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The chapter was good too :)
Thank you

I'm sure someone actually interested in US history could chime in better, but either things have changed radically or Warrenson is a stuffy, waffly, incorrect servitor. The '33 Banking Act was a classic bit of locking the door after the horse had bolted. Maybe a necessary bit of work to fix the system before the next crisis but it would be bugger all help with the recovery and it was certainly not part of the New Deal. Didn't get a legal challenge and honestly hard to see how it would, or at least hard to see a challenge having enough merit to get to the Supreme Court.

I am doubtless over thinking this and this is just some dodgy HOI4 focus tree decisions on which Paradox have lavished their famed care and (complete lack of) attention to detail. ;)

I continue to quite like Albert as a character, certainly I would wish to avoid meeting him as I get the impression that unless you are in the clan/sect your life expectancy would not be good. A bit more of him and Henri verbally sparring would be fun, but I can understand why such things must not be overplayed. :)
I can promise more verbal sparring at a later date :) Also, see below

Well, now we have the timeframe narrowed down a bit -- Montana ratified Amendment XXI on August 6, 1934. (That said, Warrenson misspoke as to Montana being the last state needed for ratification -- the ones that brought it up to the two-thirds requirement were actually Ohio, Pennsylvania, and Utah on December 5, 1933. At that point, Montana's ratification was just a formality, really.)
As regards to dates and times, all I will say is that in this timeline Mr Warrenson is correct as to Montana being the final hurdle for the Amendment.
 
I am doubtless over thinking this and this is just some dodgy HOI4 focus tree decisions on which Paradox have lavished their famed care and (complete lack of) attention to detail. ;)

Indeed it is so. Wait till you see how easy it is for Roosevelt to turn the nation communist with a 36 start.

The collapse of the United States into warring tribes seems to have been placed under the troll of the paradox team, since one of the potentials that comes out of it is the adorably named 'unaligned states of amercia', who are tied with Sweden for being the blandest of the currently large list of bland countries in hoi4. Unaligned by the way does some legwork in that game. The vaguely democratic unaligned states have the same goverment type as the absolute religious monarch of Tibet, and for that matter the same type of Edward VIII's enlightened monarchy-led empire.
 
More hints dropping into place. Ominous notes about being under protection. An apparent charade to gain already known information. This seems to be a very delicate game of diplomacy being conducted. God alone knows the object of it all. (Or perhaps God isn’t the thing to invoke in this case…)
 
As regards to dates and times, all I will say is that in this timeline Mr Warrenson is correct as to Montana being the final hurdle for the Amendment.

Hah, fair enough :D
 
I'm sure someone actually interested in US history could chime in better, but either things have changed radically or Warrenson is a stuffy, waffly, incorrect servitor. The '33 Banking Act was a classic bit of locking the door after the horse had bolted. Maybe a necessary bit of work to fix the system before the next crisis but it would be bugger all help with the recovery and it was certainly not part of the New Deal. Didn't get a legal challenge and honestly hard to see how it would, or at least hard to see a challenge having enough merit to get to the Supreme Court.

I am doubtless over thinking this and this is just some dodgy HOI4 focus tree decisions on which Paradox have lavished their famed care and (complete lack of) attention to detail. ;)

I continue to quite like Albert as a character, certainly I would wish to avoid meeting him as I get the impression that unless you are in the clan/sect your life expectancy would not be good. A bit more of him and Henri verbally sparring would be fun, but I can understand why such things must not be overplayed. :)
Well, now we have the timeframe narrowed down a bit -- Montana ratified Amendment XXI on August 6, 1934. (That said, Warrenson misspoke as to Montana being the last state needed for ratification -- the ones that brought it up to the two-thirds requirement were actually Ohio, Pennsylvania, and Utah on December 5, 1933. At that point, Montana's ratification was just a formality, really.)


I suspect we are hearing from an alternate history, where some things are slightly changed, and others more notably so, probably for the worse.
 
Looks like Albert's American trip may be quite eventful. Maybe he'll be able to sway the supreme court? Though I'm not sure which ruling would be more advantageous for this secret society he's part of.

I'm loving the concept of the shared kitchen serving both the cheap and fancy dining facilities, each facing a different street.
 
and draw a deep, un-necessary breath
perhaps the most chilling line in the episode. :eek:
“It is a mystery,”
As indeed it all is! :D

Also, I wonder what the implied historical allusion to Henri was?
This crisis is doing something to America - something deep. It has happened before, if you recall, in other places at other times.” I emphasise the accent I am speaking, exaggerating its anachronistic sound.
My first impression was the French Revolution, but it could have been something else. Which one suspects both Albert and Henri experienced first hand.
 
perhaps the most chilling line in the episode. :eek:
As indeed it all is! :D

Also, I wonder what the implied historical allusion to Henri was?

My first impression was the French Revolution, but it could have been something else. Which one suspects both Albert and Henri experienced first hand.

I was going to draw attention to this as well before my toddler distracted me, because I think this is important. The ac cent described here is his "truly native French" and in an earlier chapter we had a recollection from William the Conqueror so we have quite a span of French history we could be talking about here, but it has to be one where the very identity and soul of the nation is at stake, that's after all the point of the conversation.

We also have to consider the context of what's going on in this timeline's America. Of course, the Supreme Court was hostile to the New Deal, but the Banking act itself was uncontroversial, so that suggests a even more reactionary supreme court than our timeline that is willing to fight the New Deal root and branch, which is why even by 1936 the Depression sounds like it has not improved at all and in fact may be worse.

My personal guess for the referenced time would be the hundred years war: lack of an ability to adapt or change nearly kills France and makes it an appendage of England. What this means the US...well, I'm not sure we have enough information yet.
 
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It appears in this story the Depression is getting worse in America. Things are getting bleak and forces are moving which could shake the country to its core. I feel the reference at the end could be referencing a radical change and perhaps not a good one.
 
Also, I wonder what the implied historical allusion to Henri was?
Me too, I’d imagine Rome though? Which makes Albert either very old or very well versed in history.
 
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My personal guess for the referenced time would be the hundred years war: lack of an ability to adapt or change nearly kills France and makes it an appendage of England. What this means the US...well, I'm not sure we have enough information yet.
I’d imagine Rome though? Which makes Albert either very old or very well versed in history.
Could be either of these or none of our guesses, of course. I’m sure we’ll find out in time. I went for the Revolution as it seemed to fit and it was an archaic French accent, but still French. Might Rome be a bit far back for that?

IIRC (without resorting to Google) ‘French‘ was simply the most widely spoken language in France at the time of the Revolution. And the issues being canvassed were broadly analogous to those that drove many at the time: hunger, mobs, but also revolutionary leadership willing and able to do something with it. Not an exact parallel of course, just a wild guess. ;)
 
More hints dropping into place. Ominous notes about being under protection. An apparent charade to gain already known information. This seems to be a very delicate game of diplomacy being conducted. God alone knows the object of it all. (Or perhaps God isn’t the thing to invoke in this case…)
In a very real sense everyone of Albert's scenes thus far is just trying to, bit by bit, build up an rough outline of the world which he inhabits and moves through.

Hah, fair enough :D
I suspect we are hearing from an alternate history, where some things are slightly changed, and others more notably so, probably for the worse.
Very true.

Looks like Albert's American trip may be quite eventful. Maybe he'll be able to sway the supreme court? Though I'm not sure which ruling would be more advantageous for this secret society he's part of.

I'm loving the concept of the shared kitchen serving both the cheap and fancy dining facilities, each facing a different street.
The shared kitchen idea I knew I had to run with as soon as I thought of it. Even today I am sure that would be quite scandalous in certain circles.

perhaps the most chilling line in the episode. :eek:
As indeed it all is! :D

Also, I wonder what the implied historical allusion to Henri was?

My first impression was the French Revolution, but it could have been something else. Which one suspects both Albert and Henri experienced first hand.
Well Albert does require air for ordinary speech ... but even among breathing mortals heavy sighs can be used for effect and whatnot.


I was going to draw attention to this as well before my toddler distracted me, because I think this is important. The ac cent described here is his "truly native French" and in an earlier chapter we had a recollection from William the Conqueror so we have quite a span of French history we could be talking about here, but it has to be one where the very identity and soul of the nation is at stake, that's after all the point of the conversation.

We also have to consider the context of what's going on in this timeline's America. Of course, the Supreme Court was hostile to the New Deal, but the Banking act itself was uncontroversial, so that suggests a even more reactionary supreme court than our timeline that is willing to fight the New Deal root and branch, which is why even by 1936 the Depression sounds like it has not improved at all and in fact may be worse.

My personal guess for the referenced time would be the hundred years war: lack of an ability to adapt or change nearly kills France and makes it an appendage of England. What this means the US...well, I'm not sure we have enough information yet.
In this timeline, as alluded to by Mr Warrenson, Roosevelt came to power with a far worse situation, therefore more drastic measures were required ...

I admit my alt-timeline here is not going to necessarily be the most detailed. I won't claim any especially deep historical knowledge (other than a general interest in history for the last 30+ years, and a passing interest in law (for "reasons" I am currently reading a US constitutional law textbook, for example)), I hope to give enough verisimillitude to not break immersion (well, if the vampires don't).

It appears in this story the Depression is getting worse in America. Things are getting bleak and forces are moving which could shake the country to its core. I feel the reference at the end could be referencing a radical change and perhaps not a good one.
I mean it was bad enough of course, bad enough I reckon it wouldn't take much to tip it over to something grimmer.

Me too, I’d imagine Rome though? Which makes Albert either very old or very well versed in history.
Well as to Albert's precise age that will be revealed in time.

Could be either of these or none of our guesses, of course. I’m sure we’ll find out in time. I went for the Revolution as it seemed to fit and it was an archaic French accent, but still French. Might Rome be a bit far back for that?

IIRC (without resorting to Google) ‘French‘ was simply the most widely spoken language in France at the time of the Revolution. And the issues being canvassed were broadly analogous to those that drove many at the time: hunger, mobs, but also revolutionary leadership willing and able to do something with it. Not an exact parallel of course, just a wild guess. ;)
Well, as they do say in France they are not really speaking French, so much as badly-pronounced, lower-class provicial Latin :)


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So this was my first post with a proper dollop of information about goings on in the wider world. I am always a little wary of exposition - it can perform a vital narrative role, but it is easy to overstuff oneself. We will, of course, get to see somewhat more of America as and when Albert actually gets there.

However I must also now cop to an editing error - there were a couple of lines in this update that were meant to be itaclised, but I have belatedly (ie, just now) realised I neglected doing so. Like in the previous Albert passage this was meant to give an idea of a flashback. I am not sure if the intention was still picked up giving my editing error, so hence this slightly waffly admission.
 
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The shared kitchen idea I knew I had to run with as soon as I thought of it. Even today I am sure that would be quite scandalous in certain circles.

It does sound like something dear old Anthony Bourdain would’ve had great fun exposing.
 
As ever gripping, and most of my (random) thoughts have been captured by the others. You really are enjoying the teasing of the audience @stnylan !
 
I hinged read this yesterday night
Commenting today

Your writing in this story is getting better and better. I love how you create tense moments and explain large events naturally and in a soft flowing manner like Roosevelt ratifying the treaty.
I especially love the character building and the chapter History: The day has dawned for its use of enchanting poetic language

Great story
 
It does sound like something dear old Anthony Bourdain would’ve had great fun exposing.
Yes, though I could see Tom Kerridge going along with the idea too.

As ever gripping, and most of my (random) thoughts have been captured by the others. You really are enjoying the teasing of the audience @stnylan !
Thank you

I hinged read this yesterday night
Commenting today

Your writing in this story is getting better and better. I love how you create tense moments and explain large events naturally and in a soft flowing manner like Roosevelt ratifying the treaty.
I especially love the character building and the chapter History: The day has dawned for its use of enchanting poetic language

Great story
Thank you very much. That particular was written to be maybe somewhat lyrical, trying to evoke a sense of memory or similar. I often read my posts out aloud (it certainly improves my catching of errors) but that also gives me a chance to consider how something sounds (in my own reading style, anyway). For narratives I find it a useful technique.


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So as can be seen had a bit of a gap since my last update. Had a very negative mental health event last Thursday (work-induced). Fortunately had an excellent Father's Day with my daughter and feeling generally much better right now, so hoping to finish editing the next update today or tomorrow. It may be another slightly longer break after that on account of, next week, there being a major work project due to launch will doubtless generate a lot of work for my colleagues and I.
 
Take care of yourself Stnylan ! :)
We will be here whenever the update is ready.
 
Chapter 1.9 - Martin - That evening
Chapter 1.9 - Martin - That evening

Martin stamped his feet. “You alright?” Henry asked.

“Impatient,” he replied. “Remember, when the toff turns up keep out the way, unless I or he tells you otherwise. Clear?”

They nodded, and Angus muttered some affirming expletive. Martin glanced up at the sky. Still light, but the false light of evening. Surely the sun had bloody set by now. He glanced at the house.

“Constables, if there’s trouble I want one of you to leg it to the station, and the other to make sure no one gets in the way. Understood?”

“Yes sir,” the men said. One barely looked as if he learned to shave - he’d be doing the running. The other was older. Still, their presence gave an official look - which was why bloody Bartholomew had insisted on them being here. Martin didn’t like the Sheriff’s thrall, but the git knew his job. He was at the police station now.

It was Bartholomew who decided to spread the story about Richard Williams had his wife being attacked, planting the idea it was some dockyard violence - perhaps a gang unhappy with the man. “The more truth the better the lie,” Bartholomew had said - which Martin knew was right. Of course, he also knew his fellow servitor was just mimicking one of the Masters, aping the superiority. If only he knew … but Martin shut down that thought. His Master had long made it plain: he was never to brag, never to take offence. Let the goats bleat, his Master had said.

Meanwhile Martin and his two companions were passed off as some sort of special officers from the Port Authority. Once the locals had been assured Robert himself was suspect of no wrongdoing, and the Authority was even going to pay the hospital bill, they became almost friendly. More practically Bartholomew had also left them with a big bore hunting rifle.

Martin glanced at thy sky again - already darker through the evening smoke. “Right, we better get ready. Angus, Henry - in the kitchen. I’ll stay at the door. Angus - you on the gun. If it comes to it, don’t worry about hitting me. Just shoot.”

“Aye,” said Angus. As they ready themselves Martin thinks - how minutes to get to the tunnel at Greenwich, to walk under the river, and to get here. Surely Bartholomew would have a car or something at the gardens waiting for when his Master arrived. Of course, the cellar might be empty.

Just then a car careened around the corner and into the street, stopping just before the house. From the passenger side out stepped Sir Arthur Halesworth, the High Sheriff. Tall, broad, bearded, and with thick hair down to his shoulders, the Sheriff paused and held out a hand that was grasped by a more diminutive set of digits. Martin did his best not to gulp as out climbed the Lady Parr, in what he recognised to be her working clothes. Finally, from the front emerged Bartholemew who started to talk to the constables, drawing them to one side as Sir Arthur walked up to the house.

“Martin,” the High Sheriff said. Martin made a quick, functional obeisance. “How did you stumble on this one?” His voice was a deep rumbling baritone.

“I was about my Master’s business,” Martin replied. Sir Arthur nodded.

“No sound?”

“No - but I cannot be certain there is anything.”

“Mmm,” Sir Arthur considered, looking at the hallway. “My lady?” he said, turning to his companion.

She seemed to think a moment, her apparently gentle face unmoving. “If there is someone there they are staying quiet. And still.”

“Which would be the only sensible action,” Sir Arthur said, glancing at Henry and Angus down the hall. “Right. Martin - you guard the front door. Your men watch from where they are. We’ll descend. If anything else comes up - delay it.”

“Very well Sir,” Martin said. His own revolver now out.

“Are you ready my lady?” Sir Arthur asked.

“Let me go first,” she said.

“If you wish.” It took them but a moment to clear the way. Martin heard, rather than saw, the High Sheriff lift the trap. Lady Parr walked into the space beneath the stairs, and went out of sight. Martin waited. He saw Angus heft the rifle up and heard Sir Arthur begin his own descent.

From beneath the stairs came a sound not quite like a cat’s hiss, and Martin fancied he heard a voice - though he could not tell more. Then silence.

A few moments later Sir Arthur called up, “Martin. We are coming up. Make sure not to shoot us.”

Martin waved at Angus and Henry, who already stood easy. Up first was Lady Parr, and she was followed by another. A man, a little short perhaps, European, tanned, with the flat expression of one whose mind was no longer quite their own. Behind him came Sir Arthur.

“Martin,” Lady Parr said to him in her innocent soprano, “your surmise was correct.”
 
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