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Burgundy and England would do well to stay friendly and competent. There is a lot they can agree on.
A few hints here and there also that England, if it can get itself sorted, is quite the powerful nation in Christendom despite its relative size and standing. This will only increase when they take Scotland and the rest of the islands as their own. If they stay within Latin Christendom, they will be a force to be reckoned with.
Burgundy and England are natural allies, of course. Though this is a different Europe from OTL. Still, Warwick was successful in this foray and England even gained.
Who would care enough to excommunicate Rene? Is Margaret his heir? Well played, Warwick, well played. Thank you for updating
Heir to what?
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I suppose he has Maine now. I don't mind saying that his gaining such was a bit of a shock. I had to figure how best to explain it and this seemed natural enough.
Regardless of the reason - and it's usually the Pope, who has a claim or a core on Aix - I found Rene's interjections, and the reaction to them, to be a very humorous aside in this chapter.
I'm pleased you liked those as I found them humorous as well. I had to include Rene because he gained from it, but thought there needed to be some lack of seriousness from him because he is excommunicated (and not happy about it, obviously.)
First York to the Percies, then Warwick off to France. Lots of moves being made towards peace, but no doubt peace abroad (and, of a kind, in the north) simply wipes the slate clean for the fresh outbreak of hostilities back home. I’m still with Butterfly in envisaging a less bad dispute than OTL, but obviously that’s a relative thing. England has a lot to gain if it can keep itself well behaved, though. Godspeed York, indeed…
I wanted these early scenes of the chapter to show York's competence. So far, so good. And as we well know...things can change swiftly.
To all - So here we are almost to the midpoint of the chapter. The above was a fun scene to write because it includes quite a lot of game info as well as colorful characters (it's always fun to write for Count Charles.) Also, it allows me to show not just York's competence but so too that of Warwick. The gaining of the Contentin Peninsula was nothing of my doing. Yet when Mantua finally made peace with France, boom...there it was back in our hands. Yet France is broken and that may well be my doing and fault, though I did not intend it. I seriously thought they could handle it. I did not suspect they would be gang raped. However, it really matters little for England (other than giving some breathing room, I suppose) because things don't get better any time soon as far as the internal situation.
Also, I hope
@Bullfilter appreciates the game map.
I should also mention a word on the Cardinal - he is based on the historical Nicholas V who put together the Treaty of Lodi. I based the scene on that, but there is a different Pope in game so I decided to use him this way instead.
Finally, I should mention that I am almost done with Chapter 8! One more scene to go in the writing! The block is seemingly and finally gone!
I am certain that my writing in the CKII Aquitaine AAR has assisted (and moving along apace) but so too those of you that continue to follow both works. I write almost as much for you as I do for myself, so to see you stick with me whether serious or silly is so very helpful! Thank you!
I aim to post the next scene tomorrow for this and it will get us to the half way point of the chapter. And I hope to finish the writing of the chapter tomorrow as well and then it's on to...I'm really excited for the next chapter. It's a big one!
Thanks again for reading and giving comment. It keeps me going!
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