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Who will rid me of this turbulent civil war by forcing a writ of abdication, locking the king in a monastery, killing anyone in Parliament who doesn't believe it, seizing all their land and treasure, raising an army to crush the South, replying to the Scottish invasion by the Rebel Queen by declaring her a traitor, a witch and a harlot who spawned rhe devil's child, blaming them for burning down the monastery with the old blessed sainted King inside it, slaughtering the Scottish army, putting the queen on a show trial in London, burning her at the stake, then annexing Scotland for their devil baby eating worship, and following that up by smashing down hard on Ireland and Wales, before finally returning to France and burning Paris to the ground before declaring the York line not only the rightful heirs of England but the entire British Isles, France etc etc...
*breathe*
That would be nice, wouldn't it.
A sensible plan for a happier Britain.
If its and buts were candy and nuts...
Yeah, I'm not sure insulting Henry V in England is a good idea. That would probably go over better in France, honestly.
Also, I was reading a bit about the WotR recently and discovered something... strange.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Battle_of_Edgcote. I should hope that Richard of York survives before his forces split even more than they already have.
We are quite aways from something like that happening here, but it is not unlikely.
Well put Edward. I note you have really shown him coming of age and stature of late, and iirc (it’s been a while since I’ve read into his reign) when he got his chance he proved a pretty good operator, while his health was sustained.
I'm pleased to see that coming across. I've tried to build it slowly but surely.
It is interesting that Richard has a point to make, but the doubts and equivocations of his erstwhile allies are based in large part on his previous mistakes, faults or half-measures and his failure to line them all up properly before this latest gambit. A modern politician would have had the numbers men laying the groundwork, an announcement with plenty of ‘nodding dogs’ standing behind for support, and a ‘more in sorrow than in anger’ speech that still firmly makes the necessary points. Ah well, maybe this generation of the Plantagenet line suffers from various manifestations of Chronic Indecisiveness Disorder!
As has been suggested before and likely will be said again, Richard just isn't very good at this whole coup thing.
@Historywhiz suggests very well below and as I responded already, Richard has too much respect for the institution itself to blow it up even if he wants to. I also think he had many expectations and not many ideas how to get past the fact that others did not hold the same expectations. His breeding, lineage and perhaps even hubris causes a character flaw that is not shared by past and future tyrants that would just blow past all of these roadblocks. Would have kidnapped and murdered the King, executed the Queen and her bastard child, would have imprisoned every single person that stood against him. And yet? He cannot. It is not his nature at this moment. And this has led to far too many failures and mistakes as you suggest. Can he get past all of that? We shall find out.
I imagined some proud chin-jutting as well, probably hands on hips, or maybe one on a sword pommel.
Of course!
Very much enjoyed this latest series of episodes
@coz1 there were some very good lines and closely contended debates in there. If it had all been easy, well, we would have had the WOTR!
Excellent! I really hit a stride while writing a lot of these scenes that are just now coming to you. Took a few months, but hey...better late than never.
I’ve just realized the problem. Richard has a chronic case of bureaucrat brain. The same mind that keeps everything running so smoothly (if not always happily) when in charge of a government body completely comes undone when everything is descending into anarchy and there’s little set policy and procedure to go off of. He’s literally doing a coup d’etat right now and can’t stop obsessing over the finer technicalities of the law because the idea that he is now outside the legal system is completely alien to him. He is exactly the sort of middle manager who runs a tight ship, rewards good behavior with a pizza party, is constantly angling for his boss’s job, and insists that regulations on gift giving at Christmas be followed to the letter thank you very much.
Amswered already, but again...an excellent point!
Just kill everyone and start over, with the Irish.
Pointing out the old war hero King didn't actually do all that much isn't the best idea, no.
Richard clearly has no idea how to actually carry out a coup, which is a bit of a problem because he's very clearly committed himself to it now.
Were it up to you, everything would be given to the Irish.
@coz1 I am on page 38 with Warwick the Pirate.... Moving forward quickly, and in a stern chase since you're moving at quite a clip yourself!
I'll get caught up one of these days, and then can comment on what's front of mind for you and all the other readers.
Excellent storytelling, as always!
Rensslaer
Awesome to hear! You're about halfway there.
When you win, it's not treason, only becomes that if you loose.
Henry 7th backdated his reign to just before Bosworth, making EVERYONE who was on the royal side that day a traitor to the 'king'.
So Richard had better win here or else. Then he can backdate all he wants.
To all - First of all, great comments above which I really appreciate. We are hitting some of the most ferocious writing I've done this past year in that I was writing a new scene every day and it just flowed forth. The damn broke after the early unfortunate part of the year after my birthday and this is the result. I'm really pleased that it is so well received. Thank you!!
I'd also like to put in a plug for the now ongoing ACAs begun once again by the great
@Nikolai! Please
head over there and give your voice to all of the great writAARs and AARs you enjoy and love. As I always say, you need not vote for this work (though I always appreciate it) but please do vote!
Of course, I've also begun the YAYAs for 2023, but I'll shill for that a lot more closer to the end of the year. However better to start thinking about it now, right?
