As this is somehow the
@Wraith11B impending nuptials congratulations thread, I must add my voice to the throng. Congratulations indeed old friend, others have wished you have a great wedding day so I will instead wish you an amazing honeymoon.
On the actual AAR, I feel "Indecisive" would be a better moniker than "Greedy" for Gnúpa. In any event does not seem fated to be a well remembered monarch, any success in war more than outweighed by his poor choice of elective monarchy.
I must also agree that the length is fine, not every monarch needs (or deserves!) copious notes. I would hope the exam at the end is focused on understanding and analysis not the regurgitation of dates and facts, so as long as the student is following along the trends and big picture this level of note taking is appropriate.