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And I'm pleased (or at least rewarded) if you found the scene sad. I meant it that way. I still like to think that Richard and Henry remain close despite all of this surrounding them and so it is rather bittersweet when they talk intimately while a rift remains.
To all - A word on the writing of the above scene. I initially ended it earlier but felt it incomplete so I returned later and added the final conversation between York and the King. I enjoy these moments when the two of them are talking to one another alone as it allows a chance to look at their friendship (such that it is) and even delve into their history prior to the start of this tale. As is often done when considering what might have happened if things were different, all of this could have been avoided if Henry was a little stronger and kept Richard on as lead counselor but Henry is too easily manipulated (especially by those darn Beauforts* and their allies) and York's ambition could not allow him to be set aside or ignored.
* I still think that would make a nice TV sitcom Those Darn Beauforts in the tradition of That Darn Cat.![Wink ;) ;)](data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7)
Also a word on Henry's condition - historically it was said that he fell back into a stupor or some such after the battle. It might make sense that he suffered a mental breakdown but I did not want to portray that again. A weakness, surely, but not the full on illness from before. I want to handle it a little more subtlety this time around, so I hope it works and makes sense.
Look for the next update in the next day or so (I'm already well into Chapter 11 now in the writing so "the can" as it were is pretty full.) And as always, thank you all for reading and giving comment!
Indeed, the poor put upon King that may have avoided all of it by actually ruling instead of passively standing back. That's only going to get worse.Henry acting as if he had nothing to do with the mayhem... I'll had kicked in the rear all the way to Catai, I swear it.
As you'll read, Margaret takes a bit but does indeed start cultivating other nobles. Going forward, she and York are the primary players in the feud with others picking sides. Up until now, I think Margaret has been rather reactive without much long term planning. That needs to change. As for the Prince dying? Well, she'd better get on her back again.That was actually really sad. Especially since we know that the war's not over.
And yet... what is left for Margaret to resort to? She's nothing without Henry's support, and he's against prolonging the conflict with York. I wonder if she will try to seduce another noble, though, since Somerset is dead?
Seriously, what is Margaret's plan if her son dies? Or even if he lives but isn't old enough to rule in his own right? I get that she could be regent, but the nobles would have something to say about that. And if Henry does live to an old age, isn't her influence mostly dead? Her son might be persuaded to... dispose of her by other nobles. What's her plan for that? I'm starting to think that she doesn't have a long-term plan...
And I'm pleased (or at least rewarded) if you found the scene sad. I meant it that way. I still like to think that Richard and Henry remain close despite all of this surrounding them and so it is rather bittersweet when they talk intimately while a rift remains.
All indeed possibilities. Obviously I cannot say, but this next chapter gives an idea as to where things are going. As mentioned, this last chapter was a closing of a period with a new one to begin. Somerset's death does leave a vacuum, but there are no lack of players willing to fill it (Margaret herself the most eager.) As before, York will not find his position made easy. I can at least say that.At the moment, the Yorkists have won decisively. Every one of their major rivals bar the queen is dead or heavily injured. The king is alive, well-ish and only has yorkist advisors. The Queen is out of favour and out of allies, except a few weaker Lords not part of the battle, and whomever she can gain over by personal diplomacy or vengeance...mostly the latter because her own quality if anything pushes most further away.
There are a few possibilities now.
1. The king dies soonish and York becomes king. This will not be without incident but it would not be difficult (or untrue) to get the 'prince' thrown out and both he and the Queen imprisoned (there to be dead of 'sickness' thereafter). Not a particularly good idea long term because as we know, the tudors are not without resource or skill.
2. The king does not die and sticks mostly with York. This seems most likely as of now, and should in time begin to heal some rifts. The Queen will be about trying to make sure those rifts stay open, but she's...her, and so will mostly fail or succeed by accident. The bastard Prince dies or is superceded by an actual heir in time.
3. As above but the king has no children and the queen sticks around long term. This...is not good, because basically means the war of the Roses starts up again whenever Henry dies (not just yorkists either. The lancastrians are probably not that enthused about the queen and, probably by this time quite obviously, somerset's bastard).
So there's a chance of peace, but it all involves either a new heir or...a new heir. But how that heir comes about is the question.
To all - A word on the writing of the above scene. I initially ended it earlier but felt it incomplete so I returned later and added the final conversation between York and the King. I enjoy these moments when the two of them are talking to one another alone as it allows a chance to look at their friendship (such that it is) and even delve into their history prior to the start of this tale. As is often done when considering what might have happened if things were different, all of this could have been avoided if Henry was a little stronger and kept Richard on as lead counselor but Henry is too easily manipulated (especially by those darn Beauforts* and their allies) and York's ambition could not allow him to be set aside or ignored.
* I still think that would make a nice TV sitcom Those Darn Beauforts in the tradition of That Darn Cat.
Also a word on Henry's condition - historically it was said that he fell back into a stupor or some such after the battle. It might make sense that he suffered a mental breakdown but I did not want to portray that again. A weakness, surely, but not the full on illness from before. I want to handle it a little more subtlety this time around, so I hope it works and makes sense.
Look for the next update in the next day or so (I'm already well into Chapter 11 now in the writing so "the can" as it were is pretty full.) And as always, thank you all for reading and giving comment!
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