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Pontefract Castle, December 1460

The Duke of Somerset stood over the table and looked over the map with many of his men. Included were his half brother Lord Ros as well as the Earl of Northumberland and Lord Clifford. Their words echoed off the high walls of the hall as each tried to figure out how to lure Duke Richard from the safety of his castle at Sandal. They were interrupted when Sir Alexander Hody entered. A veteran soldier of the west country, the no nonsense knight spoke it plainly, “The Lord does sense a truce. He continues to send out foraging parties and one was particularly instructive.”

The Earl of Northumberland found a grin, “One would have thought the skirmish to Worksop would have disabused him of this notion.”

“He did not expect us,” Somerset answered quickly.

Lord Ros smiled, “Then good that you rode ahead of your men, brother. It did take him completely unawares.”

“It would have been better had he been there,” the Duke replied, “We might have ended this instead of allowing him to seek the comfort of his keep.”

Lord Clifford followed, “Yet he may not stay there forever, my Lord. He sends out men to forage as his supplies are surely dwindling.”

“As said, my Lord...” Sir Alexander suggested, “...some of these be not foragers but messengers. Three such parties exited with the others and we did capture one. They carried with them letters to the Earl of March begging him to come in relief.”

Northumberland seemed pleased, “Then he is desperate indeed.”

“It has been a fortnight,” Somerset did not share in the notion, “He may have already sent word and thus plays for time. If our spies are correct, York holds only twelve thousand to him at most. For the now, we hold the numbers. Yet if Ned arrives...”

“Then you may rethink battle?” Queen Margaret entered the hall followed by Sir Andrew Trollope.

“Of course not,” Somerset looked to her with determination, “I will fight no matter, yet we would do better without his reinforcements.”

Trollope replied, “He calls for more than his son, my Lord. The Baron Neville tells that York has sent a summons to him.”

“Should not the Lord of Salisbury know that this nephew loves him not?” Lord Ros questioned, “Neither Neville nor Westmorland.”

“He may or may not,” Trollope answered, “Yet we may use it, my Lord. Baron Neville holds to him eight thousand men. Should he answer York in the positive, it may be a smart way to lure the Duke from his castle.”

Margaret smirked, “Surely our provocations have not otherwise. I sent a herald just this morning to call out that the Duke is wanting of courage in suffering himself to be tamely braved by a woman.”

“Might you allow us to carry out your wishes, Your Grace?” the Duke of Somerset sighed, “If we hold this charge, I think us all capable.”

Margaret shifted to pour herself some wine, “Capable of delay no better than that of York. We hold nearly twenty thousand to us already. Place the castle to siege and serve him out, my Lord.”

“Madam...” the Earl of Northumberland replied, “...were it so easy, we would have done so already. It is the dead of winter and the weather does as much as any siege engine. A soldier does know to take every advantage at the least cost. Time will out, my Lady.”

She peered to all of them with a crooked brow, “Not if the Duke’s son is allowed to engage.”

The knight Trollope spoke up, “Impatience is the enemy of any good soldier, my Lady. Yet I do think to agree. My Lord Somerset...it has been a lonely Christmastide for this Duke. His supplies dwindle as we see and he is blind to our forces though he knows that we are here. I say again...use Lord Neville as the bait. Send him to York as his relief and then see how he reacts.”

“I still believe that Salisbury will not buy it,” Lord Ros suggested, “And even if there be no love between cousins, they are still Nevilles.”

Margaret tired of this, “My Lords, I am indeed impatient. I shall defer to the wisdom of men for I have not seen battle, yet I do know when it is time to put down the animal when it is hobbled. York is wounded, sirs. After Worksop, he is desperate for he did underestimate our strength. We hold with us Lords aplenty from Devon all the way to Wiltshire...”

The Earl of Somerset groaned, “Not much help there.”

“Nevertheless,” Margaret skewed a brow, “They are rank and file where York holds little but his brother in law. He even lost his cannon when the muds caused them to turn back to London. I heeded your call for patience the last time, my Lord Somerset. I shall not do so again. York cannot be allowed to escape the noose.”

Lord Clifford looked to the map, “Sirs, we are less than ten miles from Sandal Castle. There are woods aplenty to either side leading towards the green at Wakefield. If it be true that York knows not of our true position, then we should offer him the bait as suggested. He knows that you are here, my Lord Somerset. Show yourself in full and follow the advice given by Sir Trollope. The rest of us shall hold in reserve and once he has committed, then we shall cut him down.”

“The Duke is not a fool,” Somerset argued, “And he likely knows that the Queen is here as well if her messages be any guide.”

Margaret shrugged, “I could not resist.”

“It has not provoked him, as you say,” he answered her and then looked to the rest, “Yet...we cannot allow the Earl of March to arrive as reinforcement.”

Northumberland gave nod, “I think to agree with Lord Clifford. If it fails, then we remain where we are and he inside his keep. Yet if he bites, my Lord...”

“He will bite,” Margaret seemed assured, “Especially if he believes that I am to here. He will hope to defeat you and then turn his wrath towards myself. It is his goal and we all know it.”

Somerset looked again to the map, “I am not as convinced. I remember St. Albans well as do a good many of you. We can take no thing for granted.”

“Then you would rather wait for defeat when victory is offered to you, sir?” the Queen questioned.

“I would rather be sure,” Somerset replied but then looked to the Lords, “Yet time is of the essence. Send word to Lord Neville and have him go forth with the ruse. I dare say, you may try it yourself, Trollope. He’s seen you switch sides already. In his desperation, he may well believe that you do so again.”

Trollope gave nod, “I do not believe that I can keep playing that card, my Lord. Yet I shall try.”

“We must use every trick,” Margaret was certain.

The Duke of Somerset held to his men, “It looks to be a cold day, my Lords. I suppose we risk nothing in the trying.”
 
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Margaret's impatience might cost her in the future.

None of Margaret's lords disapprove of her army of Scots? Really?
 
Margaret's impatience might cost her in the future.

None of Margaret's lords disapprove of her army of Scots? Really?
I would think they are simply happy with the numbers added. What's the old saying? The enemy of my enemy is my friend.
 
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Wakefield, December 1460

It had been a long night. The Duke of York stood to the ramparts of Sandal Castle and watched as the fire of torches gathered to the fields below. His brother in law Lord Salisbury joined him as he surveyed the scene and sighed, “I think not to trust him, brother.”

“If you mean your nephew the Baron, then I am inclined to agree with you,” York kept his eyes to the field, “Yet if we know it, then we may plan on it.”

Salisbury looked out, “That is Somerset’s banner, Dickon. It stiffens in the wind and can be no doubt.”

“Yet I see another,” the Duke pointed, “There I see the livery of your son Warwick. I believe that to be Trollope’s men.”

Salisbury gave nod, “A traitor already, sir. We’ve trusted him once. I would not do so again.”

“Your nephew states that he holds eight thousand,” York mentally figured as he looked, “I cannot believe that he tells the truth in either way for or against. And look you there. That cannot be more than five under the flag of Somerset. He is too bold.”

The Earl was unsure, “He may hope to deceive you, brother.”

“He was never that clever,” Richard replied, “Despite what my son may say. No, sir. She is to Pontefract and he is to here. I see no signs of her Scots nor even Northumberland. We have them at piecemeal and should use it. If we be victorious, then we may retreat south and meet with Edward. Take this army here and then hers when we are reinforced.”

Salisbury looked out again, “Or we may do as the captains suggest, sir. Wait them out.”

“We do not have that luxury,” York answered, “Our stores are depleted and we cannot feed this army on what remains. I like it not...yet I believe this our best chance.”

“Dawn approaches, brother,” the Earl gave nod, “It is your decision.”

York stared for a long time before giving reply, “Then ready the men. We have held to here long enough.”

* * *

The Duke of Somerset waited and finally allowed a smile as the drawbridge to Sandal Castle opened and the forces of the Duke of York began to canter down the hill towards the open fields south of the River Calder. He watched and smiled yet again as Trollope’s men made a feint to join with the Duke before turning swiftly to the field and riding off. This was the moment. If York retreated back to the castle, it would be for nothing. Yet he did not.

“To arms!!” Somerset called out to his center, “Let them see our charge!!”

The might of his horse thundered down upon them and the clash was ferocious. There was not time for archers as men at arms and mounted knights fought bravely in hand to hand combat. The standards of York and Salisbury did not waiver and for a time pressed Somerset’s men back. Snow began to fall once more and caused confusion. It was then that the Duke of Somerset signaled.

Through the dense wintry mix, those forces that York had not seen descended upon the plain. The Lord of Wiltshire had been instructed to take the castle and Lord Ros to cut off any retreat. Clifford and the Earls of Devon and Northumberland then rushed the battlefield from both flanks and caused a great panic.

Remembering his father, Henry Beaufort fought on horse and cut down every man that came at him. He watched as best he could the banner of York and when it fell, he pressed with even more energy. This was it. Finally, he would avenge the wrong done to him. If only it had been Warwick.

* * *

It was mass confusion. The snows poured down now and Richard could barely see two feet in front of him, yet he called out for his son, “Edmund!! To me!!!”

Within the melee, Edmund heard him and called for his cousin Thomas, “A York! A York!!”

Several soldiers followed as they moved to Richard’s side, yet the mass of men charging them was too much. Sir Thomas Parr attempted to shield the Duke but was cut down right in front of him. The Duke’s nephew Sir Edward Bourchier then took up the banner and held it aloft. Waiving it so that others could see it still raised, he too was assaulted and when he fell the fetterlock sigil was buried under the icy snow. Richard of York had time enough to see what was happening before he was pulled from his horse and the men of Somerset came at him.

Though almost fifty years in age, the Duke was a seasoned warrior and he fought on as men rallied round him still. Yet by twos, they seem to fall to his right and to his left. Soon he was fighting on top of bodies that were once his proud soldiers. Slipping between them, he did not see the spear that cut through the ranks. It pierced his side and in great pain he fell through the crush to be buried beneath them. Gasping for air, Richard finally found the light and yet another came at him...

* * *

Edmund called for his cousin and though barely able to hear, Thomas Neville was soon by his side, “This is a slaughter!!”

“Where be your father?!” Edmund questioned loudly as he parried a blade.

Thomas fought another and then saw in the distance that the banner of his house remained, “He still fights...but is surrounded!”

“We all are!” Edmund called out and pointed, “Mine own is under siege! We must save him!!”

Master Leighson had been charged with protecting the young Earl and shouted, “There be not time, sir!! Save yourself!!”

“I shall not!” Edmund rushed a man at arms and buried his blade, “A York!! A York!!”

Thomas Neville called out, “It is too much, cousin! We must away!!”

Leighson used his bow with deadly accuracy as he shot one, two and then another in quick succession as they went for the Earl, but he too knew it was a losing battle, “My Lord, we must retreat! You cannot save your father!!”

“Do not tell me that!!!” Edmund turned to him and grabbed him closely, “He still fights!!!”

As the young Earl pointed, they saw Richard of York fall beneath a mound of bodies and Thomas Neville shouted, “To the bridge! To the bridge!!”

In utter confusion, Edmund was pulled along as he tried to spy his father still. Leighson and Thomas fought beside him as they ran toward Wakefield Bridge and there they were stopped. Lord Clifford stood with a sizable contingent and sneered, “Who are you that would run like a coward?!”

Thomas Neville called out, “Spare him, for he is a King’s son, and good may come to you!”

“Whose son is this?!” Clifford asked and brandished his dagger.

Master Leighson had little time and without thought grabbed Edmund and threw him over the side into the icy cold waters of the river below. Clifford was incensed for he had guessed the answer already. Plunging his dagger deep into the heart of Thomas Neville, he cried out, “By God’s blood, these fathers slew mine! So I will slay the accursed blood of York and all of his!!”

As if in slow motion, Leighson reached out to stop it but could not. When they turned on him, he shifted to the side of the bridge. Desperately trying to careen himself over with his considerable weight, he was struck at the knee by one blade and then to his shoulder with another. Grasping for any hold, he cried out in pain and then pulled himself over with a crash. The cold and raging water was enough to cease his agony.

* * *

The Earl of Salisbury called out for Lord Harington, “We are lost, sir!! We must to Middleham if we can make it!!”

Young Bonville had just time enough to hear him when the forces of the Earl of Devon descended upon them. The blood feud of de Courtenay and Bonville was never finished and this son of his father slew the Baron without second thought. They then turned on the Earl.

Richard Neville still held to his mount and spurred it furiously but made it not far before he was surrounded. The Duke of Somerset rode forth and commanded that the Earl be placed to custody. Stripped from his horse and his weapons, Salisbury was captured.

The Earl of Northumberland rode up alongside Baron Neville, “Many feuds are answered this day, sir! Have you anything to say to your kin?”

“That you will rot in hell, Henry Percy!” Salisbury answered, “And you, John...have you no loyalty at all?!”

Somerset trotted alongside and looked down to the Earl, “That’ll be enough. Take him to Pontefract. The Queen will decide his fate.”

* * *

Margaret was overjoyed when the warring party returned from Wakefield. Somerset marched proudly at their lead and stopped with the Earl of Salisbury behind him tied to a rope. The Queen stepped to him and peered with perverse enjoyment, “Were you as much a man of peace as Buckingham? I think not.”

“He is prisoner, my Lady Queen,” Somerset dismounted and stood next to her, “And you hold victory this day.”

She was unsure as she looked around, “Yet where be the rest of them? York? His son?”

The Earl of Northumberland stepped forward, “Lost to the field of battle, Your Grace. Buried by his own men it is said. Rather appropriate, methinks.”

“You do not hold a body?” Margaret was irritated.

Somerset smiled, “We shall find it on the morn, my Lady. Frozen cold and stiff. I assure you.”

Lord Clifford stood behind his benefactor Northumberland, “And his son Rutland too...plunged to an icy death, my Lady Queen. No man could withstand that.”

“I would have liked the body,” Margaret grew angry.

Clifford offered a wicked grin to the Earl of Salisbury, “We do have one for you, Your Grace. This one’s son. As cold as the rest.”

The Queen found some solace in that as she looked back to the Earl, “Environed on every side like fish in a net, my Lord or deer in a buckstall. You have lost and for all of your crimes, you will pay dearly.”

“As I have ever held any chance to say it before or now...” Salisbury showed great sadness yet sneered at her, “...I should tell you that you are a whore of the worst kind.”

Margaret slapped him hard to the face and then leaned in closely, “I should have killed your sister when I held chance. So too your sons. At least we are rid of one of them at the now.”

“None will be cleansed until we are rid of you,” the Earl of Salisbury answered her in defiance.

“Hold him!!” Margaret called to the guards, “Cause him to kneel!”

Salisbury kept his gaze to her as soldiers answered the Queen’s order, “There be no thing that you may do to me now that is not already done. I am dead and gone and shall dwell in the house of God for I have ever served England. Where you will be...it will be very hot, madam. In truth...Hell is too good for you!”

“My Lord Somerset!” Margaret called out, “Strike off his head!!”

Henry Beaufort was unsure but the Earl of Salisbury was not. He lay down his neck to a block placed before him and answered to Somerset, “Strike true, sir. In the moment that God still grants to me, I shall pray for you. I forgive you...yet to her? I would...”

He did not have chance to continue. Somerset’s sharp blade cleanly cut off Richard Neville’s head soon to sit atop the gates of York as warning. Grotesque, covered in pitch to preserve for as long as possible and joined by that of his son Thomas. It was victory for the Lancastrian cause. A victory in battle. Yet the war raged on.

End of Chapter 20
 
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Well that was all very depressing. I also agree with @HistoryDude the lack of upset in Margaret giving away chunks of the kingdom to Scotland is a bit odd, though doubtless victory covers a multitude of sins.

Overall thought I confess I'm mostly waiting for the threatened change, if this is just a re-telling of the War of the Roses with some character moments then it does lack a certain tension. I'm trying to pick my words carefully as I don't means this in a negative or critical way, the writing remains excellent and it is an engrossing read. It is just that there is not much point speculating on people, actions or consequences things when the outcome is fixed.
 
Overall thought I confess I'm mostly waiting for the threatened change, if this is just a re-telling of the War of the Roses with some character moments then it does lack a certain tension. I'm trying to pick my words carefully as I don't means this in a negative or critical way, the writing remains excellent and it is an engrossing read. It is just that there is not much point speculating on people, actions or consequences things when the outcome is fixed.
As I've said before, I do agree with you. However, if you read the above closely I hope you can at least tease some slight change from OTL. As well, I did say that I would discuss further after the next chapter. You will still have to "wait for it." ;)

It is coming, I promise. Patience Piphopper. :D
 
Oh I think I see exactly what you have done. If I’m right, things are about to get very interesting.
There are a couple of things it could be. Bits where the narrative does not 100% definitely state things as being the same as history records, but remember all our author has said is that they will discuss possible change after the next chapter. Not that any change will actually happen in the this chapter, the next or indeed at all.

I'm still braced for the final reveal to be everything turning out exactly the same, except for Henry Tudor deciding to wear a very slightly different crown at his coronation.
 
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Oh I think I see exactly what you have done. If I’m right, things are about to get very interesting.
I hope so. I've only spent two years planning this. ;)

I hope it works.

There are a couple of things it could be. Bits where the narrative does not 100% definitely state things as being the same as history records, but remember all our author has said is that they will discuss possible change after the next chapter. Not that any change will actually happen in the this chapter, the next or indeed at all.

I'm still braced for the final reveal to be everything turning out exactly the same, except for Henry Tudor deciding to wear a very slightly different crown at his coronation.
I can only say this, Pip...it will not be the same AND Henry Tudor (sorry @TheButterflyComposer ) will have a much harder case to be King. ;)
 
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I’m just thinking now of a great quote in an otherwise turgid book by Thomas Foster (a professor at the University of Michigan) that I had to read in high school that I think captures what I’m expecting to have happen in the next chapter. Spoilered just in case:

“If they come back up, it’s a baptism.”
 
I can only say this, Pip...it will not be the same AND Henry Tudor (sorry @TheButterflyComposer ) will have a much harder case to be King. ;)

Maybe I should just finally do the oft threatened baby's first EUIV game/AAR, only I'm empowering the Welsh this time rather than the Irish?

Hmm...what should I do to London this time? Already burnt it down and turned it into a penal colony, and made it suffer the night of the living dead...
 
Maybe I should just finally do the oft threatened baby's first EUIV game/AAR, only I'm empowering the Welsh this time rather than the Irish?

Hmm...what should I do to London this time? Already burnt it down and turned it into a penal colony, and made it suffer the night of the living dead...
You can culture convert it to French with a little bit of prep work (I.e. sacrificing Caux and Kent and Sussex too).
 
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I’m just thinking now of a great quote in an otherwise turgid book by Thomas Foster (a professor at the University of Michigan) that I had to read in high school that I think captures what I’m expecting to have happen in the next chapter. Spoilered just in case:

“If they come back up, it’s a baptism.”
Your prediction is not far off. At all. I suppose the question is...whose baptism? ;)

Maybe I should just finally do the oft threatened baby's first EUIV game/AAR, only I'm empowering the Welsh this time rather than the Irish?

Hmm...what should I do to London this time? Already burnt it down and turned it into a penal colony, and made it suffer the night of the living dead...
The world does not revolve around your Irish. :p

You can culture convert it to French with a little bit of prep work (I.e. sacrificing Caux and Kent and Sussex too).
The horror...the horror. ;)


To all - Damn, I want to talk about the above scene but I just can't. Not yet. Not fully. I purposefully left it as a cliffhanger (where is @Storey when you need him??) because it truly is the first major divergence from OTL. Hmmm...let me say it this way. In our history, the Battle of Wakefield is not just the culmination of Richard's quest for...whatever it is that he wanted? King? Crown? Power? It is also the height of his hubris. Despite the fact that @El Pip is not a major fan of my writing being (or trying to be) historically accurate (which is not entirely fair to Pip's quite true assessment), I have stated more than once that I wanted to adhere to the real history so that we might see the exact reasons why and how all of this happened.

Again, I was told by a very good friend prior to starting this work that I should not stay so close to the real history. And I get that. A reader wants to be entertained. Surprised. Shocked even. Hard to do when one knows what happens, to be sure. However, I hope that those "in the know" appreciate how this slight change really is quite huge. As said, I cannot speak too much about it without spoiling what comes next, but this is the hook that caused me to write this in the first place. Yes indeed I find this history fascinating. More than fascinating.

In our real history (OTL, we like to say) Richard made a truly poor decision. Among the many, some might say. But this one takes the cake. Even respected historians cannot explain nor even understand how he could make such a colossal blunder. It makes no sense except for the fact that yes, they were running out of food and provisions. But to go there in the first place? To place himself in such a position? It begins (and ends) the discussion of whether Richard was really and truly any type of military genius. He wasn't.

In short (too late), it is inexplicable that this man found himself in this place. As for the writing of it, I do feel as if it is rushed to get to this moment. To spend so much time about the court case and leading to the Accord and then jump right to Wakefield? But what else needed to be covered? It also might be a case of me wanting to finally hit the mark that caused me to want to write this in the first place. Once again, I first conceived this idea in 2007 and I've been thinking about it ever since. And it is rather funny to me that I think "rushed" is an appropriate phrase considering that this AAR is really quite long. In my document, this scene lands somewhere in the 700s of pages (and I am about to hit 1000 pages in total.) But I needed all of that to get to here. I did. Maybe you did not. I'll leave that to the reader.

I'll begin the next chapter in the coming week which may or may not answer some questions. And in somewhat related news, please allow me to once again plug both the AARland Choice AwAARds ongoing as we speak, as well as the 2023 Yearly AARland Year-end AwAARds. Both desire your vote and every one of us that writes appreciates your effort. Once again, you need not vote for this work (though I always appreciate it) but please do offer your voice. If you are a fan of AARland, reward those that make it. And we are legion! :)
 
A proper chat on this should probably wait until after the next scene, so I shall hold my powder dry until then. I will however get in the other guess, which is probably less likely but would be at least as interesting;

 
Mmm. An interesting idea Pip.
 
A proper chat on this should probably wait until after the next scene, so I shall hold my powder dry until then. I will however get in the other guess, which is probably less likely but would be at least as interesting;


Mmm. An interesting idea Pip.
Indeed it is and once again, you may not be far off Pip. The next chapter will still be quite familiar to those that know the real history, but things change in a hurry. I desperately want to start posting it now but I will hold off until tomorrow. Wait for it. ;)
 
Your prediction is not far off. At all. I suppose the question is...whose baptism? ;)
Ok, just so I have my prediction down more clearly in advance, I predict that…

Unlike OTL, where both Richard and Edmund die at this battle, here Edmund at least survives. This has massive implications for the rest of the War of the Roses as the major problem Edward IV faced was that Warwick and his younger brothers George and Richard simply couldn’t be trusted. Having a brother that he could rely on, and who could take over as king instead of Richard should Edward die early like OTL, really benefits the Yorkist cause.
 
A shame that Margaret was victorious, but at least Salisbury managed to hit Margaret with the truth before he died!

These deaths on the Yorkist side are bad... but I feel that something might challenge Margaret soon.
 
Well, Richard was Richard to the end, Rutland might be still alive, Salisbury is gone, March comes fully into the game., and Clifford is the old bloody bastard of all.

Not so bad, after all. The old generation is out, the young one is ready.
 
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Ok, just so I have my prediction down more clearly in advance, I predict that…

Unlike OTL, where both Richard and Edmund die at this battle, here Edmund at least survives. This has massive implications for the rest of the War of the Roses as the major problem Edward IV faced was that Warwick and his younger brothers George and Richard simply couldn’t be trusted. Having a brother that he could rely on, and who could take over as king instead of Richard should Edward die early like OTL, really benefits the Yorkist cause.
Again, another good theory. We'll find out soon enough.

A shame that Margaret was victorious, but at least Salisbury managed to hit Margaret with the truth before he died!

These deaths on the Yorkist side are bad... but I feel that something might challenge Margaret soon.
The way I wrote it was actually ahistorical as it was the townspeople that apparently killed Salisbury when he was taken in custody. This seemed more appropriate given everything else that is going on. Definitely RIP Salisbury. I don't mind saying a teared up a little bit when I wrote it. He's been around since the beginning.

Well, Richard was Richard to the end, Rutland might be still alive, Salisbury is gone, March comes fully into the game., and Clifford is the old bloody bastard of all.

Not so bad, after all. The old generation is out, the young one is ready.
Damnable Clifford! That's all I can say.


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