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The fate of Salisbury's sons is disturbing, indeed.
While it may seem like I'm "gilding the lily" as it were to provide even more trauma from the battle, this is exactly what happened. I cannot say what happens to them, but it certainly puts a "Pyrrhic" level to it. Also Stanley's brothers in law. I would not want to have that conversation with his sisters.
I wonder if that "I know not the English word" comment will hurt Margaret.
I wonder what York himself thinks of all this. He has been put at odds by the actions of another when he probably wanted to wait until Henry died, which would leave Margaret his only true enemy...
I doubt Margaret's comment will matter. It was more an attempt to suggest she still might have a language barrier when it comes to these types of things.
As for York, he's already fully in. At least for standing for his right to counsel the King. He's already fought one battle so another doesn't really change
that. Yet...what happens next?
"Oh no! The Queen assassinated the King to put her child puppet on the throne!"
"But I'm not d-"
*thump*
"State funeral. Lots of public mourning. He was a good man once. I wish he had been a better king."
I think York likes your play better than his own reality.
To all - In researching this battle, there really is no good reason why Salisbury won other than the circumstance (which, of course, matters in all battles.) Salisbury was an "old soldier" in a sense so he was good at that one assumes. Audley was forced to fight (by the Queen.) He had little other choice. (Actually, neither of them had much choice.) And the cannon fire (such that it was) really was a smart reaction at the end. I really enjoyed writing this scene even if it wasn't a down to the soldier level of how the battle went. Again...I do not think battle scenes are my strong suit so I tend to write around it. I hope it works.
I'm planning on starting the next chapter (which picks up right where we left off) tomorrow but I can wait a day or so if others want to catch up. Seems like some of my readers are getting pretty busy right now and I hate to lose anyone. Your comments matter and I would love to see them in real time rather than some catching up and don't want to go back to each post. That said, it may be better for some in reading to read several scenes at a time for the flow. To each his own. I've had to rather curtail my writing of late because of personal events but I still have plenty in the can at least until chapter 16. Obviously I wish the highest readership as possible so let me know what works. I thought a 3 day period between posts (rather than 2) did so but then the comments slowed down so...hmm.
At any rate, I thank each and every reader and appreciate each and every comment. Thank you!