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That said, I maintain that I needed all of the lead up to the moment. In this case, "The Ring" is the throne. And one cannot say that it was not brought up early and often. It is true that much of what came before was/is well known by many of the readers and I agree that the episodic nature of how we post here drags it out a bit more than is ideal, yet despite that it was fun and interesting to me to explore these characters in the lead up to what was planned. It is hoped that having grown to know these figures, that the end result is that much more impactful.
Here we won't see that. Richard has already promised that he still remembers the loss of Normandy and wants revenge. Slight spoiler, but it creates a bit of trouble with one fairly well known member of his court.
Plus...Henry, Margaret et al remain out there.
To that score, the next scene is brief but sets up a little of what comes after. In all truth, it possibly should have been the first scene of the chapter but there were some loose ends that needed tending.
He will need to, no doubt.Making connections in court is definitely a good idea.
I think of it a bit like cresting a wave. The higher you get, the more the rush. The events happened quickly and while I could have drawn out each moment, I chose not to. Which leads to...As is typical Coz has raced through many things. A very unexpected shock in killing Edward off, I freely admit I did not see that coming. It is going to be interesting to see what Richard does now he actually has the throne after all that it has cost him, though I am reassured that he is statesman like enough to realise that War with France is always a good move. I am also hopeful that Edmund isn't going to be too permanently scarred by all this, Leighson is a good man and his advice is sound, of course Edmund can never forget or 'get over' this, but it does not have to dominate his life. Fingers crossed for him on that last one I admit.
A perfectly valid point, and in truth I am only razzing you.As we are now looking back at things, or at least our author has done, I think I will grapple with this point.
I maintain those were excellent questions, because as a matter of pacing 320,000 words is two good length novels, that's a lot reading before you get to the change that was promised. Of course there are excellent works that pretty much follow history, Wolf Hall springs to mind as being a similar sort of period and hitting all the major historical beats while still being an entertaining read, so this is not a problem with historical fiction but one of a very extended setup.
I also suspect that the forum setting did not help. An audience that probably mostly knows the main beats of history and is used to a commenting culture where speculation and discussion about a work are encouraged is not exactly calculated to be a patient one. Equally the episodic nature as opposed to a single complete book makes for a different experience, though word wise this has been perhaps the equivalent of reading The Fellowship and The Two Towers and at the very end of the second book someone mentioning The Ring for the first time.
That said you know your own work best, so the long build up to the change was clearly required. And just to be clear on the spirit behind this comment I do want to repeat that I have enjoyed reading and commenting on this work and I'm look forward to seeing how King Richard and the others fare as we wait for the Wars to flare up again.![]()
That said, I maintain that I needed all of the lead up to the moment. In this case, "The Ring" is the throne. And one cannot say that it was not brought up early and often. It is true that much of what came before was/is well known by many of the readers and I agree that the episodic nature of how we post here drags it out a bit more than is ideal, yet despite that it was fun and interesting to me to explore these characters in the lead up to what was planned. It is hoped that having grown to know these figures, that the end result is that much more impactful.
I do agree that the end of the Hundred Years War and subsequent WOTR changed the course of history for England. Up to that point, England was a continental actor. By losing the war with France (and most lands within) it caused England to become more insular. That and 30 years of civil unrest/internal familial battles. By the time they came out of it during the Tudor period, England looked more to the seas and beyond. In many ways this was beneficial.It'll be interesting to see what happens next, because one of several 'benefits' of the wars of the Roses going on for so long was that it killed the idea of conquering France and unifying the realms. Everyone with a solid claim was dead and France had in the meantime just about managed to sort itself out.
Meant the English had to instead pivot to becoming the british, which is not something they ever really tried before (the other nations being distractions or occasional targets of assault).
If the Yorks win soonish, and they sort of have to for this to be alt history (if this all just ends with Henry and Richard and Edmund dead regardless then what was the point?) then the big focus will stay on making France their...ahem...Wench.
Both because they pick up right where Henry V left off and partially out of vengeance against rhe Queen. Plus it'll bring the realm together again, and move all surviving armies onto the continent.
Then again, some OTL factors remain. Wales and Ireland are proven weak points for English defence that require plugging, and Scotland just invaded England and pillaged rhe North. Some kind of reckoning or recommence will be required there.
Here we won't see that. Richard has already promised that he still remembers the loss of Normandy and wants revenge. Slight spoiler, but it creates a bit of trouble with one fairly well known member of his court.
To that score, the next scene is brief but sets up a little of what comes after. In all truth, it possibly should have been the first scene of the chapter but there were some loose ends that needed tending.