I think my last posts from the original thread are still valid as the suggestions I made haven't got incorporated yet (and don’t seem to be refused) but I want to just comment on the recent changes as well.
Religions:
I disagree with the religious groupings you created in Nigeria - in particular, that of Isese. Isese is an organized religion that was born from the Yoruba. It has a scripture, a thorough theological-philosophical content that has strong opinions on society, individual conduct and personal self-realization and has generally been a very organized religion. It is a religion that held a certain appeal beyond the Yoruba, crossing over into the Ewe-Ajan-Fon people to influence and help shape Vodun, and in the Edo people. And it (and the influenced Vodun) spread through the slave trade, becoming a world religion which has crossed national and racial lines and become the most popular religion from Africa in the world, having millions of adherents across various countries.
Unfortunately, currently, Isese is treated as a ‘catch-all term’ for vaguely related traditional religions rather than the distinct religion it is. And it incorporates under its umbrella religious traditions that have nothing to do with its theology or only vaguely resemble it. I would suggest changing this.
Isese does share a lot with the neighbouring religions- belief in intercession spirits, ancestor cults, masquerades of the dead, divinations and even names of deities. But it shares this even with religions that were given separate religious groups like the Igbo and the Ijaw. It’d be ridiculous to have a single religion encompassing everything in Nigeria. More importantly,
Isese is already a term for a defined religion, not a generic term for traditions.
Isese should encompass Yoruba culture, and possibly could cross over into Edo and the Vodun religion (though I personally like the idea of Vodun being separate but making Vodun part of it at least makes sense). It should not be present in any other ethnic group.
- The Nupe should not be Isese as they have an entirely different religious tradition. The Nupe not only did not subscribe to the political extension of Isese, their religion was primarily focused on a God known as Soko that, while distant, was directly responsible for all phenomena and occurrences in the world and not as untouchable as the creator gods in neighbouring religions. Soko could manifest all things and Nupe directly addressed Soko rather than necessarily use intermediary deities.
- I would argue Nupe should have their own religion, called either ‘Nupe’ or named after the chief god ‘Soko’.
- The Bariba should not be Iseseas they had very different practices and customs. There was overlap in aspects of Bariba and Yoruba religion - like most Nigerian religions. However, Bariba differed in their practices, and did not share the conclusions of Ife theology or its rituals and scriptures. The Bariba share just as much with the Mossi, and they have a strong interchange in regards to ancestor worship and respect familial rites with the Mossi.
- I would argue for the Bariba either having their own religion or as a compromise having the Mossi religion. The way the Mossi religion is depicted - through their ancestral rites (the way of the ancestors, the religion is called) is a more abstract and fitting way to reference Bariba religion, rather erroneously apply Isese onto them.
- The Igala religion, despite superficially similar, was quite differentfrom the Isese. The cult of ẹbọ in Igala, which in a rudimentary way resembles the cult of orisha among the Yoruba, occupies a much more marginal place in Igala religion than the orisha cults do in the Yoruba system of belief. Ancestors and the earth cults play a more direct and central role in Igala than in Yoruba, with a strong practice of ancestor worship that isn’t really prevalent among the Yoruba.
- In this, the Igala are much more similar to the Idoma, who also had a very strong ancestor cult. There is an argument perhaps that there is a stronger case to make the Idoma and Igala share a separate religion than the current setup.
Locations:
A lot of locations still feel like they are in the wrong place and with labels that shouldn’t be there. I feel like Warri, for example, should be slightly to the north where it is based now. I could be completely wrong on this account, however.
Cultures:
- Map is missing the Itsekiri people near the Delta. They were the founders of the Warri Kingdom and even prior to the kingdom, had already a polity known as Ode-Itsekiri. Please do not group them in with the Yoruba, they speak distantly related language to them but are not Yoruba.
- The Ebira/Egbira people should be represented separately from the Nupe. They had a different culture and history, and a different state (Opanda). The language they speak is more distant to Nupe than the Gbayi/Gwari language of the Gbari people.
- The Benue and Bantoid languages are organized on the map in a way that seems to correspond to the 20th-21st century because of the Tiv migration. The Tiv had not yet migrated in 1337 meaning there should be a different setup, see below.
- A united Benue culture does not make sense due to the different cultures, unintelligible languages but most importantly, the different political history of the Benue. Split the “Benue” languages into:
- Jukun, encompassing all Jukunoid speakers. Jukun should extend further in some directions than Benue currently does, see my incomplete proposal in the other thread.
- Plateau/Atyap (can be named either Atyap, Berom or Tarok).
- Kainji (can be named Kambari after the most relevant Kainji group), which should be located to the west of where nowadays Lake Kainji is (Lake Kainji did not exist back then as you probably know), as a majority but also have minorities spread (see my post).
- Bantoid should be split anyway you like but the Ibibio/Cross River culture needs to be represented separately. The Ejagham/Ekoid culture should ideally also be represented separately. These two have a whole history and political expression that differentiates them from a lot of other cultures to their east.
- Bantoid should not extend northwest like it does- I assume you are trying to represent the Tiv here, but as mentioned, the Tiv had not yet migrated into that area in 1337.
Markets
I mentioned earlier that Benin should not be a market. Ife should be a market.
Trade Goods
I mentioned in the last thread but reiterating in light of the discussion regarding peppers. I would advocate for:
- Peppers being peppers rather than saffron and being small enough in quantity to avoid competing with the Indian supply.
- Medicaments being used to represent kola nuts.
- Representing both palm oil and Raffia fiber with Fiber Crops and then having a unique PM that transforms Fiber Crops into Wine to simultaneously represent both Palm Wine and Raffia Wine. The alternative is to represent palm oil with Medicaments and then have a PM that allows making Wine from Medicaments.
- No Livestock in the forest belt please.
- And all the other mentions I made in the other thread - more cotton, more dye, changed location of ivory, salt in the delta, copper in Mali, lead in the Benue Trough, etc.
Languages
Not really much to say other than the more granular and specific to the cultures you make the languages, the better it is. A single Volta-Niger language is pretty crazy, that’s a language family that has been divided for thousands of years. Even if you compromise and represent Yoruba and Igala as both speaking Yoruboid or make Yoruba, Edo, Igala and Igbo all speak a Defoid language, it is preferable.