I've checked both pages under Calderon Protectorate.
Something that applies to both pages is that you have multiple units under one heading. In the case of the Taurian Pride, you show the insignia of the 1st TP, but the 2nd has a different insignia. I'm not sure if this applies to the Calderon Guard yet, as Sarna doesn't show all of them and I don't have many of my sourcebooks to hand at the moment (I need to get them down from the loft(attic))
Calderon Guard
There are 3 regiments of Calderon Guards, not 2.
The colour bar (the blocks of colour used in the scheme) are aligned to the left rather than centred.
I would use paint rather than paints, and vehicle has been misspelled.
If I could make a suggestion, "The Calderon Guard camouflage their vehicles and 'Mechs in a disruptive pattern made up of dark browns and blood red" might read a little better?
For the camospecs pages, you link to search results for that unit, but as there are no Calderon Guard miniatures on camospecs it might look like the link is broken. However I think that might be more a camospecs problem and they need to pick up the pace and add as many as possible on there.
Taurian Pride
The colour scheme states
"The regimental colors are red with brown and gold trim." but the image shows a colour scheme of brown with red and gold trim. I know this open to interpretation, and I'm not criticising the artwork, but (again I haven't checked the source material yet) I wanted to make sure the quoted colour scheme was right.
Similarly, camospecs states a colour scheme of green, brown and red for 2nd TP.
The Sarna link takes you to the 1st Taurian Pride. As mentioned above, all four TP regiments are under one page on your site. It's not an end of the world problem however.
That's all I've noticed on those two pages