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So Margaret does indeed intend to screw her way through the family, at this rate they will end up having to bury her in a Y-shape coffin. Assuming of course enough bits of her can be found.

Black William continues to be just be a delight, I wonder if Somerset will look back on that exchange and learn anything. If he does then perhaps he may have potential to be a player in the game, being Margaret's "Champion" can easily be leveraged into a great deal of power and influence over Margaret and thus the Kingdom. However thus far he's lacked any real brains or subtlety so I'm not expecting much.

On which note, the news that Henry is now incapable of even eating a dinner means would be a damning indictment on almost anyone else. Alas he has already fallen so low it is merely par for the course.

I am reminded of the great, great AAR work of yesteryear: A Scotsman in Egypt.

That too had a character screwing a woman who had, unknown to him, been screwing his deceased father before him.

She attempted to blackmail and control him, and revealed that she had indeed slept with his dad and done the same to him.

As I recall, the boy strangled her and dumped her body in a ditch.

Coz will not be topping this storyline, but I wish him luck in the attempt.
 
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I suspect it will be revealed soon enough. Possibly even by the Queen herself. All it would take would be some heated words.
Of course, one might assume that her own tryst was also witnessed. ;)

Well, that was interesting. Schemes occur within court.

I wonder if Somerset will screw Margaret over with a guilty conscience. Was that supposed to read like something of a rape? I'm not entirely sure how willing Somerset was in that scene.
I would call it more seduction. Somerset did seem pleased with the result.

So Margaret does indeed intend to screw her way through the family, at this rate they will end up having to bury her in a Y-shape coffin. Assuming of course enough bits of her can be found.
Woo boy! That's a new one. :eek: :p

Black William continues to be just be a delight, I wonder if Somerset will look back on that exchange and learn anything. If he does then perhaps he may have potential to be a player in the game, being Margaret's "Champion" can easily be leveraged into a great deal of power and influence over Margaret and thus the Kingdom. However thus far he's lacked any real brains or subtlety so I'm not expecting much.

On which note, the news that Henry is now incapable of even eating a dinner means would be a damning indictment on almost anyone else. Alas he has already fallen so low it is merely par for the course.
Somerset does start to show his learning, but it may not be for the good. As for Henry...you will likely not appreciate his next scene arriving in just a moment.

I am reminded of the great, great AAR work of yesteryear: A Scotsman in Egypt.

That too had a character screwing a woman who had, unknown to him, been screwing his deceased father before him.

She attempted to blackmail and control him, and revealed that she had indeed slept with his dad and done the same to him.

As I recall, the boy strangled her and dumped her body in a ditch.

Coz will not be topping this storyline, but I wish him luck in the attempt.
I'm afraid I don't remember that one nor will I be going down that particular road. However, anything is possible.
 
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Coventry, February 1459

“I must apologize, Your Grace...yet I may hold my tongue no longer!” the Earl of Northumberland expressed to the King with as much restraint as he could muster, “There may be no doubt that the Earl of Salisbury and his sons no longer hold to the peace made after Stamford Bridge and the bonds entered into from that sorry incident are now broken!”

Henry offered a deep sigh and rubbed at his temple, “Your brothers are at liberty, are they not?”

“They are, Your Grace...” Northumberland gave nod, “...but not without their own wiles to gain them their freedom.”

“We do not understand,” Henry looked to them with confusion.

Baron Clifford offered, “In the process of being transferred from Lord Salisbury to the Lord of York’s custody, they made an escape, Your Grace. And rightly so. The bonds promised should have been enough to hold the peace. Was that not your guidance?”

“It...was,” Henry held again to his head, “Yet...we know not why this should come as complaint towards the Lord of Salisbury. He is a right good Lord and honest and true. Always of sound and prudent counsel.”

Queen Margaret had held her silence sitting next to the King on their raised dais but finally leaned over to suggest, “It is York, husband. I know you wish not to hear it, but he follows his brother in law. It is plain.”

“Not again!” Henry answered with impatience.

The Earl of Northumberland was not ready to acquiesce, “Once more, Your Grace...I know these are hard words to your ears, yet I cannot agree more with Her Grace the Queen. I have always tried to follow in my father’s patient footsteps, and yet look what happened to him when he was trusting? He is no more, Your Grace! And so many more for this man’s ambition!”

This man is our cousin, sir!” Henry showed a forceful tone, “Strong in both loyalty and service.”

“I am also your cousin, Your Grace,” Northumberland allowed, “Through my mother who is left without a husband. Should that not count for loyalty when my father lost his life in your service?”

Being younger, Henry Beaufort had allowed the older Earl to make his case but finally added, “I too am your cousin, Your Grace. My father likewise died in your service. And against this Lord of York.”

The King peered at him with a curious eye for a moment before turning to Percy, “We love our family equally. And would treat all with grace.”

“So then why would you ignore the plea from this truly loyal family...” Margaret asked, “...when this other you hold so close to heart has betrayed you time and time again?”

Northumberland followed, “And it is betrayal, Your Grace. Let there be no doubt. By all rights, York should be to Ireland at the now. Protecting your interests. Instead, he holds to Ludlow and raises his men. To what end? For what purpose?”

“I may only think of one,” Baron Clifford suggested.

“And what may that be?” Henry almost sneered.

Knowing that her words would fall on deaf ears, Margaret looked to Somerset. The young Duke looked from her and then to the King but kept silent for a moment until he finally spoke calmly, “I believe that he may hold for your very own crown, Your Grace.”

The King narrowed his eyes and fumed in response, “Your father said very much the same and look where that led him? Our cousin held every chance to take what you suggest he thinks is owed and did not! An opportunity not taken for he holds love for us and this regal throne. We sometimes think that it is you lot that wishes not to hold to the good old peace...the grace that God would provide...if only you would allow it!”

“If you would permit me, Your Grace?” the Duke of Somerset tried to explain.

“Yes...indeed...do offer your words,” the King waved a hand in anger, “If you can convince me when all others have not...which I find difficult to believe...then please do go forth, young sir!”

Henry Beaufort stood closer to the throne and bowed his head before continuing, “As you value family, Your Grace, so too does the Lord of York. I do believe that he loves you. Have heard it with mine own ears. Yet actions do speak louder than words, do they not? And in his family, of which I have become well acquainted and by your own words and demand, I see the familial bond. From York to his Lady wife, who likes me not. And from her to her brothers and now nephews. The Lord of Northumberland here may speak to it as much as I, for he is son to a Neville.”

“Tight-knit, Your Grace,” Northumberland gave nod, “In every way. There are many days when mine own mother would not speak to me or my brothers for what has happened.”

“And so, Your Grace...” Somerset continued, “...they circle round their own. Being that the Lord of Warwick has been so pernicious and so fool hardy...so treacherous in his actions from Calais and more...they look to protect all in their view.”

The King skewed an eye and sat back to his throne, “We do wonder then...where is Buckingham? For he too is married to one and we hear of no complaints.”

“I apologize, Your Grace...” Baron Clifford offered, “...yet the Duke of Buckingham is old. My father served under him at St. Albans and lost his life for it. Is there no wonder why he is less and less to court? He is enfeebled by his age and infirmity and more to that...I am afraid there is no longer a place for peace maker. Not now.”

Henry trained his eye back to the young Duke of Somerset, “Very well...so you would tell us that this is all about Warwick? A personal grudge that you no doubt hold. That all of you hold. And yet you were paid handsomely for crimes made against your families. By these very same. So you may forgive us...we do hold a silence from time to time and wish for prayer rather than all this...yet we do not see how the one begets the other.”

“Mon cher...” Margaret spoke in his ear, “...do you not see? Do you not hear?”

“We would let them tell it to me,” Henry looked to the men before him.

The Earl of Northumberland took the place as lead counsel, “I am older than my peers before you today, sire. I have seen much and more. In my endeavors, I have tried to be as Godly and Princely as you would show us. Yet when a man strikes you once, you may turn the other cheek as Christ suggests. If he should strike you again...now we know that there is malice. If he does it a third time? He would wish you dead.”

“Not only you, Your Grace,” Clifford followed, “Yet so too the life of your son the Prince. There are far too many rumors...ill formed and too poor to repeat...about this fine boy. More so as well, about your very Queen, Her Grace that sits next to you!”

Margaret allowed a word in soft tones, “Who do you think spreads that, husband?”

“No more than Warwick, Your Grace,” Somerset answered.

The King sighed again, “So if there be great beast, then cut off the head. None do believe the rumors at any rate. Let the man be tried and be done with it.”

“My love, do you not recall this last year and more?” Margaret pressed, “It has been attempted and it has failed. He will not be called to count. In truth, fought his way out to sit like a snake in the weeds to Calais!”

Henry looked from her to all of them, “We recall everything and none at all!”

“Then you would know that it is his father and York that protect him,” Northumberland replied, “Your own Council has called for him to find trial. Should you hold Parliament, they too would do so. His crimes are too many.”

Clifford followed, “And they do protect him, Your Grace. Your Council is your very own arm. To ignore it...fight against it...it is against you and no other. There can be no other word for it, Your Grace. None else would call it anything other than treason!”

“Your Grace...” Somerset spoke up with a more caring tone, “...I would be loathe to proscribe to the thought that the Lord of York would be against you and yours. Again...I have met the man. Shared bread and wine with him. A fatherly figure in many ways and one that I now lack in great degree. From your words, I have followed your directive and made great friendship with the sons of York. There is honor there. Let there be no doubt. Yet a raising of forces...the actions from these men over these last years when you had given fine order...honest and gracefully. I am sorry, Your Grace...but I cannot see how or why it is done for any other reason but to usurp your place and take it for their own.”

“We...will...not...hear...it!” King Henry stood and spoke with clipped words, “The lot of you should go and pray to your God, for we know not who that is! Our God...the Savior...that is who we will listen to. Now be gone from me!”

As he moved to leave the hall, Margaret had heard enough, “You may cease their words, sir...but you shall not cease mine!”

“I have heard enough from all of you!” he turned on her with a fury.

Margaret stood strong, “And I say that you are to remain so obstinate as to have no ears to listen, sir! Mon Dieu! You would deny what is before you until the very day your head is cleaved from your body!”

“Madam!” the Earl of Northumberland exclaimed and the Duke of Somerset followed, “Your Grace...that is too far.”

For his part, King Henry merely turned with a huge great frown to his face, “If you would wish to speak of treason, my Lady...you do a very good job of it at the now. One does not speak of such things before their sovereign and the very words are treason.”

“Lest you forget...which is highly possible...” she replied quickly, “...I too am anointed as Queen of this realm and am mother to your son and heir! If you would not protect your interests...his interests and that of the kingdom...then best you abdicate in his favor so that others may do the work that you are unwilling or unable to practice. Go off to your cloister and pray so that the rest of us might do what is needed!”

The King was speechless. His face grew red with anger but rather than respond to his wife, he looked instead to his Lords and then turned away from them all to leave the hall for good. The remaining Lords had no words to say either and Queen Margaret looked to them, “Do you see?! He is beyond reason!”

“Mayhap is once more ill?” Clifford questioned.

“I had hoped that he would listen to you...” Margaret slumped to the King’s chair and thought to herself, “...yet he is content to keep blinders to his eyes.”

Somerset stepped forward, “Mayhap the Archbishop of Canterbury could speak with him? Make the case?”

“Bourchier remains a man of peace,” Clifford suggested.

Margaret looked up as well, “And is too close to York. He would not argue otherwise.”

“Then we hold no other choice,” Northumberland answered, “There is but one man left that His Grace may listen to. I shall call for my uncle of Buckingham.”

The Queen stood, “Do call for him, sir. I hold little promise that he would argue any more than the Archbishop. Yet every word counts. For my part, I believe that there may be another. My Lord of Somerset?”

Henry Beaufort stood tall, “Your Grace?”

“Send for the Earl of Pembroke,” Margaret answered, “If his own brother can not persuade him, then we are all truly lost.”
 
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Of course, one might assume that her own tryst was also witnessed. ;)

That peeping Thomas surely does get around...

I'm afraid I don't remember that one nor will I be going down that particular road. However, anything is possible.


It even has a TV tropes page.
 
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Well, it seems like the Lancaster faction is starting to get annoyed with the King's neutrality. On the other hand, Margaret may have pushed too far. It's worth noting that she is guilty of what Warwick's accusing her of...

Also, if anyone actually sees a scene where Margaret is engaged in infidelity, it might give those rumors more credence... regardless of who it's with.
 
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That peeping Thomas surely does get around...




It even has a TV tropes page.
By my count, I have written 10 completed AARs and scores of others over the past 20 years and not a one of them has a TV Tropes page. Hrmph! Thus I am suspect of the reliability of that as a harbinger of good taste. ;)

And yes, one assumes Thomas does get around. The man only has one job. And I'll have to be careful not to use "peeping Thomas" in the writing. When I named him, I did not foresee this in his role. Of similar note, I find myself almost writing "little Dickon" or "little Richard" quite often and have to fix it each time. Not quite the visuals I am going for. :p

Well, it seems like the Lancaster faction is starting to get annoyed with the King's neutrality. On the other hand, Margaret may have pushed too far. It's worth noting that she is guilty of what Warwick's accusing her of...

Also, if anyone actually sees a scene where Margaret is engaged in infidelity, it might give those rumors more credence... regardless of who it's with.
Of course she is. I often argue that while one should certainly be careful using stereotypes, they are stereotypes for a reason in that they contain at least a nugget of truth. Some of the most pernicious rumors and/or conspiracies persist because there is enough truth/fact to them making them possible and believable. Margaret did indeed push too far in this episode but this is precisely what she did in RL. Much like she did when Henry became ill and she tried to have herself named as regent, this is something that will cause the magnates to be suspect of her regardless of how they feel about York, et al.


To all - Just a note that I caught a rather glaring error in a previous post. In part one of chapter 12 when Warwick is discussing potential marriage matches, I suggested that Charles of Burgundy was married now to Charlotte of Savoy. This was incorrect. Charles is married to Isabella of Bourbon (his second wife) while Louis the Dauphin of France is married to Charlotte of Savoy (which he did despite his father's demand that he not do so and caused him to flee King Charles VII's court and take refuge in Burgundy.) While it may seem minor, it will matter in the longer term. I've corrected the original post to avoid any inconsistencies.

I caught the above error while writing a scene in chapter 15 (which may give you a glimpse into what is coming.) I am exactly half way through writing that chapter and have outlined all the way to 1464 (and have played through 1470.) Much, much more to come so stay tuned! :)
 
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Henry's response was of course disappointing, he had the prime opportunity to get Margaret executed for open treason and like a fool ignored it. However it is Somerset who is most disappointing, one quick tumble and he's throwing away what little integrity he has. I was going to say Margaret cannot be that good in bed, but given the amount of practice she has had (i.e any man with a pulse within grabbing distance) perhaps she is. Certainly he has forgotten Edward quickly enough.

On the broader point, I fear I will have to be shouting "Get on with it" at the Lancastrian side as well. We've still got months of this to wade through...
 
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Henry's response was of course disappointing, he had the prime opportunity to get Margaret executed for open treason and like a fool ignored it. However it is Somerset who is most disappointing, one quick tumble and he's throwing away what little integrity he has. I was going to say Margaret cannot be that good in bed, but given the amount of practice she has had (i.e any man with a pulse within grabbing distance) perhaps she is. Certainly he has forgotten Edward quickly enough.

On the broader point, I fear I will have to be shouting "Get on with it" at the Lancastrian side as well. We've still got months of this to wade through...
Of course Henry could have charged her with treason (he did at least hint at it) I don't think ever in a million years he would have followed through with it. As to Somerset his prime focus has always been Warwick so of course he would throw in with the Queen if she will help him with that (and other things.) I can't say that he learns, but I do hope he grows.

And getting on with it, right away...
 
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Cheshire, March 1459

Thomas Stanley was twenty and four. Tall with thin and sandy hair, he had a barrel chest like his forebears and long arms that seemed to outgrow his body. Recently named second Baron Stanley after his father passed just a month prior, he was well acquainted with court. His great grandfather had been a supporter to Henry Bolingbroke and was rewarded handsomely for it once he became King Henry IV. His recently deceased father had been a Privy Councillor, Comptroller of the Royal Household, Lieutenant-Governor of Ireland, Chief Steward of the Duchy of Lancaster, Knight of the Shire for Lancashire, Constable and Justice of Chester, Chamberlain of North Wales and even briefly Lord Chamberlain prior to St. Albans. Quite a career that had introduced Thomas himself to royal service. Since 1454, he had been named a squire to King Henry VI.

With all of that, he was unsure why he was here. The recent death of his father still pained him as it did his younger brothers and sisters and it was not terribly long after his own first born son John had perished by drowning in the river Mersey. His wife Eleanor was still not over it and neither was he. Perhaps there was chance to have other sons, but as yet they had not.

Countless members of his family had fought and even died in the service of these Kings of England over the years and while he was as handsomely rewarded as they had been, he began to chaff at these events. Namely the one that was about to approach him.

“Ahh...there he is!” Sir William Herbert called out as he stepped into the Guild Hall, “The very King of Mann!”

Stanley turned from the fire with a sigh, “Titular King, sir. My father called himself such. Yet I am but a Lord.”

“That is too bad,” William answered as he moved to warm his hands, “For we are in need of a King.”

“What is wrong with the one that we hold?” Thomas asked.

Herbert grinned, “You would have to ask the Queen, my Lord.”

“Why?” Stanley questioned, “Does she not speak with you? I imagine not after your actions these long years.”

Black William turned so he might warm his backside, “I hold my head. For that I am grateful. And she holds ears. Which I understand this King does not. Has it been too long since you squired for him?"

“There has been little need,” Stanley answered.

“And that, my Lord...is the problem,” William replied as he moved again to warm his hands.

Before they could bicker, they were joined by the Queen herself as she exited the chambers of the King followed by the Duke of Buckingham and the Earl of Pembroke. Margaret strode into the hall and instantly went to pour herself a goblet of wine, “There it is, sirs. And well done you! I thought he would never listen.”

“I remain uncertain,” Buckingham suggested, “Yet...after Warwick’s actions and these others...I can counsel little else at this date.”

Jasper Tudor gave nod as he accepted a cup of wine from the Queen, “And there can be no doubt that York arms himself to the teeth.”

“I am pleased that you finally see it that way,” Margaret answered as she looked to the men by the fire, “Herbert! Send for Northumberland and Somerset. They should be here.”

As he left to find them, she turned back to the Lords, “You do His Grace a service, my Lords. One that he is unwilling...at the least reticent to do for himself.”

“Your Grace,” Buckingham suggested as he found a chair to sit, “We have been down this road before. A summons may be sent but they will as likely not answer it. And while I hold only love for His Grace the King, he is...not the man he was four years ago. Much less the one before that. It was kicking and screaming to get him to even call for this summons and I don’t mind saying that I was far more comfortable to my place at Penshurst.”

Jasper agreed, “That much is true. I’ve my own troubles to Pembroke. The Beaufort girl’s child is a sickly thing and she little better. They both are so very slight. I made promise to her mother...”

“And you make promise to your own brother, my Lord,” the Queen turned to him with certainty, “There can be no doubt what occurred to the one that is gone. We all know this. You especially. If he cannot see it...then surely you can.”

“A poor bit of business,” Thomas Stanley suggested by the fire.

Margaret turned to him with irritation, “I beg your pardon, sir? What did you say?”

“My Lady...Your Grace...” Stanley bowed to her, “...I said that it was too poor what happened to the Earl’s brother. To the King’s brother.”

Jasper showed a haunted eye, “And yet you’ve just sent off his killer to fetch others for you.”

“I know that it smarts, my Lord,” Margaret stepped to him and held a hand to his arm, “Yet it is said to hold your enemies close and this one is required.”

Buckingham suggested from his chair, “And I must repeat, Your Grace...as I told the King...when he was lucid enough to listen...a call to order is merely a starting point in negotiations. They will not show. Not York. Not Salisbury. Certainly not Warwick. And who knows how many others?”

“My Lady,” Henry Beaufort stepped into the hall, “What happens?”

Margaret turned to him with a smile, “Things turn apace. Where is the Earl?”

“He will be along presently,” Somerset looked back to William Herbert with a frown before spying the others, “How goes the audience?”

“I think Buckingham here and Pembroke have succeeded where you and Northumberland failed,” Margaret answered with a grin, “The King has consented to a writ commanding all of his loyal magnates to meet with him at Leicester.”

“Which will fail,” Buckingham suggested with a sigh as he sat back to his chair and crossed a leg looking to the fire.

Jasper Tudor stepped to them, “Yet it may be a promise, sir. Do you think that you could write to the Earl of March? I know you are friendly. Perhaps some words from you might allow him to speak to his father. Pull us back from this edge.”

“I’ve not spoken to Edward in some time,” Somerset answered, “Nor do I think that my words would hold sway. He is as head strong as his father, I fear.”

“Hrmph,” Buckingham snorted and they all turned to him.

Margaret was the one to ask, “Is there some thing you may wish to say, my Lord?”

The old Duke stood with creaky legs and stepped next to Stanley at the fire, “I have been down this road. Traveled this path. Whether if be fifty and the rascal Cade...or fifty two and outside of London. Fifty five...such a terrible day! How many more times must we answer the same call?”

It was Herbert that stepped forward, “Your Grace...my Lords...I know well the Duke of York. And while I know also that there are men here today...and others...that distrust me. Nay...even hate me...I have offered my service and my life to this King. It is to him that I owe everything.”

“Which is why you should likely keep your mouth shut, sir,” Jasper exclaimed rudely.

Margaret held up her hand, “No. I would like to hear what he has to say. Please do go on.”

“My thanks, Your Grace,” William smiled to her and then looked to the men, “Conscription, sirs. What has been lacking in the past has been numbers and well trained ones at that. I can tell you from experience. The Lord of York is a proud man. There can be no doubt of that. Yet in the face of superior numbers all under the King’s banner...he would surely fall away.”

Buckingham sighed again by the fire, “Why am I listening to this man prattle on? We held superior numbers at St. Albans.”

“And lost,” Herbert answered, “Because you were disorganized.”

“How dare you?!” the old Duke scoffed.

Thomas Stanley spoke up, “I believe that Sir William is right. As squire to the King, I may tell you that the day was chaos from start to finish. Wiltshire let the banner fall, and you my Lord Somerset...you saw it as I did.”

Henry Beaufort gave nod, “Tis true. It was not well organized in any way. And apologies to you, my Lord Buckingham, for I know you did all that you might...but there was a reluctance to fight. From our side.”

“And so you may see, madam...Your Grace...” William spoke to the Queen, “...ill planned and unprepared.”

“Now see here!” Buckingham looked to them all, “I will not allow my service to be questioned!”

Jasper steadied him, “They question you not, my Lord. It is a matter of going forward.”

“Quite right,” William allowed a nod to his nemesis, “Place a professional army to the field, Your Grace. I believe it has been suggested before. And you have been recruiting as you have gone on progress through these parts. The Yorkists will fall apart before you if you do so. They cannot match it. Especially as Warwick remains to Calais.”

“Why do you counsel such?” Jasper turned to him.

Black William smiled, “I serve the King.”

“Today you do,” Jasper Tudor frowned.

Margaret ignored him, “I think that a fine idea, sir. And I will continue to recruit. To here...Warwickshire, Staffordshire...anywhere that would fight for their Prince and King. And we should require leaders as well.”

“I would lead an army for my brother,” Jasper suggested.

The Queen smiled to him, “Of course you would, my Lord. And how about you, my Lord of Buckingham?”

Humphrey Stafford held a weary arm to the hearth as he replied, “My weakness would not serve the King. My injuries are too great. There are other men, however.”

“Who might you suggest?” Margaret was suddenly jolly.

Buckingham turned to her with a sad face, “Lord Audley...James Tuchet mayhap. Older than I but remains a warrior to these parts. And Lord Dudley...Sutton is a good man. I’ve fought with him before. Mayhap Stanley here. These are his grounds and his people are proud.”

“Very good,” the Queen smiled to the young Lord Stanley, “So you would raise your men to Chester?”

Stanley looked to her briefly before giving response, “I...I know not what for, but I would serve the King. Proudly.”

“Then it is settled,” Margaret clapped, “We shall call forth these men and put paid this insurrection. This treachery. Let no man question the supremacy of this sovereign again. My Prince will be sound.”

As she walked from the hall, she was followed by the Duke of Somerset and the Earl of Pembroke. The Duke of Buckingham heaved a heavy sigh but he too left the Guild Hall with a limp. Finally it returned to just William Herbert and Thomas Stanley.

“And what of your brother?” Black William grinned, “I think him in service to York and you yourself hold a Neville bride.”

Stanley laughed, “Were you not supposed to find the Earl of Northumberland as well?”

“He was busy,” William peered to him.

“Then you’re not very good at your work, are you?” Thomas suggested as he looked to the fire.

Black William now laughed, “Better than you think I am.”

“I will do my duty,” Thomas suggested.

“And I will do mine,” William replied, “Let us hope they are of the same cause, sir.”
 
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Their solution to getting wrecked last time with a bigger army than the enemy is change the commanders and drill the peasants more?

They're going to get slaughtered.

Quite frankly, this is getting ridiculous. Loyalty and honour and all that is and was a big part of being a noble but when the government is this hobbled and pathetic, constantly failing to do anything to even help its strongest supporters, a question of legitimacy still ongoing after years of speculation, an increasingly weak and disliked monarch, an outright hated Queen, and a very prominent, rich and powerful alternative who is demonstrably better at ruling and fighting wars...

Well...there's no contest is there? Aside from people personally looking to kill York or a member of his family, which at this point is less than a dozen people (albiet powerful ones).
 
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Their solution to getting wrecked last time with a bigger army than the enemy is change the commanders and drill the peasants more?

They're going to get slaughtered.

Quite frankly, this is getting ridiculous. Loyalty and honour and all that is and was a big part of being a noble but when the government is this hobbled and pathetic, constantly failing to do anything to even help its strongest supporters, a question of legitimacy still ongoing after years of speculation, an increasingly weak and disliked monarch, an outright hated Queen, and a very prominent, rich and powerful alternative who is demonstrably better at ruling and fighting wars...

Well...there's no contest is there? Aside from people personally looking to kill York or a member of his family, which at this point is less than a dozen people (albiet powerful ones).
If it were only so simple…

Main thing we’re forgetting is that this whole affair is taking place internal to the few hundred top people of the English aristocracy and they’re the only ones with anything approaching a full picture of the situation. To the rest of humanity: the average English peasant, the Pope, the HREmperor, the Spanish, and so on, Henry VI is just your average kind hearted fool that is a dime a dozen at this time. Not ideal for the English, but no reason not to acknowledge him as the internationally recognized sovereign of England. From the sound of things, only the French, Scottish, and Burgundians and maybe the middle class retainers of the various lords really know that the king of England has gone insane and the country is in both a de facto regency and tumbling towards civil war, and it’s in the vested interest of at least one of them to keep mum about it.
 
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“There is naught I may do,” she grinned, “Lest you think I should wipe for him.
Which toady will be applying for the appointment of Groom of the King's Close Stool? :D
And getting on with it, right away...
Aaargh, just as I’d caught up again. :p But have again.

This watched pot seemed as if it would never boil, but perhaps it starts to steam away! I think it will come as a relief at first, until the generational slaughter of the nobility starts to sink in …
 
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Their solution to getting wrecked last time with a bigger army than the enemy is change the commanders and drill the peasants more?

They're going to get slaughtered.
Well it is Black William's solution and he is playing a clever game here. Not a very clever or subtle game, but given the very low calibre of the Queen's faction it doesn't need to be.

From his perspective either this plan works, and he gets rewarded by a grateful monarchy, or it goes as badly as last time, in which case he has advanced the Yorkist cause and can say that was the plan all along (provoke the Queen into 'starting' the conflict as York himself did not wish to).

As the man himself is careful to say he serves the King (never the Queen) and he does his duty (but he never says to who or what).
 
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Their solution to getting wrecked last time with a bigger army than the enemy is change the commanders and drill the peasants more?

They're going to get slaughtered.
I'll speak more on this below, but the Queen needs warm bodies. And warm bodies often become cold ones.

Quite frankly, this is getting ridiculous. Loyalty and honour and all that is and was a big part of being a noble but when the government is this hobbled and pathetic, constantly failing to do anything to even help its strongest supporters, a question of legitimacy still ongoing after years of speculation, an increasingly weak and disliked monarch, an outright hated Queen, and a very prominent, rich and powerful alternative who is demonstrably better at ruling and fighting wars...

Well...there's no contest is there? Aside from people personally looking to kill York or a member of his family, which at this point is less than a dozen people (albiet powerful ones).
Two things are really quite important in this equation. First, to usurp an anointed King is simply no easy task. Morally, spiritually and frankly legalistically, there are so many hoops to jump through that make it increasingly difficult. The most important of all is the legitimacy of it. Like him or no, Henry was born into and by right of inheritance (and somewhat by the voice of Parliament) the known King and few wish to upend the apple cart despite it having been done at least twice before. If one is to do it, they need a damn good case (which to be sure you outline well above) but also a magnetic candidate to gravitate to which York is not. Which brings us to the second - York is indeed prominent and rich with a fine claim to the throne. But as I have tried (or hope I have succeeded) in outlining is just how poor York is at actually getting people to go along with him. He is just not liked. And there is one other part of the equation which may explain the second - other powerful magnates may prefer a weak King that allows them their excesses than a more powerful one that may curb that. The status quo is actually to their interest.

If it were only so simple…

Main thing we’re forgetting is that this whole affair is taking place internal to the few hundred top people of the English aristocracy and they’re the only ones with anything approaching a full picture of the situation. To the rest of humanity: the average English peasant, the Pope, the HREmperor, the Spanish, and so on, Henry VI is just your average kind hearted fool that is a dime a dozen at this time. Not ideal for the English, but no reason not to acknowledge him as the internationally recognized sovereign of England. From the sound of things, only the French, Scottish, and Burgundians and maybe the middle class retainers of the various lords really know that the king of England has gone insane and the country is in both a de facto regency and tumbling towards civil war, and it’s in the vested interest of at least one of them to keep mum about it.
This is an excellent point and to follow along from the above, it is likely in the interest of many of those foreign powers to see this weak England rather than a strong one. While the historical position of Burgundy remains in place as nominal ally of England, the dynamic on the ground within Europe is drastically changed. France more than needs a weak England, the Scots are more than pleased so they may raid the border and Burgundy doesn't really need another poking around in their back yard. Plus, as you suggest, the general English peasant is not seeing this up close and personal. They are really going to need a good argument to go along with what is surely to them a drastic shift.

Which toady will be applying for the appointment of Groom of the King's Close Stool? :D

Aaargh, just as I’d caught up again. :p But have again.

This watched pot seemed as if it would never boil, but perhaps it starts to steam away! I think it will come as a relief at first, until the generational slaughter of the nobility starts to sink in …
Your two comments go together quite well. ;)

And indeed, things are set to finally pop.

Well it is Black William's solution and he is playing a clever game here. Not a very clever or subtle game, but given the very low calibre of the Queen's faction it doesn't need to be.

From his perspective either this plan works, and he gets rewarded by a grateful monarchy, or it goes as badly as last time, in which case he has advanced the Yorkist cause and can say that was the plan all along (provoke the Queen into 'starting' the conflict as York himself did not wish to).

As the man himself is careful to say he serves the King (never the Queen) and he does his duty (but he never says to who or what).
I am pleased that you look at this from the angle of self preservation as that is how it is meant. Black William is indeed working a longer con with his own head the most important. See below.


To all - So I had quite a few things to cover in this update and tried to cram it all in. Hopefully it works. The first and most important is Black William's suggestion of conscription. It simply was not a thing done in England at this time (or prior to this time) being more of a French tradition. Yet as above, the Queen needs numbers and leaders. While it may seem odd to hear William voicing the need, his name crops up often during this period and I have to assume he suggests such as both a practical solution but also to press the Queen into making a mistake. This initiative will not be well liked.

Secondly (and this is a thing I am struggling with perfectly crafting) is Henry's waffling nature. His shifts in mood and action are quite often extreme and difficult to explain (and express in the writing.) After the last scene, one would not assume he would assent to this call for York to present. Yet he did. Or at least that is the word coming down from him. While Margaret is finding some success getting these Lords to go along with her, they still look to the King and he is alternately useful and a stop to their plans and desires. As stated above, they likely want a weak King but one perhaps more pliable. From my reading, Henry was not "insane" during this period. Just maddeningly inconsistent.

Thirdly, I wanted to highlight the factions within the faction. The Court Party was not monolithic. In this scene alone you have the peace maker Buckingham who is at least coming on board with the idea of thwarting Warwick and York but perhaps too old to pursue it effectively, the King's brother Pembroke who sees the necessity of these actions despite his reservations (and more on him in another scene) and Somerset who is just now getting up to speed with these machinations. The Queen is the Queen and Black William is Black William. And then there is Lord Stanley. In many ways, he is a stand in for the rest of us. Thus beginning the scene with him and his backstory. A bit of an outlier standing back and watching all this idiocy from the sidelines (a place historically the Stanley clan enjoyed.)

Finally, and to the above comment, Black William may or may not be working still for York. I do not think it a spoiler to say that many of the events going forward will be effected by as much as anything the ever changing loyalties of the various Lords and other noblemen. Shifting allegiances make a huge impact despite what seems on paper a perfectly reasonable or understandable outcome. William Herbert is just one of many (and I don't mind saying that he may well be a Yorkist spy.)

Also, I just thought it time to drill down and include the Stanley brothers (see another scene coming up with the other.)

To reiterate, it is simply no easy thing to depose a King nor to counteract a powerful noble. I believe that is why this entire thing is so back and forth filled with half measures and self question. To state the obvious, Henry VI is a weak King. Yet he remains King still. If York, with all of his reasons and pedigree is reticent to fulfill what is needed, so too will be all others. It is just not a thing done even if it has already happened before. The most recent for those alive in this day would be Bolingbroke's usurpation of Richard II. While eventually accepted, I believe it remains a sour taste to most in their minds and while Henry V's successes in France made many cheer the Lancastrian monarchy, it was not as beloved as history tells us. Parliament especially questioned the entire time every moment another tax was suggested to pay for those wars. During the minority of Henry VI (which I've not really covered other than in the first chapter to a point) things really started to break down (especially after Bedford died.) Now they are stuck with the status quo and while the remedy is quite apparent, it is also a difficult pill to swallow.

Part the reason I find this entire history so fascinating. I hope I am doing it some justice in the writing. :)
 
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other powerful magnates may prefer a weak King that allows them their excesses than a more powerful one that may curb that. The status quo is actually to their interest.

The reason why things eventually broke down so much is that, unlike most other eras in English history, the powerful magnates DON'T want this status quo.

The northern Lords (who have the most land and men between them) dislike the status quo because Scotland is becoming emboldened and is going to inevitably strike south, and they'll be the ones who have to deal with it.

The western and welsh Lords (who have the most castles) dislike the status quo because its ruining Wales and causing unrest when two powerful magnates can go to war against each other and nothing happens from above to stop it. The English grip is unsteady as it is at this time, and the Welsh have rebelled for lesser reasons than this.

The western Lords...Well, there are only really three, and they're all York or under him. Ironically, York and his direct local vassals have the least to worry about with the status quo because they can bascially do whatever they like across their vast lands and no one can stop them. Its just the royal court and Queen have it out for them.

The southern Lords and those around London 'were' alright with the status quo untill it got into an actual fighting war. Since then, they've lost important members, been dismissed by the monarch, lost a lot of influence at court, lost a lot of trade in the Channel due to mechanations in France and against the hansa.

Having a weak king who does nothing is fine if everyone else is free to sort out their own problems. The problem is that Henry and the Queen will not in fact let them do that, as they still want to be in control and tell people what to do, but not resolve any of the real issues.

Such it is that though there are only a few hundred people in the realm that know what is going on, that same group controls all the men, land and money. And an increasingly large amount (bascially anyone not directly favoured by the Queen) is out of place at the moment, or have a geniune grievance that cannot be resolved without blood or war.

There cannot be peace in England now until the Queen, Warwick and York are dead.
 
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The reason why things eventually broke down so much is that, unlike most other eras in English history, the powerful magnates DON'T want this status quo.

The northern Lords (who have the most land and men between them) dislike the status quo because Scotland is becoming emboldened and is going to inevitably strike south, and they'll be the ones who have to deal with it.

The western and welsh Lords (who have the most castles) dislike the status quo because its ruining Wales and causing unrest when two powerful magnates can go to war against each other and nothing happens from above to stop it. The English grip is unsteady as it is at this time, and the Welsh have rebelled for lesser reasons than this.

The western Lords...Well, there are only really three, and they're all York or under him. Ironically, York and his direct local vassals have the least to worry about with the status quo because they can bascially do whatever they like across their vast lands and no one can stop them. Its just the royal court and Queen have it out for them.

The southern Lords and those around London 'were' alright with the status quo untill it got into an actual fighting war. Since then, they've lost important members, been dismissed by the monarch, lost a lot of influence at court, lost a lot of trade in the Channel due to mechanations in France and against the hansa.

Having a weak king who does nothing is fine if everyone else is free to sort out their own problems. The problem is that Henry and the Queen will not in fact let them do that, as they still want to be in control and tell people what to do, but not resolve any of the real issues.
See...that's it. They say they don't want things to remain the same but what are they willing to do about it?

That is a pretty good break down of regional strife and interests and the solution is obvious to us. Yet that was not how things were done (by and large unless one was Byzantine.) Also, this is not Tudor England. The north remains very much disturbed by personal strife as does the west country, though that calmed down after the Earl of Devon died. Your assessment of Wales is likely right on and many of the south are distributed into at least two factions - Lords and merchants, at least in my reading. So what is the status quo?

Keep a weak King which seems natural if not irritating or press for change resulting in a civil war? I don't think anyone anywhere desires for such a thing by good nature. It is only self interest that might bring it on...or to keep the uncertainty.

Such it is that though there are only a few hundred people in the realm that know what is going on, that same group controls all the men, land and money. And an increasingly large amount (bascially anyone not directly favoured by the Queen) is out of place at the moment, or have a geniune grievance that cannot be resolved without blood or war.
Exactly.

There cannot be peace in England now until the Queen, Warwick and York are dead.
Each one is destined to disappoint you. ;)
 
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The most recent for those alive in this day would be Bolingbroke's usurpation of Richard II. While eventually accepted, I believe it remains a sour taste to most in their minds and while Henry V's successes in France made many cheer the Lancastrian monarchy, it was not as beloved as history tells us. Parliament especially questioned the entire time every moment another tax was suggested to pay for those wars. During the minority of Henry VI (which I've not really covered other than in the first chapter to a point) things really started to break down (especially after Bedford died.) Now they are stuck with the status quo and while the remedy is quite apparent, it is also a difficult pill to swallow.
Of course the Lancastrian usurpation left a bit of a harsh taste. The rightful king was deposed and locked up and the crown jumped over several places in the line of succession to land on Henry IV’s head.

If we’re being specific - once Richard II died childless, his cousins of the House of Mortimer (descendants of Richard’s eldest uncle Lionel of Antwerp) had a far better claim than the Lancastrians, and they regularly brought that point up during the reigns of the Henrys until the last male Mortimer, Edmund, 5th Earl of March, died during the regency of Henry VI. At that point, the claim would have gone to his sister Anne (who was deceased) and from there to her children, starting with her eldest son…

Richard Plantagenet, Duke of York.

Yeah…
 
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Bascially, either an extremely competent and on hands King inherits and fixes the lingering issues dating back to the Richard 2 debacle, sorts out Wales and the North, and firmly sets put what England's postion in France is...

Or you get a hard reset after a bloody civil war that wipes out most players from both sides.

It just so happens that OTL, we got an extremely competent and hands on king...right after that bloody civil war, so England rebounds from this far better than it should have and runs smoothly through four different religious twists, two violent usurpation of government and two centuries pass before we start to get problems again...funnily enough, one of the issues that kicks that whole affair off is again the Kings wife being inappropriate...
 
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Well, it is true that the situation isn't ideal. Adding spies into the mix isn't going to improve it...

I actually kind of expected the actual war to start when Henry VI died - at that point, York could point to his evidence/suspicions that the new king is the Queen's... illegitimate offspring and claim the throne. It would appear opportunistic, but he wouldn't need to deal with attacking the rightful king.

This is going to backfire. In addition to what TBC said, there's the fact that a well-organized army gives a lot of power to its commanders - who can then defect and massively weaken your side.
 
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Of course the Lancastrian usurpation left a bit of a harsh taste. The rightful king was deposed and locked up and the crown jumped over several places in the line of succession to land on Henry IV’s head.

If we’re being specific - once Richard II died childless, his cousins of the House of Mortimer (descendants of Richard’s eldest uncle Lionel of Antwerp) had a far better claim than the Lancastrians, and they regularly brought that point up during the reigns of the Henrys until the last male Mortimer, Edmund, 5th Earl of March, died during the regency of Henry VI. At that point, the claim would have gone to his sister Anne (who was deceased) and from there to her children, starting with her eldest son…

Richard Plantagenet, Duke of York.

Yeah…
Indeed. Though a couple of generations away from that original usurpation, the memory of it is still likely in the air. Richard also has a direct male line descent from Edmund of Langley, 4th son of Edward III.

Bascially, either an extremely competent and on hands King inherits and fixes the lingering issues dating back to the Richard 2 debacle, sorts out Wales and the North, and firmly sets put what England's postion in France is...

Or you get a hard reset after a bloody civil war that wipes out most players from both sides.

It just so happens that OTL, we got an extremely competent and hands on king...right after that bloody civil war, so England rebounds from this far better than it should have and runs smoothly through four different religious twists, two violent usurpation of government and two centuries pass before we start to get problems again...funnily enough, one of the issues that kicks that whole affair off is again the Kings wife being inappropriate...
I can say without spoiling anything, we will clear the board of many of these actors by the time we're done. ;)

Well, it is true that the situation isn't ideal. Adding spies into the mix isn't going to improve it...

I actually kind of expected the actual war to start when Henry VI died - at that point, York could point to his evidence/suspicions that the new king is the Queen's... illegitimate offspring and claim the throne. It would appear opportunistic, but he wouldn't need to deal with attacking the rightful king.

This is going to backfire. In addition to what TBC said, there's the fact that a well-organized army gives a lot of power to its commanders - who can then defect and massively weaken your side.
No doubt that we will see a few defections here and there for various reasons. It should come as no shock to see the Stanely's start getting more involved.
 
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