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Episode Twelve: It was our destiny to be together... I believe that with all my heart!
I'm back!

Well, I've finally gotten to the point where Homeworld 3 is no longer dominating every waking moment of my free time. I had an epic week finally getting to play the game I've waited over twenty years for. The game also gave me several ideas for my next Stellaris story that are now safely stashed away in my notebook.

Some housekeeping notes before we start:

This chapter contains a brief discussion about events in one of my other fanfictions called Finding Love Under the Winter Star. It is a short story based on Stardew Valley. The story is not located on the Paradox Forums and can only be found on my Ao3 page. (Archive of Our Own Link here) I do know that some people might be curious about the full details, so you will find a SPOILER button at the very end of this chapter.

Hidden behind the SPOILER button will be Chapter 6 of Finding Love Under the Winter Star. This chapter contains the events that will be referenced and discussed during today's post.




The Broken Gates
Episode Twelve: It was our destiny to be together... I believe that with all my heart!


Aisling
Creation
The bAAR, Paradox Interactive Forums



Aisling’s curiosity got the best of her. When Cali gave the order to hide, she refused.

Still in the form of a mouse, Aisling extricated herself from Marisol’s grip and scampered down one of her pant legs, causing the unsuspecting young woman to yelp in surprise. In seconds, Aisling managed to conceal herself beneath a forgotten napkin with a good view of the door… and what happened next.

The men and women of Cali’s team quickly escorted everyone out of the room. In moments, Cali and four of her teammates were the only people in the bAAR, save for the old caretaker of the Inkwell, who totally ignored the proceedings and carried on with his own work as though nothing interesting was happening at all. A moment later, the heavy oak door was pushed open and three people entered.

Two of them were members of Cali’s team, and they were escorting a woman.

Is it that Tenna girl? Aisling asked herself. She definitely looks like a Creation.


Aisling sniffed the air. Something about this new woman was just a little off. Aisling had shapeshifted into several animals by this point and discovered that Creations like herself had a very distinct scent that she could recognize. It was not a conventional odor or a strong smell, but rather… a general atmosphere of un-belonging that all Creations carried with them. Even Cali emitted this strange aura.

The newcomer was an adult woman wearing a red dress. Her messy bright blue hair stood out in the dim light, causing Aisling to mistake her for Tenna for the second time in as many minutes. The fairy was not alone in her mistake.

“Is that Tenna Annora? From Song of the Solitaire?” One of Cali’s men asked.

“Don’t think so.” A female trooper replied. “Her color palette is reversed: Red dress, blue hair. Tenna has red hair and a blue dress.”

Cali raised a hand.

“That’s close enough. Tell me your name before we do anything else.”

The woman put her fingers together and fidgeted nervously before speaking in a soft but unexpectedly mature voice:

“My name is Emily. I’m Hayley’s sister. I’m looking for my boyfriend, Blake. Someone told me he was here… and that… he’s… uh… a Creator… My Creator.

From her hiding place, Aisling had to suppress a squeak of confused surprise. In her own world, the term “boyfriend” did not exist, so she was momentarily lost until one of Cali’s teammates let out a laugh and said:

“Wait… hold on a second, can you say that again? I just… I need to hear it again.”

He was fiddling with his smartphone, trying to set up audio recording app. Emily’s face seemed to light up with emotion.

“Blake and I are in love.” Emily said. “I heard he was going to propose to me after the Feast of the Winter Star, but then I met the woman in the military uniform. She told me that this was where Blake comes from, and… and she said…”

Emily trailed off, her face turning as red as her outfit. When Cali spoke, her voice trembled from suppressed emotion.

“Get that idiotic writer in here. Now.” Cali hissed.

Blake was pulled out of the Inkwell. Marisol followed closely behind, looking curious. Aisling briefly lost her sense of self, transforming into a swirling red vapor before reforming as a young girl, seated on a barstool and looking extremely interested. Emily saw this and clapped her hands with an excited smile on her face.

“Oh! Oh! Forest magic!” Emily declared, looking at Aisling. “Are you one of the Junimos I’ve heard about?”

“What?” Was all Aisling could say.

Unlike all of Blake’s other Creations, Aisling found this Emily person very hard to read. There was something off about her… Emily’s very nature as a Creation did not match that of everyone else.

When Blake entered the main dining area, he saw Emily and the color seemed to drain out of his face. He tried to back off, to hide, but Cali would not allow it. As soon as she saw him, Emily reacted with a very strong show of affection.

“Blake! I found you!” Emily cried. “I’m so happy.”

“Hello, Emily.” Blake said.

Cali rounded on Blake, grabbed him by the front of his jacket and spoke in an angry rumble:

“So, that’s one of the characters you made up as a love interest for yourself. Listen up: now that she’s here, she’s an individual with human rights that must be respected. If I get word that you’ve done or said anything to her that-

“You don’t have to tell me.” Blake interrupted. “I’m way ahead of you there.”

“So you wrote a story where she fell in love with you?” Aisling asked, pointing at Emily.

Emily was now blushing so furiously that her face resembled a tomato.

“Wait…” Emily said slowly. “You know about us?”

“I do!” Marisol said, raising her hand and failing to realize that she was not being helpful. “Finding Love Under the Winter Star is such a sweet little story. I thought your love scene with Blake in the sleeping bag was so cute!”

Emily began to lose her composure. She held her hands to her mouth, eyes wide and starting to fill with tears. She was hyperaware of the SWAT team members snickering and laughing. Then one of the troopers said:

“Robinson hit that? Nice!”

Cali reached across and smacked the man in the face.

“Use your brain for once!” Cali snapped. “From her point of view, this is like her secret diary being exposed to the whole damn world! Have some fucking courtesy!”

Then Cali turned to Emily.

“I’m sorry, I’m so sorry.”

Emily shook her head, and then tried to approach Blake. Cali blocked her.

“But it makes so much sense… Blake being my author.” Emily said. “It was our destiny to be together... I believe that with all my heart!”

Aisling looked over Emily’s shoulder and realized that Blake was extremely uncomfortable. He mouthed the words “don’t have the guts to tell her.” Marisol picked up on this and tried to run interference.

“Ah… Emily. A lot of characters Blake created have been popping up in the real world lately. You’re not the first, and we’re planning to move all of you somewhere else for your own safety. Why don’t you go upstairs and meet everyone else?”

Aisling hopped down from the barstool and approached Emily. The new Creation was significantly taller than the fairy, so Aisling pulled at the hem of Emily’s dress to get her attention.

“Come on. Come with me.” Aisling said.

“Yes, go with Aisling.” Blake said. “We’ll deal with all of this when we get to Stockholm.”

Aisling started to gently pull Emily toward the outside door and staircase. Emily held out her hand as though begging Blake to touch her just once. Aisling tugged harder.

“Very well, little forest spirit. Lead on.” Emily sighed in a resigned tone.

The last thing Aisling heard as she pulled Emily out of the room was the custodian of the Inkwell speaking to Blake and Cali:

“Just so you know, we’re taking that intrusion into the SolAARium very seriously. Security has been tightened. Forum users and Paradox employees are still permitted to use the passageway to Stockholm, but all Creations are going to be banned starting tonight. They’ll have to get to Paradox HQ another way.”



Upstairs, Aisling led Emily to the apartment where the female Creations were confined. To her surprise, she discovered that the room was full to capacity. At some point, all of the male creations had joined their female counterparts in the apartment.

“So, who’s the new girl?” Varian asked.

Aisling felt a wave of Psionic energy cross the room. Sebakhira and Kanti were both trying to read Emily’s mind. Emily herself was staring hard at the sight of the lion and peahen, her mouth agape.

“What a beautiful bird!” Emily exclaimed.

“Oh, you flatter me.” Kanti said. “It’s the males of my species who are beautiful. We hens are rather dull.”

“You’re taking all of this pretty well.” Trig commented.

“Maybe she’s from a story where talking lions and peacocks are normal?” Mina suggested.

Emily put her hands together and smiled.

“Stardew Valley is a place of magic and wonder.” Emily said. “I’ve been able to talk to plants all my life. Why not animals in this place too?”

Sebakhira’s eyes widened.

“I don’t sense any Psionic aptitude in you. How is this possible?” The lioness inquired.

“Probably a quirk of her own story.” Trig replied with a shrug. “Playing by different rules than the rest of us.”

Kanti suddenly burst into a fit of giggles. Everyone turned to look at her. Aisling felt the blood drain out of her own face.

“Or…” Kanti said, trying and failing to suppress a cackle, “Maybe she gets special treatment because-”

“Stop!” Aisling raised her voice.

It was so uncommon for the little fairy to shout that Kanti immediately took notice. Now all of the Creations had their eyes on Aisling.

Aisling knew that Kanti and Sebakhira were mind-readers, and had probably already found the compromising knowledge discussed downstairs.

“They already talked about that below.” Aisling said in a meek tone. “Emily doesn’t need to be tormented again.”

Emily, blushing once more, mouthed the words “Thank you.”






Tenna Annora
Creation
Rotholmen, Sweden



The view was so incredible that Tenna forgot about the cold. She was standing in front of the construction site, located near the center of a small forested island, and using a tablet computer to watch the video feed from a drone high above her head.

The drone itself was made up of several million microscopic nanobots, drawn directly from the Nanite Armor worn by Cassandra Espinosa, who was standing nearby as she controlled the drone.

“I’ve never seen so many islands in my life.” Tenna breathed. “It’s like the city itself has merged with the sea.”

Behind Tenna and Cassandra, Whetu Kealoha and Akira Robinson used Telekinesis to lift a heavy component into place. For the first time, the newest addition to the Broken Gates actually looked like… well… a Gate.

The ring-shaped structure was not complete. More work had to be done, more materials delivered. Akira pulled out her Return Beacon and clicked it. A Vortex Portal appeared and quickly swallowed up herself and Whetu, leaving Cassandra and Tenna alone on the island.

“Bring the drone a little further to the north.” Tenna said. “I want to take another look at that one island completely covered in cityscape.”

“The one with the disc golf park and football pitch?” Cassandra asked.

“Yeah, that one.”

The drone banked right, putting the Swedish Parliament, Royal Palace, and Nobel Prize Museum on its left and flew south.

“Wait a second.” Tenna said. “Slow down. I saw something. Come to the right by seven degrees.”

Cassandra nodded and closed her eyes. All of her nanobots were controlled via implants in her brain, so making this change was as simple as allowing an idea to come to her mind. Tenna focused hard on the screen.

“Lose some altitude. Come down to fifty meters.” Tenna said. “Camera angle down another ten degrees please. Slow down. One more degree to the right. Slow down again. Oh, holy Saida! Stop! Stop when you’re over the hospital and turn one-hundred degrees to your right!”

Tenna was breathing faster now. Cassandra was getting excited as well.

“Do you see it!?” Tenna asked. “There’s a skybridge connecting those two buildings. The south structure is right next to the hospital, the north structure is across the street. Get closer to that skybridge!”

Cassandra complied.

The skybridge had two levels, as though it was simultaneously connecting two different floors of each building to each other. On the upper level, just faintly visible in the early morning light… was a round symbol.

“Is that what I think it is?” Cassandra said. “Is that a picture of a platypus fossil?”

Cassandra decided to take a large risk. Her drone descended to just above street level. Several Swedish people, commuting to work in the early morning, noticed the drone and looked up, pointing at it. Cassandra and Tenna ignored them. They guided the drone to the entrance of the southern building.

The glass front door, at street level, had the words Stockholms Verken written in white letters just above a warning sign about closed-circuit security cameras. There was a keypad and intercom button to the left of the door. To the right was a black sign with orange letters. The black sign said this:

Magnus Ladulåsgatan 4

6.
5.
4.
3. Paradox Interactive
2.
1. Trimero


Cassandra and Tenna grabbed one another, jumping and cheering for joy.

They had found it.







Chapter 6
Cindersap Forest
Day 24 of Winter, Year 1
10:30pm



Hidden away in a far corner of the forest, the dim light of a campfire illuminated the Secret Woods.

A purple tent stood in a clearing, its fabric adorned with a pattern of stars that evoked the beautiful night sky above. Emily and Blake, dressed from head to foot in heavy winter gear, huddled next to each other by the fire. A cookout kit simmered away, gently wafting steam into the air as a pot of stew brewed. One of the two sleeping bags was still rolled up beside the tent. The couple were more interested in the fire at the moment… and each other.

“Well, this is fun, isn’t it?” Emily asked, taking a sip of hot cocoa from her mug.

Blake did the same. He was happy to be away from the farm and all of his worries for a few hours, happier still to be spending that time with someone he loved. Emily looked around at the surrounding forest. The light of the campfire only went so far, and the darkness pressed in from all sides.

“Kind of spooky, actually…” Emily said, her voice a little quieter and fluttery like a bird.

There was a deep grumbling sound in the distance. Blake and Emily stood closer together and drank more cocoa. Emily took a deep breath and downed her beverage completely, setting her mug in the snow beside the fire. Her face flushed and she whispered:

“Heh… it’s chilly out here...”

There was a crunching sound in the snow.

Emily was a little closer. Blake felt his face get hot.

More crunching.

Closer still. Blake’s heart started to race.

Crunch, crunch, crunch.

Emily started to wrap her left arm around Blake’s right arm. Thinking quickly, he transferred his hot cocoa to his left hand and allowed Emily to continue.

Emily closed her eyes and put her head on Blake’s shoulder. He relaxed, holding onto Emily, trying to savor the moment as long as he could.

There was another crunching sound; but this time Emily had not moved. Blake and Emily opened their eyes and looked around to see what was making this new noise.

All Blake saw was a huge mass of fur and a big black nose. He and Emily both screamed and ran inside the tent, zipping the door shut behind them. As he fled, Blake dropped his mug into the fire. The campfire let out a loud hissing sound as it was doused. Then, Blake and Emily were in the tent together, huddled on top of the sleeping bag and holding onto one another for dear life. Outside, the pair could hear the sounds of the cookout kit being knocked over.

“A bear!” Emily gasped. “I hope he’s not hungry.”

Emily grabbed the corner of the sleeping bag and tried to pull it over herself, in much the same way a child hides under the bedcovers. She tugged and tugged for a moment before realizing Blake was sitting on top of it.

“Hold on…” Blake muttered, looking around.

After a moment, their eyes adjusted to the darkness. Emily and Blake could see again. They could also hear the sound of the bear moving away, deeper into the forest.

“Oh, the other sleeping bag is still outside.” Emily breathed. “No way am I going back out there!”

“Neither am I!” Blake replied. “I won’t leave you alone, not now.”

Blake and Emily held onto each other for a few minutes. Even though the campfire was extinguished and snow was falling on the tent, Blake noticed that Emily felt very warm. He did not want to let go of her. She looked up at him and said:

“Um… Blake? You don’t mind sharing a sleeping bag with me, do you?”



Blake and Emily stayed together most of the night, enjoying each other’s company as much as they could. But eventually, they both needed to go home. If they stayed out here, the tent would be buried in snow by sunrise. Of course, at 2 o’clock in the morning, both Blake and Emily were very tired and worn out, so certain details of the night were lost to them.

But there were two very important things Blake remembered:

First, when he extracted himself from the sleeping bag to find his sweater, he doubled back to Emily, kissed her and said: “I love you.”

Second, about an hour later, when Blake dropped Emily off at her own house in the dead of night, she had kissed him back and said: “I love you.”

By the time Blake returned to Solitaire Farm, it was three in the morning. He collapsed into his bed without so much as removing his boots. Blake knew, just before he passed out, that he would gladly suffer such intense exhaustion again if it meant another night like this one.
 
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Good to see this back. You keep layering on the complications. As if there weren't enough combustible compounds already in this mix, now the author's love interest (?!) arrives.

I like seeing the uncredited cameo of @Lord Durham and what he says too. Awaiting more....
 
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transforming into a swirling red vapor before reforming as a young girl
Aisling can transform into anything made of matter? Not just animals?
Emily’s very nature as a Creation did not match that of everyone else.
I'm assuming this is because Stardew Valley isn't made by Paradox.
“But it makes so much sense… Blake being my author.” Emily said.
Does Emily know she's from a video game too? Or is that too much at this point for her?
“It’s the males of my species who are beautiful. We hens are rather dull.”
I liked this detail. Very interesting.
“Is that what I think it is?” Cassandra said. “Is that a picture of a platypus fossil?”
For the longest time, I thought the black part of the logo was supposed to be the focus. It looks like some sort of ET hand. Eventually, I noticed the fossil and was surprised that it took me so long to notice.
 
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Well, that escalates it, if characters from beyond PDX titles can cross-over... Poor Emily, that's a bad way to learn your true fate.

It is definitely looking grim if the antagonist faction take the Paradox HQ. I mean, if they start tampering with the underlying games they are from...

Which raises an interesting question; how would mods to the games fit in with all this?
 
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As if there weren't enough combustible compounds already in this mix, now the author's love interest (?!) arrives.
Yeah, this is quite the complication. We've finally reached a topic I've wanted to confront since this story began. Blake Robinson (the character) is a fictionalized version of myself. That info's been out there for years.

I really wanted to explore the potential consequences of an author writing self-insert romance stories and then coming face-to-face with their preferred love interest IRL. It was just a matter of choosing which character would get to be the one that puts me/Blake through romantic hell. My fictional alter-ego had a total of four love interests across all of my stories:
  1. Chihiro Tachibana
    • The big one, most important of them all. Blake and Chihiro were often treated as a single character in the Stormbreaker Universe
  2. Tsubaki Endo
    • She just barely counts as an L.I. Tsubaki hero-worships Blake to an uncomfortable degree for saving her life once.
  3. Chelsea Daniels
    • Making her only appearance in My Father's War, briefly presented as an alternative to Chihiro but was never taken seriously.
  4. Emily
    • Most recent entry on this list. Was ultimately chosen for the Broken Gates role because she is the most vulnerable to exploitation should Blake chose to go down that route. (and the other Creations would notice this vulnerability quicker than in the aforementioned three.)

Aisling can transform into anything made of matter? Not just animals?
Aisling has never tested the capability of her transformations, so even she doesn't know the full extent of her abilities. The narration should be taken at face value here. Aisling was distracted to such a degree that she simply became formless. (Aisling does not have a "default form" that she reverts to when not shapeshifting)


I'm assuming this is because Stardew Valley isn't made by Paradox.
You're quite right. This will be brought up in a future chapter.


Does Emily know she's from a video game too?
Not yet. I couldn't hit her with every anvil at once.


I liked this detail. [Vanian gender dimorphism] Very interesting.
Thanks! It's a very old worldbuilding detail from The Stormbreakers. Vanian males (peacocks) are easily the most visually beautiful creatures in the Galaxy. Vanian females (peahens) would often have to compete with other species for access to their own kind. Doubly so after the Vanians lost their Homeworld and became a diaspora.

Kanti herself is an albino. (Berang in the Vanian language) Berang Vanians are universally desirable, and female Vanians afflicted with albinism are the only ones considered attractive.


Well, that escalates it, if characters from beyond PDX titles can cross-over... Poor Emily, that's a bad way to learn your true fate.
Yeah, Emily's appearance represents a dangerous escalation.


It is definitely looking grim if the antagonist faction take the Paradox HQ. I mean, if they start tampering with the underlying games they are from...

Which raises an interesting question; how would mods to the games fit in with all this?
The situation is starting to become dire. Team Malum is now able to draw a bead on PDX HQ, which is their next objective once Blake is dealt with and the new gate is constructed.

One of Blake's many conquests is going to prepare him to be an Ottoman harem guard.
XD I can only laugh so much, dude!
 
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Well, that's a complication. I'm vaguely surprised that you didn't go with Chihiro, but that's probably just my Stormbreakers nostalgia showing...

Speaking of which, is it ever going to be mentioned that Akira is Chihiro and Blake's daughter - and, therefore, technically, Macavity's daughter? That reveal could be fun...

If Paradox Interactive's HQ falls, the fans will simply have to launch their own counterattack...
 
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The original story was cute, but having the character meet the author is definitely less than ideal.
 
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Poor Emily. I hope she finds a way to let go of Blake, because nothing good can come from a Creator-Creation relationship (as Midnite Duke rightly stated). ;)

Makes me think... Will the characters be able to develop their personality while they're outside their respective stories? In other words, do they adapt to their surroundings, and change, autonomously from their Creator?

Speaking of which, is it ever going to be mentioned that Akira is Chihiro and Blake's daughter - and, therefore, technically, Macavity's daughter? That reveal could be fun...
That would also reveal the fact that Cassandra is Blake's  granddaughter. :eek: Just like Varian! This is beginning to look like a huge family affair... @Macavity116 If you need a family tree, you know who to call!
 
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Makes me think... Will the characters be able to develop their personality while they're outside their respective stories? In other words, do they adapt to their surroundings, and change, autonomously from their Creator?
This is a very wise question from the Wise One.
 
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I'm vaguely surprised that you didn't go with Chihiro, but that's probably just my Stormbreakers nostalgia showing...
You've no idea how strong the temptation was. I had quite a few ideas for how Chihiro could be used in this story, including a straight-up confrontation between herself and Marisol over the (fanfic) sex scene Marisol wrote between Chihiro and Blake.

The aforementioned explicit fanfic written by Chosenpai/Marisol remains an Ao3 exclusive, but I am confident that I can safely bring it to the PDX forums when the time is right, as the text is already on the same level as its counterparts in stories like Born to Breed and Life 2.0.


Speaking of which, is it ever going to be mentioned that Akira is Chihiro and Blake's daughter - and, therefore, technically, Macavity's daughter?
That reveal is proving extremely difficult to write. The big issue is that Marisol, Blake, and Cali already know this information. They cannot be dramatically surprised by this. And I can't think of a solid reason for Malum to withhold this information from Akira, as she is already turned against the author.

I think the only characters who can be hit by this reveal are Aisling and Emily. And Emily is already being primed to be the catalyst for Team Marisol's third act implosion.


[Winter Star] was cute, but having the character meet the author is definitely less than ideal.
Agreed. Emily being here is simply bad for all involved.


Makes me think... Will the characters be able to develop their personality while they're outside their respective stories? In other words, do they adapt to their surroundings, and change, autonomously from their Creator?
Now that all Creations have been introduced, I do intend to explore this idea. Aisling gets priority, though, owing to her being Deuteragonist.


This is beginning to look like a huge family affair...
Not the intention, but I am reaping the consequences of interconnecting so many protagonists in the same family tree when I was first starting out. :)


@Macavity116 If you need a family tree, you know who to call!
Yes, yes I do! :D


In CK terms, Mac has more consorts than an AI with seduction focus.
Maybe we should let Malum win.
 
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Well...

Writing self-insert romantic fiction is less bad than keeping a harem of mind-controlled sex slaves, so letting Malum win is excessive. Its no surprise he has Olinbari ancestry when you think about that, which leads into Life2.0.

Granting my bias wants to defend Life2.0, but, the only story piece that deliberately crosses the line on sexual content in Life2.0 is under a spoiler tag, and it deals with a consensual marital encounter that goes a little into BD and definitely not SM. Granted a few prod the line, but considering just how dark you could get with writing erotic fiction in Life2.0's setting...

Born To Breed is fair game for a pushing the limit extrapolation, as let's be honest, the subject matter is impregnating through rape the women of Europe, which is debatably darker than Life2.0's Companionship Assets, but not as dark as what you could do in Stellaris. (Rogue Servitors and genemodded bonus Amenities pops working Clerk jobs need only the slightest imagination for some of what could go on)

Moving on, it would be interesting to see the characters go off the rails. I know you have a much more thorough writing process than what Life2.0 had - I get a first draft done and then post it, otherwise I end up never posting anything, which does have some downsides in quality control and forward planning - but there's a lot of really interesting things that happen with your characters that you only find out about by chucking a situation at them and seeing how they respond.
 
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Episode Thirteen: He’s your Creator, not your lover.
Hello dear readers! We have reached a turning point in the story. We're leaving Michigan behind and moving on to Sweden! This means the story is entering it's midpoint. The next two or three chapters are going to be quite fun. We're going to learn some of Marisol's backstory, start developing her friendship with Aisling, and find out what happened to Kailani Kalili after she vanished in that big fight in Downtown Detroit.




The Broken Gates
Episode Thirteen: He’s your Creator, not your lover.


Marisol
Creator
Detroit, Michigan



It was time to move.

While the Creations were stockpiling food and supplies in the bAAR for the upcoming journey, Cali pulled Marisol and Blake aside. Two members of the Countermeasures Committee were standing with her just outside of the bAAR: Herten Forsman and the Crusader Kings developer named Bella.

“We’re arranging alternate transport to get everyone to Sweden.” Cali said. “Marisol, we’ve got people raiding your hotel room now to collect your passport. Blake, we’re sending your father back to Shiawassee to get yours.”

“I told you, I can’t go to Sweden.” Marisol repeated. “My job, my family!”

“Yes… Cali told us about those concerns.” Herten replied. “But this is an emergency, unlike anything we’ve seen before. I understand your fear. Losing your job and letting down your family are terrible crosses to bear… but you must understand that you have a part in all of this… a responsibility.”

“You said it yourself.” Cali added. “You put so much work into Aisling that she’s just as much your Creation as she is Blake’s. You’re involved, like it or not, and you can’t just go home. Not yet anyway.”

Feeling backed into a corner, Marisol leaned against a wrought-iron fence, casting her gaze up to the art deco facade of the nearby Guardian Building. Two armored cars pulled up in front of the bAAR, where Blake Robinson’s father was bundled into one and quickly driven away.

A short ways off, Marisol could hear Blake making the same argument to Cali. Of course, she was not interested in letting him off the hook at all.

A tiny scratching sensation at Marisol’s feet caught her attention. A small housecat was clawing her ankles.

“Aisling, were you eavesdropping?” Marisol whispered.

The cat quickly changed into a girl.

“I’m sorry.” Aisling replied in a soft mumble. “I heard Cali say that thing before, and I’ve been meaning to ask about it.”

“What thing?” Marisol asked.

“About how you’re also my Creator… but it doesn’t make sense.” Aisling replied.

“Oh… well I can explain that.” Marisol replied. “You see, Blake is the author, he writes the story. I’m the beta reader. I am the very first person who gets to read it… which means it’s my job to check for mistakes, to recommend edits or changes. When we were starting out on Last Days of the Emerald Isle, I saw a lot of things about you that… well, if they were changed, your story would be better. So I told Blake and he made those changes.”

Marisol could see goosebumps rising on Aisling’s arms.

“So… if you didn’t make the author change me, I wouldn’t be me?” Aisling asked, her red eyes going very wide.

“Um… Yes, I suppose.” Marisol replied.

Suddenly, Marisol felt the breath being squeezed out of her. Aisling was hugging her very tightly.

“So that means Blake is my father, and you’re my mother?” Aisling said.

Marisol blushed so hard she felt as though she was caught in a cloud of steam.

“Wait… hold on.” Marisol stammered. “No… that’s not what I meant at all…”

In that moment, Marisol realized that Aisling hugging her and declaring Marisol to be her “mother” was exactly the sort of painfully cute behavior that Marisol would have written, not Blake.

Oh, God. This one’s my fault. Marisol thought to herself.

Marisol had no idea how to tactfully reject Aisling’s surprising conclusion. A long time ago, she had chosen to embrace the natural protective instincts that came along with the status of “Eldest Sibling,” and Aisling had somehow found a way to activate said instincts.

“You hug the same way my sister does.” Marisol mumbled as she put her arms around Aisling. “If you and Mariposa ever got together, you’d probably crush me.”

Reluctantly, Marisol started to accept Aisling as her own Creation… and the responsibility it implied.



About ten minutes later, Marisol barged into Cali’s conversation with Blake, Herten, and Bella. They were discussing how to get the Creations to Stockholm after they were unceremoniously banned from the SolAARium passageway.

“Obviously, we need to get a plane.” Herten was saying. “I can have PDX charter a jet and get it here by tomorrow afternoon.”

“Detroit Metro is the closest airport we can fly out of.” Blake said. “But we’ll have to get through both the TSA and US Border Patrol just to reach the private jet.”

“Like, those guys are totally gonna ask a shit-ton of questions when they see the talking lion.” Bella pointed out.

“Right.” Herten said. “Then what can we do?”

Marisol raised her voice and interrupted:

“We’ve gotta start breaking rules.”

The group turned to look at her. Marisol pressed on.

“Like you said, Paradox guy.” Marisol had forgotten Herten’s name. “This is an emergency beyond anything else. I… I know a couple of people who might be able to help us…but we won’t be able to reach them unless we break some rules. All of the Gifted Creations, the ones with telepathic powers, will have to get us through the airport. Blake, I’ve read your stories. Sebakhira, Trig, Kanti have all sorts of powers that would let us get through.”

“Yeah, that’s true.” Blake said.

Marisol pressed her thumb into her own chest.

“I’m a flight stewardess for a major international airline. I can get us onto a plane through the crew terminal! Every airport has one. They make it easier for flight crews and pilots to check their bags and get onto the plane.”

Cali’s eyes had gone wide. She was already reaching for her smartphone and calling a member of her SWAT team.

“Do you know someone at Asiana who can help us?”

“Yup.” Marisol said. “I know one of the managers around here, and a pilot.”

Cali was speaking into her phone, telling her team to take all of Marisol’s belongings from her hotel room and not just her passport.

“Find any and all documentation related to the airline she works at.” Cali said. “Asiana Airlines.”

She also ordered them to do reconnaissance on the crew terminal at Detroit Metro Airport.

“You know a pilot?” Blake remarked with a low whistle. “Impressive.”

“Not really.” Marisol replied with a shrug. “I’m aircrew. I’ve met literally hundreds of pilots, dude. Besides, it’s the fact that I know both the regional manager and a pilot that’s important.”

“Oh.” Blake sounded as though he was deflating.

“You weren’t kidding, D’Kara.” Herten laughed. “Robinson really does live in the middle of nowhere.”



Marisol
Creator
Detroit Metropolitan Airport, Michigan



After a long series of phone calls, the plan was arranged:

Blake, Marisol, all of the Creations, Cali, six members of the SWAT team, Herten, and Bella would travel to Detroit Metro and board the plane waiting there. The rest of the Countermeasures Committee and the rest of the SWAT Team would use the magical/sci-fi tunnel between the bAAR and SolAARium to return to Sweden.

Since the whole operation was Marisol’s idea, Cali named their little expedition “Team Marisol.” Marisol hated this.

“Too bad.” Cali replied in a joking tone. “You picked up the ball of responsibility. Now you have to run with it.”

The Creations emerged from the bAAR, laden with backpacks, and piled into a convoy of armored cars. Just as Blake, Marisol, Aisling, and Emily clambered into the final vehicle it started to rain. A downpour drenched the convoy as it drove away from the bAAR for the final time.

“That doesn’t feel like ordinary rain.” Blake said.

He rolled down the window and held his hand out while the busy cityscape of Detroit whirled past. Sebakhira and Aisling both sniffed the air.

“I don’t sense any Psionics.” Sebakhira said.

“I sense magic.” Aisling said. “The Water Witch is nearby.”

“Uisce.” Blake said. “That underdeveloped protag who dropped the river on us.”

“Is she trying to slow us down?” Marisol asked.

“Doesn’t feel that way.” Aisling remarked. “More like… like she’s sending a signal.”

“Damnit.” Blake said. “I’ll bet she’s telling the rest of her teammates where we went. Cali! Call the rest of your guys and tell them to be on guard for an ambush!”



But there was no ambush. The convoy reached Detroit Metro with time to spare. Marisol felt a tingle in her bones. As previously discussed, Kanti, Sebakhira, and Trig were all employing their Psionic powers as soon as the cars came to a stop.

“Everyone out and move quickly.” Trig ordered.

He focused his words at Emily, who was lagging behind. She was trying to slowly soak in the Psionic energy permeating her body.

“That means we’ve gotta hurry!” Blake barked. He grabbed Emily by the hand and pulled her along.

Marisol was amazed. Even though it was almost five o’clock in the morning, the international airport was abuzz with thousands of people. The trio of telepaths sent a wave of their power through the crowds. The onlookers were left in a stupefied daze, unthinking, unfeeling.

“That won’t last long, move!” Kanti ordered.

The albino peahen spread her wings and took flight, sailing through the air and alighting on a second-floor balcony.

“This way!”

Team Marisol pushed through the stupefied crowd, following Kanti’s earsplitting birdcalls. Sebakhira got down on all four paws and ran alongside Marisol.

“We must find this crew terminal!” She said.

“Look for the security checkpoint.” Marisol panted. “The entrance will be nearby!”

“TSA!” Blake called out. “Find the letters TSA!”

“There!” Varian cried out.

At least one security guard at the checkpoint had noticed the incoming disturbance and was reaching for his radio in the moment he was stupefied. Kanti soared above the checkpoint, bumping her head on the ceiling. She sent several waves of Psionic energy into the checkpoint, rendering travelers and staff alike too dumb to do anything other than stand still.

Marisol grabbed Blake by the hand.

“Follow me!”

As Team Marisol entered the crew terminal, a noise from above began to grow louder.

“Is that the rainstorm outside?” Mina asked.

“Don’t hit the guy in the Asiana office!” Marisol called out. “He’s our man!”

A middle-aged Korean man let out a scream of terror as a lion, a peahen, several Humanoid aliens, and a gathering of assorted people ran toward him at high speed.

“Reyes, is that you!?” He gasped. “You and your… uh… plus ones?”

“Yeah, it’s me!” Marisol panted; reaching into the backpack Cali’s team had retrieved from the hotel in Flint.

Marisol slammed her Asiana ID onto the desk and said:

“Put us on the Repo Flight with Captain Yoshido! Please! I told you it’s an emergency.”

“And so did your friend over the phone.” The manager replied, scanning Marisol’s ID at the computer before handing it back. “Gate 15, and please be safe. That storm out there is getting worse, and I think they might shut down the airport soon.”

Team Marisol ran the length of the crew terminal, and looking out the windows, they saw the manager was right. What started as a rainsquall was quickly turning into a major thunderstorm.

“Okay, now the Water Witch is trying to stop us!” Blake yelled. “Everyone haul ass!”

The team made the final sprint where a perplexed-looking Asiana employee waved them to an exit. Trig stopped just long enough to stupefy them before rejoining the group.

Team Marisol passed through a boarding tunnel and found themselves on an Airbus A-330 passenger jet. Two pilots and an engineer were standing in the forward galley to greet them. The lack of surprise on their faces suggested Marisol had warned them about who was coming aboard. Turning left and into the main fuselage, Team Marisol quickly discovered the airplane was devoid of passengers. There was no one aboard save for the crew.

“This is a repositioning flight.” Marisol explained. “Corporate is having the plane moved somewhere else for future use. Now everyone sit down!”

One of the pilots (Identified as Captain Yoshido by Marisol) leaned in toward Marisol and said:

“This is going to be one helluva story, isn’t it?”

“You’ve no idea.” Marisol replied.

The storm outside intensified. The sound of rain hitting the airframe was now a dull roar.

It was at this moment that something rather strange happened. Marisol was a passenger on this flight by every possible metric. However, attempting to board the plane in a hurry had caused her brain to autonomously click back into “work mode.” She pulled the intercom phone off the wall, and as the plane started to move back from the terminal, she instinctively said:

“Pilot, cabin crew. Starting safety brief.”

Perhaps because the situation was tense (and very confusing) the pilot also responded autonomously, without really thinking things over.

“Understood. ATC says we’re second in line.”

And then Marisol rounded on the rest of her team, who were looking at her as though she was a different person.

“We’re on the clock today, so you’re getting the short version. My name is Marisol Reyes and I’ll be your cabin crew today. Welcome aboard Asiana Airlines. Please pay attention and obey all crew member instructions. If the seatbelt sign is on, buckle up low and below your hips. The oxygen masks are above you and will drop of there’s a cabin pressure emergency. If that happens, stop screaming, pull down on the mask, place over your nose and mouth, and adjust the elastic on both sides until it fits. Secure your own mask before helping the lion or peacock next to you. The bag might not inflate, but the air is flowing, trust me. Just breathe normally.”

Sebakhira blinked, having taken up three seats lying on her side.

“Life jackets are under your seat. Pull the red tag to inflate but don’t do it until you’re off the plane. No smoking ever! It’s dangerous. If there’s an emergency, brace yourself on the seat in front of you, keep your feet flat on the floor. Emergency lighting on the floors show where the exits are. Look around now, the closest exit might be behind you. Please secure all of your belongings below your seats now, put the tray tables up, and we will take off momentarily.”

Blake’s jaw had fallen open.

“Honestly, I thought you used cue cards or a teleprompter or something. You really had that all that memorized?” He said.

“Yeah.” Marisol replied nonchalantly before clambering into the jump seat reserved for flight attendants and buckling her seat belt.

The captain’s voice came over the intercom.

“Welcome aboard this highly unusual and… ahem… very lucrative collaboration between Asiana Airlines and Paradox Interactive. At this time, we are number one in line for takeoff, but we will be flying into some heavy rainstorms, so please keep those seatbelts fastened until the light is turned off. Thank you.”

The plane’s engines began to spool up, roaring until they drowned out the noise of the rain outside.

“Here we go.” Blake said. “Ah - whoa! Hey! What are you doing!?”

Emily had gotten into the seat next to Blake and was holding onto him with a tight vice grip.

“I’ve never flown before.” Emily whimpered. “I’m scared. Please hold me!”

“Oh, for the love of Sajuuk, pull yourself together!” Kanti snapped. “He’s your Creator, not your lover.”

Meanwhile, Aisling was looking out of the right-hand window, enraptured by the view of the runway.

“We’re moving so fast.” The fairy gasped.

Aisling suddenly felt the force of gravity pushing her backwards into her seat. Alarmed, she looked around at Marisol.

“You haven’t seen anything yet, first-time flier.” Marisol said. “Hang on, it’s vee-one!”

The Airbus lifted off, slipping away from Detroit and vanishing into the stormy night.

Down on the ground, Uisce the Water Witch reluctantly gave up the pursuit, instead choosing to return to the hideout. She wanted to know why none of Malum’s allies had answered her call for help.



 
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I understand your fear. Losing your job and letting down your family are terrible crosses to bear… but you must understand that you have a part in all of this… a responsibility.”
Surely Paradox can compensate Marisol and Blake for saving the world and potentially losing their jobs in some way? Or is this like an X Files situation where the Countermeasures Committee barely has any funding and is kind of broke?
“So that means Blake is my father, and you’re my mother?” Aisling said.
:D So cute!
Oh, God. This one’s my fault. Marisol thought to herself.
Both Marisol and Blake are going to learn valuable lessons about character creation since they're now having to deal with those choices.
Reluctantly, Marisol started to accept Aisling as her own Creation… and the responsibility it implied
I sense some foreshadowing here. We'll see how this relationship develops.
“I’ve never flown before.” Emily whimpered. “I’m scared. Please hold me!”
:rolleyes:

When Aisling hugs Marisol it's cute. When Emily does it to Blake, less so...

I hope Emily can learn to be her own person come the end of this story.
She wanted to know why none of Malum’s allies had answered her call for help.
I want to know too. Very intriguing...
 
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Nice tense chapter... all along you had me expecting the witch would find a way to stop the plane.

I want to know too. Very intriguing...
Yes, this is definitely a @Macavity116 -style cliffhanger ending. Is Team Malum splintering already under the weight of the combined egos?

Surely Paradox can compensate Marisol and Blake for saving the world and potentially losing their jobs in some way? Or is this like an X Files situation where the Countermeasures Committee barely has any funding and is kind of broke?
Now, that would be an interesting twist.

The captain said something about a "lucrative" collaboration. I sense foreshadowing there too. Just how lucrative? (And is Mac/Blake already leave bread crumbs for his inevitable sequel?)
 
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No smoking ever! It’s dangerous.

I hear that if you smoke on a flight Admiral Cloudberg manifests and starts explaining the air disasters caused by smoking on flights.

“Honestly, I thought you used cue cards or a teleprompter or something. You really had that all that memorized?” He said.

“Yeah.” Marisol replied nonchalantly before clambering into the jump seat reserved for flight attendants and buckling her seat belt.

There was a span where my partner was considering become a flight attendant. Have you ever seen videos of the training they go through? It's intense!

And always remember that they're important members of the flight crew. There's a ton they're doing to keep everything safe.

Down on the ground, Uisce the Water Witch reluctantly gave up the pursuit, instead choosing to return to the hideout. She wanted to know why none of Malum’s allies had answered her call for help.

That's worrisome. Presumably they still want to capture instead of kill (else surely she could have crashed the aircraft), but their lack of presence here must mean they're up to something.
 
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Oh, hey! Marisol's job comes up in a plot relevant way. Mentioning that she was a flight attendant was some nice foreshadowing that I don't think anyone picked up on.

I loved Aisling's reaction to Marisol's news. I hope that they get more bonding moments in the future.

How much is Paradox paying Asiana?

Also, what's the plan once they get to Sweden? Are they just hoping that the devs of Stellaris and CK3 can fix the problem?
 
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