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Chapter XVI: This is not the end

Jon Mold was still trying to recover from his hangover, after having managed to find a bottle of Aspirin. He looked at the reports he had filed recently on the case. Conveniently, he’d left the diary out of them, as he hadn’t assessed it fully yet. He sneezed loudly.

“About the only thing I’ll catch today, is a cold”, he muttered to himself as he hunched over his desk, trying to find his notes. His desk was a mess. The phone rang. It was Marcussen again.

“Mold, I’d like to see you in my office at once!”. The tone was neutral.
“Yes, sir!”

Mold went off. His head was slightly better, but he was getting hungry. He hadn’t eaten all day.

Marie just smiled, and motioned for him to go right in.

Marcussen was sitting there, his arms crossed. He nodded towards a chair, and Mold sat down. Marcussen looked nauseous.

“How are you, Mold? News spread quickly here. Your wife has left you. Can’t be easy. Maybe you need a break. Some time off. Just to recuperate…?”
“I’m fine, but thank you for your concern. I don’t want a break, sir!”
“Given that your current investigation is producing no results whatsoever, I have decided to close the case, Mold. It would be futile to tie up such huge amounts of resources on such a small case”. Marcussen looked warily at Mold.
“Sir… I’m aware that we haven’t produced any results yet, but we are following some promising leads that…”. Marcussen interrupted him.
“Sorry, inspector. The case is closed. There’s nothing I can do”
“What?”
“You heard me. Now, take a week off. Get back on your feet. Gjertsen will be re-assigned to another case. Good bye! I will see you in a week, Mold”. Marcussen made a dismissive gesture, and Mold had little else to do than to walk out of the office. Marie looked at him with great pity, but Mold gave her a brave smile and kept walking.

He walked to Gjertsen’s office, which apart from a pile of books on criminology and penal law, stood in stark contrast to his own. There was no sign of Gjertsen.

Mold had one last hope of salvaging his investigation. He had decided to call major Schultz again. He went back to his office, and picked up the phone. The secretary seemed just as reluctant to let him through this time as well, but finally he managed to convince her that this was in fact important business.

“Schultz?”
“Inspector Mold here, sir… look…”
“Yes, hello. What can I do for you?”
“Seems as if Marcussen is closing the case on Mathiesen”
“Really? Well, it’s not a surprise to me. You’ve had a rather poor showing, inspector”
“Pardon?”
“Your investigation. It hasn’t produced any results. We’re taking it from here”
“What?”
“Look, inspector, there is no other way. You have been relieved of a case that was obviously beyond your competence, and which has turned into a military matter. Thank you for your co-operation, and have a nice vacation!”

Click.

Mold was stunned. Taken off the case. Military investigation. There was indeed a first for everything. But it was all very obvious. Marcussen had gotten orders from above. But why on Earth? It wasn’t as if they were on the way of unveiling some hideous plot or something? Or were they?

Mold tried to trace whatever it could be that was iffy about the case. Clearly, Mathiesen hadn’t been 100 % loyal. Why would military intelligence be afraid of that being exposed? Whatever Mathiesen had done, it was in the past. Could the past be dangerous?
He picked up his notes, and stuffed them in his coat pocket and walked out of Victoria Terrasse. What was he to do now?


Arvid Gjertsen had stopped for lunch after his visit at Spigerverket. While eating his hamburger sandwich, he mused upon how glad he was that he hadn’t ended up an industrial worker. Having finished his glass of milk, he left the lunch shop and drove back to Victoria Terrasse. He was surprised not to find Mold in his office. He became even more surprised by the note on his desk saying the investigation was over.
 
Curve ball, hell it was a knuckle ball! Damn it Norg I had it all figured out. He was killed by his ex mistress the beautiful Jessica Gustavsson Jitex. He left her for a new younger lover but that isn’t what pushed her over the edge and made her kill him. Noooo, it was because he left her for a man! She couldn’t deal with losing her man to another man and even though it took her years to get revenge she finally managed to kill him but she had help. The nurse that night was none other than her daughter Ingeborg Sollie. (I’m still working on the lesbian aspect of the case) But now I’m not so sure.

Joe
 
Feedback time:

Von Moltke: Conspiracy? Shhh! "The Sparrow flies low". ;) Thanks! :)

Storey: Now I have to re-write again!!! :mad: ;) :D

JaJ: I think I could buy you beer if you guess correctly, yes. :)

Valdemar: You hopeless romantic, you. ;)


Now, stay tuned for more lack of action in "The Long Wait". :D
 
Oslo images

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Industrial strengths...

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A map

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The buildings of Parliament and some of Karl Johan

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Nydalen... where Gjertsen went...
 
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Chapter XVII: Not the best of days

The sky above Oslo was hardly above Oslo at all. Throughout the day, smog and fog had gathered to make life unpleasant for the poor people living there. There was snow in the air, and the temperature was somewhat rising. Soon the snow would be sludge. And the traffic would jam.

Jon Mold hadn’t brought his car. He was walking along Oslo’s parade street, Karl Johan, staring into the ground. His mind was racing. There had to be something. Something that could explain the sudden change of heart among the intelligence people and Marcussen.

What was he supposed to do now? One week’s vacation. Sick leave. Whatever. He checked his wallet. He had 100 kroner. Enough to get completely drunk. But drinking alone? Oh, well. He didn’t mind. He found a place suitable for his low mood and waited for a waiter. He was near Akerselva, at Schou’s brewery. He ordered today’s special and a beer. He drained the first beer in one large gulp and ordered another one. The purpose of the night was obvious; to get absolutely blotto.


Arvid Gjertsen hadn’t much to do. There were no new cases to investigate, and the other few investigations going on didn’t need his assistance. He therefore decided to go home early. He would at least make his wife happy. He stopped by a fishmonger’s and bought some fresh salmon and headed home. The news about Mold hadn’t yet reached him.

When Jon Mold stumbled out of Schoushallen, it was past midnight. Most of the clientele were workers, and Mold’s suit and tie had led to a few eyebrows being raised. But they had left him alone, just as he had left them alone, apart from a few that he had exchanged some pleasantries with.

He was trying to walk steadily back west. Through the city and back to Majorstua. It’d take some time, but he had plenty of time. There hardly was any traffic, and this of course included taxis.
One car was, however, out driving yet again. Oblivious of his surroundings, Jon Mold as usual paid no attention, despite almost being run over.

When he came home, he didn’t notice that someone slipped into the building along with him. He just undressed in the bedroom and fell into a deep sleep, oblivious of his apartment being rummaged. On his bedside table lay the diary of a dead man.


Another day dawned as Arvid Gjertsen made his way through the sludge towards work. He was uninspired and didn’t really want to go to work. He parked the car and went inside the building, and up to Mold’s office. The door was open, but the office empty.

He wondered where his superior was. He shrugged and went to his own office.


Jon Mold awoke, drenched in sweat. He shivered slightly as well. Clearly, two days of drinking didn’t do him any good. He checked the alarm clock. 9.30. He got out of bed, and stumbled to the bathroom, and started filling the bathtub, and went to the kitchen to get the coffee ready. Something was wrong. Although his memories of returning home were blurred to say the least, things weren’t in place.

The gun was gone. Somebody had rummaged through the living room and his daughter’s room. Not in his bedroom, though. It was “his” now. Not “theirs”. The diary was still there. Strange. What else would anyone have wanted? The gun? Was this a break-in, totally unrelated to the Mathiesen case?

“I’m getting paranoid”, Mold said out loud, and sat down by the kitchen table. Then he remembered his bath.

The phone rang as he was dozing of in the tub. It was Gjertsen.

“Aren’t you coming today, sir? Are you ill?”
“Arvid, I’ve gotten one week’s… uhm… vacation”
“Vacation?”
“Apparently, someone felt our investigation was awful. And used my domestic issues as an excuse”
“Really?”
“Yes…”
“Are we just going to give up?”
“You are. I’m not. I need someone inside the building. You assigned yet?”
“No. Just lurking around drinking too much coffee and looking for a newspaper… anything you want me to do?”
“Try to dig up some more concerning the two MIAs. I’ll call you at home later. Okay?”
“Okay. Take care!”
“I will”


Mold got dressed and picked up the diary. Staying at home was not an option. The old family cottage was. He packed a suitcase, and went outside, briefly wondering if he really should drive this early.

On his way, he bought whatever groceries he thought necessary, and decided to stop by the retirement home to see his father again.

The greyness of January was still very much present. Mold also checked his rear-view mirror now. There hardly was any traffic as he went westwards.

He pulled up outside the retirement home, which didn’t fail to give him the creeps this time either. He shook of a feeling of imminent doom and went inside, nodding to the nurse at the reception.

His sister was visiting. They said their hellos uneasily. Mold senior looked very happy to see his son.
His sister looked more worried.
“You look terrible, Jon. What has happened?”
“Nothing. You’ve gained a few pounds, haven’t you?”. She sighed.

“I’m leaving now, father. Good bye!”

Mold senior waved her off. She sighed again and went out.

“What brings you here, Jon… again?”. He looked curious.
“I need the keys. For the cottage. I’m taking some time off from work to… recuperate”
“Nonsense! I know you! You’d never take time off. What is it?”
“Never mind… please! I’ll tell you in good time, father…”.

“The keys are in the drawer. Remember to bring some water up there…”. His father sighed and began looking out his window.

“It’s grey outside. Did you bring your anorak?”
 
A bit more editing, spell check, and I think you could submit this to a publishing house. It is, I believe, amazing. Especially for a non-native english speaker. When it is finished, if you translate it to Norwegian, it would almost definently be published. Then you can make money. Then you can afford to wite more stories :D.

Seriously, if I were a book reviewer, i'd give you 4 stars, minimum. This is...well, just keep it going. I want a looong wait, for once ;)
 
Valdemar: We spend waaaay too much time in each other's AARs. :D Mold is in a hurry, yes. I'm not. I'm a patient bloke. ;)

hughbartlett: Wow! Thanks! :eek: :) Although I don't fancy myself as a writer in English, I'm going to blame the spellchecker in Word for the mistakes. It doesn't check my grammar, so "their" isn't a typo when it was supposed to be "there". :rolleyes: :D

Anyway, that was a rave review, mate! :)

AVN: Thanks! I haven't got a clue either
 
Originally posted by Norgesvenn
Valdemar: We spend waaaay too much time in each other's AARs. :D Mold is in a hurry, yes. I'm not. I'm a patient bloke. ;)


Norg actually I thought I was going to spend time in your other AAR??

V
 
Uhm... I am? :confused:

Well, a new chapter is coming today, so do not despair. Do not call your local bookshop to complain. Please, stay calm! :D
 
Drinking, smoking, burglared, left by his wife and despised by his daughter, no confidence from his boss, fear of getting old and walking around in a frozen town..

Poor Mold...:(

Although, on a more selfish note, it does make for excellent reading!:)

Keep writing!
 
Originally posted by Norgesvenn
Uhm... I am? :confused:

Well, a new chapter is coming today, so do not despair. Do not call your local bookshop to complain. Please, stay calm! :D

Well hurry up, its almost 11pm here :eek: and i need to go to bed an hour ago.:p
 
Chapter XVIII: Alone in the dark

Mold stopped. A thought struck him.

“Father… which failures did we have during the war? Norway, I mean…?”
“What? Failures… several. The worst one was probably the ill-fated landing in Rostock in ’42”
“What happened there?”
“I can’t tell you. I’m still under NDA, Jon. Why do you need to know?”. His father looked at him, puzzled but intrigued.

“It might help a case I’m working on. It’s a long shot, but… I’m a bit stuck…”
“A case about the war?”. His father looked earnestly surprised.
“Uh, yes… I think it can be traced back to the war”
“The Rostock affair went wrong because of terrible intelligence. Serious underestimation of German forces and non-cooperation with the Soviets… losses were huge, and general Laake had to pull out after holding the city for five days…”

Jon Mold nodded. Interesting information.

“I’d better go. Is the shot-gun still up there?”
“Yes… why? Jon, please, if you’re digging in the past, be careful. There’s much there that needs not be seen again. At least many people wouldn’t like to be reminded of the past”

The old man got up, and hugged his son. Jon Mold stood there, like struck by lightning. This was unusual. Unusual indeed. He hugged his father back.

“I will take care. I promise! I’ll be back in a week!”


Back outside, Mold felt his heart sink like a rock. What was he doing? Disobeying orders, escaping from home because of a simple break-in, throwing his marriage away. What had happened to him? A week before, he’d been a stable married man, respected for his work, investigating a crime of passion between an alcoholic couple.

He shook his head and stepped into the car. He had a good hour’s drive before him, but also stopped to buy two bottles of whisky. He drove carelessly, but stopped by a telephone kiosk to call Gjertsen.

“Any news?”
“Yes, a bit. I checked out Gustavsen’s background. He was an orphan, but had been a member of the NS before the war…”
“The NS? Are you sure?”
“They still hand out information about such issues liberally, sir…”
“Yes. Yes, I suppose so”
“Where are you? I tried calling you at home”
“It’s better that you don’t know, Arvid. Trust me! Now take care of the wife… bye!”

He hung up and drove on.
The cabin was like he remembered it from his youth. Prior to the war, he and some friends had often gone there with the girls they knew. It was cold inside, and Mold went to find some firewood to get the heat up. There were three bedrooms with bunks. The wooden floors smelled fresh, despite all the dust that covered the place. He looked outside. The forest was the same. The small pond where he used to swim and fish as a boy was still there, and frozen over. The treacherous ice was probably too thin to walk on, but it was hard to notice that it was a pond.

Mold fetched some snow to melt for water, filling a huge kettle. He found an old army overcoat, a blanket and a sleeping bag. Warm clothes. Good. The shotgun was there too, wrapped in cloth, all oiled. A whole box of ammunition was there as well. Mold picked up the gun and weighed it in his hands. He’d been hunting crows with it in his youth, much to his mother’s displeasure. His father, however, encouraged such manly activities as killing animals.

He had bought some bacon and bread before leaving Oslo. He fried some bacon on the stove as he had managed to get the heat up. The small kitchen contained relics of the past. The saucepan reminded Mold of his long-dead mother.

He ate in silence while flicking through what he now thought was the source of all things bad; Mathiesen’s diary.

The invasion of Rostock might coincide with what Mathiesen called “Operation Thor”.

From December 1941, Mold read:
“I have been given the responsibility for reconnaissance for Operation Thor. Operatives Firefly and Njaal are assigned to me.
Disturbing news as Soviets penetrate Finnish lines. More disturbing news as Fleischer marches on Petsaamo with 3 divisions.
All quiet on Western Front.”


What did he remember from the war? Fleischer’s victories had been all over the newspapers, although they had been heavily censored. The great catastrophe when the entire southern fleet was sunk outside Oslo after daring submarine raid? He’d been a patrolling police officer during the war. He’d been lucky, he supposed. He remembered the sun-tanned young men returning from the campaigns of Fleischer and Laake, and the American and British pilots getting into drunken fights in Oslo. But not how the front was.

Instead of cigarettes, he’d bought rolling tobacco and rolling papers. He rolled a cigarette and lit it up. It was getting dark, so he had to light the paraffin lamps in the kitchen and the living room. He made a fire in the fireplace as well.

The whole environment was inducive to thinking. And he needed to think. He wanted to solve the case, the sooner the better.

Mathiesen seemed to have been in the pay of the Germans. So one likely motive for killing him would be revenge. But who would want revenge? That was the open question. Someone he had betrayed? Someone who’d found out that he had been a traitor?

Mold was puzzled. He poured himself a cup of coffee and opened one of the whisky bottles. He added a generous dose of whisky in the coffee and rolled another cigarette. Outside, an owl was hooting. The quiet was in fact a little discomforting.

Mathiesen’s relationship with Berit had obviously not worked out very well. In 1938, they had broken up. She had found a German instead. This hadn’t changed the general admiration for Germany in Mathiesen’s diary, though.

“The meeting in Munich ended with Germany showing her will for peace and prosperity in Europe, abstaining from their claims on Czechoslovakia. The weakness of the French and British do not deter our government, of course, as they willingly become the lapdogs of the imperialist powers”

A different analysis than mine, Mold thought, and took a deep drag from his cigarette. The time was well over eleven. He should get some sleep, as he was feeling very tired.

As he still felt uneasy, he decided to keep his clothes, the shotgun and the diary near his bed. He tried to relax.



A car slowly made its way on the icy road. With the headlights off, it had a hard time manoeuvring the road. Four men were inside. All were quiet and looked very purposeful.