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Finally caught up again as chapter 7 ends. One can always hope that in an alternate past, things turn out better than they did in our reality. But there’s the horrible feeling that rather than a careful and gentle cupping in his hands of the power given, Richard will now grasp too tightly when buffeted by events and his opponents. To see the power forced out between his fingers. A sword rather than reins in his hand. And the blood of thousands seeping into the soil of England.
I obviously cannot say too much, but will suggest that Richard's ascendance will not be as easy as perhaps he thinks.
York has won this round. Margaret has proven too foolish.
I wonder if Somerset believes that his influence may be won back through violence?
Sneak peak - Somerset won't have much chance immediately to do too much. But you are correct to suggest this is but another round.
And all caught up. I did enjoy the interlude from Father Petronius Falkenburg, despite the grizzly subject matter it still lightened the mood and I for one would not object to his return if the muse strikes you and a suitable scene presents itself.
So to the last chapter and I must say it was one of your best. The exchange between Richard and Henry was an emotional one, given how little Henry could do you managed to make him 'say' volumes which is no small feat. If he were to act as Protector and Defender in the spirit he showed in that room then few could reasonably complain, yet of all the words that could describe Margaret and Somerset few would choose 'reasonable' so I feel sure that whatever York does they will find fault in and use that to rally support, because to act and decide is to make enemies. Yet York has to act as there are simmering feuds and problems that cannot be left unattended, well I suppose they could but leaving things to fester is never a good long term plan and York has got into this position just to do nothing and sit in a holding pattern until Henry recovers (if he does). Heavy is the head that wears an item that isn't the crown, but perhaps is even less comfortable. (May need to work on the wording of that.
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I'm really happy this scene with Henry in his state worked as it did. It is not easy to write for a silent character.
And indeed, no matter what Richard does now, it will be seen as provocative (to say the least) by those wishing to see in him something malevolent. And you are right - being something less than a King will prove troublesome to Richard. You have the role but not the full power. Heavy indeed.
Still over a month behind. So much of the problems, could have been avoided, if only the English, like the Picts of old, practiced matrilineal succession. The king's issue would not matter whether legal or bastard, but rather his mother and his sisters would determine the next king.
The mid 15th century English monarchy is at weakest point, since before the Norman invasion and possibly early Viking age. The French situation is akin to trying to save outbuildings, while allowing the main house (England) to fall into disrepair. My view is that Henry VI while learned and pious was not trained to be king and his education did not give him the subtleties of diplomacy, war-making and financial management. (The lords wanted a weak king that needed their input and could be controlled.)
The nobles choosing Margaret of Anjou was astoundingly horrible, not for anything to do with Margaret, but rather she brought no positives. Choosing an English noble would have made one faction extremely loyal. Surely the Nevilles, the Percies, or even the vipers Richard and Cecily had a spare maiden. Instead of a third-rate French girl, maybe Denmark, Burgundy, an Iberian country or even Austria would furnish a queen with a strong alliance and not a two year peace treaty. The Hapsburgs usually have one or two (often a hundred) frauleins awaiting alliances. (In my current CK2 game, I came across a man with six ducal titles, whose realm was but one county. This is Rene of Anjou without the county.)
Thank you
@coz1 for giving us a beyond the curtains look at Henry VI and the viperish English lords.
Indeed the choice of Margaret to start seems odd in retrospect. However, I believe it was intended to keep in the "France business" as it were. That Margaret was related to the King of France seemed like a coup to the likes of Suffolk and the Cardinal. It allowed them to keep close to French politics. Had they picked a high noble woman inside of England, that might have been seen as isolating themselves from the Continent even if it might have been better all things considered.
Role-play CK. Become Zorastrian.
Ha!
I have but a small question of Duchess Cecily, who per chance is the father of Edward. For even his brother has learned of the gossip.
I wouldn't ask her that question. Besides, in this work we know when Edward was conceived if you recall some of the first posts.
Why waste good wine on an innocent animal? A goblet to Somerset, a flagon to York, and a sniffer for Margaret.
Now Father Falkenberg may have to come visit you.
Margaret reminds me Bobbie Gentry's 1967 song 'Fancy'. If only we could get Rene Anjou to go in drag as the mother.
Now
that would be hilarious.
Caught Up! Like WW2, WotR was inevitable. There was too many pretenders that needed to be thinned. Henry and the Archbishop of Canterbury should have traded jobs as Henry was too good a man to be king in this scorpion's nest. If Richard and his sons represent the last Plantagenets, the passing should not be mourned overly long. For foisting Margaret on Henry, Suffolk received his just desserts. I hope that you feel better soon.
I go with mental trauma over stroke. Henry had retreated inward, while most stroke victims that I have met are fighting to make their desires understood.
Great to hear! And thank you for taking the time to catch up. As for Henry's state, that makes some sense. I do have him trying to communicate as best he can but you make a good point. If nothing else, I entirely agree that Henry was just not made to be King. That just wasn't his nature. His piety was renowned, but his ruling capacity was just not there. Add to that his scheming council AND York's ambition, a dash of Margaret's hubris and there you have it - a fully cooked civil war.
To all - As you might have noticed, I have hit a little pause in the update schedule. I have mentioned it elsewhere, but I have a little case of writer's block. I have about half of chapter 8 written already but I'm stuck on a scene and until I can figure that out, I hesitate to post what I have in the can. Thus, I am going to wait until I have finished the chapter before releasing it. I hope it won't take too long because I have some plot points already figured for the future, but I need to get past this roadblock before we get there.
Hopefully that allows some others to jump in and read what I have already. And I believe most have noticed that I have started a second work in CK2 with Aquitaine (link below in my sig) which takes a decidedly different style. For those that are looking for my work to read, you can go there. It is being posted at a slower rate so we are really just getting started in that one.
As always, thank you so very much for reading along and giving comment. I appreciate each and every one of you! Thank you for your patience and hopefully we can get back to the scheming, ruling or lack thereof and all the rest that encompass the WOTR.
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