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Chapter XII: Where is the dog buried?

Outside, it had started to snow heavily. Huge snowflakes were descending on Oslo in a manner that would make you think that heaven was falling down.

Arvid Gjertsen swore as he was wading through snow, slipping on the icy pavements and dodging bypassing pedestrians. Why weren’t they working? He was on his way to find the Army registry, to dig up information about the two soldiers Lande and Gustavsen.

In his office, Jon Mold was still coming to terms with the new reality. To shake off a gloomy feeling, he picked up the telephone to call major Schultz of Army Intelligence. He dialled the number, and waited. Finally a female voice was heard. Mold asked to speak to major Schultz.

”One moment, please. Who may I say is calling?”
“Inspector Jon Mold of the homicide division, m’am…”. He sighed. He hated using his title to inspire awe and authority. Having dodged enough fierce secretaries in his time, he knew it was the only way.
“I will put you through, inspector Noll”
“Mold…”. A new beep.

“Schultz!”
“Hello, major. Inspector Mold of the homicide division here. We met in relation to…”
“Yes, I remember. How may I be of help, Mold?”
“Well, the file that you gave me… it really wasn’t of much use, as the assignments Mathiesen had weren’t listed, nor were his whereabouts…”
“Inspector, those things are supposed to be secret. There’s a law to ensure that. We live in dangerous times, where enemies may be friends and your former friend may be your enemy and vice versa!”
Mold paused to try to make at least some sense of the ramblings of major Schultz. It seemed futile.
“I see. So you won’t let me have his full file?”
“Not unless there is very good reason for it. And right now, I can’t see that you have any reason whatsoever…?”
“I suppose not. Nice talking to you again, major…”, Mold said wearily.
“Good bye!”

The major hung up.

Mold sat back in his chairs, his hands clasped behind his head. He studied the ceiling. The spider’s web was still there. The spider was still sitting there as well, patiently waiting. Patience was a virtue. Mold knew as much. But time was a commodity he had very little of. For decades he had given all his energy to this one organisation, answering to its beck and call at every moment. Now he needed time. His previous achievements would allow no such thing. He only hoped Gjertsen was more successful in his quest.


Although at times rather clumsy, Arvid Gjertsen still had a certain aptitude for convincing people. He was currently putting all his efforts into convincing a rather sulky, unwilling clerk at the registry that it was a matter of vital interest to state security that he was given the files of two soldiers. Having consulted with his seniors, the clerk finally budged, and handed over two files to Arvid Gjertsen, who in turn gave a mock salute and marched out. He made his way back to Victoria Terrasse, picking up some buns at the baker’s on his way.

He entered Mold’s office without knocking, and was surprised to see his superior sitting facing the window and not doing much at all.

Mold turned around to face Gjertsen.
“Any luck?”
“Indeed. Retrieved both files…”
“Well done! But, let’s sit down first and draw up some theories. Why was Mathiesen killed?”
“Could be the money?”
“Yes. A very good motive. But who knew he had money?”
“Family… but he had none. Friends?”
“As far as we know, he kept to himself”
“Yeah. But what about a mistress? Most men have desires?”
“They do. And Mathiesen probably had lust and desire too. Which may be another motive. Maybe an old lover took her revenge. Or, maybe it has nothing to with human emotions like lust, love or greed, but rather with something in his line of work. He was a bloody agent!”

Gjertsen pondered this.

“He could have stepped on some toes in the past…”
“That’s why those dog tags fascinate me. Why did he keep them?”, Mold said. He stretched for his cigarettes and lit one. Then he continued.
“You were surprised that they were Norwegian. Maybe he killed them. I don’t know. Maybe they were part of his team. We’ll find out. And I’ll read his journal…”

Gjertsen gave Birger Lande’s file to Mold. Mold opened it. In 1942, Lande was reported missing in action. Gjertsen found the same in Gustavsen’s file. It was indeed the same date as well.
 
Great updates, Norg. Keep up the good work.

About the map, do you know Oslo was much smaller back then? No, I'm not talking about population (though smaller as well), but about area.

See this line on the map: +...+...+...+... it is the border between Oslo and the surrounding counties. On the west side is Vestre Aker and on the east side Østre Aker. I'm not sure where the 'met', but presumably the border was our river (Akerselva) as always.
 
Another cliff hanger? :mad: :D

Funny that Gjertsen should wonder if people didn't work when he was making his way through the packed streets. I have a friend who say the exact same thing 9 times out of ten when I am walking through town with him. :)

You have a good way of spacing up the story. Do you have all the main elements of each chapter made out before writing or do you come up with some of it as you go along?

as always a bit more nagging: More please!:)
 
Re: Chapter XII: Where is the dog buried?

Originally posted by Norgesvenn


He made his way back to Victoria Terrasse, picking up some buns at the baker’s on his way.


Ah, a practical man who knows what's important in life. :) Something was wrong about this chapter and I couldn't put my finger on it until I realized that no one lit up a cigarette.:eek: :D Well written as always.

Joe
 
Valdemar: Heavy water? Oh, yes, the Norwegian nuclear programme... we'll see. ;) :) Thanks for reading!

thames: Yes, I noticed that too when reading up a bit on Oslo's more recent history. I was going to find a slightly newer map, but this was all I could find online after some Google searches. Glad you enjoy this! :)

Jarlen av Juks: Each chapter comes... separately, but with a certain aim. I usually outline in my head where I want it to go, then write. I'm not very good at making outlines on paper for stories. Keep reading! :)

Storey: No smoking? :eek: That MUST be rectified! :D Thanks for the kind words! :)
 
Chapter XIII: B or not a B?

“We need to check his diary”, Mold said, emphatically. “Those dates can’t be a coincidence!”. Gjertsen nodded. Mold opened the diary and flicked through the pages until he reached 1942, and more specifically March 1942. Nothing. Just two crosses on the date. And not a single entry except the word “Preparation” scribbled hastily there.

“Damnation! I hate those intelligence people with their codes and secret systems!”, Mold shouted and threw the book in the wall.

Gjertsen, not being used to see Mold lose his temper, looked surprised, and quickly picked up the diary again.

“So this doesn’t give us any clues?”
“I don’t know yet. I’ll read it tonight when I get home. It’s not like I have a lot of other things to do, anyway…”
“What should we do now?”, Gjertsen asked, wearily.
“I’m not sure. I can’t believe we have no more clues. Not one single witness, unless we count the lesbian… no fingerprints, no tips from the public in general, no nothing!”

They fell silent. Usually, they would have a certain dynamic, where Mold would analyse and Gjertsen fill in with more facts and the occasional objection. No they had nothing. Both gazed up at the clock on Mold’s wall. It was past four.

“Go home, Arvid… no need for you to sit here. Unless you want to get a few beers?”
“I’d love to, but I’d better get home to the wife, you know…”
“Yes… yes…”. Mold waved him off.

He sat for another half hour, trying to write down and analyse what they knew. It wasn’t much. He sighed, got up, grabbed his coat and left.

On his way home, he was caught in a traffic jam. He felt cold, lonely and very hungry. He hadn’t shopped for groceries, and the shops were closed already.
“Great…”, he muttered.

Finally, he was home. He parked the car. Once again, oblivious of a black car following him. He shuffled up the stairway. The apartment seemed very empty. It was as if there had come some echo in there that never been there before. He went to look in the fridge. Some sausage was there. He put on a frying pan on the stove and boiled some potatoes. He ate and had a glass of milk. Afterwards, he put the kettle on and had a cup of coffee.

He went to the living room and sat down and lit a cigarette. The diary was right in front of him on the table. Somehow he didn’t feel like opening it.

Still, after refilling his cup of coffee and listening to the evening news on the radio, news of little interest to him, he picked up the diary again.

He opened it a random page.

17th of May 1936: Today is Constitution Day. I am on leave, and celebrated. There is some reason for celebration. The government has ordered that two new divisions are to be made operative. Another reason for celebration is that a senior member of the cabinet was exposed to have participated in a fraud. Labour is damaged!
19th of May 1936: Met a girl called Berit. She works at the German embassy. Danced. We share many views.

Mold paused. So Mathiesen had a girl? Well, at least he had met one. Meeting a girl is not the same as having one. He sighed. He had met his wife when they were at the gymnasium. Unfortunately, he had married her as well.
He flicked ahead a few pages. Nothing of much interest.

28th of June 1936: B. made me an interesting offer. Must answer in a week. I am leaving for the Finnish border in ten days.

2nd of July: I accepted the offer. I have made contact with goldsmith.


Who was “B”? Berit? Mold was puzzled. They wouldn’t get married already, would they? What was the “B” for? Mold scratched his chin, and suddenly remembered he hadn’t shaved for two days. He rose, and went to the fridge and grabbed a bottle of beer. It was a “murer”, a large bottle. He knocked the cap off and drank straight from the bottle.
 
Ah, finally, great story,

The black car somehow reminds me of the teenager I had following Frederik in the FC. I had him for about the whole time and not once did anybody in character or out ask, who is he? Even the fabled Lochlan and Captain missed it :)

So, who is in that black car??

V
 
Originally posted by Valdemar


So, who is in that black car??

V

Its got to be the government. There's something the needs to be kept secret here or my name isn't Sherlock Holmes.:cool: Whoops it isn't. Damn! :eek: :D

Joe
 
Originally posted by Storey
Its got to be the government. There's something the needs to be kept secret here or my name isn't Sherlock Holmes.:cool: Whoops it isn't. Damn! :eek: :D

Joe

Damn!

*rewrites*

:D :p ;)
 
Thank you all for your kind comments. :)

Zee Germans are in, JaJ, the black car... well, who knows Valdemar? Maybe it's his wife's lover? ;)

Storey, don't make such assumption, because I have to re-write all the time :D

TrajanNow, the next installment is here. :)
 
Chapter XIV: A voice in the dark

To soothe himself, Jon Mold decided to take a bath. He lay down in the old copper bathtub, but failed to find any relief. The twenty minutes he spent there at least rinsed him and got rid of the rancid sweaty smell that had surrounded him.


Suddenly, the telephone rang. Having dried himself with a towel, Mold ran into the living room and picked up the receiver.
“Mold?”
“You are interested in Niels Mathiesen, I gather…”, a voice crackled on the other end.
“Who is this?”
“Never mind. Listen up instead mr. Policeman!”
Mold decided not to repeat his rather feeble question.
“Mathiesen bet on two horses. Seems as if someone came back to claim the winnings in the end…”
“Look, mister, I don’t know who you are, but please, if you have any…”

Click.

Mold stared at the receiver, and quickly pressed for the operator.
“The operator, how can I help you?”
“This is police inspector Jon Mold. Where did my last incoming call come from?”
“I’m not at liberty to give such inform…”. Mold felt as if he was about to explode as he interrupted her.
“To hell with that! If you don’t dig up that info right away, I’ll come back with the cavalry and artillery tomorrow, and talk to your superiors, and quite soon you’ll be without a job for obstructing the course of justice”. A few seconds silence.
“The call came from a phone booth near Majorstuen, sir”
“Thank you!”. He hung up.

A phone booth near him. If it weren’t for the fact that he was naked, a fact that he had ignored despite not having drawn the curtains, he’d run out and try to find it.

It would be futile. What was he supposed to do? Ask everyone he’d meet if they’d recently made an anonymous phone call? Despite being a bureaucrat, he wasn’t that stupid, he comforted himself.

The voice had said Mathiesen bet on two horses. That wasn’t unlikely, as his loyalty to the government had hardly been all that great. But what was his alignment? He was clearly an anti-communist. That would probably make him pro-German. And Berit had similar views, given that she worked for the German embassy.

Right. A reasonable piece of reasoning. But hardly a step closer to solving the case. He sighed, and put on the radio, while looking for the whisky bottle he’d gotten for Christmas.

The news on the radio included a story about negotiations still going on about the defensive purposes of foreign airbases in Norway and about recent developments on Sicily. He turned it off, and finished his drink. It was past eleven. He doubted that he’d get any sleep, so he poured himself another drink and opened Mathiesen’s diary again.

5th of July: Goldsmith has received gold, and I have received ring. Vardø is a desolate place, and the midnight sun keeps me awake.

I know what you mean, Jon Mold muttered, and lit himself another Teddy. He skimmed through a few more pages, trying to find out if a date for the marriage had been set. The alcohol was making him dizzy. He wasn’t used to drinking much. His wife hadn’t approved.

12th of August: I finally saw Berit again. We talked much about recent events in Germany and I told her of what I had seen up north.

Mold was getting tired. His eyes were hurting from reading in the dimly lit room. He decided to lie down. Minutes later he was asleep.
 
Vardø? must be important if he bothered to travel up there...

Well, you got us hooked Norg. This is like watching the old 60ies Batman show when I was a kid. Everytime I read an instalment I just want more!

Same Mold-Channel!
Same Mold-Time!

*tries to remember theme song* dAdaAdadaAAaddaADA-MOLD:D :D

More Please!
 
Chapter XV: The day after

Arvid Gjertsen kissed his pregnant wife goodbye. She looked more radiant every day, he mused, as he ran down the stairs of their apartment building. The sky was clear, and daylight had yet to come. Somewhere Venus was still visible on the sky. In the East, grey smoke emitted from the industrial areas. Gjertsen was in a good mood, as he took a deep breath of the cold morning air before getting in to the car.

He’d spent the evening at home, and had come up with the idea of investigating the two dead soldiers more closely. He’d start with Lande, as he was from Oslo, according to his paper. He’d just drop by Victoria Terrasse and tell Mold, then find the citizens’ registry and start digging. Arvid Gjertsen was a man that was never lost in bureaucratic red tape. In fact, he was an expert at muddling through.

A few blocks away, Jon Mold had just awoken, and was busy finding his alarm clock. He had a splitting headache and a heartburn. Having killed off the alarm, he ran to the toilet and threw up. Bile and whisky. Whisky and bile. He brushed his teeth, washed his face, and put some pomade in his hair. A clean and ironed shirt was hanging in his closet. He put it on, buttoned his trousers, and had a glass of milk, before putting on his trench-coat. Then he noticed he was still carrying Mathiesen’s gun. He left it on the chest of drawers in the hallway and ran off.

This was of course one the day when the car wouldn’t start. With a lit Teddy between clenched teeth, Mold swore and banged his hands against the steering wheel. This was obviously not his day.

He ran off to catch a tram.

It was nearly half past nine as he arrived at the office. No coffee. No paper. Nothing. He ran off to the men’s room to throw up again.

As he came back to his office, he noticed Gjertsen’s note.

“Good man”, he muttered, and went to find Marcussen’s secretary Marie to ask for some coffee.

Arvid Gjertsen had flashed his police ID at the clerk at the citizen’s registry. This sign of authority had allowed him to find out quite a lot about Lande’s family. He had a younger sister, and both parents were alive. Gjertsen felt as if they had finally had some stroke of luck. He used the telephone in the registrar’s office and reached Lande’s parents. Lande had been 20 when he was reported missing, and it turned out that his father was working as a foreman at Spigerverket in Nydalen in the north of Oslo. Gjertsen found out that he wanted to meet Lande’s father.

He drove through the worker quarters of Oslo; Grünerløkka, Torshov, Sagene, Bjølsen. Wives were out doing shopping, children on their way to school. The men were absent. The days of mass-unemployment were over, it seemed. This manifested itself in thick smoke from the various industries.

Gjertsen, not of a philosophical bent nor prone to letting his mind wander, tried to prepare what to say to Lande’s father. It had been nineteen years since his son had gone MIA.

He parked his car, and went to a door saying “Administration”. A sour-looking secretary scowled at him, but Gjertsen once again flashed his ID and asked to see Johannes Lande.
The secretary gave him some instructions.

Lande’s workplace reminded Gjertsen of the images of hell he’d been taught in Sunday school ages ago. Johannes Lande reminded him of his own father. A grey-haired, rugged man, who apparently loved his work.

When the introductions were over, Gjertsen cut to the chase.
“Mr. Lande, the reason I have come is to inquire about your son, Birger”
“What? He’s been missing for twenty years, and now you start an investigation?”. Lande looked stunned.
“No, but his name came up in a case we’re working on…”
“What kind of case?”
“The murder of the man that may have been his commanding officer. A Niels Mathiesen”
“I’ve heard the name. I believe he was his CO, yes… he’s been killed?”
“Yes. He has. Now, how did your son disappear?”
“On a mission. Stupid git voluntarily signed up for special command. I don’t know much more about it, except that we were told he was probably dead…”

Gjertsen didn’t know what else to ask about. Another dead end.
 
Originally posted by Valdemar
This is stunning, nothing really happens :D

And yet i still come back for more, testament to your great writing :)

V

Well, thus the title of the AAR. ;)

Thanks, though! :)

Jarlen, you're really flattering me. :)
 
Tell Mold to stick to Vodka instead of whisky. Drink more less hangover.:D Thanks for dropping in on my AAR Norg. You might like it because I even have characters who smoke in it.;) Now you didn't give us much to work on in the last post but I think I know who did it. I won't say since I don't want to spoil it for the others.:D

Joe