

    He saw Salt’s warriors make another frontal assault before being repulsed, retreating as a fraction of the original force. However, this attack had drawn the defenders to the frontlines, leaving only a few sentries covering the rear. These hapless men were quickly dispatched by the White Leg scouts, leaving the town at their mercy. Albert lost sight of them as they disappeared among the buildings, but he soon heard gunfire and screaming. The New Canaanites hesitated as fear spread through their ranks, spurring Salt’s warriors into a renewed attack. The defenders had a choice: stand, fight, and die, or run. A brave, foolhardy handful stood and fought, struck down behind their barricades, drenched in the blood of their foes. The rest ran, quickly devolving into a terrified rabble.

    Albert shook his head as the Mormons slipped away. The White Legs had won the town, but they let most of their enemy slip away, guaranteeing they would clash again. He let out a chuckle, shaking his head. “You old coot, what are you doing? Rooting for the savages? You gonna start running around like a spear-chucker, join in on all their hollering?” he said to himself. Despite the harsh words, Albert had not been this excited in decades, if not longer. The tribe fascinated him, and he could not wait to learn more of them, after he educated the scout of course. He began hiking down the hill and headed for town, still chuckling to himself.

    When he arrived, he walked through throngs of White Legs in search of his charge; most of them ignored him, but a few of the scouts pointed and smiled, obviously entertained by him. He eventually found Jump, standing around a pile of jewelry and other shiny trinkets the tribals had gathered from the town. She was obviously excited and was babbling about something to those around her. When Albert called out to her, she immediately smiled and ran over to him, holding something in her hands.

    She pressed the item in his hands, insistent that Albert take the gift. He finally relented and turned his gaze to what she had chosen. He found it was a small book, bound in leather with initials worked on the cover. However, the beautiful workmanship was marred by the dark, sticky blood that coated it. He opened it anyways, determined not to insult her. Glancing down, he immediately realized it was a Bible, obviously taken from one of the fallen. He closed the book, smiling as he thanked the scout. Satisfied he was pleased, she eventually left him in peace, excited to celebrate the victory with the rest of her people.

    Albert slipped away as the tribals sang and danced, eventually finding a comfortable place to sit. He opened his journal and leafed through all his notes describing the march to war. When he set out, he had grand visions of recording a history of his life among the White Legs, something that would leave his mark on the world. He tried to record the battle, but his hand kept freezing as his mind wandered, back to the Bible, its cover stained by blood. Perhaps the White Legs were as savage as everyone said.

    Their callous disregard for blood, battle, and death bothered him, but it should not have. He was a generation born from war; his world had been scorched away by nuclear hellfire, unleashed by those soaked in blood. In comparison, the White Legs only played at war, never able to match what had happened two hundred years before. Albert also could not hope but see some good in them. Jump had a certain naivety, an innocence about her. Her people were humanity at its most primitive and savage, yet the humanity still shone through. Albert had seen this as he lived and worked among them, giving him hope yet. Perhaps his mission was not anything so grandiose as a book. Perhaps he could influence the tribe, guiding them into humanity while avoiding the mistakes of the Old World. The ancient man fell asleep at this thought, a contented smile on his lips.

    Note: I was quite impressed by the AI's efforts. If they had been just a bit more aggressive they could have cutoff my spearhead around New Nephi and possibly destroyed them. This was certainly the best performance I've seen in HOI4 so far, and I hope that will come across in this and the next update.

    I've also introduced the future rival, the New Canaanites/Mormons. A complicated people with a complicated history, but I can't take credit for their general design/theme. The mod pulls heavily from the cancelled Fallout 3, Van Buren, so my work on them is only in fleshing out that framework.
     
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    Part 12: A Meeting in the Desert
  • A Meeting in the Desert

    Albert’s ancient joints screamed out in pain as he sat, totally exhausted by the last two months of running across the wastes of Utah, following Jump and the other scouts. Tribals rushed past, paying him no heed, which suited him just fine. He pulled his journal from his bag, absentmindedly paging through his record of events since the fall of New Nephi. He saw something from the week or so after the battle, chuckling about the mad situation he had found himself in.

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    He had followed Jump to the southwest and watched her comrades launch a desperate attack on some Tar Walkers that were attempting to push north, cutting off the best of the White Legs’ warriors. In response, Salt had ordered some of his warriors in the west to finally attack, hopefully linking the two forces together.

    The scouts’ stalling attack had secured Vault 24, but the situation remained precarious. Salt called off his attack to the east of New Nephi and attempted to push south, isolating the Tar Walker warband from any assistance.

    The truly decisive event was Vippnah’s attacks all along the southernmost portion of the front. The Tar Walkers had slowly been drawing forces further and further north, threatening Salt’s breakthrough but leaving the south nearly undefended. The Tar Walkers attacked a lone White Leg warband, pushing them back, but they left themselves badly exposed.

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    The Tar Walkers had eventually pushed too deep, leaving their flanks exposed as other warbands’ chiefs grew bored of guarding the border and wandered north in search of glory. Vipponah unleashed a fearsome attack, quickly overwhelming the border regions and appearing ready to crush two whole Tar Walker warbands.

    These men held out about a week before surrendering, allowing Vipponah’s warriors to rampage across the south almost at will. A few warbands opposed them, but they were quickly driven off. It appeared that some of the Tar Walkers received word of the danger in the south and began to return, desperate to stop the spread of the White Legs. This had bought enough time for Salt to stabilize his front, possibly saving the White Legs from encirclement and defeat.

    The scouts managed to cutoff two warbands to the east of New Nephi, leaving them out of supply and in danger. However, other warbands had mustered and attempted to retake the town. Salt marshaled his warriors and saw them off, proving too strong to defeat. Perhaps most decisively, several Tar Walker warbands wandered off once more, leaving their border wide open, which Salt’s warriors quickly exploited.

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    In a matter of days, all the Tar Walkers in the north were surrounded and in danger of being destroyed. Salt had effectively won the war in the north, and it was just a matter of how long it took to wipe out the isolated Tar Walkers.

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    However, the Tar Walkers’ king had proven elusive, ambushing White Leg patrols and then disappearing into the wastes. Salt gathered his finest warriors and scouts, determined to capture the fool. After days of tracking him, it appeared Bron was finally cornered. Salt stood before a small cave, surrounded by his loyal followers. Dogs were barking fiercely, eager to get at whatever was inside the cave. Salt called out to the gathered White Legs, “Let loose the mongrels! They shall drive the dog out where he can die like a man!” The warriors let out a cheer as the hounds let loose a howl and were finally released by their handlers, immediately darting into the cave. Gunshots echoed out as several dogs let out yelps of pain, followed by a cacophony of men screaming, dogs growling, and the sound of battle. Several dogs suddenly burst from the cave, fleeing to their handlers.

    It became eerily silent, broken only by the faint whimpering of injured dogs. Several men suddenly burst from the cave, piercing the silence with their fearsome battle cry. Bron, towering over his followers, led them directly toward Salt-Upon-Wounds, halting mere paces from the White Legs’ chief. Bron spat at Salt’s feet, fixing him with an expression of pure hate.

    Salt’s mask concealed his emotion as he stared down the Tar Walkers’ king. After several moments, Salt chuckled and said, “So, you finally decide to face me after your tribe is dead, scattered to the wind. The fearsome warrior-king Bron has been hiding in a cave, like the animal he is!” Salt’s warriors had formed a circle around Bron and Salt, and they roared with approval at the insult.

    “I am Bron, undisputed master of the War Road! I have already killed ten and nine of your tribe, sacrificing them to my gods. You shall make a fine sacrifice too,” the king sneered as he readied his blade. The few Tar Walkers and Salt’s companions stepped back, leaving the two warriors alone. Dozens of eyes bore down on them as total silence fell.

    Salt entered a fighting stance and slowly shuffled in a circle, hoping to turn Bron until he faced into the sun. The strategy was sound, but the king was no fool, launching his attack almost immediately. Salt dodged the first strike and caught the second on his power fist, punching Bron in the gut with his left hand. Air rushed from the king, and he quickly fell back, gasping. Salt snarled and unleashed his own attack, striking with both his power fist and bare knuckles. Bron dodged Salt’s blows, but he was quickly running out of space to retreat.

    He ducked another of Salt’s blows, rolling to the right. The White Legs’ chief stumbled as he tried to change course, giving Bron an opening to attack. Bron stabbed at Salt’s head, causing the chief to raise his power fist. The king moved his blade to the side, cutting Salt’s forearm deeply.

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    However, Salt’s arm snapped down, knocking the blade from Bron’s grasp, sending it flying into the dust behind the chief. Salt let out a snarl and advanced on the king, eventually landing a blow on Bron’s left arm, shattering the bone. The king grimaced in pain, momentarily stunned. Salt landed another blow, knocking Bron to the ground.

    The king tried to rise, but his broken leg resisted, leaving him a crumpled mess in the dirt. Salt bent down and retrieved Bron’s blade, seemingly admiring its workmanship. He casually returned, almost uninterested in the squirming Bron. Without a second thought, Salt skewered the king, ending his struggles. The remaining Tar Walkers cowered, their spirits broken.

    The rest of the tribe soon followed suit, throwing themselves upon Salt’s mercy. Most of the Tar Walkers were enslaved while Salt’s warriors distributed the loot amongst themselves, joyous in another glorious victory. Salt sent an emissary south, into the lands of Caesar, bearing gifts of slaves and various trinkets to show the might of his tribe and its gratitude to Caesar. Salt quietly mocked the Beast he had faced five seasons ago, convinced its prophecies had been wrong. The White Legs had not been consumed by tar, so it had clearly just sought to torment the chief.

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    Albert had even met Salt-Upon-Wounds, something he hoped to never repeat. The chief had come, demanding he write a note describing Salt-Upon-Wounds’ glorious victory and unmatched strength. The Old One had embellished of course, since he knew the chief could not understand what he wrote. Salt had then taken the note and pinned it to Bron’s decapitated head before ordering a scout to bear it north, to the New Canaanites. One of the Mormons found the gruesome message, bearing it back to the Living Prophet. Salt-Upon-Wounds had declared his message, and it would soon be time for the Prophet to respond…

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    Note: Apologies for the delay, but I had family in town and was busy having fun :). However, I managed to get an update in, so I hope you enjoy! Just a note, I haven't declared war on New Canaan yet, but the war is obviously coming.

    I was a bit disappointed in the Tar Walkers' performance since they legitimately had me worried they might destroy my best warbands in the north. Luckily, they decided to play the AI shuffle and lose on both fronts!
     
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    Part 13: A Frumentarius Comes Among Them
  • A Frumentarius Comes Among Them

    The strange man strode through the White Legs’ camp with purpose, paying no heed to the warriors escorting him. Tribals gawked as he went past, mystified by the device on his face. He glanced their way, causing the children to shriek and run off, disappearing in the confusing mass of tents. The adults averted their eyes, intimidated by the man’s intense stare.

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    They eventually reached Salt-Upon-Wounds’ tent, ushering the newcomer in. Salt was seated on the ground together with the shaman, engaged in a heated debate, but quickly fell quiet as the new man entered.

    “I am a frumentarius in the service of Caesar,” the newcomer boomed, his voice a deep, gravelly bass. “I shall teach you much in the ways of war so long as you carry out Caesar’s will,” he continued.

    “Are you saying we do not know war?” Salt challenged. His expression remained impossible to see beneath his helmet, but his body seemed to have tensed up.

    “You know ferocity and courage, but there is much to learn. I shall teach you explosives, guns, tactics, and more. All Caesar asks is that you destroy New Canaan for him. He will then consider granting your tribe entry into the Legion, bringing glory and purpose on your people.” Both truth and lie, he thought.

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    Salt visibly relaxed, seemingly satisfied by the answer. He stood up and exited the tent, waiting for the newcomer to follow him. “If you truly wish to teach, you must learn first,” Salt said as he walked, leading the newcomer to a clearing in the camp. The shaman had followed behind, gathering the tribals spread throughout the camp. Salt called out to two of his warriors and discussed something with them. He returned to the newcomer, bearing a strange weapon.

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    “Put this on,” Salt said as he handed the gauntlet over. “The mantis gauntlet is one of our most treasured weapons. Each youth must kill a giant mantis in order to become a warrior of the tribe. My warriors will teach you how to use it, and then you may teach us your ways.”

    “An honor,” the newcomer said. “I look forward to fighting alongside you.” A lie. He then slid the gauntlet onto his arm and began sparring with a massive White Leg. The fighters circled each other, waiting for an opening to strike. The White Leg saw his chance first, lunging at the frumentarius. The newcomer blocked the blow and counterattacked, starting a series of lightning-quick attacks and counterattacks.

    Blood was running from various cuts on each man, pooling on the parched soil, while both would be badly bruised by the next morning. The frumentarius launched another attack, but the White Leg ducked it, catching the frumentarius in the stomach with his shoulder. The White Leg knocked him on his feet and stood victorious over the newcomer. The crowd cheered out in victory, thrilled by the excellent fight they had seen.

    “Baika-good fight,” Salt-Upon-Wounds said as he helped the frumentarius to his feet. “You have proven yourself a member of the tribe, and we welcome your teachings.”

    “Good,” the frumentarius replied. “We shall start tomorrow.” With that, he left the arena and laid out his bedroll in a secluded part of the camp. As he ate his simple meal, a child watched from behind a rock. The frumentarius pretended to ignore the boy, hoping he would go away. After several minutes, he finally called out, “Come, and talk if you wish. Do not hide.” The boy came and sat across from the newcomer, looking at him curiously.

    “What is that?” the boy finally asked, pointing at the frumentarius’ strange staff. It was topped with a golden eagle but appeared a standard staff otherwise.

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    “It is a flagpole, used for carrying an Old World flag, like the one on my back,” the frumentarius answered. It is a symbol of America that sleeps.” The young boy was confused by the frumentarius’ musings and wandered off, sharing his story with all the other tribals. As the frumentarius finished eating and went to sleep, the tribe had already come up with a name for him: Flag-Bearer.

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    As the sun rose, Flag-Bearer gathered all the tribe before him and surveyed them. Savages, but not so different from my own tribe, he thought for a moment. He shook his head, dispelling the dark memories of his old tribe and the frumentarius that had come to them, speaking words of friendship.

    “The Legion’s greatest strength is its devotion to Caesar. Each warrior is willing to die, and you must be too, if you wish to be strong,” he continued. “Failure is harshly punished, regardless of rank. You shall learn these things, or you shall be crushed, unworthy of joining the Legion.” A truth.

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    The Flag-Bearer made these lessons every day, determined to craft the White Legs into Caesar’s weapon as he had been directed. The tribe proved to be quick learners, eager to hone their warfighting. He even began teaching basic tactics, things that could decimate other tribes but would not best a real military.

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    The Flag-Bearer thought about his true purpose each night, troubled by history’s echoes. A frumentarius coming to a tribe, claiming to respect them, bearing promises of friendship. Honing the tribe into a weapon, a tool of Caesar’s will. The victories, the glorious celebrations. The betrayal, inevitable as the sun’s rise.

    Despite his troubled mind, Flag-Bearer continued to train the White Legs, earning their respect. A legionary had arrived after several months, bearing bad news. Caesar had become obsessed with the Old World Wall, said it was his Rubicon and the city of lights, New Vegas, would be his Rome. He had sent his legionaries against the Wall, but it was the Legion’s first defeat, a setback to the inevitable conquest of the west. The Bear, New California Republic, had proven stronger than Caesar thought, humbling the Malpais Legate, Caesar’s right hand.

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    Flag-Bearer had told the truth when he said failure was harshly punished. The Malpais Legate was coated in pitch, lit on fire, and thrown into the Grand Canyon. That should have been the end of it, but rumors soon spread claiming he had survived and walked the wastes as the Burned Man. Caesar couldn’t let the Legate live, disproving his infallibility and strength. The Flag-Bearer was now tasked with killing him, and the White Legs would be his tool…



    Bishop Mordecai was sitting on a chair outside his church in New Canaan, preparing his sermon for Sunday. The old man’s church was nowhere near as nice as New Jerusalem’s, but he was proud of what he had built in this community. The settlement had been the New Canaanites only home until Jeremiah Rigdon, the Living Prophet, claimed to see visions of glory and led settlers south. They had founded New Jerusalem and attained many glories, straying from the path in Mordecai’s opinion. The few hundred remaining citizens were all good, honest folks that worked hard and cared for their neighbors. They even carried Mordecai around as his infirm body failed him.

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    He glanced up, noticing a silhouette approaching town. The old man couldn’t move, so he just waited, glancing up occasionally. As the stranger got closer, he saw that he was limping, dusty from the road, and covered in bandages. The bishop finally called out, getting a handful of townsfolk to come help the stranger. Several fetched food and drink while the others carried him into the church. Once the stranger had been tended to, two men carried Mordecai into the church so he could meet the strange traveler.

    The man’s back was turned to Mordecai, but he turned at the sound of the door. “Joshua!” Mordecai called out as recognition dawned. “He has returned home! Slaughter the fatted calf, gather the townsfolk! Joshua has returned to us!” the bishop shouted out to the townsfolk.

    Joshua was obviously shaken up, his voice haunted by guilt as he began to admit his crimes, but Mordecai silenced him. One of the townsfolk was outraged at this, protesting, “We have been faithful to the Lord and never receive anything, yet you celebrate the Malpais Legate, a murderer?!”

    “I celebrate because Joshua was dead and yet lives now, he was lost and is found.” With that, New Canaan celebrated the return of one of its lost flock, unaware of the danger Joshua, the Burned Man, had accidentally put them in…

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    Note: I've now introduced two of the coolest/most popular characters in Fallout New Vegas! The Flag-Bearer is better known as Ulysses, but I will be using Flag-Bearer, the name the White Legs gave him. Joshua Graham is a former member of Caesar's Legion that has returned to his people after a literal rebirth by fire. I hope my initial characterization of them has proven effective since they're both so iconic. Some of Graham's quotes have actually made it into the real world in Facebook posts, tattoos, etc. despite being a video game character! I'm not sure how much of their in-game lines I will use, probably depending on what fits or doesn't, but I must acknowledge much better writers than me have done the bulk of the work on these characters.

    Flag-Bearer/Ulysses can be a frustrating character when players first meet him since he talks weirdly and has strange ideas. I inserted his interaction with the child as a taste of his strangeness while his internal monologue should provide food for thought. He should come off as mysterious and conflicted, so hopefully it's working!

    We are drawing closer to war with New Canaan, but I keep getting distracted by interesting characters. I honestly thank they're more fun than HOI4's combat, so I hope you'll humor me.


    Finally, thank you so much to @Midnite Duke for your high praise of this AAR in the ACA! I really appreciate it and hope to keep impressing.
     
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    Part 14: The Raid on Spanish Fork
  • The Raid on Spanish Fork

    “I have gift,” Jump haltingly pronounced, obviously struggling with her In-glisch. She held the gift out, staring expectantly at Albert.

    The Old One hesitated for a moment, uncertain what to make of this ‘gift’. It was pieced together from various scraps of the Old World: a pipe, railroad spikes, bungee cords, and wire. It was adorned with feathers and paint, showing that some effort had gone into it.

    “It a tomahawk,” Jump offered, insistently offering the weapon to Albert.

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    “I’m honored,” Albert finally answered. Jump seemed satisfied as she broke out into a smile. “Where did you get this from? It’s very ‘interesting’,” Albert asked, still uncertain of this gift.

    “I find parts scavenging. I find blades in ground. Why old people bury blades in ground?" Jump asked.

    Albert shook his head, momentarily confused. He found this happened a lot, especially now that they could communicate more easily; so many things that made perfect sense to him meant nothing to the scout. The Old World must be a mystery to her, totally unhinged from her life experiences.

    He glanced at the tomahawk, suddenly realizing what she meant: the railroad spikes! How to explain that though? She didn’t understand trains, and he didn’t have time to explain them. He finally settled on a white lie, something he had to do far too often. “We buried them there, hoping they would grow into many. That did not happen, but our wise children have found them and put them to good use,” Albert finished, smiling as he praised Jump.

    “Baika-good!” she exclaimed as her face lit up, pleased with the flattery. Suddenly Echo called out to her in their native tongue, waving from across the camp. Jump said something in reply and turned back to Albert. “I go now, follow Flag-Bearer north.”

    “Good luck, child. Be careful,” Albert said, waving to her as she ran off to join the other scouts. He hated every time she left, concerned she might not come back again. No one else had been interested in learning from him, and he did not feel he could afford to lose her. He looked down at the tomahawk again, uncertain what to make of it. A lot of thought had gone into it, even if the components were crude. It probably took Jump days to scrounge all the bits and piece them together. He didn’t even want to know where she had found paint. He tucked the weapon into his belt and watched the scouts fade away, disappearing far to the north.



    The scouts traveled at an efficient lope, faster than almost anything in the wastes, but Flag-Bearer kept pace without complaint. By nightfall, they were nearing the northern extent of the White Legs’ territory, causing them to make camp for the night. The scouts ate salted foods to avoid cook-fires that might alert the New Canaanites while Flag-Bearer went among them, setting watches so the rest could sleep. The plan was to set out several hours before dawn, arriving at the arms bunker and surprising the New Canaanites.

    Flag-Bearer had decided the White Legs needed more guns if they were ever going to threaten New Canaan, and he knew many caches were spread throughout Utah. He had already led the tribals to many of them, gathering a handful of guns. The greatest cache was in Spanish Fork, a sleepy New Canaanite settlement that had rebuilt the Pre-War town.

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    Flag-Bearer gathered the scouts, and they quickly broke camp in the murky pre-dawn light. It was another hard day pushing through the scrubland, but they soon reached their destination without incident. A few New Canaanites had been encountered, but the tribals handled them quickly. No one would know they were coming.

    Flag-Bearer hid within a clump of rocks, carefully observing the armory that stood before them. The original structure had largely been blasted away, but a few bricks stood here and there. He glanced down at the worn photograph he had found many years ago, imagining what it must have looked like in better days.

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    The New Canaanites had built on top of it, adding scrap metal walls and sandbags to the jagged bricks of the Old World, producing a serviceable fortress on top of the arms bunker. There was only one entrance, marked by a wooden guard post on the left and a machine gun emplaced in a pile of sandbags on the right. It seemed like a fearsome defense, but the guards were lax. Both were chatting about something, oblivious to the world around them.

    Two good marksmen could take them out, allowing the rest of the tribe to rush in and take the fort by force. A handful would guard the gate, keep out any curious townsfolk while the rest got into the guns, the treasure of the Old World hidden below.

    He went back to the scouts and asked for two good shots. Most of the tribals were armed with spears, clubs, machetes, gauntlets, and other crude weapons, but three stepped forward. Each of them had a rifle and insisted they were good shots. It would have to do.

    Jump sat several paces back from the other two riflemen crouched in the rocks, ready to fire if either of them missed. She was probably the best shot among the scouts, having practiced for quite some time. The other two each took a guard, leaving her as the failsafe. The rest of the war party had crept forward as far as they dared, ready to storm the fort.

    Flag-Bearer motioned to the shooters, indicating he was ready. A few moments later, the two rifles barked out, instantly felling one of the guards. The other took a bullet in the arm, not enough to stop him. Time seemed to slow down for Jump, giving her a chance to raise her rifle even as the guard fled. Her heart seemed to pound in her ears, punctuating each step he took. Boom. He looked back, terrified. Boom. She shouldered her rifle. Boom. She squeezed the trigger. Boom. The shot was true, hitting the guard square in the back. He fell, lifeless, as the other tribals charged forward, entering the fort.

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    Jump and the other shooters trailed after their companions, nervously watching for any reaction from the sleepy town of Spanish Fork. People came spilling out of their homes, shocked by the sounds of gunfire. A few were armed, but none seemed certain of what had happened. Before anyone noticed, Jump and her companions had slipped into the guard post, taking up positions. Jump stood watch just behind the guard post while the other two took cover in the sandbags, as the man cautiously raised the machine gun to his shoulder.

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    As Flag-Bearer and the tribals entered the courtyard, a few guards stumbled out of the barracks, woken by the gunshots. Flag-Bearer ordered a group of tribals to handle them, letting loose a war cry as they charged the terrified, half-awake Mormons. The sounds of slaughter echoed through the courtyard.

    The remainder of the group made for the main building, a brick structure that housed the treasure below. A White Leg threw the door open and charged in, catching the sentry eating at a table. The rest of the tribe spilled in, disappointed by what they saw. The room was dingy at best, with a smooth stone floor covered by a worn rug. To the left was a small table with the guard’s food and drink still steaming, his lifeless body knocked to the floor, while the right featured a desk covered in papers. A gun-rack dominated the far wall, featuring a handful of battered rifles and shotguns.

    “Deiyape!” a tribal called out as he saw the worn guns. “This is useless!” Flag-Bearer said nothing as he motioned the tribals away from the center of the room. Without a word, he pulled the rug back, revealing a safe door that sealed the true bunker. A tribal rummaged through the pockets of the sentry while Flag-Bearer looked through the papers, eventually finding the code. He sat on his haunches and worked the dial. A few moments later, he heaved the door open, revealing a ladder down to the riches within. The tribals greedily rushed forward, into the yawning darkness of the National Guard Armory.

    Outside, Jump saw the townsfolk had finally gotten organized and were marching toward the fort. They were lightly armed, but there were at least two dozen, enough to overwhelm the three White Legs. The machine gun suddenly let off a burst, scattering the townsfolk. A few had been hit, falling where they stood and crying out for help, but most of the burst had gone high. Jump stayed hidden, firing only at townsfolk that got too brave for their own good. The machine gunner continued to let off a few bursts, keeping the crowd dispersed. However, they were steadily crawling forward and returning fire.

    A man rushed forward, having slipped around to the machine gunner’s left. Jump saw only a blur of motion as she swiveled and fired, felling another man. Several bullets whistled over Jump’s head, forcing her to crawl further back into the fort, leaving the machine gunner even more exposed. The townsfolk seemed to realize their strength and pressed forward more urgently. Jump could do nothing but hide and let off unaimed shots as lead flew around her. The machine gun began to chatter continuously, no longer the bursts of before. However, it soon clicked empty, signaling the spirits were gone.

    The townsfolk surged forward at the distinctive sound, getting within twenty paces of the entrance. Jump readied herself for melee, sending a heartfelt prayer to the gods. As she opened her eyes, she saw dozens of scouts surge forward, armed with strange guns. “Deyai-yoo!” they cried, giving the townsfolk pause. A moment later, they opened fire, cutting the townsfolk down like wheat before the scythe.

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    The guns echoed in Jump’s ears, sounding like a storm of drums banging from every direction. They finally fell silent, leaving a swathe of destruction before them. Most of the townsfolk had fallen in the hail of lead, giving the White Legs cause to celebrate. As Jump looked back into the courtyard, she saw White Legs stacking crate upon crate, filled with the new guns which the White Legs took to calling storm drums.

    Echo approached her, beaming as he showed off his new weapon. “The spirits of my storm drum are strong!” he exclaimed. “The Mormons were like brahmin, helpless against me! Flag-Bearer promises there are many guns, enough to destroy the New Canaanites!” At the mention of his name, Flag-Bearer joined them. Echo boasted of Flag-Bearer’s cleverness in finding the guns, but the frumentarius’ mind seemed elsewhere. Jump glanced over, seeing his eyes were focused on the charnel house before the fort. He looked back to the two tribals, tears forming in his eyes…

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    Note: Not a ton of plot advancement, but I thought this was a really cool scene to write and will hopefully provide some justification for what happens next. Let me know what you think, but I thought this was my best battle scene so far!

    The discussion of the tomahawk and the railroad spikes is heavily inspired by A Canticle for Leibowitz (an extremely interesting post-apoc book), wherein a character wonders why/how people buried metal within stone (rebar within concrete). I enjoy thinking about things that make total sense to us but would be a mystery in the future.

    I'm hoping to get the next update out on schedule, but I'm not entirely satisfied with what I've written and might have to push it back. We'll see how much progress I make rewriting it, but I just wanted to give a head's up.
     
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    Part 15: The Walls of Jericho
  • The Walls of Jericho

    Salt-Upon-Wounds’ emissaries were seated in a small hut, waiting for the Eighties’ chief to arrive. The three men were growing restless, afraid of some treachery by their ‘hosts’. The White Legs and Eighties had skirmished with each other for years, stealing brahmin and slaves in typical tribal warfare. However, both tribes now had chiefs with visions of greatness, potentially setting the stage for a much bigger conflict. While the White Legs had been conquering rival tribes to the east, the Eighties had been working their way southwest and were currently at war with a raider gang.

    An Eighty finally entered, proudly wearing a green ‘Highway 80’ sign upon his chest. “The great Thunderbird will see you now.” He turned and slipped from the hut silently, holding the flap for the White Legs to follow. Just outside the tent a horde of Eighties had gathered to look upon the strange visitors. The chief was nowhere to be seen, puzzling the White Legs.

    Suddenly, a monstrous roar broke out, more fearsome than any beast the White Legs had ever encountered before. Their panicked eyes darted around, searching for escape from the beast. The Eighties were not bothered in the slightest and were greatly amused by the White Legs’ reaction. As the roar drew closer, the raiders parted, allowing a giant monster to inch forward, now gently growling at them. Smokechaser, the lead emissary, gasped as he realized it was a car, actually running! The wrecks of them were scattered across Utah, but the White Legs had never seen one moving, let alone realized that people rode in them.

    Suddenly, the beast fell silent, and a man stepped out. “I am Thunderbird, War Chief of the Eighties,” he said as he glanced at the emissaries. The War Chief had red war paint across the right side of his face while his body was adorned with red and blue ‘Interstate 80’ signs, marking his importance in the tribe. Only one other Eighty in the crowd had a red and blue sign, and the War Chief had at least three on him, plus even more all over his car. His eyes were black as night, and Smokechaser was shaken by his piercing gaze.

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    After a moment of hesitation, Smokechaser stepped forward, quickest to regain his composure. “Mighty War Chief, we are here on behalf of Salt-Upon-Wounds. We come bearing gifts and seek to make a trade: our goods for Jericho.” The other emissaries handed over a sample of the goods including numerous animal pelts, a newly acquired storm drum, and various bits of precious metals gathered from the vanquished Timekeepers and Tar Walkers.

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    Thunderbird glanced them over, and then said something to an Eighty in their own language. After a short conversation, Thunderbird turned back to the emissaries. “Your gifts are rejected. If your chief wants our lands, he shall have to take them.” The War Chief climbed into his beast, bringing it back to life, as the other Eighties grabbed the emissaries and bound them with rope. They were forced to the back of the car, and the other end of the ropes were tied to it.

    Smokechaser desperately called out, “We broke bread with you! You are violating a sacred pact!” The other emissaries were stricken with fear, unable to do more than babble in their own language and struggle against their captors.

    Thunderbird mockingly yelled over the roar of the engine, “I didn’t break bread with you!” He chuckled as Smokechaser cried out in anger and put his foot on the gas, ripping out of the camp to the cheers of his people. The White Legs tried to stay on their feet, but their fate was inevitable. As the speed increased, one after another could not keep up, meeting a gruesome end. Thunderbird dragged their lifeless corpses all the way to the edge of White Legs’ territory and left the bloody, battered remains behind, insulting Salt-Upon-Wounds and daring him to attack.

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    Salt-Upon-Wounds glared at the defiant walls of Jericho, almost willing them to fall, opening the city to bloody reprisal. Salt had led his warbands north as soon as the mutilated emissaries had been found, determined to make Thunderbird pay dearly for his treachery. He had not even waited to gather all his warriors, taking just those closest to the border. There had been only light resistance which Salt and his followers brushed aside, bringing them to the gates of Jericho, the key to the region.

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    If Salt could capture the city, Thunderbird would not be able to dislodge the White Legs and must give up his claim to the lands. The Eighties could not afford war in the north as they were already battling a rival raider gang in the south. However, the city had held out for a week thanks to its strong walls, and the residents did not appear ready to give up anytime soon. Salt was broken from his thoughts by the shaman and a scout.

    “Great Chief, I know the way into the city,” the shaman offered as Salt turned to face them. Salt saw they were both eager, promising a good result.

    Satisfied, Salt turned to the shaman; “What is the secret?”

    “The Sky Father shall help us, Chief, so long as we honor him properly. Jump approached me, suggesting that I seek His help. I consumed the sacred datura and was shown what we must do; we must silently march around the city at dawn for two days, honoring the God of Salt and God of the Lake. On the third day, we must march around the city three times and gather before the gate. My apprentices will blow on great horns while the people call out, and the Sky Father shall open the way!” The shaman was beaming with zealous energy, perhaps the most alive he had been in years. His vision had been so clear and so timely! Normally the shaman’s visions made little sense and had to be puzzled over, often not becoming clear for months, if ever. Jump was also smiling, pleased her idea had been so important.

    “Baika-good, we will gather at dawn. On the third day we shall see what happens.” With that, the shaman and Jump were dismissed, leaving the chief to return to his brooding.

    The following day, the tribe did as commanded, silently marching around the city. The defenders had followed the White Legs on their march, baffled by the entire display. On the second and third day, only a handful of Eighties had tracked the White Legs, seemingly content nothing dramatic would happen. After the third circuit, the tribe assembled before the gate, with the shaman, his apprentices, and Salt-Upon-Wounds at their head.

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    The apprentices stepped forward, bearing trumpets made from the horn of brahmin while the shaman began to chant. After several minutes, he made a final prayer to the Sky Father, signaling to his apprentices. They gathered their breath and let loose a deafening cacophony of horns, followed by the tribe’s war cry. Just as the White Legs were beginning to think they had failed, an explosion suddenly drowned out all noise, sending a massive plume of dirt and debris into the air. A billowing fireball rose above the shattered walls, forming into a mushroom cloud.

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    As the smoke cleared, the White Legs saw the gate and wall had been blown open, leaving only piles of rubble. The Eighties were stunned by the massive explosion, stumbling through the debris as they attempted to comprehend. Salt let loose a fresh war cry and charged forward, flanked by his warriors. They were upon the Eighties like wolves, slaughtering all who opposed them and securing the once impenetrable city within hours.

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    Albert rushed into the city an hour later, shocked by the dead Eighties at the center of town. He finally found Jump and took hold of her, desperately demanding, “What happened? This wasn’t supposed to happen!”

    “Salt offer city to Sky Father,” she answered, confused by his panic. She had a curious look on her face as she tried to puzzle out Albert’s sudden concern for the Eighties. “Plan work just like you say! Boomb work baika-good!” she congratulated, unable to contain her joy.

    “No, it didn’t work baika-good!” Albert acidly replied. “I built the bomb so your tribe could take the city easily, not turn it into a charnel house!” He turned his back on Jump and rushed from the city, his mind awash with shame and guilt as he realized dozens of people’s blood was now on his hands. She came after him, but he shoved her away and kept walking, unaware of where he was going. The scout finally gave up, crestfallen by his repeated rejections.

    It had all made sense at the time. The tribe was stuck outside Jericho, certain to die whenever Thunderbird returned while an assault on Jericho would be just as devastating. He had absent-mindedly been paging through the Bible Jump had given him when the idea hit; destroy the walls of Jericho just like Joshua did! Although God wasn’t available to help, Albert thought he could be a close second. In his mind, he would save many lives and guide the tribe, his personal project.

    He had gotten Jump to teach him the necessary words in the White Legs’ language and then planted the idea in the shaman’s mind during one of his datura fueled hallucinations. From there, Albert had made a bomb using a pre-war mini nuke he had found years ago. Planting it had been incredibly easy as the White Legs distracted the defenders with their marching. Detonate it at the right time, and a miracle was made!

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    Unfortunately, the White Legs had misinterpreted his final direction. He had told the shaman to offer the city to the Sky Father. However, that bloodthirsty savage, Salt, had decided that meant everyone that lived within Jericho. Worst of all, no one else could understand Albert’s shame, guilt, and rage; the White Legs were not a people of subtlety, and Jump was no exception. Despite her curious nature, she gave in to savagery as easily as her comrades, and even she could not understand what Albert was feeling.

    He finally took heed of his surroundings and looked back on the ruins of Jericho, smoke already pouring into the sky. He heard the cheers and chants of the White Legs, their guttural language piercing the desert’s calm. Albert sat, staring into the gaping maw of Jericho’s walls. He had wrought this destruction alone. The Old One silently watched Jericho, the city he had turned into a grave, cursing himself for his failings. Little did he know he had set another city’s destruction in motion…

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    Notes: Well, I am fairly satisfied with what I've written, so here it is! Please let me know what you think since I really went back and forth on this development in Jump and Albert's relationship. I hope it doesn't feel too jarring or out of character.

    The actual battle was far less epic than the one I've described. It used HOI4's border war mechanic, and my divisions all happened to be close while the Eighties' units were somewhere to the south, so I outnumbered them and won easily.

    I can't stall the war with New Canaan anymore, since I think I've been hinting and promising for 3-4 weeks now! I promise the next update will be there! However, you'll have to wait a week since I will be traveling for Thanksgiving and unable to post anything. I hope everyone has an enjoyable holiday or weekend, and thank you for reading and commenting!
     
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    Part 16: Joshua's War
  • Joshua's War

    Joshua stood before the people of New Canaan, the friends and family he had abandoned thirty years ago in service to Caesar. Hundreds of faces stared up at him, a mixture of curiosity, revulsion, and uncertainty. Not everyone had been as welcoming as Bishop Mordecai, but Joshua hoped his words and God’s grace could change that.

    Joshua began his sermon, saying, “As you all know, I have been down the path to hell, committed unspeakable acts in service to Caesar. I had rejected God and worshiped at the altar of power and violence. My descent into darkness was gradual and came from the noblest of intentions. I arrived in the Grand Canyon to share the faith with the tribes and translate for the Followers of the Apocalypse.”

    Joshua briefly paused as the townsfolk took in his words. They had clearly heard some of the story over the years, but certain details had piqued their interest. “Before long, the man called Caesar was leading the tribes, using me to give orders, which lead to leading in battle. That became training, punishing, terrorizing, a series of mistakes leading to my great fall. I gloried in the darkness, an instrument of Caesar’s violence, until Hoover Dam. Caesar’s wrath then burned away my old life.”

    Joshua paused once more, seemingly struggling to keep his composure. “I survived because the fire inside burned brighter than the fire around me. That fire raged on and on, willing me to crawl out of the Grand Canyon, all the way home. You have welcomed me back, as if I had never left, and I now know the fire inside me was love. Your love, God’s love. I will never be able to repay my debts, but I swear I shall try.”

    With that, Joshua returned to the pews to sit among his people. Bishop Mordecai smiled as he prepared to continue the service, while those seated closest to Joshua thanked him, shook his hand, or flashed a smile. The rest of the sermon passed in a blur as Joshua anticipated his planned meeting with Bishop Mordecai. As the rest of the townsfolk filed out of the church, Joshua waited for Mordecai in his small office. After a few minutes, the door opened and the wizened Bishop shuffled in, leaning heavily on his cane. Joshua quickly offered him a chair, which the old man gratefully sank into with a loud grunt.

    “I am glad you have joined me, my son. Your words were well-spoken, and all have agreed that the Malpais Legate died in the Grand Canyon, leaving only our brother,” Mordecai said joyfully. “But I suspect you know why I have called you here,” he said, all levity fading.

    Joshua frowned slightly before responding, “I have heard troubling news from the south. The White Legs have become bolder, killing many of our people in the raid on Spanish Fork. Now they control the lands around Jericho, threatening our entire people. What would you have me do?”

    “The ‘Living Prophet’,” Mordecai shook his head derisively, “has promised to take aggressive action and muster the militias against the threat. However, he has always been more concerned with profits and power than anything else.”

    “You don’t think he will fight back?” Joshua asked. “Even he could not be so foolish!”

    “You have been gone a long time, Joshua. Rigdon has no idea of the threat the White Legs pose. He has sent a few extra guards to the border posts, but he will not fight until it is too late. I want you to train our people in the ways of war, make them able to defend our home.”

    Joshua hesitated for a moment, seemingly struggling to choose his words. “Will the people follow me? I would be honored to teach them, but I do not want any to claim I am the Malpais Legate once more.”

    “Son, you have proven that man is dead, forgotten in the Grand Canyon. We all know you are Joshua, our friend and brother. The townsfolk are scared, and your strength would do much to calm them. Ours is a righteous cause. Taking up arms in defense of the Lord is no crime Joshua, and all New Canaanites know that truth.”

    After a few moments silence, Joshua smiled and took Mordecai’s hand. “You have convinced me, Mordecai. I shall train our people into the finest warriors in Christendom!” Mordecai was greatly pleased and left Joshua to his newfound duty.



    Joshua’s skills became essential much earlier than anyone had hoped. The White Legs had only briefly paused after their raid on Spanish Fork and soon launched a concerted attack on New Canaanite territories across Utah. Rigdon finally rallied significant forces and held key territories, but the fighting was frighteningly even. The White Legs were supposed to be godless savages, illiterate and barely self-sufficient, not a legitimate threat to New Canaan’s way of life. Instead, the savages were inflicting casualties and had already captured Farfield while they were approaching Tooele.

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    Joshua had arrived in New Jerusalem after a short journey and had immediately set out to Jeremiah Rigdon’s office. The stone church, bustling streets, and orderly houses were not as impressive as he once remembered them, and the people went about their day as though nothing was happening. Joshua handed the beggar outside the church a few coins, disgusted that the man was treated so poorly in God’s holy city. He climbed the steps to Rigdon’s office and marched past the secretary over the man’s objections, throwing the door open.

    Rigdon jumped as the door was thrown open, sending papers flying across the room. “Joshua! What are you doing here? You could have knocked.” Despite his intense surprise, the Living Prophet had quickly regained his composure and leaned back in his chair, once again the picture of poise.

    Joshua stood a few paces from Rigdon, purposely ignoring the available chair. “Let me lead our people against the White Legs. I have the most experience of any Mormon; I know Legion tactics, and I know how to beat tribals. Give me a thousand men, and I will have this war over in two months, you have my word.”

    Rigdon’s face flashed annoyance as he shifted in his seat. “You know I can’t do that,” he finally said after a brief pause. “You have a reputation, and I can’t guarantee all the men will follow you.”

    “What is that supposed to mean?” Joshua growled. “The townsfolk of New Canaan trust and respect me because they know I serve only the Lord, whose cause is just. As the Israelites waged righteous war on their unbelieving neighbors, so we must against the White Legs. You cannot make peace with the devil, and he will not bargain with you. If you reject me, the White Legs will consume all of us!”

    “We are resisting as necessary. Every day more men are gathered against them, and I do not need to take judgement from you. Remember your place, and do not lecture me on matters of faith again,” Rigdon sneered. During Rigdon's outburst, Sheriff Amos had silently slipped into the office, hand resting on his belt, just inches from his holstered gun.

    “I think you’d best be leaving, Joshua. Go home and help your town, we’ll handle things down here,” Amos offered. Rigdon nodded his head and the sheriff led Joshua Graham to the outskirts of town and watched him leave to ensure the troublemaker wouldn’t be coming back.

    After the long journey home, Joshua gathered his militia, determined to lead them against the White Legs. Rigdon’s demands be damned, Joshua knew what he was called to do! His rag-tag troops were soon assembled, gathering their simple shotguns, hunting rifles, handguns, and a handful of automatic weapons, family heirlooms from a more chaotic time. Some had no armor, showing up to the muster in their work clothes, while an elite few had leather jackets or pre-war police armor. Wives and children trailed behind, shedding tears and crying out as their husbands, fathers, sons, and brothers marched off for war…



    The last few weeks had been a blur for Jump. She had still not cleared her mind from Albert’s harsh words in Jericho and had not seen the Old One since he stormed off that night. Her heart ached at his abandonment, and his final words stung. She had not understood every word, but the outrage and hate were clear as day. She had tried to find him, but he had disappeared in the wastes of Utah. Perhaps he had gone home to his shack near Indian Peak, but duty had called Jump north, forcing her to leave Albert for now.

    The scouts had been leading the way together with Salt-Upon-Wounds’ elite war bands, and the continuous fighting was beginning to wear on Jump. However, an end appeared in sight, even if it was only briefly. In a little over two weeks, the White Legs had reached the outskirts of New Jerusalem, and several Mormon militias were encircled between Eighties’ territory and the Great Salt Lake. All Jump wanted was to win the war and go home. She had to make amends with Albert, but larger events were conspiring to prevent any reconciliation…

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    Note: I finally got the update made, and it's even a bit early since I'll be out of town most of tomorrow. I wanted to build up Joshua Graham's character a bit, so I hope you will humor my indulgence. His sermon was heavily inspired/based off of his dialogue in game where he explains his past to the player, while the rest of his dialogue is wholly my own. I hope it flows together fairly well, so feel free to let me know what you think.

    I'm planning to detach the story a bit from the gameplay of this war because it was frankly not very interesting gameplay wise. I hope no one minds, especially since I think the end result will be much more interesting.

    Thanks for reading, and I look forward to everyone's thoughts!
     
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    Part 17: Ghosts of the Past
  • Ghosts of the Past

    The Flag-Bearer stood among the White Legs, at their head as they basked in the flames of New Canaan. He had led the mongrels, two-legged and four, to the city, evading all the New Canaanites. He had watched the Mormons march out, off to fight Salt-Upon-Wounds.T he city fell that night. The Flag-Bearer led the tribals in uncountable atrocities. He remembered leading them in killing all who stood in their way: young, old, the sick, and the weak. The New Canaanites valued their history, and the White Legs had snuffed it out; a people reaching back thousands of years had been ended in a few hours. The screams of the bishop as he burned within his church haunted the Flag-Bearer, reaching through the silence of night, shaking him to his core.

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    Even as New Canaan fell, Salt-Upon-Wounds had finished putting New Jerusalem to the sword. The Living Prophet was made a martyr, but Salt had left few to remember Rigdon. The city burned, but perhaps not as brightly as New Canaan, the Mormon’s older spiritual home. Now, all New Canaan was reduced to Joshua Graham, his militia, and a few missionaries spread throughout the wastes of Utah.

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    The Flag-Bearer insisted all New Canaanites must be killed before Caesar would accept the tribe into the Legion, so Salt led the White Legs in a dogged pursuit across Utah. Many Mormons fell, but they took just as many tribals with them. In the end, Joshua Graham and his people had slipped away, finding sanctuary with the Sorrows and Dead Horses, tribes to the south of the White Legs. However, this left the rich lands along the Great Salt Lake to the White Legs, the now undisputed masters of Utah.

    After the few New Canaanites slipped away, Salt-Upon-Wounds gathered his people in the ruins of New Canaan and declared victory. The soil was salted, keeping anything from growing for years to come while helping to erase all memory of the Mormons. A great feast was held in honor of the White Legs’ warriors, the fiercest in all the Utah. Chief among the tribe’s heroes was the Flag-Bearer, the voice of wisdom and strength that had led them to ultimate victory.

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    After a day of sacrificing, feasts, and boasting, Salt-Upon-Wounds led the Flag-Bearer to a massive bonfire. The frumentarius could hear nothing over the roaring of the flames, and the White Legs’ chief said nothing, his emotions unreadable beneath his mask. Suddenly, White Legs began to step out of the shadows, grinning as they approached the Flag-Bearer. He gasped as they came into sight, horrified by the braids they now wore in their hair.

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    They had tied the knots, twisted their hair in hollow mimicry, ignorant of the true meaning. The Flag-Bearer saw the faces of the White Legs fade away, replaced by the ghosts of his tribe. They smiled at him, even as blood drained from their wounds, grinning at their own destruction. A moment passed, and the White Legs returned, bowing to the Flag-Bearer, eager for his approval.

    He mouthed a few words of praise, but could not will himself to voice the lies. The braids kept calling out to him, telling their stories of rape, murder, death, and destruction. He could not look away, determined to read the braids, find some reason to the madness. Finally, the Flag-Bearer realized the braids meant nothing; his tribe was dead, and the White Legs were but pale imitations. They tried to show respect, but they only disgusted the frumentarius. They were little more than ghosts of his people, reborn as slaves to Caesar…

    A few days later, the Flag-Bearer had disappeared without a trace. Salt sent scouts out to find the man, but he was determined not to be found. His disappearance shook the White Legs to the core; what did it mean for Caesar’s emissary to abandon them in their moment of triumph? The tribe had bathed him in honor and riches in thanks for all they had learned, but the man had spit in their faces. Salt had asked the shaman for an answer, and the wizened old man consulted the entrails. He found the Flag-Bearer was a man shrouded in darkness, walking a dangerous road. He had made the White Legs masters of Utah and disappeared just as quickly, leaving the tribe to make their own way in the world.

    Salt was not comforted by the shaman’s findings, and often found himself pondering the Flag-Bearer’s actions. He had spoken of Caesar’s love for fierce warriors, and his fervent desire for New Canaan’s destruction. The White Legs had followed his every word, but still the Flag-Bearer abandoned them. Perhaps the mighty Caesar and his Legion were just as fickle and faithless…

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    Part 18: Encounters in the Dark
  • Encounters in the Dark

    Jump smiled as she saw the sun crest Indian Peak, bathing her in the warmth of its early morning glow. It felt good to be in the land of her ancestors, especially after months at war. She laughed as Kip darted into the scrub, determined to catch a lizard that had darted across the path. The other scouts chased after, curious to see whether the dog would win its race, and they were not disappointed.

    Kip seemed to be gaining on the lizard, when it suddenly darted into its hole. The dog pawed at the hole and tried to stick his snout in, determined to catch the reptile. After a few minutes, he sat on his haunches and let out a howl of frustration. All the scouts had joined at this point and chuckled at the dog’s plight while a few started digging at the hole, urging him on.

    After a few minutes, the dog and scouts had dug out the hole, and the lizard darted from its hiding place, sending Kip back in pursuit. As the lizard slipped under Jump, Kip followed, bowling her over. Jump and Kip collapsed into a tangled mess of limbs, fur, and flesh, laughing as she struggled to hold back her obsessed dog.

    The scouts’ game had drawn the attention of the main camp, and soon children were running everywhere, laughing as Kip chased after them. Jump stood off to the side, pleased to be home. The simple pleasures in life helped to forget all the horrors that had happened in the lands of the Canaanites…

    Eventually, the White Legs returned to their camp and settled into their daily routine. Jump and the other scouts helped check the traps, but they were otherwise left to their own devices. After helping Echo set up a tent, she decided it was finally time to see Albert once more. Calling out to Kip, Jump left the camp along the path she could not forget.

    The sun was beginning to set as she neared Albert’s home. Not much had changed since she had last seen the Old One, but his flock of bighorners seemed to have disappeared. The wind whistled through his scrap metal shack, and a faint light poked out through the gaps in the walls. Jump hesitated for a moment, simultaneously eager and afraid. She finally steeled her nerves and opened the door, revealing the Old One hunched over his worktable, silhouetted by the faint light of a lamp.

    The ancient man groaned as he turned to face his visitor, an unintelligible emotion flashing across his monstrous face. “Uhhh, i-i-it v-v-ver-r…good t-t…” Jump trailed off as her words fled in the face of Albert’s silence.

    Albert grimaced and refused to lock eyes with the scout. “You must leave. I am not a good teacher, and I was wrong to have tried,” he spat out. Jump fell to her knees, distraught, and began to babble in her people’s language, desperately trying to make him understand. The Old One steeled himself once more and held his hand up to silence her. “You are like a daughter to me, but I can not be your father. I am sorry,” he managed to say. With that, he rose from his chair, joints screaming, and ushered the scout from his home. She was all tears, but Albert had convinced himself it was the right thing to do long ago. He guided her into the night and closed the door on his involvement with the White Legs.

    Jump was in the dark. Tears freely ran down her face, and she could not comprehend why Albert had abandoned her. Kip nuzzled her leg in a futile attempt at comfort, and the pair stumbled back in the direction of Indian Peak. Jump was barely able to see and only kept to the path thanks to her honed instincts and Kip’s subtle nudges.

    Suddenly, a gruff voice called out from the darkness, “Halt! Who goes there?” A torch suddenly burst into life, and Jump made out two legionaries through her tears. They had strayed far from the camp, and Jump could not understand why.

    “I am Jump, White Leg scout. My people are friends of Caesar,” the scout responded. She began to shuffle a few steps forward when one of the legionaries raised his spear. “Let me past!” Jump exclaimed.

    One of the legionaries chuckled evilly and looked to the other. “I think she’s all alone except for that mangy mutt.” The other nodded, and the pair advanced on Jump. She stepped back but stumbled on a branch in the trail. She tried to unsling her rifle, but the first legionary shoved her to the ground and knelt on top of her. He pulled her rifle loose and tossed it to the side, out of reach. Before Jump could scream, the legionary had placed his massive hand over her mouth, muffling all sound.

    Kip snarled at the legionaries and leapt at the man on Jump, tearing into his forearm with fearsome canines. The man tried to get the dog off, freeing Jump to scream her help. Suddenly, Kip let out a yelp and was sent flying to the side of the trail. He was laying in a crumpled pile of fur and blood, the shaft of a spear buried deep in his side. The second legionary came into Jump’s view and covered her mouth once more. “Bandage up your arm, I’ve earned first go at her,” he snarled to the first man.

    The scout put up one final struggle, desperate to free herself from the legionary. Sudden pain shot through the side of her head, and her vision began to swim from the legionary’s blow. “I like a little fight. The slave girls are never so fun,” he chuckled. His evil grin filled Jump’s vision as she fought the call of darkness, resigned to her fate. As he leaned in close, shock flashed across his face, and Jump felt his body go limp. She heaved his bulk to the side and saw Albert above her, his tomahawk coated in the legionary’s blood.

    The second man had seen his comrade’s death and hesitated for a moment. One girl and a decrepit old man were surely no match. He finally decided to take them on, but his hesitation would prove his undoing. Jump’s head was swimming, and she could feel the darkness’ embrace grow ever stronger, but she fought the siren’s call. She scrambled across the trail, oblivious to the thorns biting into her limbs; she only had eyes for her rifle. As her heart seemed ready to beat out of her chest, Jump shouldered her rifle and lined up a shot. She squeezed the trigger, instantly killing the legionary, before giving in to the darkness…

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    Part 19: Changing Times
  • Changing Times

    Jump squinted as early morning light warmed her face, waking her. She tried to sit up and immediately regretted the decision as she felt the massive lump on her head. She let out a groan as she laid back in the bed of furs, taking in the roof of the ragged tent she found herself in.

    “Glad to see you awake, you had me worried,” Albert said, piercing the morning quiet. He leaned over Jump and adjusted the bandage on her head. “You’ve been out cold all night.”

    “Where am I? Where is Kip?” Jump asked, urgency creeping into her voice.

    “We’re at your people’s camp,” Albert said and then paused, his face taking on a pained expression. “I’m sorry about Kip, he didn’t make it through the night. I tried to tend to him, but I had to take care of you first. I was too late, and I’m sorry.”

    The scout was speechless, but Albert could see the grief in her eyes. He knelt beside her as her body began to shake and placed his hand on her shoulder. After a few moments, Jump could not control herself anymore, and her body was wracked by sobs. Albert held her shoulder reassuringly, doing the best he could to comfort her.

    Eventually Jump’s sobs began to subside, and she dried her eyes. “Can I see him?” she asked, desperation in her eyes.

    “Yes, child. He’s in the camp. I thought you would want to pay your last respects.” Albert helped Jump stand up and steadied her as her vision blurred and head swam. Once she had her balance, he asked, “Can you walk now? I’ll be right beside you.” The scout nodded curtly and led the way from the tent.

    It was no longer dawn, and the camp was bustling with White Legs carrying out their duties. As Albert guided her, Jump could not help but notice the people that pointed and stared, others whispering among themselves as she passed. She had to lean heavily on the Old One, uncertain of her balance, but the pair steadily made their way to the edge of the camp where Kip’s body rested.

    He was wrapped in an ornate hide, beaded with patterns of paw prints. Only his head stuck out from the shroud, concealing his grievous wound. Jump knelt beside her loyal companion and cradled his head in her arms, deeply lost in thought. Albert could not help but be touched by the relationship Jump had with her dog, and it reminded him of the fundamental goodness he had seen in the White Legs. The events of Jericho became much clearer in that moment; he had been the root of the evil, not the White Legs. Albert’s people had destroyed the world, and he had given the White Legs a taste of that power without any hesitation. How could they know when one older and supposedly wiser than them had seen no issue?

    As Jump prayed over her fallen companion, Albert made his own vow within his heart. No longer would he try to teach the White Legs; his way had led them to unspeakable evils. Instead, he would learn from them.

    As Jump rose, cradling Kip in her arms, she headed to the funeral pyre that had been built by her tribesmen. She gently laid the dog atop the wood, and a White Leg approached bearing a torch. Jump lit the pyre and watched as the flames licked at Kip’s body, helping his spirit run forevermore on the wind.

    As the ceremony ended, Jump returned to her mentor and took his arm once more. Before she could say anything, Albert hesitatingly attempted to speak in the White Legs’ tongue, saying, “I’d like learn your language. You know mine, now you teach me.” Jump’s face lit up as she let out a laugh, concerning Albert. “What, did I say something wrong?!” he demanded.

    Jump could barely gather her breath she was laughing so hard, but finally gained control of herself. “You just said you wanted to taste me! Maybe you are a monster!” she teased.

    Albert laughed at his mistake before replying, “See, I need your help to learn!” With that, the pair made their way back to camp, picking up as if they had never been apart. Things were different, but their friendship had grown back stronger than before.



    Cornelius looked down on the bodies of his slain legionaries with disgust and outrage. The savages had left them to rot in the dust, disrespecting loyal servants of Caesar. One bore a crude slashing wound to the back, while the other had been shot and mauled by a dog. The combination of wounds in the heart of White Legs’ territory gave a clear indication of who was at fault, but the white paint coating the slain men's hands erased all doubt.

    Cornelius had returned to the Utah to collect further tribute from the White Legs, but the murder of his men was just the latest disaster. First, the frumentarius had disappeared into the wastes without a trace, leaving the White Legs without Caesar’s steady hand to guide them. Salt had become sullen and disrespectful, arrogant from his victories, and no legionary had been there to put the savage in his place; Cornelius planned to rectify that mistake.

    Cornelius and his remaining contubernium made their way back to the camp, bearing their fallen comrades. The group followed their leader to the tent of Salt-Upon-Wounds. As they made their way through the camp, the legionaries were wary of the tribals they passed. None would meet their gaze, and they all seemed to know the crime that had been committed. Only the Legion’s iron discipline had kept the men from taking their revenge, but Cornelius knew he could not contain their rage for long.

    As Cornelius and his followers reached Salt’s tent, they were halted by the tribal sentries, bearing looted storm drums. One of Cornelius’ men tightened his grip on his rifle, but the decanus subtly calmed him. “I have come to see your chief. I demand he hear my complaints,” Cornelius sternly commanded the sentries.

    Before the sentries could reply, Salt-Upon-Wounds emerged from the tent, inscrutable beneath his mask. Cornelius eyed the chief, taking note of the new scar along his arm. Otherwise, the chief remained unchanged, still as savage as the day they parted. The chief said nothing to the legionaries, enraging Cornelius.

    The decanus motioned to his men, and they laid their fallen comrades before Salt. “The Legion demands compensation. Pay and be grateful we don’t ask for more!” Cornelius exclaimed.

    “No,” Salt replied. “White Leg women are not your slaves, and your men learned that lesson.”

    “So you know what happened?! I demand justice!” Cornelius blurted, outraged by the savage’s insolence.

    “It is White Leg justice. Be happy we did not kill all the Legion dogs infesting our camp!” Salt sneered in reply.

    “You dare seek the wrath of Caesar? The Son of Mars shall rain destruction down upon you if you do not repent!”

    “Mars has no power here, and we are no longer afraid of his Son. The White Legs are strong and will not be bullied. Justice was done, and your threats change nothing. Now be gone from our camp!”

    “You savages!” Cornelius exclaimed as he moved to draw his rifle. However, Salt was like a blur, grabbing Cornelius by his tunic and forcing the rifle from his hands.

    “You lucky we honor the guest rite. Go, before I change my mind,” Salt growled. Cornelius saw his terrified reflection in Salt’s lifeless mask; it had finally dawned on him that his life was in danger.

    After the slightest nod of assent from the beleaguered decanus, Salt released him. “We shall go, but Caesar will hear of this outrage!” Cornelius replied as he led his men away in a hurry.

    “Do not worry. Slaves and tribute will flow but carried by White Legs now. No Legion shall walk our lands,” Salt replied. Cornelius muttered a reply and led his men from Indian Peak, trying to maintain a dignified walk until they were out of sight. Salt kept his expressionless gaze upon them, contemplating what the Legion would do when they received word of this insult. It would be some months until they received a reply, but Salt was certain it could not be good…
     
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    Part 20: The Exiles
  • The Exiles

    Daniel sighed as he watched the latest disheveled band of refugees make their way through the winding canyons of the Sorrows’ village. They were covered in dust, and almost no one was unwounded. Their haunted, dull eyes barely seemed to register the Sorrows rushing to aid them, and it seemed all they could do to maintain the trudging march to safety. Safety for now, but Daniel did not know how long the New Canaanites’ exile would last.

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    The Sorrows’ home in Zion was a veritable paradise, an Eden in the ruins of the wasteland. The tribe was kind, innocent, and had welcomed Daniel and his people into their midst. Daniel appreciated their goodwill, but he was increasingly afraid the New Canaanites were pulling the tribe into something bigger. White Legs had not entered the valley yet, but that was likely due to the Dead Horses and Joshua. War was coming, and Daniel was not sure that he could save the Sorrows.



    Joshua collapsed beside the cookfire without a word. One of the Disciples ladled the broth into a crude wooden bowl and handed it to him. “Good hunting?”

    Joshua paused for a moment before responding, “We caught one of their raiding parties trying to enter the valley. They didn’t last long.”

    The heavily tattooed warrior smiled at the news. “You lead Dead Horses well, Joshua. Leave some White Legs for us though!” The other warriors began to laugh and echoed their companions demand, while Joshua contented himself with his meal. He humored them, but his mind was not truly in the conversation. Even while he was awake, his mind dreamt of New Canaan in flames. He could feel the rage of the Malpais Legate building, but this time it was for a good cause. I don’t enjoy killing, but when done righteously, it’s just a chore, like any other, he thought. Daniel might not agree with that sentiment, but he had not seen the White Legs’ brutality firsthand…

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    Great Tree was anxious as he was led into the White Legs’ camp. He was painfully aware of the spearpoint at his back, ensuring his compliance. The White Leg seemed eager to impale him, and one wrong move was all it would take to set the tribal off. As the party made its way through the camp, they were greeted by the jeers of the White Legs. Even the children hurled insults at the Legion emissaries, and he could only wonder at the hate they held.

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    After a short climb up the peak, they were finally free of the chaotic mass of the camp and came before the great tent of the chieftain. Salt-Upon-Wounds’ had gained a reputation for his savagery, and no legionary had envied Great Tree’s assignment to negotiate with the brute. Several paces from the entrance to the tent, one of the sentries placed his spear across the legionaries’ path, bringing them to a halt. A moment later, Salt-Upon-Wounds emerged from his tent and approached. He glanced at the newcomers before turning to one of his warriors and asking, “Why are there Legion dogs in my camp? I thought we had run them all out?”

    Before the tribal could answer, Great Tree stepped forward and unveiled the head of Cornelius. “The mighty Caesar judged his actions and sent me to make amends. Caesar respects your people’s strength and independence and apologizes.” With this pronouncement, one of the other emissaries presented a sack of silver coins bearing Caesar’s likeness. “The rest of the payment for Cornelius’ wrongs against you, great chief,” Great Tree continued as he bowed slightly.

    Salt seemed lost in thought for a few moments, and he seemed fixated on Cornelius’ head. Finally, he replied, “I would have liked to end the man myself, but Caesar’s justice is enough. You know White Legs are not for sale though.”

    “I would think no such thing! It is but payment for crimes committed against your people. Caesar considers the White Legs friends of the Legion and would like nothing less than to see your people grow strong.”

    “If that so, you are free to leave my camp,” Salt growled as he turned his back. “White Legs are satisfied. Run and tell your master you done well,” Salt continued contemptuously as he entered his tent.

    “Great chief!” Great Tree exclaimed. “There is more Caesar bid me tell you!” Salt gestured to his guards, and they led the legionary into the tent after their chief. The other legionaries stood awkwardly, unsure of the numerous warriors around them.

    Salt took a seat cross-legged and gestured for Great Tree to sit across from him. After the legionary was seated, Salt asked, “What more did Caesar want?”

    “First, he thanks you for your efforts against New Canaan. With them all but destroyed, Caesar’s flank is secure. In reward, Caesar would make you First Friend and an equal ally of the Legion. He knows of your ambitions in the Utah and encourages them. All he asks is that our peoples become friends and work against those who oppose us, including the remaining New Canaanites.”

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    “What would White Legs gain?” Salt asked. “We are strong in new lands, and do not need Caesar’s help.”

    “You would gain a mighty ally. Even now, Caesar and his Legion cross the Colorado River and make war on the Bear of NCR. The profligates were slaughtered at Cottonwood Cove, Camp Searchlight, and the Dam. Their war chief and high chief are both dead, and their armies run before Mars’ wrath!”

    Salt’s gut urged him to turn the Legion down. While they had helped the White Legs at one point, they had been nothing but trouble lately. However, Salt could only think of his vision while facing down the Beast. He clearly remembered a bull goring a bear, and Great Tree’s boasting seemed to fit the vision. While the Beast had tried to deceive Salt, there was no sign the visions had ever been false. “White Legs shall ally with the Legion. But do not think we are weak,” Salt replied. “Our spears are sharp, and we will not be fools. The New Canaanites will be destroyed, I promise that.” And so, the White Legs and Legion were joined together once more…
     
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    Part 21: Trouble in Paradise
  • Trouble in Paradise

    Jump crept ahead of the war party, cautious in these foreign lands. She had never seen so many plants, and the water was clearer than any she had ever seen before. The easy land was good; many White Legs were making the journey to Zion. Salt-Upon-Wounds had brought almost all of Indian Peak with him, including the elderly, children, and gatherers. The chaotic mass trailed behind the scouts for many miles, and Albert was lost somewhere among them. He had wanted to follow Jump in the lead, but she had made clear the foolishness of that plan.

    Suddenly, shots broke out to her right. The distinctive chatter of a storm drum rang out, kicking up dirt on the other side of the river. Looking more closely, Jump could make out two figures ducking from cover to cover, desperately trying to escape. One stumbled, fell, and did not get up while the other ducked behind a clump of rocks and disappeared from view. Jump slowly crept closer to the shore, until it became clear that the fallen man was one of the natives. She rejoined the other scouts and continued making her way into the tribe’s new lands.



    Daniel bent double and gasped to regain his breath before entering the Dead Horses’ camp. His Dead Horse guides barely seemed bothered by the race through the valley. However, it was too important that Daniel meet with Joshua and strategize against the new White Leg horde that had broken into the valley. As he finally looked up, he was confronted by the recent victims of Joshua’s wrath.

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    “Joshua say it scare White Legs, show them we strong,” one of the scouts offered, gesturing at the heads. “You good?” Daniel nodded his head and followed the scouts down the bank to the crystal-clear waters of the eastern Virgin River. He gave one more glance back to the gruesome display before following the scouts, sloshing along in water up to his waist.

    The party advanced in single file, with the leader darting from one bank to another, seemingly erratically. However, Daniel was almost glued to his heels, all too aware of the bear traps hidden in the river’s loose soil. They were almost invisible to Daniel’s untrained eye, but the lead scout knew exactly where they were. He tried to ignore the Dead Horses following the party on the canyons above, but it was hard not to appreciate how militarized the tribe had already become.

    As they neared the camp, the last glow of day reflected off the Virgin’s waters which had widened out into a slow-moving pool. To his left, Daniel only saw the walls of the canyon climb ever higher. To the right, the Dead Horses’ camp was nestled against the sheer cliff walls. In the faint light, it was hard to make out much, but Daniel could see the bustling tribals around their cookfires. However, his eyes were drawn to the cliffs above their camp. Among the paintings of the Dead Horses’ victories, great hunts, and more, one image stood above them all. The Burned Man stared down at Daniel, his eyes an abyss except for the fire at their heart.

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    Daniel could not shake his gaze, lost in paint on the rocks, pondering what it all meant. He shuddered and finally made his way into the camp, looking for Joshua. A Dead Horse led him to a cave at the back of the camp, given away only by the faint glow of torches within. The pair passed through a chamber some twenty paces across, filled with curing hides, before making their way along a winding narrow path that seemed to keep climbing. Clusters of mushrooms glowed with a faint green light, giving the cave an eerie look. Suddenly, the tribal stepped aside, revealing Joshua, alone in a huge chamber bathed in torchlight. Joshua was seated, checking a pile of handguns.

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    “Joshua, the White Legs found a way into Zion in the south. They’ve already set up camp and driven off the Sorrows. We’ve retreated into the Narrows, and the White Legs haven’t followed, for now anyways.” Even as Daniel spoke, Joshua continued to clear the guns, inspect them, and neatly stack them. “We’ve started gathering supplies to leave Zion. We can disappear into the wilds and lose the White Legs.”

    Now Daniel had Joshua’s full attention. “Do not leave the valley. This place belongs to God and His people. We can not leave it to be pillaged by the White Legs.”

    “Joshua, the Sorrows don’t know war. They have their innocence, and I cannot ask them to give that up. It’s our fault the White Legs are even here, and I can’t ask the Sorrows to pay for our mistakes. Isn’t it better, more noble to turn the other cheek?”

    “When our Lord entered the temple and found it polluted by money-changers and beasts, did he ask them to leave? Did he cry? Did he walk away? No! He drove them out. It is one thing to forgive a slap against my cheek, but an insult to the Lord requires…no, demands correction.”

    “This is just a place, Joshua. Our people have had many Zions, and we shall have many more. If we sacrifice grace for a piece of land, we may live in this valley, but we will no longer dwell in Zion. Can’t you see it is better to leave?”

    “This place is God’s gift to the Sorrows. In abandoning it, we will gain nothing and lose more than you realize. Please, look in your heart and see this. We both wish for a non-violent solution, but I don’t think it’s possible.”

    “Let’s not argue anymore Joshua. I will think on your words as I hope you’ll think on mine. We must prepare the tribes for hardships either way.” With that, Daniel and Joshua joined the Dead Horses outside, shared a meal, and spoke of better things. Neither could shake the cloud hanging over Zion, but they shoved it from their minds. The coming days would be filled with war, strife, and suffering, but the present would be one of joy and companionship…


    Note: Apologies for the delay on posting this. Things have gotten pretty busy, but I found some time and inspiration to write. I think Joshua and Daniel's conflict is one of the more interesting ones in the game, but most players seem to side with Joshua without much thought. I admit he is an awesome character, and his solution is better for a video game. I think one thing people ignore is his influence on the Dead Horses might not be so good. I'm curious what those have played the game think, and I hope this raises an interesting debate for those that haven't.

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